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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>17893305

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STORY ANCHOR
POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.18064448
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>18064410
>learn what anon meant by the publish function AFTER I embarrassed myself
Yikes, sorry about that. Thanks for letting me know. Anyway, starting over.

I posted this prompt >>17968032 and decided to start writing it.

I got two chapters in. Settled on Fubuki, Suisei, and Towa for the starting set of slaves. God I still love Fubuki. Have a picture.

1.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSdNan1V8_RJlhJH-eFGJOy-ta82moAU7AjJXYpGJVXVMfOSNVpfMbM3wGL7Fls_RbWtV2gr2CrhmCM/pub

2.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ8-fa9gsaGBvXmBpZKab26VgqTNFxUBx1Pu5eGhf6jokuOryj0cVB4YGySewYgrqE9AJrGnfvAfb-B/pub

Tags: Action, Romance, Mystery, Fantasy, Vanilla

>> No.18065481

>>18064448
Mori, age 14, bullies her blind younger brother.
Then after a timeskip Mori, now a successful, famous rapper, feels intense guilt for the fact that her brother is a neet loser who accomplished nothing.

>> No.18065486

>>18064726
Really like how this is shaping up so far. Though, I don't think this first part necessarily needed to be split up into chapters, but its not the end of the world.

That we also get fuck Kana is a lovely bonus. The things that nurse makes me feel...

>> No.18065528

>>18065481
>Mori now a successful famous rapper
Some things are too fantastical to be written.

>> No.18065560

>>18065528
I mean, she is objectively both of those things. Note he didn't specify good

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>>18065528
>>18065560
Meanies...

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>>18065626
Im just playing around, I like Mori. I might fuck around with the prompt later if I can.

>> No.18067903

wtf don't die

>> No.18068956
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>>18064448
Story about how you found Pekora to be the most repulsive, annoying girl you have ever met but certain circumstances has led to the two of you becoming roommates and it turns out that she's quite the sexy bunny and she's not as much of a bitch as you have initially thought.

>> No.18069099

>>18068956
and also you're black

>> No.18069670

I'm bored, suggest me something to write a short greentext out of.

>> No.18069732

>>18069670
Receiving valentine's day chocolates from your oshi.

>> No.18070021

>>18068956
I can't see pekopeko sexually, she's just a stupid dorky rabbit friend to me

>> No.18070291

>>18070021
But what would you say after the usual three-course meal of generic romcoms: seeing her naked, her falling down on top of you, and... The last one is your choice - maybe having to be her pretend boyfriend for a day, maybe looking after her while she is sick, hell, maybe even stumbling upon her doing the three-knuckle shuffle due to all the stress and tension

>> No.18070332

If we are being honest the only sexy member of Sankisei is Marine, the rest are too weird to be sexy.

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>>18070291
Despite masturbating literally every day I'm not that horny of a person when it comes down to it and seeing her naked peko body probably wouldn't do much to me, except maybe make me feel embarrassed

>> No.18070377

>>18070291
>the three-knuckle shuffle
I'm adding that to my lexicon.

>> No.18070550

>>18070371
Rip your dick in twenty years

>> No.18070558

>>18070371
>Despite masturbating literally every day I'm not that horny of a person
yes you are

>> No.18070587

>>18069670
Seconding >>18069732's suggestion

>> No.18070656

>>18064726
I didn't expect such world building but I like it, you did a good job anon. Can't wait for the coming chapters.

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>>18070371
I'm so sorry

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>>18070021
She has the most deceptively lewd outfit in hololive. I used to not look at her sexually but seeing all her lewd art and thumbnails just increased my lust for her. Just look at those bare shoulders and reverse-bunny outfit.

>> No.18070960

Nope, can't see Pekora sexually. Certain resident schizophrenics have ruined her for me. Every lewd picture of her will now forever have concealed penises to me

>> No.18071126

>>18070960
Peko carrot…

>> No.18071823

>>18070960
I will never forgive him for this.

>> No.18072461

>>18069732
>>18070587
>The heart shaped box was light in your hands.
>It was tied with a pink bow with a green butterfly hanging from it.
>You'd found it earlier on your desk when you had woken up.
>A box like this on valentine's day meant one thing
>There were just two problems.
>1. You worked from home.
>2. You lived alone.
>You didn't know what you wanted to do with it.
>Something like this had never happened to you.
>You were afraid but...
>There was something romantic about it
>You open the box. The chocolates inside were simple but homemade. Little bit sized hearts with the word 'LOVE' inscribed on them
>They all looked rather well made. You take one up and take a bite.
>Dark chocolate, bittersweet, rich, and with a strong impact.
>But the aftertaste was almost metallic.
>It wasn't bad. In-
>You hear hard breathing behind you. Your grip tightens on the box.
>"Did you like Rushia's Chocolate?
This is about as far as I can think of sorry. I know it's not my best

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>>18064726
I absolutely ADORE your worldbuilding. Your writing is incredibly well-structured and engaging, not to mention easy to follow.
I love the first two chapters you've written thus far, and I hope for more soon.
Great job, Anon! I'll definitely be looking forward to more chapters of your series!

Have a Foob pic.

>> No.18073716

>>18064448
A Rushia NTR fic after all it's canon now.

>> No.18073827

Batten down the hatches. The storm is already here.

>> No.18074637

>>18073716
yawn, couldn't care less

y'all should've oshi'd a holo like fubuki who tells you you've never got a chance straight up

>> No.18074801

>>18074637
She does that wife day thing during her ASMR streams though.

>> No.18074880

>>18074801
yeah, goes straight back to normal afterwards
i don't really know why she does it, just encourages the unicorns; but she's pretty clear otherwise on boundaries between streamer and audience

>> No.18075522

>>18074880
Hags really are the best.

>> No.18075677

>>18075522
her age has got nothing to do with it, she's just a genuinely upstanding human being

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>> No.18079158

>>18078536
Sorry, too busy laughing right now.

>> No.18080977

Rushia out there determined to keep the NTR arc going strong.

>> No.18081387

>>18080977
My biggest takeaway from yabs like this is how do they not have an alternate account for like everything?

>> No.18081498

>>18081387
Probably got complacent after a while with no yabs.

>> No.18081536

>Be fandead
>Plays video game and comes back to this shitshow
What the hell happened here? I just want to read stories about my oshis

>> No.18081762

>>18081387
>>18081498
The conspiracy theorist in me thinks that there's more at play going on. Too many coincidences.

>> No.18081917

>>18081387
Complacency. That's all it is. I hope this yab generates some actual drama.

>> No.18081959

>>18081917
HOME INVASION ARC LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>> No.18082074

>>18081959
>Matsuri and the Hand, Rushia edition
>this time the hand flips the bird at her before disappearing

>> No.18082276

>>18082074
>Matsuri had an actual physical presence
>Lulshia had a dm pop up for a split second

Lol unicorns.

>> No.18082405

>>18080977
I don't look at /vt/ outside of this thread. What happened? I just see people screaming NTR

>> No.18082563

Now I can't even request for Rushia stories anymore without people unironically ruining it with NTR now..

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>>18082405
>>18081622

Lol unicorns.

>> No.18083614

>>18082575
Huh, being a singer in Japan sure as hell seems to take you to places.

>> No.18083988

>>18082563
If she has the good sense to ignore it, it'll go away a lot sooner. The reason why the Mori shit stuck around so much was because she couldn't fucking help herself trying to win the internet argument.

>> No.18084660

>>18070550
Hello, daily masturbator of 25 years here - still going strong. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, anons, beat your dick regularly with peace of mind.

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>>18082563
If you've seen the guy in question you know there's a way to fix it.

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Live!

>> No.18087495

>>18064726
>Fubuki fic
>It's a masterpiece
many such cases

>> No.18087774

>>18064448
I've watched Bae trying to play Outlast and actually playing RE Village and I did know she's not good with horror but man, oh man I didn't think it's that bad. I'm not good with horror stuff myself, but she's on another level. I suddenly got an idea for a story prompt but I'm not good with writing (plus I'm an ESL) and then it crossed my mind: "Wait, there is a /wg/ thread here, maybe I can check it out." So here is my prompt:

>Description

(You) and Bea one day strongly decided to face your fears of horror movies and watch one together (you are at least a little bit better than har at dealing with horror). The plan was to watch it during the day time so it's less scary, but you both hesitated and stalled all the way to night itme.
You watched the movie while being incredibly scared all the way through.
It's late now and it's time to go to bed. You are laying in bed and viciously hugging each other (more like grabbing onto each other) so both of you feel less scared. Every like 2 minutes one of you ask the other: "You are still awake, right?", so neither of you can fall asleep.

That's the general idea, you as a writer can make anything you want out of it and focus on any part of this. Some more ideas or directions to inspire potential writers:
-Describing how you both masterfully stalled during the day and made up some stuff just to avoid watching it
-Describing your fears and reactions while watching the movie
-Bae need to go to the bathroom during/after the movie but is scared to go alone so she wants (You) to go with her. This can go in an interesting NSFT direction from here.
-(You) try to scare her just a li'l bit after the movie/after she exits the bathroom/the next morning but it is super effective and she now crying and mad at you for doing that. You are now apologizing and comforting her. Agan this can turn into NSFW scene easily.

>Is this a NSFW prompt?

Up to author.

>Characters

Hakos Baelz

>Genre

I don't even know, this can go in so many directions.

P.S. The original idea that was on my mind was a fluff centered around Bae and (You) in a bed comforting each other after the horror movie, but while thnking about it I got a bunch of ideas and scenarios. Is this too much? Should I simplify it and divide it in smaller pieces?

>> No.18088501

Try to stay alive, anons. But at the same time, if it dies, don't be surprised.

>> No.18090313

>>18087774
>This can go in an interesting NSFT direction from here.
I mean NSFW, I've made a typo.

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>wake up to another NTR arc
funny how this keeps happening

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>>18087774
>decompressing after a tense horror film by breeding the rrat
Someone god please

>> No.18091650

>>18087495
Well said, friend.

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>> No.18094627

>>18093512
i would add in a second hand

>> No.18094714

>>18094627
>>18093512
add a third one as well

>> No.18095872

>>18094714
>not using all 4

>> No.18096910

>>18090782
Not that shocking. Hopefully it kills the idol fags.

>> No.18099205

Mama done made her one, uh, a witty son
With no respect for women, so, show me your titties hun

>> No.18100754

>Pg. 10 in less than half an hr

>> No.18100836

>>18100754
Schizos are running rampant again, pls andastand

>> No.18102100

>>18064726
Really interested in where this is going and I'm glad you picked the first prompt since it would be more interesting to read but I'll be damned if I'm not a little sad that there's not gonna be some of that sick, homicidal lust like you said.
Felt like you have some problems with the whole showing instead of telling but considering this story is basically in medias res, this is fine. The worldbuilding was, like the other anon said, surprising but I enjoyed it, I also really liked the whole "talents" thing and how they worked, thought that was clever. There's a lot of potential in this fic and I like what you're doing so far so great job

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>Matsuri yab
>Story about Matsuri getting the shit beaten out of her and raped
>Calli yab
>Story about Calli getting the shit beaten out of her and maybe raped
>Rushia yab...

>> No.18104579

>>18103432
>and maybe raped
hey, it had aftercare. she loved (You) in that story.

>> No.18105206

>>18087774
>Is this too much? Should I simplify it and divide it in smaller pieces?

I think it's fine. I can't speak for everyone here but personally, I prefer more vague prompts as it gives me more breathing room. Giving extra ideas is not the worst sin to commit though, just shows you're really passionate about the idea.

Might pick this up but only after I write that "making Suisei" cry fic.

>> No.18105623

>>18105206
>after I write that "making Suisei" cry fic
Tell me more about this.

>> No.18106150

>>18105623
Someone posted a prompt about "making Suisei cry for real" like two threads ago which led to some discussion about what it would take for such a strong-willed woman to break. It's basically been living in my head rent-free. I plan on making it one of those "things just keep getting worse" stories
no rape though

>> No.18106352

>>18106150
>spoiler
Thanks.

>> No.18106614

>>18106352
I aim to please

>> No.18108140

>>18104579
Will Rushia love you at the end of her brutalizing?

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>>18108140
I just don't know anymore...

In all honesty the idea of writing the Rushia version came to my mind, but then I took a walk to clear my head and could only think of writing about being earnestly consoled by Noel and Flare after I got back home

>> No.18108476

>>18106614
Your suicide would make me really happy.

>> No.18109394

>>18103432
Well, to anyone thinking about it. Remember, writing ryona is writing a sex scene with violence instead of sex. Don't get too caught up with the violence that you forget to sexualize it.

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>>18108476
Love you too Anon

>> No.18110156

>>18106150
Oh nice to see that get picked up.
Hope you can write a damn good crying scene.

>> No.18110380

>>18108381
>Earnestly consoled
(You) or Rushia?

>> No.18110645

>>18110380
(You). Sorry, I meant the Rushia version(of those abuse fics), not something from her perspective.

>> No.18111227

>>18110645
Gotcha. Sounds like a cute idea if you opt to do it.

>> No.18111565

>>18110156
Me too, I'll try my best.

>> No.18112460

>>18108381
Me but I'm being consoled by my other oshis Aqua and Fubuki..

>> No.18113406

>>18112460
>Aqua and Fubuki
Never seen such shit taste in my life

>> No.18115103

>Fubuki
>shit taste
This isn't even bait at this point holy fuck

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To the anon who wrote "A Cover Job", any ETA on chapter two?
Thought it was a great premise for a story and would love to see it be continued.

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>>18108381
>they half-heartedly 'console' you for half an hour
>kick you out right after because they want to slam clams and don't want a dude around
>a-a-at l-least they're happy, right?
>two months later they've broken up and have boyfriends, since being a dyke is always a phase
You WILL feel the loneliness of the world, anon. It will sear your flesh and burn your eyes until you have the courage enough to open them and walk away.

>> No.18118261

>>18117981
>not entering their room as their dyking after getting kicked out
>not dicking them both down long and hard enough for both to fall in love with (You) and your cock
>not getting them pregnant and marrying them both
>not getting them pregnant over and over again afterwards
NGMI

>> No.18118534

I've been thinking lately of running a quest. Rolling would make it more fun, but in lieu of that we'd have to use post numbers. Probably update with time depending on the action taken, and have a mix of open-ended/multiple choice parts. I'm not too worried about getting derailed, but is this an idea there's interest in or not? I figure the thread's DED enough that a few posts + comments won't negatively affect lifespan too much

>> No.18118657

>>18118534
You can always do a first chapter run and see how it goes.

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>>18117981
Not really a fandead so it's not like I'm too torn up about it, but I liked her well enough and respected the lengths she went to for her fans. So, for that to all potentially be vile manipulation doesn't feel great. Reminds me of a certain somebody's thoughts on idols...

>> No.18119167

>>18118675
Mr. Koro....

>> No.18119191

>>18118534
I still think any kind of voting should be done via a poll website but honestly a quest sounds fun, I think I'd play it.

>> No.18119263

>>18118675
>Reminds me of a certain somebody's thoughts on idols...
who and what

>> No.18119265

>>18118534
Could be fun.

>> No.18119333

>>18119263
I posted who I posted with it for a reason

>> No.18119406

>>18119333
yea I know nothing about mr.koro other than fact that she's a dog.

>> No.18119561

>>18119191
Polls can be botted, which is probably less labor-intensive if you have it than spamming a vote every minute

>> No.18119626

>>18119561
To that point, people can vote for an option someone brings up by replying to the post, and open-ended responses can't be accounted for with a poll

>> No.18119649

>>18119561
would someone actually care enough to bot a poll about vtuber fanfiction?

>> No.18119703

>>18119406
Not gonna get too into specifics because she wasn't Koro when she said it but basically she said that idols getting or having boyfriends is a betrayal of the worst kind because their fanbase is made up of people who society kinda of looks down on but still deal with the negativity to support the idol, and finding people that dedicated to you isn't easy and shouldn't be taken lightly.

>> No.18119735

>>18118534
Okay thinking about it more what kind of quest are you thinking of running? Cause the only two things I can think of are holofantasy style rpg or chuuba raising sim.
>>18119649
I mean we have threadshitters. Botting isn't that hard if you know what you're doing.

>> No.18119742

>>18119649
I don't make a habit of underestimating schizos in any regard

>> No.18119825

>>18119735
Honoestly the opening I have leans towards action, but the setting and genre should (in theory) be largely user-driven, at least for a first go-round.

>> No.18119851

>>18119703
I've always detested unicorns with every fibre of my being, but when put that way, it's actually understandable

>> No.18120108

>>18119703
huh I thought the whole Rushia yab was pretty funny but with a perspective like that, I can kinda sympathize with the fandead.

>> No.18120180

>>18119825
I mean I was more asking in regards to what kind of 'system' you'll run it under. Your answer does make me think it'll be 'rpg' (as in dice rolls) styled.

>> No.18120389

>>18120180
If it were using dice rolls, yes that would be appropriate, but for the moment it'll purely be driven by story->input->output->story, repeat. Real simple, because anything else would require a trip to /qst/, which kind of defeats the purpose in my opinion. I'll just post something, get the ball rolling, and see where to go from there

>> No.18120415

>>18119703
I knew I loved this dog

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You are ANON: a 20-something do-nothing with no marketable skills and a dubious online presence. Your life has been nothing but a series of minor inconveniences broken up by equally minor but infrequent joys.

Your parents are DEAD, and this has been internalized for future use as angst fuel when the circumstances of their demise becomes clear. For now, their death means you have an indeterminate, yet functionally adequate, amount of liquid assets and no familial responsibilities whatsoever.

You have found yourself in a predicament.

The last thing you remember was snuggling up in your comfortable bed, thermostat set to 64 degrees American, pajamas on and phone off.

When you woke up, you were in a proufoundly uncomfortable position, arms tied behind your back, legs tied with something digging into your heels, and a bag over your head.

Not your finest moment, but you popped a morning boner, and it was probably visible to everyone in the room. Ordinarily it would be a minute-long thing, but enhanced by the fear as it is, it's not going down any time soon.

You hear a feminine voice, probably gagged, somewhere in the room behind you.

"You're finally awake," a voice calls out, as the bag is ripped from your head. It doesn't take long for your eyes to adjust to the light. You're in an old, rusted, linoleum-lined room, dimly lit by lights dangling from a hallway outside.

The figure walks around to your front. They're of average height. They study you for a moment, before removing their mask to reveal...

0 decides, put commands in greentext.

>> No.18120722

>>18120608
>Anya wearing an Anya Mask.

>> No.18120740

>>18120608
>Yagoo

>> No.18120764

>>18120740
ALREADY?

>> No.18120836

>>18120740
>Yagoo
>Gagged female voice
Ah shit this quest was actually mioposting.

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>>18119851
>>18120108
I think there's a stark difference between someone who's raging about a purity especially when it's very clearly their own thing they're trying to push, like that guy who was mad about Botan playing a game with men, and somebody like pic related who's just genuinely bummed out they got bilked after being led on like that.

>> No.18121315

>>18120836
Make it a twist and make the female voice Watame. Other hags deserve to be loved and impregnated too.

>> No.18121324

>>18120608
>Fubuki
Have to try the age old favorite

>> No.18121445

>>18120608
>Fubuki kidnapping you to match you with her friends Flare and Watame

>> No.18121556

>>18121074
I don't know whether to laugh or feel bad for the guy.

>> No.18121606

>>18121074
I used to think that I wouldn't care so much if my oshis get boyfriends. After all, It's pretty pathetic to want to get all fussy and angry over their own personal lives but with Rushia it felt different. It did feel like a genuine betrayal after all the GFE shit that she does for us. Rushia's streams really do feel much more different than Fubuki and Aqua's streams for me.

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>>18120608
>>18120740
>Yagoo

A man of Asian descent, likely Japanese judging by his accent, both dour in appearance and demeanor. You don't recognize him. His dirty, corporate, laminated nametag is frayed at the edges, and reads in all capital letters, "YAGOO".

He stares into your eyes with all the sanguine countenance of a lord, letting the mask droop to his fingertips as he adjusts his tie with another hand.

"I've been looking for an opportunity to do this for a long time, Anon, but you just never get to sleep."

"W-what do you want from me?" you say, and you hate the tremble that comes out.

YAGOO undoes the button on his collar, languidly displaying to you that his biggest problem is being warm. Yours is far more severe.

"I'm a businessman, Anon. I'm in the people business. What I want from everyone is the same thing, really." He undoes his tie, wrapping it around his knuckles pensively, before shaking his head and tossing it aside. "I need you to perform a task for me. It will be gainful, and perhaps perilous, but I need you to do it, regardless."

Well, that doesn't make a lick of sense. As previously established, you have no SKILLS.

SKILLS:
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Yup, even that supports it. So what did he need you for? Why would he even kidnap you if he wanted to give you a job? You needed money, so you wouldn't have turned it down anyways. Well, maybe you would have. One could refer to you as "peril-averse".

"What if I say no?"

"I'm glad you asked, Anon."

YAGOO walks to your back, and you hear the sound of a metal chair scraping along the floor. The muffled sounds get louder until YAGOO places its source directly in front of you, bagged and tied. He removes the bag, to reveal your fellow captive…

(This is where you choose your starter pokemon.)

1 decides. You can be more descriptive if you like, dictating appearance, condition, limited actions, whatever.

>> No.18122256

>>18120608
>>18122103
Take this shit to >>>/qst/

>> No.18122308

>>18122103
>Kizuna Ai?

>> No.18122311

>>18119851
The difference is whether or not the unicorn is self-made. It'd be one thing to go schizo for someone like, I dunno, Towa, or Ame, who clearly are not into GFE, but Rushia's entire identity is built around it. When the entertainer is actively cultivating and encouraging unicorns to simp, even being harsh, the lonely sadsacks are only 50% to blame. They were marketed something and lied to.

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>>18122103
>Mikochi with a disheveled outfit, panting as if she was tired and dehydrated with a rope tied around her.

>> No.18122796

>>18122103
>Rabid Korone in her tattered uniform. Looks like she'd give you rabies if she bit you

>> No.18122803

>>18122103
>Pekora

>> No.18122919

>>18122103
>Okayu, clothes ruffled and ripped, looking more afraid than you've ever seen her

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>>18122103
>Suisei, looking the angriest she's ever been

>> No.18123163

>>18122103
>Shion, her usual smugness nowhere to be found

>> No.18123567

Changing policy temporarily: while I'm here, I'll make the deciding number even or odd. When I intend on being away for a bit, I'll do it like I've been doing. At the end of a period of 15 minutes in the first case, I'll either roll off and decide or combine in some way. In the other case, it'll be when I get back. For this one, I'm gonna tally up all of them and roll off.

>> No.18123623

>>18122103
>Polka, wearing a rainbow gag.

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> blatant namefagging

>> No.18123711

>>18123567
Would be even better if you take this shit to >>>/qst/

>> No.18123785

>>18123711
Shut up, peon.

>> No.18123976

>>18123679
would be kinda funny if some shitposter decided to sabotage the whole thing by posting fake updates if the questgiver didn’t use a trip huh?

>> No.18124041

>>18123976
Would be even better if the quest giver went to >>>/qst/

>> No.18124229

>>18123567
Actually, in retrospect, using a number is better to give everyone else a cue that a "winner" has been decided. And rolling does make it seem like rigging is taking place behind the scenes. So this entire policy is garbo, business as usual for this next choice, but we'll do the even/odd rolling thing if I'm in-house and available for writing.

>> No.18124387

>>18124229
Maybe having more than one potential winning number would help reduce the amount of reply spamming

>> No.18124507

There is kind of a problem with having a quest type story in here; namely that if anyone wants to post a story or a prompt or whatever, they wouldn't be able to while the quest is going on without coming off as uncaring jackasses, and also nobody would even notice their post.
A quest story is the opposite of what this thread has been about for close to a year now: posting stories/prompts and discussing them, which was a more passive affair. Compare with a quest which requires a far more active approach. I don't dislike it so far but it is at odds with what the thread's been about for so long now.

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>>18122103
>>18122919
>Okayu, clothes ruffled and ripped, looking more afraid than you've ever seen her

Okayu!

"Okmmf!" she muffles out. Her hair is a dim gray under the light -- ruffled and greasy. If the situation weren't clear before, it is now. You hadn't been able to get a hold of her for the past couple of days, and now you see why.

Her clothes are ripped and torn, and it looks like she's been beaten. She seems to barely have the energy to meet your gaze, and even when she does, only your experience lets you see the fear through her fugue.

"Well, actually, the answer is very simple, Anon. Circumstances are such that, even if you don't believe me, events are already underway. You won't be able to avoid it even if you tried. Even so, I prefer to have verbal agreements when possible. So, verbally agree…"

He pulls out a handgun, holding it away from you, and pointed at the catgirl.

"Or you escape from here alone. Your choice, but one, I think, will increase your chances of survival more and cause considerably less distress."

He's not giving you much of an option, though in the wise words of your (departed) father, "You always have a choice, you might just not like the ones you have."

2, 4, 6 decides.

>>18124387
We'll do that, then

>> No.18124853

>>18124507
I think that's only a problem with this specific style of quests.
I think a bigger update with limited choices/roll based thing might work better for this thread since then it would be poll embedded in the published story or just asking for rolls and what the PC would do.

>> No.18124911

>>18117462
Holy fuck, I just read it. It was fucking kino. Shame it only has one chapter, I hope the author continues it.

>> No.18124982

>>18124824
>Look him in the eye and accept.

>> No.18125087

>>18124507
I don't think you're wrong, but I also think that thread deathposting is not super unwarranted. Having a regular, centralizing topic of interaction would decrease bored shitposting and improve health, I feel, but that's just my opinion. I won't be this present all the time, so if I get one update every day or so after we get moving, that should roughly match the pace of the thread ordinarily.

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>>18124507
I feel like this is only a problem if you try to run the quest here (a bit of a logistical nightmare), as opposed to say, running it on its own thread on /qst/ and just shilling it here whenever it's active by replying to the anchor and relevant posts.

>> No.18125431

>>18125087
We already have a template for stories with audience participation: Holofantasy.
HFanon ocasionally pops up here asking for rolls and/or decisions, the last one being who went with (you) into the castle iirc. You could do that but more frequently; as in make the updates bigger and thus the part when the thread participates more stretched out to not bloat the thread.
I agree that the thread did need this newfound energy that the quest has brought, but I don't want every update you make take an entire thread or two to complete, you know?

>> No.18125594

>>18125087
NTA but that's also assuming you're the only one posting quest-related stuff, or actual quests themselves. If someone well-meaning comes in and decides they want to try a quest? Can't police them without turning the thread into a wasteland. And why police them in the first place? Should there be only one quester at a time? Why should that quester be you? etc etc

>> No.18125828

>>18125594
>>18125431
Both good points, and I do like the anchor idea, so I'll post the completed "chapters" to the anchor, as well as shill whenever I'm properly set up to write.

https://strawpoll.com/hxprqdooo

>> No.18125971

>>18125828
Honestly think this quest is a bit too steeped in the culture here that it wouldn't work outside of the thread.

>> No.18126101

tl;dr just stop trying to do anything new and stagnate

>> No.18126316

>>18125971
You know >>>/qst/ exist, right? An entire board that handles quests?

>> No.18126327

>>18125971
The idea being that thread traffic is diverted between both /qst/ and /wg/. Which, again, in my opinion, sort of defeats the purpose of trying to revitalize the thread, but I'll leave it up to everyone.

The positive that it could increase thread activity is also a negative. The other anon is right: too many quests being started is why /qst/ got created in the first place, which would ruin the thread totally. So /wg/ is good as an option only conditionally.

>> No.18126434

>>18126327
this leaves only one option: we must add a general-mandated discord to the OP which everyone must join for quest-related dialogue

>> No.18127027

>>18126316
Yes but that doesn't really refute the point that this quest specifically seems catered to the people /here/
Unless this is like the 'Mori should be a vsinger' posting last year where the posters hoped Mori would become one and magically lose relevance. I.e you hate it and hope it goes somewhere else to die.

>> No.18127193

>>18126327
I think just having bigger updates would be a happy medium. It comes at the cost of audience participation though, as the points for when the audience rolls to decide would be spaced out further.
Or you could do those bigger updates with multiple decisions in each, and let anons each have 3 or more in each post, but I don't know how you'd structure the story to allow that.

>> No.18127337

>>18126434
The gayest option possible, I see.

I'll do one more update later tonight, then by tomorrow, I'll review the poll results and make a decision. /qst/ is a pretty survivable board by comparison, but to facilitate the idea of thread health, people could post their non-command general ideas or broader suggestions/critiques in this thread.

So discussion/commands, /qst/, criticism/cuckposting /wg/

>> No.18127404

>>18127027
Sounds like an excuse. Just go to >>>/qst/ already.

>> No.18127831

>>18127404
Or what?

>> No.18127851

>>18127831
Or he'll keep posting his nobodies in the OP, of course.

>> No.18127948

>>18127193
Pretty sure something like that is something that can only come from quest design. Since something like this specific quest is kind of reliant on audience participation since the options are all "Write in".

>> No.18128461

>>18127337
To add to this: /qst/ option would probably include this ruleset:

Rolls consist of two stats, determined by the winning command. Stats must be properly supported by the action, otherwise only one stat will be used. Rolls will be shown at the top of the post and performed by me, as well as the number needed to succeed in a particular command. Roll commands are only necessary when specified.

A roll of 4+ is a success. A roll of 6 counts as 2 successes. Roll a number of D6's equal to the sum of two stats. The difficulty is either static, and will be specified in the case of multiple choice, or will be rolled against an enemy's stat if in combat.

For example, if you had 2 in Strength, 2 in Agility, and you wanted to hit a target with an Agility of 3 who is explicitly dodging, you would need to roll a total of 3 successes to hit with a command that used Strength and Agility properly. Damage will be expressed narratively. More mechanics potentially incoming.

>> No.18128641

This qfag isn't listening and insists on reddit spacing, so don't expect any feedback to matter.

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