/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

I LOVE HER!!!!!! I LOVE KRONII!!!!!!!!!!!! KRONII LOVE!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

If you post off-topic faggotry I will take formal action.
Make this thread a good one.

Threadbaker doko...I've been making the past three threads...

>>16242208
Should have added the new stream.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjRf30n4od4

>>16242272
He's an IRyStocrat now.

Cucking Kronii with her more active, less emotionally abusive coworkers!

How are you liking isopod hours kronies?

>>16242272
I made one, but you posted this one first.

>>16242290
That silver flower means he's been an IRyStocrat for a while

>>16242329
Gomen...

kronii at least a retweet or a like

>>16242314
What?

>>16241898
Beyond the usual bongistan English courses, no. I was always one for non fiction and I still am, reading mostly history, gardening, ecology and natural history books. Occasionally I’ll read myths and legends but I’ve never liked actual fiction, off the top of my head I’ve read LOTR and that’s about it. I’ve always been surrounded by writing as my parents like sci fi and one of my family members wrote astronomy books - I don’t know what they’d make of Sana… I did do English briefly at a college level along with history (not burger college level as that’s uni here) but I gave up in favour of horticulture and because that college booted me for being an autistic edgelord, lmao
I only picked it up with Kronii’s debut. In school the only fandom I followed was /mlp/ which I kept to myself and would occasionally read fics people wrote but always felt writing them myself would be cringy.
I hope my writing is okay, I know it’s a little cliche and “futa chuuba rapes (you)” gets a little old, but I’m trying to do more fluff and scenario buildup stuff, as well as non greentexts as per /wg/‘s advice
>>16242046
Rape is a strong word…it’s more like she’s going to “encourage you to be submissive to her” No rape at all, it’s consensual. After all, you chose to come to Fauna for comfort after Kronii neglected you…

Kronii's love is just a burning memory...

>>16242359
>off topic posting
Fuck off. Nobody asked about your shitty life.

>>16242359
Bong college can boot you for being an edgelord?

>>16242349
She literally posted a members post earlier today though?

>>16242376
I asked. Cope.

>>16242359
>sekkusu is a fucking ponyposter
I SHOULDVE KNOWN

>>16242394
i-i like moona
but why?

>>16242376
I bet you're just Gabe.

>>16242387
>contributing to off topic Discord shittery
You're even worse.

https://youtu.be/cIUHzoj7HoI
>brings up kronii the most
THEY
ARE

>>16242350
Roughly 12 am to 3 am. It is real isopod hours right now.

>>16242425
Seethe

Anchor post for fics. Please reply here for archival purposes.
If you will be using a rentry link, please use
>http://rentry.org
instead of .co, as the latter is filtered as spam.
Thank you!

I hope we get cute chuuni fan art of Kronii in Monster Hunter armour after the collab. Also, I really hope the sponsorship will lead to an in game Event Quest with Kronii dual blades but I would be overdosing on hopium if I really believed that, since Capcom have made no such announcement. Who knows though?

>>16242384
Anon... You can go to jail for being mean on Facebook in Bongland

>>16242480
>Kromei non-chuuni MH fanart instead

Bed anon here, my bed has since stopped shaking but now there are weird noises coming from outside... why me?

>>16242518
Hot

>>16242518
>>16242528
i'm going to schizo tweet about not flooding the art tags with kromei shit

>>16242526
HIRyS!
It’s IRyS!
Won’t you let hope in, anon? If you think your bed is creaky now, just wait till we’re together in it *chu*

>>16242567
Incredibly based

>>16242526
I wouldn't worry about it.

>>16242459
W-Why? Do isopods crawl out at this hour?

>>16242518
Someone should draw Mumei as Malfestio (see picrel) since it’s the only owl monster.
And just like Mumei it’s good at putting you to sleep

>>16242359
oh no, I didn't mean to imply your writing is bad with that question, the fact that it's technically competent is what led me to wonder about it. But all this actually lines up, since the main reason I had those thoughts, particularly regarding non-collegiate creative writing or a past in fanfiction, was because the writing, in a way, is reminiscent of nonfiction. While I'll admit I haven't read your entire catalogue, in this particular fic the writing tends to be literal when it can be. That is to say, if something can be explicitly stated, then it will be. Take the part at the beginning where Fauna makes (You) promise you won't run away. After she whispers the threat into your ear, your only reaction is "knowing she'll make good on the threat" if you don't cooperate. So, if you'll take the advice of a schizo, I would say to not worry as much about the large-scale build up of the whole fic but these smaller build-ups and releases of tension. Rather than "knowing" she will punish you if you disobey, inspire a fear by spending a line or two on the emotional effect this threat has on (You) or maybe even have a line wondering if she's being serious or just joking. Ambiguity is a key part of fiction, our imaginations are our best writers after all.
But, I do like reading what you write, keep it up!

>>16242567
Do it coward.

>>16242526
Can you take photos of the outside? Maybe we can help you

>>16242567
>>16242601
>>16242685
>openly encouraging containment breaching
This is why this general was a fucking mistake. Actual discordfags and tourists.

>>16242732
fuck off kromeifag

>>16242677
He hates me...

>>16242720
There would be nothing to see. I do live next to a forest though...

>>16242732
It would be pretty based though

>>16242778
Maybe something that came from the forest is making the sounds. Just take a picture, you might catch in the photo the animal

>>16242647
It is something about people getting up at night to get food. It is like isopods finding food in the abyss.

>>16242677
Thank you anon, it’s nice to get feedback as it helps boost my confidence a little. I’m feeling happy with this fluff so far considering I’ve only done one non greentext fic before (which had Risu in it and wasn’t great because I’d never watched or written Risu much)
>>16242807
>>16242732
Stop schizo-ing you two. Take your meds in the form of Kronii breast milk.

>>16242677
Do you hate me writeschizo?

>>16242878
Gabe...

Post THAT Kronii face

>>16242913
I'm not Gabe...

>>16242914

>>16242878
that depends on who you are, but the answer is most likely no. There are very few writers I have ever read who I would actively say I dislike, much less hate. This is especially true of amateur writing, I love fiction in general so I can always find something I like in the work of people who are trying.

>>16242945
But do you hate Gabe?

KRONII LOVE

>>16242964
no, but I do enjoy bullying him very much
I just wish he would give his work a lookover before posting, most of my basic critiques are things he'd find himself if he actually read it before hitting submit

Respond to this post with your favorite Kronii stream and your least favorite.

>>16242778
You wouldn’t happen to know any local druids, would you?

>>16243014
Fall Guys or Grinch
any Hades stream because I just don't care

>>16243014
Grinch watchalong, no explanation needed
Minecraft with Mumei or Stories Untold, both were pretty boring

>>16243010
Did you read his fanfic account?

>>16242359
>/mlp/
Why spoiler it? Your lust for horsecock made you pretty obvious.

>>16243014
Fall guys/ Amongus/ Grinch
and
Eternal Return with Beazl, MC collab with mumei

>>16243014
The Minecraft one where she first met IRyS, absolute pure kino. Least favourite would probably be Twelve Minutes since that game was kind of weird to me, but ngl I’m not a big fan of any of the random indie games she picks up. Still, at least it’s original and not just fucking Apex

I really like watching you guys uplift each other...
This is what Kronii wants!

>>16243105
I had a look and I did make a personal archive of each one in case I get drunk and want to read through one at a later date, but I'm not typically one to read fanfiction anyway. I was honestly more curious reading the comments people had left on his fics. Fanfiction is a weird world.

>>16243014
Grinch
The 1st members Karaoke

>>16243180
Fuck off you gayposting fag.

>>16243180
kronies together strong

>>16243014
1st Karaoke/ Trueman watchalong
Stories untold, I had to put the vod on 2x to end it

>>16242359
>and because that college booted me for being an autistic edgelord,
What did you do lol?

>>16243014
Graduate stream
Debut stream

>>16243014
Grinch watchalong.
All Mumei collabs.

>>16242394
SEX!!!!
>Moona teaching Kronii how to give paizuri
>Moona squealing in her ESL eigo when her technique is subpar
>decides to show her
>Kronii realizing that watching other girls service you is kinda hot

I wonder how Kronii would react to something like this.

>>16243482
anon please, it would be medically unsafe for the bloodflow to my penis to exceed current levels

Confess your sins, /infinity/.

>>16243506
No fucking way
This can't be real

>>16243547
I commission too much Kronii porn instead of sending her supas

>>16243547
I unironically want the schizo dating simulator to be real

>>16243445
We were here together was a pretty good stream, though Mumei collabs get boring fast cause they end up following the same shtick.

>>16243527

>>16243547
i find the menhera lusting very off putting

>>16243506
OK now you made me chuckle nijifag

>>16243547
I'm unironically in love with Kronii

>>16243566
It happened.
https://youtu.be/DNGG9vCvqO8?t=10808

>>16243620
>We were here together
that stream was shitexcept the last part when they got high that shit was funny as fuck

>>16243664
Your love for her... is not real.

>>16243547
I love her

>>16243666
goddamn
marryme poster really fucking made it

>>16243607
With our writefags and drawchads? Between us the thread could manifest it.
The question isn’t if we could, it’s if we should. Hell you could even do a version for the fujos with the male namefags
I could always do the alt/corrupted futa route…

>>16243678
nta but obligatory

>>16243547
I am literally in love with Ouro Kronii.

Good night kronii
Good night to the schizo derailing the threads
Good night anons who tell me to take meds
Goodnight kronies, goodnight kromies
Goodnight mumei
And goodnight you Bae
Goodnight clocks and goodnight cocks
Goodnight Sana
And goodnight Fauna
Goodnight Gabe and goodnight Rice
Goodnight writefags
And goodnight rapeable mice
Goodnight to the Takeshi who keeps screaming "sex"
Goodnight whores
And goodnight antis
Goodnight anons everywhere!

>>16243547
I watched all of ina's stream today and posted in /inf/ and /wah/ about it... I liked it but I cant help but feel guilty.

>>16243751
goodnight Seussronii!

>>16243506
she would laugh, obviously

>>16243547
I'm falling for Izumi
>>16243607
Same

>>16243697
>secret sekkusu route where izumi, queue, and pchan sprout dicks and rape you

>>16243547
I half regret getting back to vtubers

Will Schizo Schizo Infinity Club have Neah DLC? I find her rambling cute

>>16243882
Neah it's Monika

>>16243882
For me it's writerschizo-sensei

>>16243527
>Moona giving thighjob with her thick legs
>Kronii looking insecurely at her own stick legs and just masturbates the shame away
>Moona having Kronii lick your cum from her fat thighs when you cum on them
>Kronii keeps licking even after all the cum is go e, until eventually she starts eating Moona out
>while Moona cleans your cock with her wet, warm mouth

>>16243882
p-chan should be the DLC, since her gender is ambiguous and she could be like that trap in Catherine Full Body

>>16243547
I might be responsible for the start of gayposting when I joked about fucking the manlet kronies way back during the early threads

>>16243847
You know, I would write that if a full script was asked for unironically. What has this fucking place done to me? A year ago I was but a simple clipnigger that occasionally jacked it to futa chuubas. Now I’m sitting here staying awake most of the night being equally parasocial for Kronii/Fauna/IRyS and their respective threads whilst writing fanfics.

>>16243547
I prefer the gay posting to the futa posting.

>>16244020
I'll never forgive you.
t. last heterokronie

>>16244032
i need to know the context behind this image

>>16244020
Gayposting is endemic to 4chan though. Despite p-chan's ramblings, chan culture has always been to post gay shit.

>>16243547
my oishi is actually Bae

>>16244032
Yeah why the fuck are you still awake?

>>16244067
the brrats have invaded

>>16244067
Not a sin desu

>>16243547
I was not actually the first futafag. I was only inspired to crap out prompts out of sheer lust for Kronii when I kept being called out for a futafag. Also a meme I made about the topic breached containment and made some people really mad as well as some other anons think the place is/was futafag general

>>16244085
i like my unity rrat

>>16243547
whenever I feel irritated at the "I hate her!!!" posters, I cuckquean-post instead

>>16244067
>oishi
return to /meat/

>>16244142
Vampanon…
>>16244061
It’s by Messhi, it’s only recently been translated on Nhentai iirc
>>16244074
Can’t sleep too horny pls undastan

>>16244186
>N
This further confirms my thesis that this general is filled with newfag tourists. God. Fucking. Damn. It.
IT IS CHAN CULTURE NOT TO USE FUCKING NHENTAI

Sekkusu's corpse will one day be found in a pool of his own cum, surrounded by horticulture textbooks and printouts of his own photoshopped fauna phalluses

>>16244253
I want to see the expression of his family when they know about it

>>16244242
I will give you this one (You) pchan, but there is almost nothing on panda that I can't find on nh and it's much easier jacking off with my phone than on my computer

>>16244242
What porn do you use to get off, p-chan?

>>16244329
Don't entertain that namefaggot Discord mod.

>>16244329
exhibitionism, rape, shota, and some others I won't mention.

>>16244404
literally made for domloss and BDSM

>>16244408
Can you stop off-topic socializing faggot?

>>16243687
They were good at the game too and came in first that match.
But only because squad leader for Selen's team was salty as fuck about the Dragoon team and had Slene throw the match.

>>16244430
>hawk hag
>capable of even pretending to be a dom
she is built for shotachad cock

>>16244408
That's pretty hot. Also, what's your opinion on that art of you?

>>16244491
Disgusted because it's off-topic namefag venerating trash.
But surprised it's somewhat accurate, since I do work in labs (college) so I wear a lab coat often, and it basically looks like me but I have shorter hair and I don't wear glasses often.

>>16244438
No

>>16244548
and you wonder why you were raped that one time...

sweet summer child

>>16244548
Good to know! Thank you for sating my curiousity. If it's somewhat accurate, you must be pretty cute...

>>16244588
Clingyronie...

>>16244588
Izumi...

>>16244588
Every Kronie is like this
no exceptions.

>>16244587
Asians are genetically predisposed to have smaller frames and more feminine features. I unfortunately got the shorter stick for almost every one of those features, so I'm basically powerless against any one above the height of 5"7. Now imagine being me fighting back an intoxicated 6"2 man at a frat party.
This is exactly why I am now a shut-in.

>>16244404
https://twitter.com/Myth1cArts/status/1480736223647961095?t=Nu6o40cZcAJOMVOjr7geNQ&s=19

>>16244675
Holy fuck I absolutely must cuddle you

>>16244673
Not me. I'm mentally stable unlike you losers.

>>16244748

>>16244743
I appreciate the sentiment.

Shillohette won't be up until after frostpunk stream. She'll discuss with chat what hashtag to use for it at the end of the stream.

>>16243547
I'm honestly really ashamed of how much I like Kronii. Its the worst kind of backhanded wake up call that I'm old enough to where new up and coming content creators ARE going to be my age and be people that I could... be with. This is such a new and weird experience. I'm not watching some dude 10 years older then me scream at horror games I'm watching a cute girl my age act cute while actually making it. It was like a punch in the gut to see Kronii talk about and reference shit like DHMIS in a "I grew up with this" way, and just random memes and shit that I also grew up with. It makes me wonder how deep that goes. I've unironically never wanted to know a girls fucking interests despite having multiple gfs and what not, until Kronii. It feels like I found something I didnt know I needed until now and it fucking blows

tldr haha look at the funny gosling

>>16244986
Who are you?

>>16245059
Imagine being older than most of the girls...

>>16245059
HAHA look at the funny gosling!

>>16245059
Welcome to your mid twenties anon, things will get worse but they'll get better afterwards

>>16245059
>despite having multiple gfs
whore

>>16245084
Kronii's husband

>>16244986
>t. ________:) _____

>>16245213
You're lying, it's obvious she'll do that anyways, she wants to involve her community, she loves us

>>16245284
she loves your hot little body, not you

>>16245342
I'm fine with that

>>16245366
slut...

>>16245342
>Kronii loves your body more than she loves your personality
>has no issue neglecting and ignoring you if she is not in the mood to leer at you
>commonly whores you out to her coworkers to watch that body in action and masturbate to it

>>16245452
Which Holo is most likely to fall in love with you from too many sessions of borrowing you from Kronii?

>>16245549
Call me biased, but I think Fauna would gradually get more and more possessive with time until she drugs you to make you forget about Kronii altogether

>>16245549
rrat
That greentext still lives in my head

>>16245549
Kiara or Rushia. Potentially Mumei if you were completely mindbroken into a dumb pet, Sana if you treated her as your dumb pet.

>>16245612
>ywn be Kiara's escort turned rental boyfriend

Does she really love her community...

>>16245549
>Kronii forbids you from seeing your "clients" if she is not present
>since this ia for her pleasure only and its cheating otherwise
>you do it anyway cause the other girls treat you with more respect and love than your pimp gf
>having affairs behind Kronii's back just to feel loved

>>16245706
No

What do you think it will take for Kronii to try ARK? Even offstream is fine

>>16245708
>lovey dovey sex with Rushia because she doesn't make you feel like a piece of meat
>post coitus cuddling with Kiara while she kisses and snuggles you
>going on normal, non-sexual dates with Baelz, just talking about yourselves and things you like

>>16245795
Have a friend who played ARK die

>>16245600
Ah found it again. My heart.
https://rentry.org/v8kp8

>>16245706
she loves her community, but hates me specifically. She can never be sure if I'm watching, so she has to keep her walls up at all times.

>>16245810
I'm on it, bros

femanons...

>>16245706
Yes

>>16243547
kronii is not my oshi, its actually the blue woman

>>16245708
>some girls start leaving marks just to see if you get caught
>kiara and mumei leave scratches down your back
>gura and bae leave distinctive bite marks
>ina leaves bruises from her tentacles
>fauna leaves your ass red and raw from spankings

>>16245813
I don’t remember who wrote that but it was a good little fic.
Bae is underrated IMO, she’s actually really cute. Even if I don’t share the urge to rape her some people have because I’m purely submissive.

https://youtu.be/BYBv4AgyiaA?t=1259
Situations like this is why Kronii should stream.
Imagine if we didn't have Kronii's PoV for this incident. We wouldn't be able to see the mayhem she created.

>>16245813
>>16245600
>>16245921

Goddammit why is this one the one people remember
I already gave you a comfy rrat fic don't make me keep writing this one

>>16245906
>Kronii touching herself stupid when she notices
>demands you fuck her brains out while she slaps you and calls you a cheating whore

>>16243547
I can't find it in me to dislike a single holo, there doesn't seem to be an upper limit to how many I can fall for. I feel weird and sometimes a little sad being on this board where it's normal to actually hate at least one or two of them for reasons that I find to be appealing traits. I feel like an impostor.

>>16243547
I don't watch any of Kronii's vods. I refuse to even watch her debut video because I don't watch vods.

>>16245906
Thanks for reminding me about Fauna spanking naughty saplings, I’ll include that in the one I’m currently writing.
This is still more gentle than my usual stuff. One of these days I’ll try proper textual vanilla but that’s not today. Should have this finished soon enough then I can sleep…

>>16245904
That's a boy...

>>16246008
>Kronii slowly realizes that imagining you doing it from small hints is as hot if not hotter than actually watching

>>16245865
Arent real

https://mobile.twitter.com/tsubuanfes/status/1480815412208353282
Everyone love her.

>>16245904
I want your oshi to utterly powderize my pelvis with that ass and thighs while Kronii watches/listens from othside of tge door!!!

>>16246056
I'm gonna probably buy her new art book when it comes out desu
I gotta remember to snag takeuchi's...

>>16246041
Trap Suisei…blue (wo)man SEEEEEEX
Imagine going backstage and finding “her” secret, and planning to blackmail for it! Imagine the pure comet idol knocking you out and gagging you when you try and take pictures of the comet’s cock! Imagine waking up with Suisei straddling you whilst you’re tied down with a knife at your throat, instructed that you’re going to tell no one about what you saw, and your choice is in either throating the knife or Suisei’s cock! SEX!!!!

>>16246041
>>16246120
no

>>16246043
>Kronii masturbating comically hard while stifling tears
>because Anon came home covered in kisses and hickies, love and affection and not rough sex
>getting off to being a bad girlfriend

>>16246057
These posts
>>16246039
>>16246008
>>16245906
>>16245809
>>16245708
Better be typed by female hands because I'm losing my respect for you human beings quickly

>>16246135
Suisei's wide hip is perfect for breeding

AH CUTE
https://twitter.com/tsubuanfes/status/1480817890794536962

>>16246180
Why would it make a difference who wrote it?

>>16246193
Why does Kronii not interact with her mother more?

>>16246252
She can barely tolerate her actual mother...

kronii is adopted..

>>16246180
all me

>>16246218
>Suisei flashing you her camel-toe'd spats when Kronii isn't looking
>Suisei rubbing her cheeks against your crotch whenever possible
>Suisei making you touch her thighs whenever they are out of the plain sight
>and hungrily kissing you when Kronii leaves the room for "idol meeting"

>kronii's mom hates her
WE ARE

>>16245059
No wonder they left you. You can never satisfy anyone.

>>16246310
Professional homewrecker Suisei...

>>16243547
I do not have an oshi desu

help me god.

>>16246392
Is this the famous kabedon move?

>>16246392
speak english, nigga

>>16246347
My mom loves me now that I make money. We definitely aren't.

>>16246409
>for someone who's usually spouting stuff like "Sui-chan is small today too~~" or "A cup"
>your face sure is turning pretty red today, no?

>>16246392
>Suisei converting you from top-heavy to bottom-heavy lover
>making you swear off jacking it to fat tits in exchange for free access to her shapely, perfect bottom

>>16246463
UWAAAAAAAAAAAA COMET SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

>Sui-chan is small today too~~
kek

>>16243547
I like Fauna because she reminds me of my ex.

https://youtu.be/TAA62BCVjak
Imagine that hip on top of you

https://youtu.be/EwHqYPqVnYQ

>>16243547
One time I ate a bug

>>16246630
>>16246610
literally built for ruthless cuckqueaning and pelvis destruction...

SEX

>Suisei giving you a tjighjob that makes Kronii's paizuri feel like a waste of time
Please steal me from my oshi, blue woman

>>16246751
Kronii really is worth nothing...

>All these unfaithful kronies getting stolen
Truly I will be the last kronie.

>Suisei giving you front facing thighjob
>teasing you for how much you want this
>she admits in a whisper she wants (You) too
>but since you're with Kronii, this is as far as you two should go
>her hot breath on your neck as she rocks her hips back and forth sensually against you
>she keeps whispering how much she wants the real thing, just like you do
>asks in her sultry voice if you'll be single any time soon
>all while your cock is enveloped in her soft, perfect idol thighs

>>16246898
AHHHH I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHO KRONII IS UUUUUUOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SUISEX

kronies are so passive aggresive...
just like kronii!

>>16246978
kronies fetishizing being stolen to cope with the neglect...

https://twitter.com/ourokronii/status/1480834302439211008

>>16247279
Wada-mama, don't fall for Kronii's tricks!

>>16247032
That’s what all my Fauna fics are, in a nutshell…speaking of which!
>>16242472
Archivists, I assume you got part 1 (which is a fluff fic at https://rentry.org/dk3ob but here’s part 2, or “Fluffy Futa Fauna”
Tags: Tags: futa x male, Fauna steals (you), yandere/clingy sex, whipping, blowjob, anal, drugs, humiliation
https://rentry.org/w695z
This was supposed to be more gentle than normal but ended up pretty rough. Also the ending is…up to interpretation, without spoiling it. I love Fauna! Very little Kronii mention in this part but I’m happy with it.
T. Sekkusu

>>16247333
GO TO BED NIGGA

>>16247378
NTA but shut the fuck up.
If you want them to go to bed so badly, then tuck them in, Faggot.

>>16247333
I want to be stolen from Kronii by Fauna, then stolen from Fauna by Suisei...

>>16247394
I WANT KRONII LOVE

>>16247404
THEN GET HER ATTENTION YOU LONELY KRONIE

Park please ...

Sup kronies, any new Mori fics or greens?

>>16247551
writing is at an all time low other than sekkusu

>>16247394
>If you want them to go to bed so badly, then tuck them in, Faggot.
Is that a request?

>>16247583
I will keep the flame burning! Don’t let the archives die out, please…
Hang on, if I’m the last writefag does that make me the last kronie?
>>16247551
Any requests, I did have an idea for a futa Mori fic but I don’t really know how to write her, and I know she’s not a very convincing dom (but I generally don’t write submissive chuubas)

>>16247583
and sekkusu is only here because he got exiled from everywhere else

>>16247584
It's a mere recommendation, not a request.

>>16247647
>Any requests
>I did have an idea for a futa Mori fic
Uh I wasn't thinking of anything sexual
how about this
>(You) and Mori in middle school
>She brags to you about the shiny Giratina she caught and shows it to you
>"I reset the game about 4000 times!"
>you think it's funny if you take her DS and run away with it
>lock yourself in the boys bathroom while she runs after you and screams
>reset the save data and give it back to her
>she cries and you feel bad

>>16247655
I can tuck you in if you want...

>>16247742
Sorry anon, you seem to be a normal faggot, not a girl kissing faggot.

I just realized that p-chan is cuckschizo.

>>16247800
cuckschizo is the OG p-chan
the new one is just Jesse

>>16247704
Stop trying to buy her, she's been bullied enough...

>>16242472
Dropping my first fic off here. It's titled "Our Adventure Will Never End." This is the first chapter to the story. Haven't done this before but a peafowl lit inspiration within me. I was also particularly inspired by another bird, who's theme I felt fit with Kronii.

Any tips regarding formatting/spacing or other criticism is welcome. I didn't originally write in rentry, it was word.

It's a more lore/serious piece and also fairly long.

The story revolves around Amelia and Kronii. It will open up to other holomem in time.

https://rentry.org/ba5ao

Tags: SFW, Time Travel, hope, despair, anxiety

>>16247790
I am NOT a normalfag

>>16247856
>desiring Kronii's attention and not her lips
Seems like it to me.

>>16247828
Thank you for your contribution! I'll be sure to give this a read later.

>>16247913
I desire her hand...

Kroniichiwa Ourobros!

>>16248015
Good luck getting it.

>>16248015
Kiraposter...

>>16248043
Why do you hate me Fluff... Kronii already hates me...

>>16242235
>>16243009
>>16243664
>>16243680
>>16243728
I ALSO LOVE KRONII! KRONII LOVE!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
>>16243547
i really love kronii!

>>16248057
But he didn't even post Kira.

>>16248130
all me btw

>>16248130
You don't love Kronii. You just love posting the same image and the same words, but you don't mean them.

https://twitter.com/ourokronii/status/1480846634602749954

>>16248121
I don't hate anyone

>>16248274
she's not looking respectfully...

>>16248274
God she's such a memer

R A P E

>>16248323
Who is this again?

>>16248323
AAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEE FORCED SEX WITH KROMEISCHIZO!!!!!

>>16248323
I'm going to pretend she's a flip that dyed her hair

>>16248323
MXC-Chama, how come you only post your art here? Worried the schizos you’re drawing are gonna see it? It’s cute though.

>>16248346
She is

>>16248260
if that were true, i wouldn't bother posting my love for her in the first place and have the dedication to do this whenever i'm able to

>>16248346
>Flip lesbian
That's 100% dye. He even got the denim jacket

>>16247333
Sekkusu… I’ve read every single one of your works since you popped up in /wg/ and I’m sorely disappointed in the lack or low emphasis of the corruption part, it seems like the MC just kinda accepts that it’s gonna happen. Please I need it aaaaaaaa That said, I do like this fic please write more :)

>>16248323
We are crossing boundaries that should never have been crossed...

>>16248429
YOU DID THIS TO US KRONII, YOU BITCH

>>16248429
well, we already crossed it for p-chan, Izumi and Queue, so its not that big of a deal anymore

>>16248323
I FUCKING HATE NEAH AND HER KROMEI SCHIZO FRIENDS

>>16248323
This dumb doxfag dyke needs correction

Ourobros, I think it's time to stop.

>>16248672
No. Not till I fuck every cute schizoronie

>>16248689
>cute schizoronie
dont exist

>>16248708
You don't think izumi, queue, p-chan, and neah are cute?

>>16248708
Izumi is cute...

>>16243014
>favorite
AWO, it was kino after kino for nearly five hours. The parasocial streams other anons picked are great too, but they're great because of small segments of the stream.
>least favorite
Exploring the JP Server With Mumei

>>16248724
she is and I want to marry her but the point stands

https://twitter.com/ourokronii/status/1480854476739153922

>>16247333
thoughts on Part 1
Could have better formating but it's acceptable, i would recommend spacing it out based on how many times a character speaks in a single paragraph.
As for the fic itself, you managed to write a believable Fauna, by that i mean, you used language that fits with Fauna's personality, i assume you used her ASMR's as point of reference.
An issue you face is that you use too much expository language when describing, almost as if the narrator stops being the character, i'm sure you will be able to solve the issue if you keep writing, I'll point to the third paragraph as an example.
You managed to hide information very well in the last paragraph, which allows the imagination to run, althought most readers familiars with your works will be able to guess that it's probably leading to futa, that isn't a bad thing necessarily.
Thoughts on Part 2
Already much better in formatting, something you should keep in mind is that not overwhelming the reader with information is very important, and whike it usually doesn't become a problem in shorter stories, it exponentially grows along with the lenght of the story.
While the formatting is better, it still needs work, the issue with making large paragraphs that consists of narration together with dialogue is that it can be hard to mantain attention of the reader, sort of like a bump in the road.
>heart-shaped tip
I don't like the description, but i can see what you were going for, still, consider that most phalluses tips aren't heart shaped. Whenever you write about bodies, do consider how it would look right, because things can very quickly become "body horror" if you aren't careful with the description you're building
A lot of the main beats of the story could use a little more build up, like the part where Fauna beats you with a branch, you could use the characters thoughts and anxiety to help build it up, but it mostly depends on what exactly is the next action of the story.
>superior futa cock
This is a very comical line, it made me laugh, this isn't bad, but it is a line that takes the reader out of the story by it's sheer comedic value, do consider that for next time.
About the later half of the story Fauna's lines become very unbelivable, It's not Fauna, it's simply a character that is told to be Fauna. Working on the plausibility of the character is extremely important for fan fiction, since it's fundamentally about working on pre-established characters. This problem becomes especially apparent on paragraph 9.
Paragraph 10 reads as if you were also masturbating while writing it, probably the worst part of the fic, you should find more time to improve on how to write climaxes

Basically, i wouldn't jack off to it, but i still got a boner, so mostly because it's not my fetish, not due to it's quality. There are a points that you need to work on, but i've noticed improvements over your previous fics.
I will also praise your very large vocabulary. It's pretty good, you very rarely repeat yourself.

https://twitter.com/ourokronii/status/1480854476739153922

>>16243191
>Favorite: the last gosling stream
>Least favorite: the first gosling stream

>>16248767
KRONII LEGS!

>>16248767
Doubters already btfo

>>16248767
>>16248775

>>16248767
That’s a useless fan kronii

>>16248808
>Legs
Yeah, her breasts are definitely still there. Shame about the hair though.

>>16248818
Just like her actual fans...

>>16248817
that's a good attempt at guessing just from the silhouette

>>16248808
just me or does it look like she’s wearing sandals?

>>16248840
It do be like that

>>16248767
WE'RE GONNA GET LEGS AND FEET

>>16248892
I think it's gonna be stockings

>>16248892
>LEGS
Based
>FEET
Cringe

>>16248323
THE DATING SIM IS RUINED

>>16248915
I hope she has also a horsecock with balls

>>16248933
...

>>16248933
She already does
mine that is

>>16248933
Se- Fuck it, you know who you are.

>>16248975
I'm not Sekkusu

>>16248984
In spirit.

>>16248933
Fucking elf fag

>>16248984
Are you the mpreg schizo?

>>16249056
No, I was just trying to bring up something worse than feet.

>>16248425
I’m surprised and slightly concerned someone has read all my work but also flattered. I was going to emphasise the corruption a little more but I wasn’t overly sure how to do it. I felt following one potion with another and then the promised Kirin nectar would be too long since I intend for the two parts to be read together. And I wouldn’t want the reader to be spending ages reading ideas before actual sex. But I’ll bear that in mind, thank you! In a way the corruption kind of goes both ways in that sweet, gentle mama nature becomes more aggressive if her breeding bitch (you) doesn’t give in straight away. I tried to put in a bit of resistance in the fucking but it’s hard to know how to do it especially as a futafag that wouldn’t exactly resist myself. I would like to learn how to do slightly more realistic instances of futa dom/rape
>>16248772
I like this, it’s exactly the sort of feedback I want, so thank you anon. Let me try and address some of it a little. I’ll freely concede by the end of it it became harder and harder to write believeable Fauna, but I’m glad the first part came across well - I did use her ASMR as reference without just quoting it, I really like the way she speaks and her soft reassuring tone. The giggles kind of put me off at first but it’s a cute tick. I never really listen to ASMR but I do find hers works somewhat well for me. I’m planning to do a valentines fic around the appropriate time in a similar vein, but with her masturbating during the stream and using innuendo/euphemism to hide it.

I struggle with spacing because I often do greentexts that are blocks of text with limited paragraphs. I am bad for walls of text with anything I write though. Should I do dialogue, space, descripton, dialogue - repeat? I’ve seen formats like that before.

As for the descriptions of climaxes I’ve never been very good at that, I’m not really sure how to improve as not a lot of other writers here detail the ones I’m after (ie a girl cumming with a dick) I have also got very little experience writing vanilla hence the sole focus on the dick as per usual; thanks to my tastes I don’t even get a boner from vanilla at all, meaning I never read or seek it out. I do read some futa doujins but their climaxes are often just weirdly translated dialogue, strange innuendos/names (I remember one using the phrase “boy womb”’which disturbs me) or just gibberish. So they aren’t good frames of reference for me.

The futa cock line I wasn’t sure about either. There’s a piece of art I beat my dick to with a futa horsecock girl that has such a thing which is where I’m coming from, I’ll stick it on catbox next time I post (it’s not a chuuba though) That’s where it came from. Probably avoiding that line in future though, thanks for the tip (lol)

I was going for some sort of thing about being hit with a branch-whip (choosing willow because it’s whippy and I know from experience it hurts like fuck) where she’s trying to break (you) into begging to get fucked, something like that. But again my inexperience shows.
How do you think I can do believeable, but still dominant (even if gentle) dialogue for Fauna sex? It seems like a lot of anons feel she has to be for dom loss (as some do for any chuuba - no different to me writing all of them as futa girls) although that’s not the impression I get from you. Originally I had aimed to do gentle sex but I thought the contrast between gentle ASMR Fauna and sadist futa sex freak Fauna was kind of hot in its own right. That and someone in one of the threads mentioned sparking by Fauna. But anyway I like the idea of soft reassurance and instructions from her as she tells you exactly what to do and how she feels? It’s just not easy for me to put that into words. Still, I honestly thank both of you for taking the time to read my autistic horny phoneposting and the further time to give me feedback. Hopefully my next fic(s) will take the feedback into account. I did save edit codes so I could edit these very fics in future.

>>16248933
Man, if all the Council has one it defeats the point, I really only like Sana and Fauna to have them by default. Although the idea of Fauna’s home brew being stolen by Bae for a chaotic prank and accidentally causing the normally dickless council to grow giant cocks is a good comedy/sex hybrid idea

>>16249242
I just want futa council to break a nonfuta Kronii...

>>16249276
Write it, anon, I believe in you!
I’m too far gone to write futa x female at least at the moment. Still, I think it’s a good idea. The question is who would endure the longest. I know Kronii as a low stamina hikki would fold like a house of cards, but between bouncy chaos Bae, beeeeeg Sana, Kirin Fauna and dopey Mumei I think they could abuse poor Kronii for hours.

>>16249209
On formatting, you should experiment to see what works, the genre of the story and it's pacing are made by how you format a story.

To do a more believable Fauna, it's mostly on the way she expresses anger, you managed to do well in the "bad sapling" line where she scolds the narrator. On the other hand, it's very silly to see Fauna say" Breeding your ass". So it's mostly on the type of language used.

I can't think of any other ways i can help you out, so that is all i'll say on your fics today.

I want my own writeschizo...

>>16249439
Krofauschizo...

>>16249439
Microsoft has given up

>>16249479
the words may be lost but the feeling in that tweet has been translated at least.

>>16249209
Don’t be concerned, I have read EVERYTHING in infinity and wg’s archive :)

>>16249479
>>16249439
I love her so much... She'll surely be best girl in Schizo Schizo Infinity Club

>>16247828
This is REALLY damn good, you truly know how to create an ambience, Althought the philosophical themes of the story get heavy, as in, It's a lot to wrap your head around, it helps that the reader finds out about things at the same time Amelia does. It's very exposition heavy, yet it doesn't feel like it thanks to the way you use character dialogue.
You managed to capture the way Amelia speaks in a very charming way, from her quips to other quirks, while Kronii's dialogue is telling in it's differences with the one we have, you write a Kronii who has gone through many pains and came off unhinged from all of it while still being Kronii.
It really does feel like you have a lot of experience writing already.
It does seems like you've already planned out the cosmic hierarchy of your story. Sincerely excited for future entries.
I don't have much to complain about other than Irys's entry feels very jarring in it's execution, but i'm not sure on how it could be improved upon.

I can feel the SEX from the silhouette! I have a good feeling about this.

I want to fuck Writerschizo-sensei...

>>16249439
I love this cute menhera so much, it’s honestly adorable how much she fawns over the Kirin and the clock. She’s just like me…
>>16249337
That would make sense, I admit the breeding lines were conjured out of internal horniness more than realism. I should have kept them to the narrator’s monologue but I liked the idea of Fauna deciding what to do with whipped and punished anon. Still, thanks for the advice!
>>16249514
Fucking hell. I kneel. Bear in mind you’re probably on several watchlists for that, kek

>>16249439
Croniolo..

>>16249601
>on several watchlists
God I hope the agent assigned to me is cute, I’m already getting off to this :)

>>16248767
Holy shit doubters got fucked

>>16248808
thank you wada mama

>>16249759
What if the agent is a dude though

>>16249887
Things like gender don't really matter much if you're horny enough. And if the other party is cute enough.

Kronii has this cute habit where she wants to know the reason for something, but she doesn't want to give the impression that she's questioning the wisdom of the advice by asking.

>>16249964
So if the feds send a bunch of twinks to gangstalk you, you would fuck them?

>>16250083
If I'm horny enough, yes. Any hole's a goal baby.

>>16250083
nta, but yes and vice versa.

>>16249887
Cuteness is genderless :)

>>16250009
We'll see if she does this during the Frostpunk stream. I noticed people like Deadweight backseated the fuck out of her during her last stream of it.

>>16250135
When you people call other Kronies cute here that doesnt mean you want to fuck them r-right

>>16250222
deadweight always backseats

>>16250135
>>16250108
>>16250106
>>16250083
I still can’t tell if all this homoposting is actual gays or just fujos.
>>16250222
Backseating is pretty much a problem with any chuuba, so it seems, even indies. I don’t understand Frostpunk and I never bother with chat anyway
I hope the collab doesnt get backseated too much in monster hunter. Mind you it’s probably just going to be autists insisting chuubas use their favourite weapon or something like that, nothing too harmful. That said I kinda hope they play the game with gibberish/MH language because hearing hunters shout every 0.5 seconds in English is jarring to me, but that’s just a personal thing

>>16250328
I suck dicks but I'm straight.

>>16250328
Dude I ain't guy, but...

>>16250347
Fair enough.
t. futafag

>>16250282
Maybe, but it was a ridiculous level for that stream. it did pay off in a sense because she read his stuff a lot.

>>16250328
Based on her track record with collabs, I strongly doubt Kronii will even pay attention to chat, and that assumes we get a PoV from her.

>>16250347
Understandable

>>16250372
Sorry, retard here. I meant "gay".

>>16250278
maybe :)

>>16250398
Freudian slip...

>>16250476
Go away Freud you’re fucking dead, go be dead somewhere else

>>16250278
you're acting real cute today anon.

>>16250501
sounds like you want to fuck your mother desu

>>16250278
Want to test it out? ;)

>>16250590
D-don't start incest posting now.

>>16250400
>>16250563
>>16250707
shouldnt have asked...

>>16250888
To be fair, it’s your fault for being so cute :)

>>16250988
>ywn be harassed, called cute and raped by a group of schizo femkronies
pain

I miss Kronii...

>>16251102
Why live... I want to be passed around by Queue and Izumi and Neah...

>cucks your oshi by fucking you during the outfit reveal
>the memory of seeing the kimono for the first time will forever be stained with tge memory of Suisei's incredible hips resting on your lap as her insides milk your load out

>>16250850
oyakodon is kino though

>>16251165
LOVE KRONII!

>>16251188
Sell me on Suisei, she’s cute but I’m an EOP and reluctant to attach myself to chuubas I don’t understand

>>16251188
HOT
I WANT SUISEI TO OVERTAKE MY FONDEST MEMORIES OF KRONII

Sex with Suityan while watching kronii's outfit reveal

>>16248847
Kronii feet...

>>16251294
pretty much all of suisei's english fans are just horny for the two english karaokes she did

>>16251188
Suisei has the hottest body.
Those hips with the small breasts are unbeatable, and she's made for domloss.

>>16251605
Imagine the smell...

>>16251173
Same anon, same. Imagine being made to dress as Kronii and fucked by four cute femkronies dressed as the other council members (five if you add IRyS) cosplay seggs
>>16251625
That’s understandable I guess? Just seems like a lot of energy from two streams. I haven’t watched many kareoke streams other than those from Fauna, IRyS and Kronii, it’s never really appealed to me because my music taste is niche and weird. I would like to see Moomer sing cute historical songs like In Taberna but that’s not gonna happen.

>>16251294
Blue woman is hot.

This. Even as very devote large-breastfag, those hips, in combination with her flat chest, have completely enslaved my mind and my dick...

>>16251294
She is a Blue Woman™, which means she makes people unreasonably horny by default. She also has a godly signing voice and hip sway. And she is the holo most likely to use a knife in bed, which is a plus in my book

>>16251626

>>16251732
meant for
>>16251626

>>16251294
https://youtu.be/EwHqYPqVnYQ

>>16251899
Hot. I can see the appeal in a chuuba that’s pure in public and then possessive/aggressive/dominant in the bedroom, as that’s kind of similar to how I picture Fauna? Kind of.
Comet’s definitely cute.
How come no one has written HoloSpaceSEX yet? Moona, Lofi, Sana and Suisei x each other or (you) or something because they’re all space themed. Unfortunately the only one of those I’ve written before is Sana although I did nut to futa Moona once because of some art and because imagining her ESL mockery during sex is hot.
I have seen a little bit of futa Suisei, but not a huge amount.

The tag is so empty....why aren't you fags drawing?

>>16252040
Too busy grooming schizos

>>16252040
I can’t draw, I can only write. I can edit pictures a little for certain purposes but that’s about it

>>16252040
Effect of her stingy on giving twitter interaction.

Did you guys calm down? Has your schizophrenia passed? Are you happy with the silhouette?

>>16252231
I still hate her hair

>>16252231
No, i cant draw. I started on hating myself again

>>16252288
>I started on hating myself again
anon...

>>16252040
still working on my art reps

>>16251981
Anyone have that one of her walking but she's naked?