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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>14407813

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14657054

STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.14657114
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14657114

Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.14661315

>>14645987
I'm not long enough for that.

>> No.14663222

>>14657034
nice hair there

>> No.14666138

>>14661315
Best total shaft stimulation of your life, then

>> No.14667661

Alright, I want to try kicking off the great /wg/ collaboration story and here’s how I think it could work.
First off any writeanon who is interested in participating can reply to me with a story they have written and can identify themselves by, preferably a google doc that they have access to. Although this will break anonymity a bit, it’ll help stop individual Anons from writing multiple chapters. I’ll probably post this at the start of every thread for a while to get as many people in on this as possible.
Once I have a list of every writeanon that is participating I’ll assign a chapter number to everyone. Each Anon will then wait for the chapter previous to theirs to be written and pick up where it left off like a baton pass, then once finished post their chapter to the thread in a separate document. As proof that it’s them posting the chapter and not some rando they should write their post number at the top of the story they identified themselves with and leave it up for a few hours so other anons can confirm it by looking at the published document.
After that it’s the next Anon’s turn and they can do the same thing and continue the story in another separate document. I’ll collect all the documents at the end and compile them. IMO each chapter should be 500-3k words and preferably completed within a few days. Obviously it’s going to be a complete shitshow as there’s no set storyline and each writeanon can take the story where they want, as well as completely different writing styles every chapter. But as long as there’s a reason for introducing/removing chuubas, changing the direction of the plot and each chapter isn’t a completely different story, I say it’s all good. Let's just have fun with it.
What do you guys think? Any questions? Suggestions? I think if we pull this off it could be pretty fucking kino.

>> No.14668034

>>14667661
Nice, godspeed. I'd sign up for this.

How do we decide what prompt and general direction to take the story?

Perhaps we can compile some basic prompts to start, nothing too complex, then do a random draw to pick one.

Also you could also have a list of themes, like horror, comedy or action etc., that the prompt would have to follow. Could add some interesting flavor if you get some completely opposites between prompt and theme, but it would help multiple anons keep some level of cohesion to the story.

>> No.14668752

>>14668034
I was thinking of opening the floodgates and letting everyone do whatever the hell they want, but maybe some more structure could work. As for the first chapter/prompt I was thinking of letting the guy who happened to write the first chapter decide where to start everything.

>> No.14669009

>>14667661
Cringekino more like but yeah I'd be up for doing this.
I'm pretty sure this absolutely needs at least a fucking guideline for what it should be since otherwise it'll just become a confused clusterfuck that won't be fun to read or write.

>> No.14669082

>>14669009
This. Collaborations that welcome creativity are great, but I'm sure a lot of writers'd be put off if one guy inserted scat or bug rape into the mix

>> No.14670296

>>14669009
>>14669082
As a trial run I think it should be pretty freeform. The sheer disparity between writers we have means that excessive topic/genre control will smother your pool, especially at this early a stage. Let it be reasonably chaotic and more people will find it fun and join. If things get weird then it's just up to the skill of the next writer to bring it in.

>> No.14670630

>>14670296
That's easier said than done, in my opinion. If someone asked me to write the next chapter in a story where the protagonist has a hard day singing and dancing, then gets raped by bugs and eats someone's shit, I'd be utterly stumped, not to mention completely uninterested in doing so.

>> No.14670718

>>14670296
I think >>14670630 kind of says my stance here, like I would have no goddamn clue how I'd write the next one on the baton pass if this is what I had next without just doing the 'boring' thing of reigning it back in or retconing it.

>> No.14671434

>>14670630
>>14670718
I hate to be too much of a contrarian here but functionally, absurdity and ad libbing are what old quest threads thrived on. While I understand that longform writing isn't precisely the same thing, I think that overt gore/aristocrats trolling aren't strictly the issue here. Inevitably someone will take the story in an unexpected turn, and it will be someone's responsibility to steer it from that point, motivated or not. If someone kills off a character you really wanted to use, at random, you can't cry foul play and expect the project to thrive off that energy. People who come along to write will most likely be people who are interested in cohesion and consistency, but in any event, flexibility will always be what these anonymous collabs thrive off of.

>> No.14672428

>>14657114
Nyanners engaging in the proper version of this with a number of semi-willing fans
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCImKa-KJNk

>> No.14672453

Hmm, both sides are making pretty good points. The problem with guidelines is it'll be hard for everyone to agree upon what we want the story to be about, but then without them it might just become a story nobody wants anyway because of opposing ideals of different writers.
Personally I don't mind where the story goes, it becoming a clusterfuck could be part of its charm that perfectly encapsulates what /wg/ is. I don't think it needs to be a work of true literary art, since the idea of a massive collaboration fic is the selling point.
That's just my opinion, though. This is OUR story so I want everyone's input to reach a compromise.

>> No.14673140

>>14657114
Need story about (You) getting stolen from your neglectful chuuba gf by another chuuba who will give you the love and affection (absolutely wild babymaking sex) that your gf didn't.

>> No.14674060

What are people's general feelings about stories that include, in a supporting role, Hitomi Chris and Aloe? Would it be right to say that given a lack of time to get behind them, any story with them would just have to get by on the merit of being actually good rather than relying on any attachment between them and the reader?

>> No.14675084

>>14674060
I've thought about Aloe and Chris before actually. If they're the main, real focus of the story, it'd be on a hard collision course for OC territory; which is hit or miss with execution. Some people despise it, others are indifferent.

>> No.14677039

>>14674060
For Chris you're effectively making an OC, we know fuck all aside from a debut and some old rrats. So they're effectively an OC with a bit of history you can build off of. Honestly I'd just say use an OC since she'd have the baggage of being the gen 1's REDACTED; so unless you're making her a major part of the story due to incorporating that aspect it's probably better to just use an OC.
For Aloe, you can technically just crib characterization from her 'roommate' but again it feels like unless you are specifically incorporating aspects of her being the graduated one of gen 5; it feels kind of pointless due to the baggage... also still kind of feels like it's in bad taste but that's more of a personal opinion.

>> No.14680696

>>14677039
This is another concern, at least with regards to something being in bad taste. If it's supremely well executed, sure, else it may just get an eyebrow raise. It's very bizarre.

>> No.14680907

>>14673140
The one and only type of NTR that I like.
Seconding this.

>> No.14681009
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>>14657114
A sequel to the Matsuri raping her little brother. Haachama, being the little menhera bitch that she is, tries to steal Matsuri’s little brother by trying to save him from Matsuri.

>> No.14681225

>>14681009
you want a sequel to a fic that isn't even out yet?

>> No.14681326

>>14681225
NTA but yes

>> No.14681400

>>14681225
And will never be out

>> No.14681434

>>14681009
What is this board's obsession with menhera and femdom? Do you Anons dream of being raped everyday just because it's your oshi doing it? You guys know femdom is the first step to cuckery right? I'd unironically kick my oshi to the curb if she ever tries to dom me without consent. It better be just a shit fetish for you fucks and not an actual personality, I can't imagine willingly letting a woman rape me.

>> No.14681462

>>14681434
Fag

>> No.14681466

>>14681434
Fag

>> No.14681500

>>14681400
Writing takes time, anon.
>>14681434
Fag

>> No.14681514

>14681434
Not even giving a (You).
Fag

>> No.14681687

>>14681434
Unironically this general mindset is the way to be thinking when you get raped because you’re actually unwilling.

>> No.14681851

>>14681434
Based.

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>Going through my unfinished projects
>Find this single line in the docs
What the fuck did I wanted to write for this?

>> No.14682225

>>14682018
It's been three years... let it go.....

>> No.14682390

>>14682018
>What the fuck did I wanted to write for this?
NTR story where Aqua got gangbanged so hard she got completely mindbroken and you can no longer recognize her as Aqua just because she's now even more retarded because of dicks and can think of nothing but dicks.

>> No.14682944

>>14682018
The Wu Flu hits the Hololive office and all talents who frequent it are victims of Winnie's revenge

>> No.14683045

>>14682018
FUCK I REMEMBERED
Post Apocalypse story where you survive a post apocalyptic world with Shion and it's tough because Aqua was the only bridge between you and her since Aqua is your girlfriend and Shion is her best friend.

>> No.14683426

>>14682018
>>14683045
I'm not gonna lie that sounds like a pretty decent concept and a nice hook if that line really is how the story starts.

>> No.14683545

>>14683045
With nothing to stop the animosity building between you due to clashing with Shion's bratty personality, the days seem to loop endlessly as your moral compass demands you share food and shelter with the naive teen before you finally snap and rape her furiously. Instantly things take a turn for the better as, finally letting loose, Shion's attitude simmers down as you rape her over the smallest things.

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Do you guys take greentexts of (you) and (character)?
Even if it's niche sfw fetish bait like just giving your oshi a nice foot massage, with no footjob, no sexual activity whatsoever, and way too much detail invested into a hyper-saccharine GFE scenario?

>> No.14683593

>>14683576
We take everything, including dicks up the ass

>> No.14683652

>>14683545
I'm not a fan of rape so there's no chance of that happening if I decided to write it again

>> No.14683654

>>14683576
Nothing wrong with a greentext.

>> No.14683676

>>14683576
if writing it interests you, then write it and post it
fuck what other people think

if you're just gauging a general reaction then personally i hate fetish bait. in my opinion, i like my stories either smut or sfw with little in-between. nothing sucks more than coming out of a story you didn't expect to get horny over with an unsatisfied boner

>> No.14683761

>>14683576
My best fics are fetish bait so I'd say go for it!

>> No.14683793

>>14683652
Have you ever tried it? Seriously, it's great. Next time you're leaving the office or wherever you work, just grab the nearest woman and rape her. Try it out. Shit's fun as fuck.
I tried out raping in 2018 and I've been hooked since, to the point where it's not a good start to the day if I don't get a good rape in. I rape my way to work every day, rape my colleagues, and when I get home... masturbate to fanfics of anime LARPers.

>> No.14683846

>>14683593
t. >>14681434

>> No.14683852

>>14683576
Wait you mean literal Unspecified chuuba and (You)? The archive does have a fic like that there, but personally I find it a bit too far from being chuuba fanfic for my liking.

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>>14683793
Anon, wtf. How have you not been caught? Are you part of one of those Arab gangs in Britain or something?

>> No.14684140

>>14683676
I just used the term "fetish bait" because that's what people seem to often interpret my shit as. Like, as my spoiler suggested, I'm into feet, but weirdly only as a massage or tickling, but I keep that extra layer of disgusting debauchery to myself cuz it's even more fringe thing.
Like, I have weirdly fonder memories of two college GFs I have where I spent the night with their feet in my lap, just playing with them for a couple hours than I ever did the handful of times I slept with someone. Like yeah, the latter was nice on an instinctive animal level, but I have more distinct memories of the tame non-sexual bonding part. And so that's what I like to write.
and then whenever I write a feet-based cuddlefic greentext in any fandom ever on this Azerbaijani Sewing Forum, everyone gets butthurt at me because I never include unzipping of the dick

>> No.14684164

>>14675084
>>14677039
I agree with both your points, but I've a story planned that tunneled in on these two serving important roles plot-wise, while having their own little arcs. The story is one with several of the holo factions clashing and coming together, each having their own little arc, so Aloe and Chris would be more like part of an ensemble cast than the main focus.

For Chris, it's mostly just her and her effects on the plot that are mentioned, since she's not present in this setting. Rather she serve as a blank slate meant to reflect the many indies very few know about, not being part of some of the corpos.

Aloe has her own bit where after being physically separated (graduated), we learn more about her self-doubt and that would have inevitably posed some sort of problems had she continued. She's in a position where she's in a bit of a hugbox, where she at least has some support, but because of he reliance on it is not moving forward all that much. She then has an encounter with Botan (not the others cos plot reasons) where they lament on what Gen5 went on to do and how Aloe could have been a part of it, which Botan reaffirms is how everyone felt. Her arc ends with her finally moving on and realising how much she needs to work on herself going forward. Compared to Chris, Aloe's arc is maybe a somewhat optimistic side to those that had been close to being part of holo but now going on as indies.

So with that said, would this kind of story be in bad taste, or is there at least some wiggle room to make it into something good? I'm not including them to shit on them, and I feel like their graduated status is important to why it's them that plays their role in the story (although no longer there, played a part in shaping it somewhat).

>> No.14684199

>>14683852
No, it's a specific Holo, with her idiosyncrasies and shit incorporated. It's not "my girlfriend is a chuuba???" faceless character shit

>> No.14684253

>>14684140
people are gonna bitch regardless of what you put out because life, my friend, is just full of faggots

anyway, as i said before, write what you like. can't guarantee you a boatload of (You)s though.

unless you write about fubuki i guess

>> No.14684262

>>14683793
Do you have a posse of scalpers that you hide with?

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>>14683929
Who told you that?

>> No.14684472

>>14684140
I mean, there's a pretty detailed sfw toothbrushing fic in the archive. Go nuts.

>> No.14684922

>>14684164
I think if you handle it with a careful hand your concept sounds like it can be done 'tastefully', it sounds pretty high concept but given that you've put this much thought into planning it out, I'm sure you can handle the story well.

>> No.14685544

>>14680907
Thirding this. The only acceptable kind of NTR.

>> No.14687372

>>14673140
Hell yeah, I'd read the fuck out of that!

>> No.14687660

>>14681434
I don't know about menhera, but for femdom I can say that in my experience most women are very, very passive. They'd rather send a thousand signals and be suggestive than actually being direct/dominant/aggressive/assertive. It's annoying. That's why I like (gentle) femdom.

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>>14657054
Probably the first part to a series. I don't know if I'll continue this but I'll see if this gets a lot of interests first.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSmelpf-8Jgn9t58O9F7CjPj9-2-qs66Nea7Jd9pdYUSg6iWsJgM3qNxTlB0CTC_7wE-Fzpf1ToG7Mr/pub

Tags: Shion, Tragedy, Angst, Post-Apocalypse

>> No.14687839

>>14684140
Hell nah, I'd ignore the fuck out of that.

>> No.14688043

>>14687839
thanks, stopped writing

>> No.14688223

>>14687744
An excellent start to the Rapening, anon. I look forward to Shion's willful spirit being crushed and replaced with a burning passion for cock she didn't ask for.


For real, it's too short to say anything in particular. I like that the story is from Shion's perspective rather than anon's - a tragedy fic works so much better when you can read the unfortunate character's inner monologue.

>> No.14688300

>>14673140
Have you given a look at Grab As Much (As You Can) in the series archive? It's pretty similar to that

>> No.14688357

>>14688300
this but without an absolute dogshit tier chuuba
(ie not EN, with the exception of irys)

>> No.14688453

>>14688357
YWNBJ

>> No.14688467

>>14688357
cope

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14688500

>>14688357

>> No.14688572

>>14687744
Have to say I was expecting something different, something like two people who don’t know anything about each other and have no choice but to work together in awkwardness. Not really a fan of Shion being really angry and swearing a bunch, it doesn’t really feel like her but that’s just my opinion. Overall I feel like a more depressing mood would have been better rather than an angsty mood.

>> No.14688629

>>14688357
Based.

>>14688453
>>14688467
>>14688500
Seethe.

>> No.14688675

>>14688572
Honestly I wanted to slip in a line like "When did I start swearing so much" but I guess it kinda slipped my mind in the end. Kinda wanted to show how much Aqua's death and the apocalypse happening affected Shion but I guess I didn't show it well enough

>> No.14688835

>>14688629
honestly, if all EN-only fans were banned from this board (if not the whole site), it would be so much fucking better, like paradise on earth

>> No.14688889

>>14688629
Do you know the definition of seethe? Or are you just using it because everyone else is?

>> No.14688942

>>14688835
My knees are kneeling on their own, anonchama.

>>14688889
Holy fucking seethe.

>> No.14688978

>>14688942
Right, the latter. Gotcha.

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>>14688835
EN-only != EN-tolerant
But I know you know this and are just fishing for (you)s. Well, here (you) go.
>>14688942
picrel

>> No.14689033

>>14687660
Looks like I spoke without knowing. I looked up gentle femdom, and it looks like it involves pegging and shit like that. I don't like that, I just like women who are assertive.

>> No.14689092

>>14688978
>>14688989
Seething ENcucks. Go back to plebbit. Your kind aren't welcome here.

>> No.14689167

>>14689092
"Plebbit! Plebbit! The plebbitors are disagreeing with me! Go back, leave me alone pls!!!"

>> No.14689244

>>14689167
Don’t engage blindingly obvious bait. You know better than this Anon

>> No.14689418
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14689418

>>14657114
Consensual Kanata Ryona

>> No.14690801

>>14689418
Super masochist Kanata asking you to beat her up and using her healing magic, you can beat her as much as you want without repercussion

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>>14681434
>willingly
No, you should resist or pretend to resist, it makes being broken all the more fun. Especially if the girl doing it is humiliating you with her futanari dick

>> No.14691254

>>14689092
Good luck convincing anyone at Cover except Ayame that EN was a mistake, considering almost all of them have collabed with an EN at least once.

>> No.14691344

>>14691254
Has Friend done a one on one collab with anyone yet?

>> No.14691421

>>14691344
If you count the HoloTalk episode - yes.
If you don't count it - no.

>> No.14692981

>>14691344
She simped for Bae upon her reveal, remember?

>> No.14693302

>>14692981
I know, I saw Fubuki wanting to eat her.

>> No.14694187

>>14693302
Still need a fubuki x bea vore story
Or really just a story about fubuki raping bea

>> No.14695055

>>14691421
why would that not count as a collab

>> No.14695098

>>14695055
I don't know. Some people say it wasn't.

>> No.14695281

>>14695055
Because people have a hate boner for Kiara.

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14697303

Today is one of those days...

>> No.14698095

>>14697303
ITS JUST ONE OF THOSE DAYS
WHERE YOU DON'T WANT TO WAKE UP

>> No.14698454

>>14657114
(You) turn down the advances of a bunch of different highly attractive holos because you already have your eyes and heart set on the most beautiful of them all, IRyS

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14699107

>>14698454
I unironically think Irys is very pretty, though she's not in my top five.

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>>14697303
ganbatte, writeanon

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14701718

> tfw the girl you considered to be your soulmate who you failed to date went from a model that once appeared on the news to an actual movie star since the last time you saw her and you're in a thread on 4Chan writing smut about Vtubers with no job
Is life... worth it?

>> No.14702054

>>14701718
Chuuba smut >>>>>>>>>>>> all that boring shit

>> No.14703684

>>14701718
Give in to the voices telling you that bunny cunny is all you need.

>> No.14705833

>>14687744
Not gonna lie expected this to be more melanholic/sad, I mean the anger and frustration from the PoV does actually work. It's a good start but like >>14688223 says it's a bit too short to really say anything substantial.

>> No.14706549

>>14701718
As someone who's way too old to still be doing just that and whose lineage is notorious for getting stuck on missed past opportunities to the point of being crippled for the rest of time, my advice is to not dwell on it and move on. The past can't be changed and the more you let "what-ifs" hold you back the more future opportunities you will miss as well.

Take it from a terminal doomer - you don't want any of this.

>> No.14706819

>>14695055
Because it isnt. It's an interview stream. I wouldn't count it

>> No.14706886

>>14694187
What's the appeal of vore? And why does it always end when a person is inside another person. Why no one writes the afterstory

>> No.14708581

>>14706886
because the afterstory is scat

>> No.14708622

>>14706886
The "appeal" is that getting eaten also gives mind breaking orgasms while you're digested.

>> No.14710075

>>14698095
EVERYTHING IS FUCKED
AND EVERYBODY SUCKS

>> No.14713431

It's still too early to die

>> No.14714221

>>14713431
Ain't dead, just back to the normal slowness.

>> No.14715877

>>14657114
Cucking Flare by fucking Noel

>> No.14716495

>>14701718
yes

>> No.14716670

>>14706549
If I'm being honest, right now I'm so lost in life that my main motivation is doing good in life so I can one day show off to her how well I'm doing. It's extremely sad and pathetic, but she just doesn't seem to leave my mind, even though I long left hers. Given her rich family and early career, it's very unlikely I'll ever surpass her, but I like to believe I can try.

>> No.14716737

>>14716670
You should offer to sell a tabloid a description of what her pussy feels like

>> No.14716883

>>14716737
If I got to tap that, I wouldn't be here anon, that's how mind blowing it would be. She has been doing acrobatics for most of her life. That pussy would contort around your dick and trap you inside like you couldn't believe it. And now, Chad is the one who gets to have it...

>> No.14716976

>>14706886
I actually don’t like vore. It just seemed like the logical completion of that thought

>> No.14719249

>>14716976
I'm pretty sure it was a euphemism or maybe a jest at animalistic qualities, but I could see it being a vore piece.

>> No.14722513

sex with _____

>> No.14722627

>>14722513
Corrective rape with Shion

>> No.14722632

>>14722513
Korone

>> No.14723240
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14723240

>>14657114
Mumei keeps forgetting that you are her older brother and in order to save face doesn't ask and just assumes you are her boyfriend

>> No.14723360

>>14723240
Kinda like Mr. Robot where he ends up kissing his sister and then she freaks out and is disgusted? I'd be down for that.

>> No.14723692
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14723692

>>14723360
>In the Hololive offices, just hanging around
>Bump into Council, say hi to everyone in passing
>Throw a quick, familial, "Love ya, Moomers" to your sister
>She, only really remembering that you're someone important to her and being put on the spot, quickly kisses you on the mouth
>doesn't understand why everyone starts going apeshit

>> No.14723775
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14723775

>>14722513
Miosha...

>> No.14723819

>>14723692
> Proceeds to have a mental breakdown and goes to talk with her father which eventually leads to the biggest hack scandal the world has ever seen, clearing the debt of all the people, then have another breakdown when she finds out her father was dead all along and she has major schizophrenia.
Damn, the plot is working itself out pretty well.

>> No.14723921

>>14723819
...I know nothing about the show other than "ebin hackerman" so, I'm just gonna take your word that that's what happens

>> No.14726263

>>14723819
If this is the kind of twist that start to come out of the great /wg/ collab story, it's gonna be a great clusterfuck.

>> No.14727303

>>14726263
Don't worry, that story ain't gonna happen.

>> No.14727805

>>14727303
Why not?

>> No.14727828
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14727828

I've been forcing myself to watch so much Anya that I think I'm actually starting to like her. Honestly, the only thing I really dislike is that she likes to use three languages, only two of which I understand.

>> No.14728939

>>14727828
There's no saving you anymore Anon. The Keris has already begun to steal your soul.

>> No.14730160
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14730160

>>14657054
Back from vacation, and with proof you shouldn't listen to a goddamn word I say. Cause I said I wouldn't make this, and in truth until she broke the no-stream streak I wasn't gonna. But she did, and she cried and then I got ideas so... here. A sequel to Cold Air, Hot Blood.

Kinda.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR4ynvMX9klHWaqxSUp9eM2bNjxcClYhwLl53enunBJU0RGUDo1viH9eGgdEEFNzLs3MGP3X8oPMjkL/pub

There's no smut this time, just a forewarning if that's what your main interest in the previous one was.

Tags: Ayame, SFW, Fluff, Implied Chuuba Abuse

>> No.14730614

>>14730160
I didn’t really get what was going on with all the movie shit and his jacket, but that might just be because I’m retarded. Pretty cute, whore Ayame is somehow really enjoyable to read and I kinda want to write something similar

>> No.14731250

>>14730160
I honestly hope you somehow conclude this at some point. Whether you want to treat it as a series or something else, I just want to see it concluded.
I love the interactions between Anon and Whore Ayame. I hope to see more of them.
Great job, Anon! Looking forward to more (hopefully)!

>> No.14731680

>>14730160
>>14730614
I think the joke is that Anon is a massive Gosling fag, the jacket is probably from one of the movies. I don't get how he doesn't like Drive though, there's a whole Copypasta based how cool it is to be like him in the movie l

>> No.14732062

>>14730160
Fucking hell, I wanted this so badly when the first part dropped and I hope you continue it further. Your interpretation of whoreyame is riveting, to say the least.

This chapter was a fantastic read and whilst I admit I was hoping for the events of last chapter to progress, I still enjoyed where this one went.

>> No.14733957

>>14730160
This was great. I think I said it the first time but the way you write out the thoughts of Anon lets you feel the frustration and awkwardness later on real well. There being no smut this time just made it clear you're a whore Ayame writing savant.

>> No.14735134

>>14730160
I didn't expect this to get a sequel but damn this was a really good fluff piece.I fucking love rrat!Ayame. There is something strangely refreshing about reading about this whore.

>> No.14735491

>>14730160
Somehow very engaging. I think I'm invested in these two now.
Fuck.

>> No.14737174

>>14681225
Yes

>> No.14738159

>>14706886
Vore is like a really intense extreme of the basic appeals of sadomasochism and/or corruption to me. There's no greater expression of hedonism/superiority over another person than literally being willing to end their life just to get your rocks off, and conversely, no greater expression of submission than getting off to your life BEING ended. It thrives on the taboo and degeneracy of the scenario.

The reason that vore specifically, though, as opposed to just any old guro or snuff scenario, is so popular is that it has perfect synergy with a lot of other fetishes, like bellies, weight gain, giantess, scat, etc. I'm a fatfag AND a corruptionfag so it's insanely erotic to me.

>> No.14738591

>>14701718
Is it fucking Dasha Nekrasova

>> No.14739250

>>14727828
I hope it's the milkers story.

>>14716670
Comparing yourself to other people is a sure-fire way of ending up miserable, especially when circumstances, level of ambition, etc. are all different for everyone. Goals are good to have, but chasing after someone else's achievements and trying to measure up is a fool's errand.

t. Someone who grew up being constantly compared to people in my family who achieved the highest levels of their profession and ended up with negative self-esteem.

>> No.14739669
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14739669

>>14657054
I think I'm addicted to writing about this girl. Fulfilling a prompt I posted here a while ago but nobody picked up.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTWY34SKNgt0lS5KjdbjIhhmOJwJoKbXgOrZQHQNHm0zQV2BW3iP-1oEgeDumxfNaOuOcev2HF4sytC/pub

Tags: Shion, light NSFW, Fluff, Cuddling

>> No.14741252

>>14739669
Meh

>> No.14741327

>>14739669
Short, but very cute. I'm always a fan of the little intimate moments.

>> No.14741503

>>14739669
Hot and fluffy as fuck, but even with the power of imagination stepping in to lend a hand (heh), it was just too short to rub one out to.
Still, I quite enjoyed reading it, despite the unsatisfied boner.
Couldja do us a favour and fix up the punctuation in the line "I love you Shion"?
Call me autistic, but it sticks out like a sore thumb.

>> No.14741905

>>14739669
Lovely, very fluffy and hot too, a bit short but I think it did the job perfectly despite its size. Gave me a nice chub from the brief descriptions of pounding the witch cunny.

Tfw will never manhandle her tiny body while she hurls insults and moans at me.

>> No.14742028

>>14741327
>>14741503
>>14741905
Same person

>> No.14742093
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14742093

>>14742028
Nope.

>> No.14742094

>>14739669
Pretty nice and spicy
Kinda wish for more witch cunny

>> No.14742154

>>14742028
>people can't like fluff

>> No.14742166

>>14730160
I'm real sucker so I hope Anon can fix the whore.

>> No.14742348

>>14657114
A story where (you) are friends with benefits with a chuuba

>> No.14742519

>>14742348
This but you're friends without benefits and desperately wish to change that

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14742569

>>14742028
All me.

>> No.14742972

Do you agree with this? >>14729354

I find it very thought provoking and I wish the anon elaborated more on it. It would certainly help with writing some chuubas, especially the ID branch.

>> No.14743152

>>14742028
>>14741252
Same "person"

>> No.14743363

>>14681009
>>14743152
"Same" person

>> No.14743698

why are y'all calling her whore ayame??? that's redundant

>> No.14743733

>>14742972
just watch some of they're streams

>> No.14744022

>>14730160
Cute.

>> No.14744112
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14744112

>>14730614
>>14731680
Yeah, it was Gosling marathon. It was The Notebook he didn't like, he was hiding Drive from her so she wouldn't see he was wearing the jacket, though I can see how that could be a bit confusing with the way I wrote it.

>>14731250
>>14732062
>>14733957
>>14735134
>>14735491
>>14742166
>>14744022
Thank you! I'll admit I was bit worried my dialogue wasn't any good this time around so I'm relieved that's alright and sufficiently cute. As for if there will be any more, well...I don't want to say no, because I did last time and here we are.

I guess just don't expect it and maybe you'll be surprised one day?

>>14743698
Well, we don't have any proof about her having as much sex as she does in this and I'd like to think Ko'one and Mio wouldn't knowingly be friends with someone like that irl.

>> No.14744234

>>14744112
It feels odd, like you're me from the future or something. I post my stories the same way, I write Ayame like the whore rrat too and am currently watching BladeRunner for the first time and was thinking about doing references to it in my stories. Are you sure we are not the same person just from different timelines?

>> No.14744426

>>14744234
I don't believe so, no. The future I'm from is way too far away to meet my past self.

Though, if you're the writer of ShadowLive I do want you to know that your fic is what inspired me to write rrat Ayame, so thank you

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14744521

>>14744426
> Though, if you're the writer of ShadowLive I do want you to know that your fic is what inspired me to write rrat Ayame, so thank you
Hehe... W-well, m-maybe... t-thank you for your kind words...

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14744669

>>14744521
Keep up the good work king

>> No.14745184

Good fanfic doesn't come from the it focusing on (you) and the chuuba
It comes when it focuses on a chuuba first
No one really reads a chuuba fanfic for your OC

>> No.14745445

>>14745184
This is why I couldn't finish Lazing Catto. Protagonist was too much of a dumbfuck.

>> No.14745854

>>14657114
Fubuki constantly having full impregnation sex with you and giving birth to a bunch of children in hopes that one of them will come out albino

>> No.14746219

>>14745854
>Fubuki also makes you have sex with all your daughters as well to increase the chances of an albino Foxfamily offspring

I can only get so erect.

>> No.14746607

>>14745445
I believe it's important for the protagonist to be nervous and a bit clueless so that Okayu's teasing can be most effective.

>> No.14746757

>>14746607
I'm talking about him not knowing where Peru is.

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14747555

>>14746757
THAT'S what you're picking on?

Made me burst into laughter during a business meeting.

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>>14747555
What kind of retard doesn't know where Peru is? Dumb ass nigga would fail a 3rd grade geography test.

>> No.14747772

>>14747623
But anon is american... They dont know geography

>> No.14747788

>>14747623
I hate to bad mouth the greatest democracy on Earth but Americans have a poor understanding of geography.

>> No.14747968

>>14747772
>>14747788
Why should a proud, freedom loving America give a shit about inferior countries that are probably also dirty commies?

>> No.14748228

>>14747788
>>14747772
>>14747623
Wait, you guys didn't assume that the (you) in the story is Japanese just because it's an english text? I guessed it would be kind of obvious that someone dating someone from Hololive would be in JP.

That line was exactly because I thought, "Hmm what's a small sort of insignificant country that japs would have trouble pointing on a map?", and since Peru fits the ancient aliens motif and those credentials...

>> No.14748327

>>14748228
Japanese people don't have a good knowledge of geography either

>> No.14748346

>>14747968
SEA larp
It won't collapse anytime soon, but unironically believing the USA is a bastion of freedom is less believable than even the worst fanfic written by this thread

>> No.14748468

>>14748228
I assume every fic is set in Japan unless otherwise stated e.g. the scat fic.

>> No.14748766

>>14748228
I just assumed anon was an American expat

>> No.14750035

>>14748228
My series takes place in the USA even though I'll probably never directly state it, even though I use JP chuubas for it. I did call one of the girls "from overseas" due to her "insert non human chuuba feature here and different accent" as if that was the explanation and left it at that. I think Japan is a very small country with a way different culture and geography and most anons here would not be able to replicate it in a story without having lived there. My fic that takes place in Indonesia I'm going to be doing some research on some cool visiting spots as well as add small little details like nets on windows to stop mosquitoes before I continue for immersion, but that's exactly the problem, most anons write Japan like it is Western where they would have to do research otherwise.

>> No.14750895

>>14747623
The only thing you kind of need from geography is to roughly know where everything is to not look like a retard when searching for it on a map
Everything else is kind of a wash and can be looked up/absorbed through cultural diffusion

>> No.14751883

>>14745184
Speak for yourself, I hate stories with boring, blank-slate protagonists

>> No.14754112

>>14751883
Speak for yourself, I love stories with boring, blank-slate protagonists

>> No.14754122

>>14751883
>>14754112
Speak for yourself, I love stories

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14754160

>>14754122
That's cool, bro.

>> No.14754216

>>14751883
A lot of people here talk more about the (You) than the chuuba sometimes, for whatever reason. It's pretty jarring coming from places where self inserts are frowned upon.

>> No.14754220

>>14744234
>>14744426
>rrat

>> No.14754231

>>14754160
Speak for yourself, I don't think that's cool, bro.

>> No.14754309

>>14754160
:ayaya: :clap: Wareware wa katta!

:copesen: bajs aren't weebs...

>> No.14754421

>>14754216
Thats because vtuber fanfic is about gachikoi, thus a (You) should be simultaneously relatable and entertaining.

>> No.14754427

>>14754216
I think the issue is entirely in presentation, same with OCs. To my understanding, OCs are fine provided they're for the sake of the relevant plot but not the main, entire focus of the story. Blank slates are sort of boring and don't provide much in the way of resistance or conflict in the story since they're sort of just existing there.

>> No.14754464

>>14754216
Ditto. It's weird. In the Hyperdimension Neptunia fandom, self-inserts'd get you murdered.

>> No.14754512

>>14754464
Why lol

>> No.14754645

>>14754512
Soft yuri, I guess. Yurifags are super militant.

>> No.14754690

>>14754645
Shipfags in general are like that. Yurifags just tend to be slightly worse.

>> No.14754702

>>14754464
Same as jerking off to your own fics when in art world jerking off to your own art is considered impossible and if you can do it you're considered a certified weirdo. A lot of people here say they jerk off to their own fics and I'm just like "what?". The writing world is new and full of surprises, some good, some bad, some weird as fuck.

>> No.14754763

>>14754702
It's less the fic itself and more the scenario I created for the fic that I jack off to.

>> No.14754790

>>14754702
I recall that. I think it's weird too. Staring at my own writing, I just see mistakes, lost potential, and an inability to convey my own thoughts into words. "What was I thinking, writing it like that?" and similar expressions.
If I was gonna jerk off to my own "fics", so to speak, I'd just keep them as daydreams and try to remember them.

>> No.14754860

>>14754702
You just know Dante busted a fat nut while writing about Beatrice in the Divine Comedy.

>> No.14754968

>>14754860
I mean, he was jerking himself off all over his own works.
>All the people I don't like go to hell while I get to save my bitch and hang out with all my favorite poets and authors

...I guess he's not that different from us in that way.

>> No.14755106

>>14754968
Then his version of Hell got accepted into the zeitgeist. Unironic chad move.

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14755260

>>14754860
>>14754968
>>14755106
Haha yes, a reference I totally understand... Dante, from uhh, Monte Cristo, wait and hope! That's his famous saying!

>> No.14755440

>>14755260
He's the Dante from the orginial Dante and Vergil, not the two better ones. The same Dante from Dante's Inferno, which is the first third of the Divine Comedy.

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14755578

>>14755440

>> No.14755650

>>14755578
>Korone experiences superior Anon cock

>> No.14755901
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14755901

>>14755650
That reminds me of pic related. In my mind it looks like they are taking cock off screen but I don't think I'll ever get to use this image so here you go

>> No.14756121

>>14755901
But they are taking cock offscreen. Specifically mine. My cock. My cock is entering and exiting their vaginas via me thrusting with my large yet powerful buttocks. Women love that. Women love a man with a fat muscular ass. Because the ass is the thrusting muscle. Women love the thrusting muscle. Specifically Korone and Pekora. They love it sooooo much. But only if it's me though. Haha.

>> No.14756398

>>14755260
Now that's a goodo joko onion.

>> No.14756419

>>14756121
> Pekora is bouncing up and down on a cock in pure ecstasy, saying "It feels good peko!" while cumming her brains out
> meanwhile Korone is sucking on a 8 inch cock, it's deep inside her throat completely ravaging her mouth, she is more relaxed as she has experience with dicks much more than Pekora, the shut in
> Korone is schlicking herself to the thought of Okayu entering the room and catching her with some random guy balls deep inside her mouth. She considered for a moment if Okayu would join her, but she knew she would just be in shock and run away.
> That realization made her sink her fingers even deeper inside her bitch in heat dog slit

>> No.14759548

>>14657114
Akuma fucking the brains out of every member of Lazulight, Obsydia, and Ethyria live on stream to the outrage of all of their collective fans

>> No.14759679
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14759679

> the cucks will flood the writing and drawing threads with ironic cucking requests until a week after all of them debut
Happened before, will happen again and again, and again.

>> No.14759758

>>14759548
Who?

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14759836

>>14759758
https://twitter.com/Vox_Akuma

Female talents across the web are already cooming over him on tw*tter

>> No.14759988

>>14759836
>ywn dick down all these twinks while women fawn over them

>> No.14760035

>>14759988
None of them look like twinks you absolute faggot, stop fawning over men

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14760267

Motivate your local writeanons today.

>> No.14760295

>>14760035
Get your eyes fixed they look like girls.

>> No.14760372

>>14760267
We've had 3 stories this thread, I think this is the most motivated we've been this whole week.

>> No.14760443

>>14760267
I am in a restaurant surrounded by grandmas who met each other at the gym and decided to throw a party to celebrate the new year. My grandma asked me to come along to make her company but I didn't know it would be this bad. I'm currently sitting by myself like 10M away from them for about 3 hours now. Do I write now or what? I fixed some grammar stuff in one of my fics but... oh thank god they are leaving.

>> No.14760475

>>14760372
Ignore him, he keeps spamming the same shit over and over.

>> No.14761083

>>14759679
>ironic
I'd give an arm for some quality (non-yuri or reverse) netorare and self-insert humiliation for once. Even when the genre is very occasionally touched upon here, the execution is always ironic or some kind of weird subversion rather than done with the interests of masochists in mind.

I've been hoping one of the writefags that takes on weird niche fetishes as writing challenges would bite something for months, but they never do, so honestly at this point I figure all I CAN do is structure requests like ironic jokes and pray someone ironically takes them so I can subsequently unironically enjoy them.

>> No.14761399

>>14761083
Have you read the Watame one?

>> No.14761750

>>14760443
Now imagine those grandmas are actually the hags celebrating New years.

>> No.14762022

>>14761399
Yeah, it's better than nothing I suppose, but it's still quite tangential to what I'm looking for. I'm hoping for at minimum the generic type of plot where a girl gets corrupted into cheating of her own volition, or ideally a really tender netorase/cuckolding relationship where the girl tries her hardest to play to the guy's masochistic tendencies with denial play/verbal humiliation/etc. Rape/Blackmail is just meh

>> No.14762090

>>14754216
Personally I like (You)s that feel more human because when it comes to chuubas, they all have set personality and character traits so it’s hard to make unique interactions with them when “Rushia is the cute yandere” or “Aqua is the shy gamer maid”. So when you have a run-of-the-mill Anon the stories kind of devolve into very similar stories like “hello Foob, may I put dick in vagne? Yes” and interactions between (You) and the chuuba become really boring and generic. I think interactions between characters are the best parts of a good story so an Anon with a unique personality that can bounce off the chuubas in different ways is great to read.

>> No.14762211

Just finished reading Holocalypse ch.6 and it was great as usual.
I really love Four's interactions with Suisei, I can't get enough of it, it's just so entertaining to read, I hope she sticks around the main cast. Another part I really loved was the fight between Four and 19, the combat is always a treat to read but the stuff with the fire kicking was way cooler than it had any right be, felt pretty hyped when reading that. And if I had any other comments to make I would say the ending was pretty cheesy, it's not a bad thing but I couldn't hep but notice.. Regardless good job anon! I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter.

>> No.14762419

>>14760475
Kys

>> No.14762427

>>14761750
Now imagine having sexual intercourse with those grandmas, and you're closer to fucking Botan than you think.

>> No.14763024

>>14762427
No I don't think I will

>> No.14763258

>>14762427
Those grandmas probably ain't gamers so it won't be the same.

>> No.14763611

>>14762427
Based? You could go on a no denture adventure.

>> No.14765599

>>14759836
Far right NEEDS to be pinned down in missionary and fucked NOW

>> No.14766095

>>14760267
Babymaking sex with Pekora in the winter cabin, making love on the carpet by the warm fire through the night.

>> No.14766550

>>14766095
She isn't fit to be a mother

>> No.14766609

>>14766550
You take that back.

>> No.14767054

>>14766550
Then I will make her fit. With my penis.

>> No.14767118

>>14767054
Not before I do

https://files.catbox.moe/kxtmjs.jpg

>> No.14767467

>>14766550
>Legitimately likes children
>Likes children so much she got certified to be a kindergarten teacher
>Despite her on-stream persona is known for being extremely diligent with her responsibilities and basically cried a lot the first stream she was late for
>Creative and caring

Pekora is literally one of my cumshots away from being a fantastic mother. Keep deluding yourself that NEETs can't change when reality comes knocking.

>> No.14769348

>>14767467
Stand down. The bunbun cuncun is mine.

>> No.14769474

>>14747555
>>14747772
>>14747788
>>14747968
Original anonchama here (forgot to recheck thread, gomen). I'm an American and love geography, although ornithology will always be my passion. I can pick out 80% of countries on a map, and the rest I at least have a general idea where they are. So yes, dumbassanon in Lazing Catto ripped my immersion too much for me to finish it.

>> No.14770366

>>14742972
Basically, the ESL discrimination is just due to pragmatics/sociolinguistics (which make speech sound not natural enough) and monkey tribal shit ("you stranger, you bad; we together, we stronk, we good").

As for the way speakers of different languages may be affected in their speech due to their native language, what that anon says makes sense. There are probably even more differences that stand out, though.

>> No.14770388
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>>14657114
I feel blueballed by the previous Shion fic. I need witch cunny

>> No.14770558

>>14769474
I got 30% on Europe map quizz, I can probably guess like 2 of the 50 states of America that being California and Texas, even my own continent I know the names for the most part but can't pin point them. I found out that Jamaica isn't in Africa last week, amongst other things. I like maps, I know the names of lots of countries and generally where they are, but I wouldn't be able to pin point them. That being said, saying Chile is in Oceania for example is a bit far fetched.

>> No.14771857

>>14770558
I was THAT KID who read encyclopedias for fun in elementary school and I regret nothing.

>> No.14772632

>>14742972
(not that anon)
It means that ESLs from different language backgrounds break linguistic rules in ways that make them easy to spot compared to normal language rule-breaking.
While a reddit ghoul might say "yesterday I was adulting", an ESL might say "yesterday I was being adulting" or something similar because they didn't understand that adulting is a neologistic verb. Look at the thread question:
>Does a vtuber can stream(work) forever till they die in 70-100 Years old
If you have any grasp of English, you should be able to come up with one or more ways to fix that sentence. Ignoring till/until, that sentence makes mistakes in ways that someone who 'thinks in English' would never even know to make, and does so in ways distinct from someone fucking up their sentence with either an excess or omitted word.
I don't have an explanation for why this happens beyond different languages' different structure making multilingualism of nonsimilar languages difficult, but if you want more examples just look at any reportable clipnigger advertising thread and you should be able to recognize their linguistic uncanny valley.

>> No.14773010
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>>14772632
Sorry but your examples are generic and antiquated, not to mention exaggerated. It doesn't help me much. I've been collecting a bunch of ESL/Chama speak posts from here for a while so that I can maybe write that Chama story one day and this is what I currently got:

>> No.14773404

>>14773010
god this turns me on

>> No.14774005

Quick, tell me what Ame would use for melee weapon and why

>> No.14774118

>>14774005
Giant black dildo since it reminds her of her boyfriend

>> No.14774152

>>14774005
Giant black dildo because it reminds her of what she wants most in life.

>> No.14774181

>>14774005
Taser.

>> No.14774445

>>14774118
>>14774152
I personally think she will go for a giant horse dildo, she gives off the horse girl vibe

>> No.14774491

>>14774445
She's more of a dog girl

>> No.14774707

>>14770558
>I found out Jamaica wasn't in Africa last week
My sides are in orbit

>> No.14774824

>>14774491
I believe she isn't degenerate enough to abuse her own dogs. Horses on the other hand, they can take it

>> No.14775025

>>14774824
It's not abuse if they like it.

>> No.14775118

>>14774824
Sorry but Ame and I have sweet hand holding sex every night
t. her boyfriend

>> No.14775148

>>14775118
stop posting bubba

>> No.14775160

>>14774824
>abuse
Tell that to my cavoodle who keeps trying to hump me

>> No.14775679

>>14774005
Baseball bat. She mentioned a while ago that when she hears noises at night she reaches for the bat, but I can't find the clip.

>> No.14777473

>>14774118
>>14774152
>>14774181
>>14775679
Look forward to Ame akimboing two giant black dildos with a baseball bat in her mouth and a taser taped to her crotch soon

>> No.14777904

>>14762211
Thanks for reading, I appreciate it. I'm really fucking happy you liked the fire kicks, I've been meaning to put that in for a while. The ending definitely was cheesy I agree, but that was another scene I've wanted to put in for a while to help strengthen the bonds to the chuubas.

>> No.14779643

>>14777473
I want the taser to be spinning.

>> No.14781454

>>14773010
God there is something just inherently cute to chama speak. Her sandbagging her english skills has got to be used as plot point in a fic one of these days.

>> No.14781559

In GB Watson chapter 7 Marine's submarine in the flashback is the Alicorn from Ace Combat 7 right? I played the DLC mission yesterday and was really surprised to learn what the reference is. I kinda get why the writeranon is a /k/ fag now, that shit is sick as fuck.

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>>14781559
Did someone say Ace Combat 7?

>> No.14783206

>>14782530
no, nobody did

>> No.14783281

>>14783206
Anon...it's right there...

>> No.14783413

>>14783281
you're seeing things

>> No.14784366
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Hot momma. https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/94834481

Whatever happened to that guy that was writing Fucking Aqua in the Ass? Man, I wish that was finished.

>> No.14785030

>>14657114
Chloe gets spanked by her genmate, while it gets harder and harder for her to conceal how much she likes it.

>> No.14785545

>>14657114
I would like to see a Holo breadfacing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7gOVyBFDJCs reference if you need it.
Please understand it's a very niche thing and you might not "get it"

>> No.14785547

>>14784366
left, like so many others

>> No.14785565

>>14785545
what the fuck

>> No.14785626

>>14785565
don't kinkshame fellow anon please

>> No.14785655

>>14785626
weirdanonv2 you've got another customer

>> No.14785680

>>14785545
How would this even if work in word form? It looks like to me that the visual aspect of this 'breadfacing' kink is what gets people going.

>> No.14786229

>>14784366
Didn't that fic get finished by someone else? With the original still being a wip?

>> No.14786323

>>14786229
Nah, it ended up being something completely different under the name "Fuck is this shit?" in the archive.

>> No.14786358

>>14786323
That is to say, the fic that got finished. The original is still just a wip. Should probably be dropped, really; not much point in keeping a couple paragraphs apart from mourning what could have been...

>> No.14786561

>>14785545
I've seen some weird shit on this site, but what the actual fuck am I watching?
I feel like it's 200X and I'm discovering furfags for the first time again

>> No.14786977

>>14785545
This is... I mean, it's not a gross fetish or anything I just... what?

>> No.14787010
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>GoogleDrive
Reimu could be reading Stories from this thread...

>> No.14787071

>>14787010
literally who

>> No.14787125

>>14787071
t. Reimu

>> No.14787490

>>14787010
Reimu if you want me to write something about you I can, just say the word.

>> No.14787521

>>14787010
>>14787071
>>14787125
>>14787490
Nottu dissu shittu again

>> No.14787577

>>14787521
I know it isn't her, but if she sees it, I'll be here

>> No.14788181

god damn, i desperately wish we had more witch cunny in here. her design and smug attitude are unbelievable

>> No.14788442

>>14786323
I vaguely remember that one being the one with the horsecock.

>> No.14789528

>>14788181
Does non smut Shion count?

>> No.14789542

>>14787010
Was this a members stream? Is she really /here/?

>> No.14789877

>>14784366
God, you have no idea how much I lust for this cute retard's body. Her soft tits and sensitive asshole. I want nothing more than to smother her under my body weight while I unload gallons of cum deep inside her guts while she spasms and convulses from a full body orgasm.
Aqua triggers my lust like no other holo, it's incredible.

>> No.14790327

>>14787010
Time to make a Reimu story then lol

>> No.14792740

If I come back and the thread isn't dead yet I'll make Fubuki smut

>> No.14793194

>>14787010
Post the stream where this appear if you aren't full of shit.

>> No.14793685

>>14793194
It’s a member stream, if what others said is true.

>> No.14794747

>>14657114
/vt/ seems to be losing their mind over the new male Nijinsaji EN, write a story about that.

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>>14794747
>/vt/ seems to be losing their mind
Are they really? I'm just thinking it's all ironic shitposting.

>> No.14794969

>>14794909
Nah, /vt/ is losing its mind over males. Some are even spouting incel shit.

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>>14794969
I actually kinda wanna write a nice, detailed m/f fic now, just to piss off as many people as possible. I'm sure some of them are ITT.

>> No.14795030

>>14795014
Go for it.

>> No.14795057

>>14795014
>I'm sure some of them are ITT.
They are, just scroll up.

>> No.14795104

>>14795014
Make it a Japanese holo for maximum effect.

>> No.14795107

sorry

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>>14795057
>>14795030
>>14795104
Boy I hope they don't mind when I write about
>[male]'S HOT THROBBING MEMBER RAVAGING [female]'S TIGHT PUSSY AS SHE SQUEALS IN PLEASURE

>> No.14795160

New thread
>>14795117

>> No.14796251

>>14795014
Oga x Fubuki

>> No.14796299
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>want to continue writing with the burst of MOTIVATION I got
>graphics card dies

>> No.14796372

>>14796299
>Writing
>Graphics cards
Y-you can plug your monitor into your mobo? Don't all CPUs have at least some sorta shitty integrated graphics nowadays?

>> No.14796560

>>14796372
I do alot more than just write on my computer, and I barely trust myself to do the prodding around I did to figure it out

>> No.14797059

>>14795135
You gotta make sure to include something that would give the cucked feeling to the viewer. I'm not reading it because honestly I'm one of those"don't let male chuubas interact with female ones" people, but you want people to shit up the thread for no reason? Then go all on.

>> No.14797160

>>14797059
nah, they'll seethe just as much without it but it'll be even less justified.

>> No.14797638

>>14797160
Afterwards people complain about "shitposters ruining the thread and making people leave". It seems they are in dire need of a reminder, but I'm not about that life anymore. Literally poking the hornet's nest for a laugh and then complaining when you get stung.

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