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I already miss FBK. At least that pekomiko fic will get posted.

>>14289632
foxfags are so spoiled

>>14290384
If by "spoiled" you mean "intelligent and talented with excellent taste in chuubas" then yes, yes we are.

>>14291902
Stop falseflagging, you're making us look bad.

>>14292723
You think way too much of your own importance.

Discuss.

>>14292876
Heavy urge to impregnate

>>14292876
Boobs.

>>14292876
Not much to say, that's just my wife on the beach wearing an incredibly revealing swimsuit she bought to tease me and because it suited her (although, to be fair, everything she puts on suits her).
But for the sake of the discussion to go forward - I love my wife and being in close proximity to her in any way, shape or form makes me want to just tear off every piece of clothing off her and have babymaking sex with her until her insides are basically painted with my cum while I hold her in my arms and reaffirm my love for her over and over again.

>>14289330
I love Fubuki's recent streams, so here's a request:
(You) going on a fishing trip with Fubuki. Can be romance, can be comedy, can be both; I just want to read about her stubbornness and random talks as she tries to catch the biggest/most unique fish.

>>14293120
then when night falls you murder her and tie a cinder block to her leg so she sinks when you toss her in the lake.

>>14293169
Incorrect.
When night falls, you cover her with a blanket and make sure she's warm, comfortable and away from the water.

>>14293287
And then Mio shows up and you fuck her right next to a sleeping Fubuki.

>>14293287
Also incorrect
When night falls, she grabs your hand and leads you further and further into the woods. You begin to wonder where she's taking you, but when you ask, she turns around. That's when you realize that the woods are dead silent, and that the person in front of you holding your hand, isn't Fubuki.

>>14293355
Except you don't do anything with Mio as youre just friends, ald although she has urges, you tell her that she is to take care of them with someone who loves her in "that" way.

>>14293390
>pic/gif related

>>14293390
I for one would like to see more horror

>>14293390
but when you blink, you find yourself waking up next to Fubuki, who tells you she's going to get that one in a million fish today, she knows it. You smile, it feels like she's been saying the same thing again and again. And that night, as you go to sleep, she brings you out to the forest once more, only for her to turn back and the person holding your hand isn't Fubuki. You blink once more, and you wake up next to Fubuki, who says she's going to catch that one in a million fish today, she knows it.

Bow to your queen.

>>14289330
Pussy from a chuuba that is evil

>>14295052
I do and always will.

>>14293634
>Not having a wholesome threesome with Mio and Fubuki. While you both engage and promise to spend the rest of your life together. Harem is the true ending

>>14296016
Anon, we went there to catch fish. Threesomes can wait until we go back home.
Also, I'd rather have:
>having Mio confess to you while Fubuki is sleeping next to you
>turning her down because you and Fubuki are already happily dating
>Mio starting to cry because she loves you as much as Fubuki does
>Fubuki waking up due to all the commotion and seeing a teary Mio
>Mio and you explaning the situation to Fubuki
>Fubuki being understanding and comforting Mio, telling her that she'd be glad to share you with her
>Fubuki turning towards you and asking you if you'd be fine with spending your life with both of them
>You agreeing with her idea and kissing them both, consumating your love under the starry night sky
>Waking up between the two, both of them embracing you from either of your sides and using your arms as pillows
>Having them slowly wake up and rub their bodies against you, marking you with their scent, both so that they can claim you as theirs and get more of your warmth
>Having both of them tell you they loe you and both want to share their life with you
>Returning their feelings in earnest and marrying both of them, vowing to forever be by their side and spend your whole life with them

>>14273692
Okay, I finished reading Pay Your Dues. That was a pretty decent read, Anon, but I think that despite the fact you chose this subject to write on, your heart wasn't in it, and that ended up being reflected in the writing.
Offering constructive criticism is made difficult by the fact that this fic was written as if the events were being presented to the reader from afar, rather than being an invisible observer nearby, or stepping into the subject's mind for a bit to explore what she feels. Furthermore, I'm not into NTR so it could be that this is right up someone's alley.
I do believe the NTR aspect was the weakest link and brought the rest of the story down because of the aforementioned distant-viewer writing style; the description of Suisei's torments were rather brief and lacking in detail because of the fact we weren't experiencing it vicariously through Suisei, but rather from an insert observing the events take place.

However, there is a lot of good there too. This being straight-up rape, no punches being pulled, was very refreshing. I really liked the way you illustrated Suisei's rising terror by describing her struggling ever more fiercely, crying for help and beginning to stammer, and the ending where she's clearly retreated into the confines of her shattered psyche indicating PTSD was lovely. I also appreciate the fact that despite Anon being the reader's insert, you held back on describing his own feelings in excess during each paragraph; as a result, I personally felt the smut was quite palatable, and I managed to get off on it - although I self-inserted into Suisei rather than Anon.

I feel like this fic wasn't given a chance, and that the overall reception was quite close-minded, which was saddening to see, and I just wanted to say that I appreciated this fic.

This white-haired semen demon makes me so hard, it's not even funny...

>>14295241
Is the pussy evil or is it the chuuba?

>>14296798
That's really helpful. Like I said in the last thread, that was the first NTR fic (may be the last but we'll see) I've written ever, so I'm not surprised it could stand to have some improvements. What you put out makes a lot of sense and I'll be sure to keep it in mind should I try NTR again, especially in regards to it being too brief. Thanks for adding the things you liked about it too, helps just as much. Happy I could help you nut.

Also
>This being straight-up rape, no punches being pulled, was very refreshing.
Only in /wg/ would you ever see this sentence haha.

>>14298109
Haunted pussy

>>14296750
>tfw never ever

I might write this one, one day.

>>14298506
Alright, who's the chuuba with abortion rrats? I know there's gotta be one

>>14298667
Miko

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>>14298667
Didn't Mr.Koro have one?

>>14299569
If she doesn't, she will when I'm done.

>>14298607
If you ever do, I'll be here to read it.

>>14296750
I just want this... Is that too much to ask?
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>>14296750
>Mio giving you a nursing handjob to coax you back into action while Fubuki lies in post-insemination bliss

>>14300456
Fuck. My sides are in orbit.

>>14296750
polygamy is for fags

>>14296750
Jesas, that's the good stuff

Does anyone have an abuse edit of Ayame? I'd make one but I'm functionally retarded when it comes to photoshop

>>14300706
Multiple men + 1 woman = Disgusting
1 men + multiple women = Blessed as God wanted us to be.

>>14303094
>>14300706
This is partially because the male is a replete resource in nature. In a tribe it's really only necessary for a single male to replenish numbers so the rest can be free to do other tasks. However, every male has the instinct to be that male, so this results in infighting. Thus the most socially efficient plan to prevent jealousy and bloodshed is monogamy.

>>14283400
It'll be updated eventually, I just for some reason have had trouble properly writing where I want to take it.

>>14306502
Godspeed anon

>>14303655
monogamy is a cuck invention of the cristian church. It's not natural

>>14307886
It's not natural to develop language or get a higher education either, they're inventions of a refined, civilized society. This goes for monogamy as well. Polygamy is a relic of an age where humans were less developed and intelligent creatures.

>>14306502
It's nice knowing that you're still here. That fic is a personal favorite of mine since it works really well in the laconic greentext format.

>>14307998
Dont care. I'll have my GAMERS harem

Since we’re on the topic of relationships, any fics for this feel? https://streamable.com/09umfo
All this talk about having more than 0 significant others hurts…

>>14311001
chad not letting society stop him
however i will fucking maul you and take your women

If we're claiming harems then I call hololive gen 3

>>14312951
Dibs on gen 2

>>14312951
I call ID 1 and 2 except only Risu, the rest can watch and make fun of me

>>14311633
what sort of fic are you asking for? Like wish fufillment, a feels story...?

>>14312951
Bakatare + Mio

>>14311633
>Not posting the Ame version
Here you go bud, hope this helps https://streamable.com/s9omgz

>>14312951
Gen 5 is mine.

>>14313143
Dunno if fluff would count, but I like a little bit of sadness in knowing that it will never happen to me.
>>14313410
:( ah.. fantastic

Just curious, what sort of ending do you expect from the pekomiko rape rrat fic?

at hospital rn thinkin things over. I made an ending but i feel like it doesn't land well. Might just tweak it or change it altogether

>>14314691
(You) will be the one to help Pekora recover from being raped by Miko

>>14314691
Miko is heartbroken that Pekora hates her and Suisei comes in her life and fixes everything. Pekora tries to butt back in but gets ignored

>>14313896
Well are you new here or have you read some of the fics in the archive? Cause if you've read at least some of them give us some examples of what you like and want more of and we can probably find some fics that fit the bill.

>>14314691
A distant epilogue that shows, perhaps for the better or perhaps for the worse, that something has changed between them... Or to put in simpler terms, an ending that shows something is very different in how they interact after the rape.

>>14315980
Well about that, I’ve read mostly everything, but I am pretty forgetful and maybe there might be some I’ve missed?

>>14316984
... Even the series?

>>14314691
A perspective switch to an angry Zeus, watching the drama unfold from on high, who proceeds to smite the pair of faggots with a bolt of lightning while Stellar Stellar plays in the background.

>>14318499
Yep, although I’ve re-read the earlier ones probably more than twice because I had a lot of time back then, and the archive was a lot smaller.

I have a question, Anons. Do you read your writings aloud before sharing? I've read and heard some people recommending doing so; and though I like reciting poetry and passages, with my own poems and prompts I only do it sometimes, and vocalizing very lowly, where they're barely audible enough for me to notice any bathos or impropriety.

>>14311633
Every time I see things like this, it makes me wonder: how much do people have to suffer to get the conviction being alone is a lesser evil? Becoming bored or numb, getting betrayed or abandoned, your beloved departing this world, grief. Why? Why?

>>14319075
>how much do people have to suffer to get the conviction being alone is a lesser evil?
actually experience a relationship
i have, and my woman got between me and video games
sex is good, but it's not as good as video games

>>14319075
Despite the sour experiences, I wouldn't change anything about it. The relationships I had made me the man I am today. You can't expect people to agree with surrounding yourself in a bubble away from what life has to offer just because they are in fear of MAYBE getting hurt. Love is one of the strongest emotions a person can feel, and grief, anger, sadness, all of it is part of the bundle. It is much better to love and lose than to never love at all, in this argument, not in that old question. I think I'd be much more miserable if I had never experienced love.

>>14319075
Why would you read it out aloud if you're writing shit that the audience isn't going to read aloud either?
I can kind of see the point of reciting it out loud if you're making something to be performed but if you're writing prose like here, no one here reads that shit aloud.
I mean I guess it might let you find if you're fucking up dialogue since by nature, dialogue is english as spoken and not as written so it can work out as a tool there.

>>14319075
I only read stuff out loud if I feel like the sentence is wonky which it usually is if I have to read it out loud. Although anytime a sentence has a 'that that' I say out loud because it looks weird written.

>>14319075
Once.

>>14319217
>actually experience a relationship
>sex and video games
Seriously?
Actually experience having enough girlfriends for at least one of them to stab you in the back, to leave you for another, or to lose interest in you; to see the patterns repeat, to lose trust in others.
Actually experience your wife, your one and only, dying on you.
Unless you're one of those inconstant oligophrenics who believe it's a strength to be mindless and forget your feelings and the ones you felt for, I don't see why you would take it so lightly.

>>14319075
I have to read my stuff aloud otherwise I won't be able to spot my numerous grammatical mistakes; reading in my head doesn't help me.

>>14319581
I think that that that that that sentence says is right.

>>14319647
sounds like you place way too much importance in other people

>>14319478
>>14319581
I see. Certainly. Thanks.

>>14319472
If you say so...

>>14319597
True, though only for those who have memory and feelings, isn't it?

>>14314691
Miko is genuinely mortified of what she did and decides to end it all to atone for her sins. Pekora stops her, forgives her friend and comes to the realization she loves Miko too. Happy end.

>>14319738
Nah, just like observation and argumentation from time to time.

>>14319834
Have you experienced love? True love? I feel like you haven't. I've felt love many times but true love was what really changed me, and ironically enough the true love was my first experience with heartbreak as well. She still lives rent free in my mind. Even so, again, this is what made me who I am today.

>>14319997
If we're going there, then what is "love"? What is "true" love?
Is it such a fickle feeling as you seem to say? Is it another drug for another addict, like you appear to me?
If it is, then I guess I never felt it.

>who I am today
An anon coping hard? Haha.
Half joking there. Don't take it personal.

>>14320506
An interesting way to put it. Are you addicted to happiness because you want to feel it more? Are you? Is it really that bad to want to feel happy?

I don't know who's coping here exactly. I think you created this image in your mind of what love is and accepted it as reality because in fact, you have no idea what it is, and only see it negatively to cope with your obliviousness. To not feel left out. You give reasons, excuses. "I don't need love, it's a drug that people are addicted to", any person who has experienced love knows that you're simply deluding yourself. You never felt the good of love, so you don't realize just how insignificant the bad is when compared to it. To you, it seems like relationships are full of problems with these weird "feelings" you've never heard about. Sure, they are full of problems, but if you knew what it was like to love, you'd know that behind the flaws, love is an essential part of living.

also you speak like an edgy teenager so it's hard to take you seriously

Love triangle between Astel Shien and Amelia.
Ame likes Shien
Shien likes Astel
Astel likes Ame

>>14320932
>because you want to feel it more?
That might as well be an addiction, especially when...
>bad to want to feel happy?
you're treating others as a medium, as an object. And now we're getting into ethics; you hurt yourself and others when in a relationship. Is it never bad to use others for your own pleasure, and then to discard them when they no longer seem useful?

That lengthy paragraph looks like a projection to me, and a rationalization.
>To not feel left out.
Oh no, did I trigger the need for social proof and community reinforcement in your monkey brain? Sorry, mate. Just keep doing and saying what others do and say, thoughtlessly.
>reasons, excuses.
Reasons are necessary if one wants to be rational. Rationalizations and excuses, like yours, are bad, though.
>You never felt the good of...
>if you knew what it was like...
Shit, man, you convinced me! Where can I buy this famous drug?

Psst! Ad hominem are funny, aren't they? But, did you know that if you read literature and at least a little bit of science, you will improve your vocabulary, grammar and content of your thoughts? I'm just an average Joe.

>>14321451
Who are you talking to?

>>14322038
Like explaining colors to a blind man who doesn't want to see. Must've really struck a nerve there. I tried talking under the presumption that you were a reasonable person but now I see how futile it is to try and dig through 20 layers of coping and delusion built up like plaque on your teeth over the course of several years a plenty of loneliness. I genuinely hope you find that person pal, that is no way to live.

>>14312951
I’ll take English 1. I want that Gura cunny, the other girls are a delicious bonus

This convo about love is perfect. I've been low inspiration for a bit and this got me just the idea for a new work. I'll test it out and see how it goes. I think what I have in mind will be good.

Roboco romance sound good? This one will have an interesting gimmick. It won't be (you) fall in love with a robot that learns to love.

>>14322307
More projection, then throwing up your hands. You could just have said you don't know.
But yeah, like explaining the feeling that God exists and loves you to filthy infidels. Must be real hard. Poor souls, aren't they? Pity!

>>14322307
Also, I just hope that if you find or found that person, they don't die before you.

>>14322062
I think that anon doesn't know how to use the prompt thingy

>>14322551
Sounds great actually, wonder why this hasn’t been done yet, though it does feel a bit close to the robomoona fic.

>>14322551
That sounds good, yes.

>>14322955
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>>14323196
I'm new here. Never used this site before.

>>14322551
I've always wanted to write a short story inspired by Sad Machine by Porter Robinson, always liked that album and song in particular.
Roboco would be a pretty great choice for something of the sort.

>>14323376
Back to plebbit. Go.

>>14323376
lurk moar faggot

>>14323376
If it's a prompt, attach it to the board at the top via replying to it

>>14323376
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>>14323536
>Sad Machine by Porter Robinson

Fuck that's a good idea. I'll give that song a listen and see if I can't work some of it in.

>>14323245
It won't be anything to do with robotics at all. I would explain more but anything more will spoil the gimmick. I want it to be a surprise.

>>14323621
It's the same shit. There it is downvotes, here it is edgy, blind, faggot, and a thousand vacuous names instead of actual thought.

Besides, from what I've seen there, that anon (you?) fits there better. The best relationship advice there seems to be "dump and pick another", and that's it. Funny.

>>14323997
You go with him.

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>>14324278
lel

what ever happened to that "Sex with the Hags" fic?

>>14325072
Dropped when he realized hags could never beat cunny

>>14319075
Maybe one day you'll understand when you're in a relationship with someone who you truly love and loves you back equally. How will you be able to determine it? When you take the small things like her holding your hand, talking about the things you like, cooking together for granted until you've spent so much of your life together that these things become subconscious. When your hand instinctively reaches out for hers, when you consider her preferences whenever you cook, when your first thoughts are always about her. It isn't dependency, you know you could live without her, yet every cell in your body is telling you that being with her feels right. It isn't about the passion, the sex or the grand gestures. It is when you look at her face, and see someone you would want to protect more than yourself, the maybe you'll know how strong love is. That it is worth risking heartbreak, despair, and the utter destruction of your soul for, because the only thing you could ever think of giving her, is your everything.

>>14325072
he did part 1 then put part 2 on indefinite hiatus

>>14323939
>It's the far off future, humanity has been nearly wiped off the face of the Earth
>Women had become infertile and cloning became the only way for humanity to go on; only the most powerful have access to females whereas everyone else is male because of more brawn
>You belong to a group of scavengers looking for scraps and fall down a ravine, ending up in some abandoned, hidden bunker
>Amazingly the insides are decrepit but still have power
>Exploring, you find a girl in an elaborate black dress hooked up to a machine that pulsates softly with light
>She looks soft to the touch and almost warm
>You've never seen a woman up close
>Your index makes contact with her cheek, nothing happens, you get bolder and cup her face
>She wakes up slowly, then panics when she realizes you're a stranger
>Turns out she's been hibernating for thousands of years
>She sometimes spaces out and starts singing and dancing, her time as an idol bringing back fond memories
>Have to explain everyone and everything she knew is gone
>The two of you start exploring to find out the secrets of why she was kept there
>You both begin to develop unknown feelings for the other
>Turns out she has a functioning reproductive system and can be the catalyst to repopulate the planet


Some Saber Marionette inspiration there too.

>>14325072
I'm doing as I promised and working on Omarun chapter 2 right now, after that's published I'll write part 2 of Sex with the Hags.

>>14319075
I write the entire thing through, make sure I didn't make any mistakes, publish it, read it again, then fix all the mistakes I found.

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>>14325656
>I'm doing as I promised and working on Omarun chapter 2 right now
Looking forward to it, I've been saving up some semen.

>>14325656
You're a beautiful beautiful man.

>>14325131
Homosexual

>>14325279
I have, anon. Why are you assuming I haven't? It makes me think you're one of those who utterly idealize relationships without having experienced one in the slightest: it must be good, absolutely good, good, good, good, or else it was something else entirely.

To be clear: I'm not denying it feels good―because it does feel good, it is sublime beatitude―but like in Newton's third law, unless you're dull to pain, the pain is equal in magnitude; and unless you have the capacity for memory of a fish, why would you forget the pain?
And this is only from the personal viewpoint. How would your partner feel if as soon as they're dead you're already looking for another?

>>14325279
You shouldn't try anon. That guy is as dull as a mule and as sharp as a rock. He'll either grow out of it in time or live on in misery. Either way it's none of my business.

>>14325970
then I'm very lucky to be with the person I have with me now. It doesn't come without grievances, but I have pit those feelings against my love for her, and as much as it rends my heart, as much as it tears me apart thinking if I lose her, my heart tells me that I still love her, and that I still want to love her. I strongly believe that when she's gone I will never find another person to fill that hole in my heart ever again, but I knew that from the beginning. These feelings, this love, it has no logic to it. It never did. As the old adage goes, "I am a fool when in love."

How does the thread feel about crossovers? I've been playing Fallout 3 and New Vegas and have an entire headcanon story that I could easily tweak to fit a story with (you) and the other holos. I wouldn't just copy the story in either game either. If it's too cringe to do crossover stuff I'll just go about doing my other WIPs

>>14326673
Personally would never do it since it feels a bit like a double dose of self indulgence but I wouldn't stop anyone else from doing what they want to do.

>>14326673
We need more uninhibited cringekino to take us back to the MLP fanfic industrial complex

>>14289330
calli visits ironmouse, they have fun until mouse realizes its not a friendly visit

>>14326673
Please. We need to reach the level of sheer autism that is hundreds of chapters of chuuba x popular game that other autistic fanbases have.

>>14326673
That idea sounds to me similar to the Moona-Witcher crossover fic; it's sticking two things you like together regardless of their relevancy.

How about just NOT calling it Fallout? There's nothing stopping you from making an AU fic about chuubas living in a post-apocalyptic country.

>>14326673
You should do it. This is the writing thread so creativity should be allowed to flow.

>>14326903
You know it really is weird how every goddamn fanbase has that one fanfic that is significantly larger than every other fanfic in that fandom for some ungodly reason

>>14327113
I could do that yes. The problem is that, for the plot I have in mind, it would be "fallout but not titled fallout." And if I'm going to stick with the plot, why not take advantage of the legwork from the lore that's already done for me right? I could have the Enclave, or I could have a shadowy organization that acts like the Enclave but is called something else.

I'd rather be honest that I'm ripping from Fallout instead of copying it and swearing I'm not, ya know?

>>14326828
>>14326903
>>14327557
I'll get it started then. I hope you enjoy it.

>>14327590
That million word smash bros fic comes to mind

>>14327811
I'm always gonna give that one a little leeway because it was primarily to help the author learn English. Still hyper-autistic, yeah, but if it was the equivalent of homework then it doesn't make it as mega-cringe as some other shit I've read.

>>14327902
I respect the sheer dedication it takes to put out that many words in that short a span of time. Having read a few mega-fics in my day it's hard to even comprehend

>>14327902
Huh, I never knew that. It's funny because that fic got dethroned as the longest fanfic some years back.

>>14325656
Can't wait to read it eventually, part 1 was already fucking great

>>14328058
IIRC it's now some autistic Kantai Collection mega fic now... or maybe I'm misremembering because I recall that one was dethroned by something on ao3

>>14328147
I thought the longest fic now was about that one nickelodeon show.

>>14328217
It's this or My Immortal iirc. The Loud House fic that's grown to ungodly lengths sounds right though.

>>14328217
>>14328256
Just checked, 12 million words for that fucking loud house fanfic. So this is the power of autism.

>>14329000
How? Why? So many questions I'd like to ask the author.

>>14329344
That's 2 questions.

>>14289330
Suisei fucking Ankimo and having Sora walk in on it

Critically important question: should I plagiarize the deathclaw sex scene from Frontier? Very important for me to proceed.

>>14330563
yes

>>14330563
I think anybody in anything should seek to do the exact opposite of things done in The Frontier

>>14330563
>deathclaw sex scene
I have no clue what the fuck you're talking about here, and I'm sad for it. I'm very intrigued and for sure would love to see chuubas getting railed by massive lizards. Preferably against their will.

>>14325279
>ywn experience this
I'm ngmi. pain

>>14326673
Kinda cringe in my opinion. Maybe throwing in a few obscure references to the game or something would be fine but actually using characters/places/events from Fallout? That would be cringe.

>>14329000
12 million? What the fuck? No seriously, what the fuck? How is it that many words? How does someone have that much time? I don't think I can even begin to comprehend the length of that story. How long would it even take for someone to read it if they decide to do so?

>>14330563
Absolutely. Do it word for word if you have to.

>>14331061
With actual legitimate autism anything is possible anon

>>14331061
The entire archive doesn't even break 2m if I had to guess. That's some dedicated autism.

>>14310354
>it works really well in the laconic greentext format
Funnily enough doing anything that's not completely off-the-cuff and made up on the spot in greentext format is really hard to me

>>14331061
To answer in order. Yes it's actually 12 million words. I know. Yes it's kind of weird. From what I can tell a daily update schedule, and being in script format. Given that it's a self insert fanfic I think it's because the author was literally a kid. Would probably literally take a year even if you were speed reading it.
Honesty I fucking skimmed the first few chapters, it's not worth it. That fic is only notable for being both long as fuck, and currently still being updated.

>>14332014
So you know what happens in the plot? Because I don’t know how a plot can go on for 12 million words

>>14332385
Probably nothing interesting unless it turns into Smash crossfiction.

Bumpity

How do I overcome the oppressive feeling that I'm wasting my life writing chuuba fanfics?

>>14337572
By wasting your life watching chuubas.

>>14337572
All depends on your life perspective. Personally, in the absence of any overarching goal, I feel like spending your time enjoying yourself isn't a waste at all.

>>14289303
Holocalypse part 6:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQlONwpeHmLAMr99-yg8ZY3a-dmLWnldCrhLOk19I1Ff4BsZkeoAJDimsD0ffoAeqD5yaJZhv5q8Eu7/pub

Can't think of anything to say, I hope you guys enjoy.

>>14339209
Lets fucking go. I was wafting for this

>>14339209
Why would you drop this just as I am about to sleep? Now I have to either stay up late, or wait 10 hours to read.

>>14337572
Waste your time reading fanfics instead

>>14337572
I still feel like I'm wasting my time doing it but right now I'm playing a game I have well over 1.5K hours on so it's a bit idiotic when I say it.

>>14339209
Holy shit. Anon you fucker. I just realised that during the Holocalypse vs Holofantasy fight 4 was able to keep fighting after he “died” when he said “not yet”. But then when he tried that in the fight against Yagoo, he couldn’t keep going, which you explained at the start with his reason for fighting changing how “strong” he is. That is such a nice touch, shounen-y shit like that gets me giddy and I love it. Also is his Mom who I think it is? Glad to see another addition to the story, looking forward to part 7

Bump

>>14339209
Great work, as always. I'm a real sucker for the gals saving the guy like that. Quick question: do you have a final partner in mind for Anon here? Or is it more of a general friendship feeling?

>>14289330
(You) are a hunter living alone in the woods, surviving off the land. You haven't seen another human in at least two years. Winter is approaching, but just before it does you come across a grizzly bear trying to eat a wolf to gain calories to prepare for hibernation (or just any wolf that's dying, it doesn't matter). You scare the bear off and attempt to gain the wolf's trust and treat its injuries before letting it run away into the woods. The next day, a strange black haired lady wearing a beanie knocks on your door. You live about a two day hike away from the closest form of civilization... so where did this person come from?

>>14337572
>>14341743
Vanity of vanities, all is vanity. You're going to die no matter what you do; try to enjoy your time on this earth, doing what you want, while you're still here.
Read Ecclesiastes.

>>14289330
Throatfucking one of the girls with horns until you've gone beyond the point of shooting blanks

>>14350317
The obvious counterpoint is that excess indulgence will often blind you and make you incapable of achieving whatever your true, self-realized goals are

>30 minutes and already on page 10
We zoomin today huh?

>>14352551
Outfit reveals will do that

clussy got me acting up

>>14289330
Ayame gangraped by a pack of rabid niggers.

>>14289330
A dream I just had.
A big event in JP where HoloEN meets up with the JP branches. During the course of the festivities, Amelia suddenly goes missing. A mystery unfurls in which you, dissatisfied with how long the police force are taking to solve the case when you're in borrowed time until you need to return to the states, take matters into your own hands.
The dream ended up taking some insane turns. The prime suspect ended up being another foreigner, some rough neck who was supposed to be Coco's ex. Aqua went missing at one point too and at that point I remember finding where the guy was staying and kicking his fucking door in for answers while the girls were infighting about who was responsible and interrogating each other. He pointed the finger at HoloEN as the group who told him where everyone was. The first person I visited was Gura who immediately attacked me in the process, but I managed to overpower her and get her to confess to the fact that she was the one who had Amelia kidnapped by the Yakuza because she was tired of how well she was doing compared to her. She had a gun in her luggage and several diary-esque entries talking about how she wanted Amelia raped to death and how badly she hated her, saying she wished she had a dick so she could do it herself. One of the last things she said before the police took her away was insinuating the conspiracy was even bigger than that, and that I should investigate Rushia if I wanted to find Aqua. I remember fourteen people in total being arrested but Amelia was never found before I had to go back home.

>>14289330
A pack of rabid niggers gangraped by Ayame

>>14329344
>One boy living with her sisters
>a BIG family
There's a lot to write there

>>14330563
I dont know what you talking about but I want to fuck a Deathclaw

>>14355437
Disgustin. I can help you with this one. Ayame gangraped by a pack of horny/angry anons!
Me and the boys about to rape ayame

>>14356604
>"You fool, a veteran whore such as her would eat you horny virgin retards alive!"
Warned the old, grisled Anon. He had seen to many young idiots die after accepting this death wish of a quest.

>>14328081
If you don't mind me asking, why did you think it was great? Like, what about the story made it enjoyable?

It's been almost 6 months since I released and I want to keep the same feel, while also trying to make Polka slowly resemble /our/ Polka little by little as the story progresses. It's a bit challenging but I'm doing my best.

Because of earlier talk about what crossover concoction would likely result in the longest, most autism filled fanfiction /wg/ could possibly produce I started thinking. I narrowed it down to a few and then of those few I highlighted the strengths and weaknesses of each until a clear victor revealed itself. By far the best series to create a terrifyingly long crossover story with chuubas is RWBY.

>>14357618
NTA, but I think part one does a very good job of making you care for Polka in the 'daughter' part of 'daughterwife' sense as well as establishing a pretty interesting setting with the traveling circus.

>>14358432
>RWBY
The worst part about that is that there is, unironically, a good chance that we could come up with something that's better than the original show.
Then again, that isn't really a high bar to pass

>>14360371
RWBY fandom and vtubing fandom has something really in common
Both will eat wathever shit they've trown at them and cope by saying its good or its a small company who did it. I kinda want to see now how this autistic fic will go

>>14358487
I see, thanks. That was the intention, with Ch2 marking the flip from 'daughter' to 'wife' focus that's hinted at the end of part one. For now the interactions with her are still not there, there's one more 'daughter' arc before things move along.

I had been racking my brain about how to get there given the characters, ||(You) did say you're no into little girls, so how would that change?|| I don't want to cheap out and go for the low hanging fruit, but that means a lot of legwork to get there. I definitely want to write a clunny scene in chapter two though, so it may end up being pretty long.

I see, thanks. That was the intention, with Ch2 marking the flip from 'daughter' to 'wife' focus that's hinted at the end of part one. For now the interactions with her are still not there, there's one more 'daughter' arc before things move along.

I had been racking my brain about how to get there given the characters, (You) did say you're no into little girls, so how would that change? I don't want to cheap out and go for the low hanging fruit, but that means a lot of legwork to get there. I definitely want to write a clunny scene in chapter two though, so it may end up being pretty long.

AHH MY SPOILER REPS

>>14361342
>>14358487

>>14360371
The original show was good in the first three seasons (and I'd argue that season 5 was good as well, haven't had the time to catch up after that).

>>14361111
Quads of truth.
>>14361616
I never liked the show that much but there was a significant drop in quality once Monty died which was midway through season 3 iirc.

>>14358432
What about Genshin?

>>14361422
That is certainly an interesting predicament. I guess since it's never thought internally but only spoken, (You) could have just been saying it to placate Polka and make her more comfortable. Though that could easily come off as kinda creepy.

>>14362369
That would invite way too much controversy because of chinkistan

>>14289330
Have we gotten a nurse Choco gloved handjob story yet?

>>14365491
Nope. But we did get one with Aki.

>>14348559
>You scare the bear off
Lmao. Why would anyone be dumb enough to try and face a grizzly for the sake of a dying wolf? Unless you have a rifle, that's a really stupid idea, and even with a rifle, still not a great one.

>>14367135
I'd punch a bear if it meant saving Fubuki or Mio.

>>14367321
If you punch a grizzly, completely unarmed with no backup plan, you're fucked. A black bear you might have a slim chance of fighting or scaring off, but not a grizzly.

>>14367321
Anon, a grizzly can take a handful of lead to the face point blank from a shotgun and still maul you to death. What makes you think your flimsy little punch is gonna do to it? I don't know how you don't know this but grizzlies are only below polar bears in terms of monsters of nature. There's NOTHING stronger than those motherfuckers. If you want to take one down prepare to empty a full mag of a riot shotgun on that fucker's head and pray it got through the fat.

>>14367382
Normally I'd agree but seeing a wounded and bloodied Mio would make go super saiyan and I'd kick the bear's ass then blow my hot load into Mio's womb fertilizing a once barren landscape.

>>14367638
Read: >>14367644
I'd win. Simple as.

>>14358432
I realize this is a suggestion made jokingly but then I remember all of the autistically long fanfics people made at the height of RWBY's popularity made using just material from their first three seasons... Yeah with a dumb fuck around plot that gives each holomembers an arc. I could see this getting an absurd word count in the high hundred thousands if the right autist was in charge.

>>14367638
I mean bears do regularly get scared off just by being really loud around them. Even just talking to the bear can be enough to make it fuck off. Though this could easily just be written off by the author having Mio do wolf shrine maiden magic or something and then just have (You) patch wolf Mio up or some shit.

can we get a greentext shitpost about a lovestruck and horny mio & anon going camping and getting mauled by a grizzly bear

bonus points if the magic happens as mio's getting her tits out, like slasher films such as jason

>>14368078
That's the thing, I didn't say that jokingly. I fully believe that if the goal is to make a chuuba/hololive crossover fic with the main goal being sheer length then RWBY would be the best series to crossover with. On a side note there's nearly 700 RWBY fics on fanfiction.net that are over 100k words with the majority of those being still ongoing stories. Jesus Christ.

A cursory glance on ao3 says that the largest holo fic is 339k

>>14369898
link?

>>14370104
https://www.google.com/

>>14369898
We can do better. AO3 fags on suicide watch soon.

>>14319690
>>14325661
I see. So there are people who do, and people who don't. Thanks for answering.

>>14339209
Great chapter as always. Just realized the protagonist Four really resembles the protagonist from Grisaia, which the VN is pretty good. Is it intentional or just a coincidence?

>>14339209
Fuck, woke up and realised I forgor the tags.
Tags: Suisei, several other chars., SFW, action, gore(?)
>>14339268
>>14339476
Thanks, I appreciate you guys reading my story.
>>14344069
I'm really glad someone noticed this, I might do something similar in the next chapter too. Thanks for reading.
>>14348555
That's a question I've been asking myself for a while. I'll probably write multiple endings where (You) decide who to pick so every girl is an option, but I'm wondering if I should make a 'canon' partner or not.

>>14371312
Oh shit, hello. Thanks for reading. I've never played Grisaia unfortunately, and when I initially started Holocalypse I didn't put much thought into his character and he sort of just ended up the way he is as I wrote. If I had to say where I took a bit of inspiration from, it would be from Raiden in Metal Gear.

>>14339209
Well that was certainly worth the wait. While the story may not have moved forward too much, the little bits and pieces of backstory and future plot you sprinkled along the chapter were certainly interesting and I hope you manage to stick the landing in giving us the reveal.

>Really loved the scene where 4 and Suisei were staking out the hospital, the part where 4 revealed his talent in playing the harp (the small one you carry is called the lyre for those who don't know) was really cute.
>Felt like the fight with 19 dragged on for a while, not saying the fight was bad or anything, just felt like that sort of duel was best reserved for a more climactic moment instead of a one-on-one with some rando. The flaming kicks were pretty cool though.
>I find it interesting as to why Yagoo wants 4 dead that badly. We know 4 is skilled but how skilled is he exactly that Yagoo is terrified of a single dude? We know he killed 32 guards if what 19 said was true but what exactly does that mean in the grand scheme of things? I seem to recall someone saying that 4 was a bit rusty compared to when he was with Botan but if that's the case then how skilled was he when he was at the camp?
>Also what >>14344069 said was pretty clever, don't know how I missed that
>Really liked the little easter egg with Calli on the river Styx.
>Am I the only one who found the final scene a bit awkward? Like I knew it was coming eventually but the fact that "the boys" were in the room kinda took me off, not saying that I hate them, in fact I really like how they're incorporated into the story, it's just I never really saw them as being as close to 4 as the girls and him saying all that stuff to what amounts to regular friends instead of the close knit group the denizens of the mansion are. It just felt kinda weird for 4 to show that part of himself to all those people, but I still feel like they should definitely hear what 4 has to say about his past.

All in all, really looking forward to the eventual reveal of what exactly happened that night.

>>14371935
Fuuuuck, I don't think I'm going to be able to stick the landing. Part 7 is about halfway done right now and it is already a steaming pile of shit, which I may or may not be able to fix.

Just searched up what a lyre looks like, and that wasn't quite what I had in mind. This talent of Four's is actually a big hint to his past.
Yeah, I can see how 19's fight might have gone on too long, I was really just trying to stack up Four's wounds. Glad you liked the flame kicks too, I really wanted to put that in but was worried that would be too unrealistic.
As for Four's strength... I don't want to spoil anything but hopefully the reason for it won't be too generic or cringe. It has something to do with what >>14344069 said.
Right, I see where you're coming from. I probably should have written more bonding events with the boys like when they went fishing and stuff to increase the impact of them being there/strengthen their bonds.

All in all thanks for reading Anon, and thanks a lot for the feedback.

Stay motivated!

>>14372886
The thing is that in part 4 (which is still my favorite part btw) the girls each had their one-on-one moment with 4 that was deep and meaningful while with "the boys" it was well... "the boys". It's hard to form a rapport as close as 4 has with the girls when all the holostar interactions are as a group rather than as an individual. Granted, it's impossible to write that since there's so many of the boys but I hope you see what I'm getting at
Hey man, as long as the story doesn't trip, fall, and set itself on fire while shitting and pissing itself, then you shouldn't worry about the landing. Even a mediocre landing on an otherwise decent story is leagues than a shit one on an amazing story*cough *cough AoT *cough *cough GoT

>>14362342
Oh, definitely. After Monty died, the show wasn't the same anymore.

Damn, I did say I was going to release my fic in this thread didn't I? I'm gonna change the ending to something less depressing so I may not release today

>>14373593
Ahh ok, that makes a lot of sense. Thanks for letting me know
I bloody hell hope I don’t do all that. The story’s only about 2 thirds of the way done though, there’s still a few more things left that the crew need to overcome.

>>14373998
Migoooooo...

One day we'll get a Cover High update as well. I hate how invested I am in these series at this point

>>14370104
It's among the myths on ao3, which is a completed holomyth fic that ships all of them together,

Do you save Miko?

>>14378575
No

>>14378575
I will save Miko, turn her into an obedient pet, and fuck her underboob from the side on command.

>>14378575
I will save Miko for selfish reasons.

>>14376316
sounds lame desu

>>14378575
Yeah. Save her from a life of being childless.

>>14289303
It's done. A story based off of the aftermath of the famous pekomiko rrat. This was more of a experimental fic if anything, a bit out of my zone of expertise but I think it was fun to do. Hopefully you can find it enjoyable. For context, a small spoiler which I didn't manage to fit in the fic: keep in mind that it wasn't full blown rape, just some minor molestation. If it was rape it would either be too extreme or too comical, neither of which I wanted to do.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSu7YA5d6KgQ5dbROWncxKBwd7qkr77ffuWWM0iB-M6C8dQXMyXwzpstMWvNxm-L4tZ3vn0etyRCG0f/pub

Tags: SFW, Miko, Pekora, Suisei, Moona, drama

Originally I had planned a much more depressing ending for this, but I changed it almost entirely because I felt like it wasn't right. Though the idea I wanted to do is still entertaining in my mind, I think it doesn't send the right message across. I was about to add the side of Pekora from the call but decided to leave it on an ambiguous ending.

>>14381744
>rrat

>>14381744
This fic isn't my cup of tea, but it isn't poorly written by any means. Maybe a little light on what the subject matter is seemingly supposed to be, as this is like 90% a MiComet fic, with the rrat only serving as a means for set-up. But it wasn't bad.

Also the text changes colour like half-way through, don't know what's up with that.

>>14381744
I thought this was pretty fair, honestly. There are some pacing issues, which frankly stem around the fact that the story needed some time to show the depression. I think the dialogue was pretty good. I do feel, however, that the style/diction undercuts the mood often enough that I couldn't tell precisely what the angle you were going for was. You also switch tenses and have some grammatical issues which are more minor in the scheme of things.

>>14381744
i'm curious as to what the other ending was. maybe you could post it as an alternate ending.

I'm in the mood to cry. What's your favorite feels fic?

>>14385975
Any of the Marine tragedy ones (Hidden Sea Buried Deep, Salt and Shadow, Sail Into The Night, Life Song)

>>14385975
Hidden Sea Buried Deep hurts.

>>14373593
AoT wasn’t THAT bad, was it?

>>14386766
That ending is this generation's Gantz. Although, I think SnK is a better story overall and at least the mangaka tried fixing the ending after 139.

>>14386766
It happens so late that reading now it shits itself fairly quickly, but because the chapters were released monthly it was also a slow grind to the finish.

Content wise every month was stupifiyng in its content. You have complex characters being reverted to their awful flanderized versions or just changing character motivations to things that don't make sense. Massive problems that are just handwaved away because the author realized he would not have time actually do something with them. An unironic Marvel movie tier finale, quips and all.

So many things are so sudden and out of left field that I genuinely believe that his editors took over for one reason or another. And there's alot outside the manga itself that makes me think that.

>>14387165
I miss the Marco was still alive theories....
According to the dude everything was planned since day one but that's never true lol

>>14385975
Those melancholic Suisei as your childhood friend ones have never failed to get me feeling.

>>14381744
The 'meh' that bored the world.

>>14381744
Honestly, I just found this boring. Perhaps if it actually had the event to act as an aftermath for it might have been interesting but as it is, it' s not really that interesting. It like a sequel to a fic that doesn't exist; it provide closure to something that hasn't been opened.
It's decently written I'll give you that but it feels 'empty' for lack of a better word due to not having the stakes of the actual rape happening.

>>14389887
This. The author's unwillingness to write actual rape - or at least, anything dramatic - means the fic fell flat.

>>14390253
I don't think it necessarily had to be rape, but there had to be SOMETHING. There's no substance. The fic is relying on reader investment that does not exist.

>>14390253
To play devil's advocate. I think a fic focused on the aftermath of the rape without actually showing the rape could have worked, it's just that Miko was the wrong one to use since her regrets don't give enough 'spice' to make it interesting.

>>14389887
>>14390253
>>14391701
i genuinely don't see how an actual rape scene would make any difference in this particular story

>>14385975
Try A Cat's Life.

>>14392247
Like I said, it doesn't have to be a rape - although that'd be preferable given the subject of the story. It's just that the narrative picks up after some horrible event and never elucidates the reader as to what happened, and by the end of the short fic, things are "resolved".

Try reading it as if you had no idea what the pekomikoraperrat was. Everything interesting happened off-screen, and this fic picks up after it. It'd be more interesting if we saw what happened, because watching the aftermath would then be fulfilling; but we didn't and it wasn't.

>>14392247
that's a shame, anon, because rape is the gift that keeps on giving and if you can't enjoy a good rape then you're missing out on so much in life

So basically the story was shit and the author should die for it, right?

>>14393019
not just the author, everyone in the the thread, or even the board.

>>14392247
It's not exactly about the rape scene it's that this entire fic feels like the falling action/resolution without the buildup and climax.
I feel like the author thought 'we all know what happened that night' and thus thought that they could get away without actually portraying it, but didn't actually make the story such that it can work without it.

p10

Well then. I went for realistic, but realistic without unpredictable is just boring.

>>14383681
I don't know what's up with that either. I tried changing it but it didn't seem to work.

>>14384767
There were 4 things I wanted in this fic, and as most bad practice authors do, I built my story around that. "Miko waking up in her bed, depressed", " Miko tending to the temple", "Miko and Suisei meet up and Miko almost molests her to show she hasn't changed" and then the original planned ending which I changed last minute.

>>14385474
Not particularly worth doing as I believe I don't have the skills to make it work, which is why I dropped it too. It was basically some sort of implied NTR with Pekora and Moona except, obviously, they are only friends. The night would've ended with Miko masturbating to a picture of them together but dramatized. Sounds pretty ridiculous eh?

>>14389887
>>14392396
That is something I could not fix lest I make it a series, which I did consider, but realized this is not something I want to focus on for too long. This was always planned to be a short one shot on the day to day life of Sakura Miko, the ending wasn't going to be a resolution and it would continue on with her waking up like every other day of the year.

>>14391980
I considered using Pekora's POV sometimes through the story but the switch would've been jarring and demystifying, imo.

>>14393857
Perhaps another ending I had planned would've been less of a resolution and thus less build up. We shall never know because I'm not writing it.

Anyway, I'm not too saddened by how it was received since I already knew the story was boring. Though of course, I still had expectations to be met so I still tried. I shoe horned in that resolution ending due to not wanting to end it on a depressing note, but perhaps I should've trusted my guts. It wouldn't fix most problems mentioned but it would at least feel more natural. My writing has received the critique of being boring a couple of times now, so I know where you're coming from. Strangely enough, I still want to write, despite knowing my stories will always be dull. I'm glad my writing is good, even if my plot isn't, so I feel like I can still try even if no one reads them. Maybe one day you'll get a proper PekoMiko that you deserve. Maybe. Not from me.

>>14398016
well i liked the story anyway

>>14289330
I'm not sure if this even works with Towa's lore, but I'm too horny to really care all that much. Prompt follows.
After a few years around humans, Towa begins to finds herself craving the lifeforce of men around her. Confused as to how to obtain it, she seeks advice from her senpai, Choco. One short, but embarrassing, lecture later, she's ready to seek out her first victim, a spritely young intern at Cover, Anon.
Trying at first to flirt with the dense young man, Towa struggles to catch his attention. As her desires grow, she continually takes more drastic measures to capture her prey.
TL;DR Dense anon evades, but eventually achieves, missionary sex with Towa for the purposes of filling her demonic body with his lifeforce.

>>14399077
Demons don't collect men's life force, that's a succubus job. Towa is a prankster devil by lore. Basically a pawn from hell who has the job to cause as much mischief as possible around her.

>>14399292
An imp

>>14399292
Oh no, I would be so inconvenienced if a short, prankster devil suddenly pushed me on the ground and put my penis inside her. Oh my, I sure hope it doesn't happen while I go to the storage room, all by myself, with my back turned and completely defenseless! That would be such an inconvenience for me, truly! Oh woe, poor me!

>>14399292
>Prankster devil by lore
>Maji tenshi by personality
>Going to cause mischief by draining intern-kun's balls so he loses his job by going late to work
>Ends up a diligent housewife instead

>>14398016
I mean my point was less that we should have gotten a pekora PoV and more that a fic showing the aftermath of the pekomiko rape without showing the rape would have been more impactful if it was the rape victim's PoV we got. This isn't a complaint, just clarifying my point.
Anyway, I do hope you write more. While this fic lacked the spark to make it interesting, your fundamentals do give you the chops to be a good writer. Also we need more 3rd person PoV writers like you, there is like a world of prompts that 2nd person reader insert just cannot do justice to.

>>14399407
I hope it's Oga that ambushes you and you get the pork sword instead of the ham sandwich

>>14399480
Would be a possible scenario, but he's still busy fucking the Pekofag.

>>14399447
Yo, uh, can we have this? Like, legit, please. I want this.

>>14399407
>>14399447
>>14399545
There's a fundamental flaw with these prompts and it is that Towa would never do something indecent intentionally. For the story to be within plausibility, Towa must want to do something that accidentally leads into being indecent, like let's see... swapping out the books on your shelves with some weird magazines she found in Kanata's room only for them to be "Devils scantily dressed magazine" or something and so you misinterpret this signal as Towa making a hit on you so you go to her and she just gives in to take responsibility. Maybe not the best example... but in short, anything that you could come up with from Towa accidentally giving you an erection through one of her pranks would already do I reckon.

>>14399985
I think it would be more in character if Towa bought a bunch of fairy tales and kids books to put on your bookshelf but she accidentally collides with Kanata who was in a rush also carrying a bunch of books, they end up swapping their books by accident and so Towa puts the wrong books in your room only to find out later they were all about how to approach devils and devil porn. This obviously confuses Towa but there was something else more important happening in front of her, you holding her by her wrists and confessing your love to her, then taking your cock out.

>>14399985
Fuck your plausibility, bitch, this is fanfiction. Towa's going to suck my dick willingly and given half a chance I bet you would too.

>>14400311
Plausibility makes me hard. I'll suck your cock all you want if you write me a plausible in character story. Pic related, me on the left

>>14400460
That sounds kinda gay, anon.

>>14400460
Whoa. Anon selling his mouth out for the low price of an indirect handjob.

>>14400460
Fuck whatever it is that you said, this pic you posted is hot.
Where is the Soda sex? Why aren't there more stories about Soda sex?

>>14400508
Is it? I didn't know.

>>14400653
Because no one knows how to write Sora. They "know", but they don't know. No one wants to tackle on the daisenpai without it being perfect. You wouldn't want to disappoint her, would you?

>>14400762
>You wouldn't want to disappoint her, would you?
I barely watch her, but even if I did, I've already come to terms that I'll never be able to impress a Goddess or live by her standards. No matter what, she'll be disappointed in me.
It's sad, but it is what it is.

>>14400862
But anon... that applies to all of them to you...

Greetings, anons. Something came to my mind.
When I visited Kiwi Farms once, I saw somebody there purposefully posting shit here to stir up trouble.
From the little discussion I had earlier with some anons in this very thread, it seems to me logical thinking is not their strength.
Yet they're readers and/or writers; readers can be malicious or ignorant, and any worthy writer puts his or her heart in his or her writings.
And though constant exposure to a site such as this can harden your heart and make your mind longanimous, how do you judge truth from falsehood?
That's why I recommend these books to those who aren't versed in logic or critical thinking:

A Rulebook for Arguments by Anthony Weston
The Critical Thinking Toolkit by Peter S. Fosl
Introduction to Logic by Irving Copi
Parerga and Paralipomena, Vol. 1 and 2 (specially 2), by Arthur Schopenhauer

You can read them all or just one of them. You can find them all for free at Library Genesis.

>>14401177
Unfortunately, yes. But that's exactly why in the case of the others, I've decided to just give it my all and hope for the best.
There's no way I'd amaze/impress them, so there's no real reason to bother over it.

>>14400762
I would honestly feel disgusted if I wrote smut of Sora.

>>14402091
Haha yes!... I... I relate! I totally didn't do it already... and I totally don't want to do it again...

>>14401987
I think most people tend to forget most vtubers, streamers and any internet personalities are fucking losers and suck just at much you do. The only difference is that they have fame and an audience. They're not people you should put on pedestals to impress.

>>14403296
If that's the case, why do we like them? They're either better or equal to us, even if their superiority is just in entertaining us or inspiring feelings in us. If they're better, then it's only natural to aspire to their recognition, thereby becoming aware we ourselves get better; if they're equal, then wanting to impress them is just a mild form of narcissism, of self-flattery. Where's the wrong?

>>14403296
Think a little nore deeply on what a person "better" than you is, and then think on how "better" people are traditionally viewed. Everyone is "just a person" with their own flaws and strengths, and any attempt to drag them down to your level is just as arbitrary as idolatry.

They are in a position to be admired, have a large audience, and make a lot more money than you do. Those are almost certainly traditional traits for admiration.

>>14289330
While sexing your animal chuuba gf one night she squirts all over you. Thinking that you did a really good job you happily go to bed. The next day other animal chuubas start acting strangely around you. Some of them almost seem to be flirting with you while others seem openly hostile for no reason. It's only when one of these other girls locks you in an empty room with her and tries to rape you that you realize your gf marked you as her own property and now other girls are acting territorial and trying to take you as their own.

>>14403675
>>14404274
I think it's my bad for not elaborating more but the point I was going for was that some people think that famous internet personalities are so far above everyone else that these people are not sated or satisfied by what the average joe enjoys or is impressed by. There's no doubt about it that a lot of them have higher standards for what amazes/impresses them but it's not out of reach like >>14401987 said. They may just as well suck as much as average joe in some aspects or suffer from many problems but we could never know that if they don't decide to show it, meaning they come as more 'perfect' than everyone else and seemingly harder to impress.

They're not impossible to impress, maybe just a little harder to do so but it is possible.

>>14404952
Case in point, Nene suffering from depression but no one ever knew until it was too late.

>>14404952
I think that's true, but in a manner of speaking, it being harder to impress them is definitely a function of fame. If you're inundated with fanwork, it's natural that only the exceptional will stand out. Now, this isn't exactly the angle that anon was taking, but still, these things have a way of fulfilling themselves.

>>14400460
>Jamming your tongue down Sora's throat and squeezing her butt while her kouhais talk about how seiso she is within earshot
Oh Baby!

>>14406064
>Fingering Sora under the table while she shakily admits she's just a normal girl despite everyone directly across from you insisting how perfect she is

>>14404564
So many stories that are right up my aisle, so little time...

>>14406260
> Sora sucking you off under the table while her kouhai discusses how she was the reason for her joining Hololive and she is an inspiration to thousands of young girls out there struggling

>>14406532
>All the other girls hearing what they think is her practicing high notes and talk about how she's such a dedicated and hardworking idol even though it's really the two of you having sex

>>14406064
>>14406260
>>14406532
>>14406721
i've never been so bored by erp in my entire life. you're basically just saying the same thing over and over again.

>>14406957
No faggots allowed here

>>14406957
It's a good thing it's not erp then, homo.

>>14289330
Marine Facesitting onegai

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qxEriKjRPEs

>>14406957
Wrong attitude, peko

>>14289330
Was watching a few YouTube videos until this pop up.
https://youtu.be/HYLiSZvuRy0
How about a story where Pomu is just some frank girl with no filter and speaks what she thinks.

>>14407513
Damn, Pomu is fucking thicc bitch.

>>14407572
I just love her response and how she didn’t just hesitate to answer it. I fucking love my wagie wife.

>>14406990
KEK

>>14406957
That's not ERP though? That's just regular greentext.

>>14407627
>wagie
I can save her from her life as a wage slave.

>>14407766
It’s too late. She’s a cake.

>>14407787
There's still a chance to save her and give her a child.

>>14407513
DAMN! That Pomu bitch build like a 200 pound dumbbell!

New thread
>>14407813

>>14407734
it's basically erp

>>14408514
Bro this ERP you're doing of being a massive retard is making me sooo horny

>>14408545
please explain to me how 2 anons trying to turn each other on via text isn't erp. and don't say it's just a joke.

>>14408598
Is writing stories or prompts ERP?

>>14408676
it is when you do it collaboratively.

>>14408807
I don't see your logic

>>14408826
how on earth could you not see that 2 people writing small extensions of the same erotic story to each other is erp?

>>14408988
You're retarded

>>14408988
... because it doesn't make sense? That could apply to a lot of stuff

>>14408988
Because ERP is specifically two people trying to make one another cum. By that logic every NSFW story is ERP with the anonymous viewer. Shut the fuck up, retard

>>14409004
>>14409165
You dumbasses, I was egging him on to make him keep on explaining because it's clearly bait but you actually fell for it. Takes a special kind of retard to not know it's earlyfag

>>14409223
why would the earlyfag (who is not me) bait after the new thread is posted? regardless, it is objectively erp, you have not given a single reason as to why it's not, and you are a retard.
captcha: smh4n

>>14409165
there is a distinct back and forth of erotic dialouge between 2 people, that's erp.

>>14409325
>why would the earlyfag
Earlyfag is just an excuse by people here to shit up the thread.