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>>13271137
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>>13271193
A story where Matsuri, in one of her menhera episodes, rapes her little brother by threatening suicide.

>>13271193
Need fic in which (You) make one of the brats bounce and moan on (you)r cock

>>13271217
We need this.

>>13271193
Requesting a combination of Apple of Her Eye and Strange Examinations (basically a chuuba is your pediatrician and you get raped)

>>13271859
I read the Irys and Risu one. I think... hmm, how do I put this? You know what you want from the story and it plays out fine enough, but the writing is amateurish to say the least. There are some grammatical errors here and there like "in to" instead of "into' which could've been easily noticed if you used google docs instead, but those are ignorable.

The dialogue is pretty cringe, NGL, even if you poke fun at it mid-story it doesn't change the fact that it is. You tried too hard to get in Risu's nut jokes and the like and it ended up being forced, not to mention copied. The "submissive and breedable" comment sounds like you just watched some clips of her and decided to throw them into your story because you couldn't really tell what she really was like.

I think you should work on getting in some more natural dialogue and improving your vocabulary as well as your descriptions. It is rushed which I'm assuming is how you people at the kronii general prefer to do things, but over here we like longer, more thought out stories rather than short ones and greentexts.

I don't think anyone can get off to a girl screaming "UWA" when she is cumming, just to give an example of weird stuff.

I'll try to do it in my style and see if you can spot some differences, not to jerk myself off of course but I'm doing it anyway.

> "Unlike Risu she decides to pull out suddenly and glaze your face, licking her lips seductively as Risu simply laughs at you and calls you a “nut slut”"

"Unlike Risu, Irys decides to pull out her cock from your mouth, choosing instead to cum outside all over your face. With a loud moan, rope after rope of her thick cum hits you, on the cheeks; on your forehead; on your eyes, which you instinctively close; you can feel how warm and sticky her hot seed is, compared to Risu's goopier and heavier loads. Some of it lands on your open mouth and the familiar fizzy taste of soda is instantly apparent. Risu laughs at the sight as she strokes her cock, calling you a "nut slut" whilst biting her lips. Irys struggles to stay standing as her hips continue to thrust forward with each shot of her cum, and with it a sweet moan escapes from her mouth."

You also kind of ignored the afterglow of the orgasms, the hot panting, the shaking legs and the seductive looks as her cocks begin to harden again. That kind of stuff. Instead you just skipped straight to dialogue which was a jarred transition.

I can see potential but I'm guessing you pump out these stories in one go without caring about size, which is not something I personally recommend. It's good to sleep on it. Maybe write 1k words right before bed and finish it the the night after. It'll be much easier to spot mistakes and things it is lacking then when you're now out of the horny state of the night before and with a clearer mind. I think you also could work on using more of their bodies instead of just the cocks and a short mention of grabbing their butt for support like her hips thrusting, them fondling their tits and things alike.

>>13277562
Cheers anon, I’ll try and address these criticisms, they’re all completely valid points - this is why harsh feedback can be good.
Honestly I usually just do the stories more or less in one go, and I only started writing with Kronii’s debut anyway, so it’s not surprising it comes off as amateurish. I started because of the (then) lack of futa art, and the fact that Kronii’s clock jokes were funny, but also because I saw a couple other anons posting fics and prompts. So I spammed prompts for a couple threads and thought “fuck it” - it got archived by the thread archivists and inspired me to write more. I never actually posted much here although I did lurk a little. My first fic was a Kronii auto paizuri one which is probably even worse than this one, although desu I seldom re read my old stuff that often
As for the nut jokes and cringy dialogue those were mainly because I wanted it to be different to my normal Kronii stuff, but they were definitely kinda forced in hindsight. I will freely admit I don’t watch Risu much, I mostly watch Kronii, IRyS and Fauna, and even then because of my bong timezone it’s more often clips than I’d like. That and work/Uni mean it’s not easy to catch streams with paperwork and stuff to do even if the time is fine
Also being a kissless virgin means I’m relying on things I’ve read, seen and so on rather than real experiences. As a result I know I end up focusing a lot on futa dicks and nothing else, but I will try and consider other things too. At the moment I put up a lot of prompts rather than full fics. Also it doesn’t help I mostly phonepost, which makes my typing slow but still kind-of rushed and sometimes leaves me with autocorrect and grammatical mistakes.
Thank you anon, it’s nice to get proper feedback, including strong criticism. I have work and uni reps that take priority but this is a nice side interest and I enjoy writing to a small extent. Oftentimes though I’ll write a bit, burn out, and then forget where I was going as I don’t plan stories beyond prompts. That’s why I usually do them in one go. That, and my multi part fics (except the Council onahole/Kroniihole one and the IRyS bartender one) usually end up long, rambling and confused without even being that popular, probably because I lose focus. I’m likely to stick with IRyS, Kronii and Fauna for the time being much as I have wanted to try Suisei and Reine, as it would take time to learn both of them.

>>13279769
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EV78exDFWrQ

>>13274639
I know, its why I requested it.

>>13271165
Just a little something that came to the mind when watching Okayu's Setsuna Plus MV.

Rice Balls[~800 words]
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSd2crt2ky_82IePLIYUH0ZPga9w3XDYv6oRPX2-oum9t77lOmX55sRLAsgyGaJ8FWR8uAPin14Fyy7/pub

>>13284763
Pretty cute little story, narration fits Okayu experimenting with the onigiris and getting close with them. A few bits felt like the tense was off, or moved onto the next sentence a bit jarringly. Otherwise, cute and short story.

>>13284763
Short and sweet, with narration that works with Okayu's character. I think some of the tenseness that >>13285280 describes could have been fixed by adding a few more sentences or doing a second pass in editing it... but for something that I think came from a brief thought. It's pretty good.

I could be brown, I could be blue. I could be violet sky. I could be hurtful, I could be purple. I can be anything you like.
I could be brown, I could be blue. I could be violet sky. I could be hurtful, I could be purple. I can be anything you like.
I could be brown, I could be blue. I could be violet sky. I could be hurtful, I could be purple. I can be anything you like.
I could be brown, I could be blue. I could be violet sky. I could be hurtful, I could be purple. I can be anything you like.
I could be brown, I could be blue. I could be violet sky. I could be hurtful, I could be purple. I can be anything you like.
I could be brown, I could be blue. I could be violet sky. I could be hurtful, I could be purple. I can be anything you like.

>>13271193
Giving Polka this coupon.

>>13287146
This makes me wish I was somehow flexible enough to eat a girls pussy while she rides me with my cock in her ass. The power of clussy.....

>>13287512
> ???
Huh? Like this? I don't think it's about being flexible

>>13286959
I wish she just fucking sang the whole song or at least the full chorus instead of this bullshit tiktok meme. Grace Kelly is a good song.

>>13288259
is he penetrating her fucking spine

>>13288387
Exactly. It's not about being flexible. Her asshole would have to be on her back or his cock as long as a flute while soft

>>13288259
>>13288419
Well no I was thinking it would be similar to the type of flexibility needed to suck your own cock. Actually you wouldn't need to be that flexible because the clussy is closer.

>>13288259
I'm a bit confused as to what the penis is doing in that picture.

Why the fuck is it called the birds and the bees? Shouldn't it be the bees and the flowers or something? I have no idea why birds and the bees is even a thing.

>>13290368
Birds mouth = vag
bee stinger = peen

guessing that bees and flowers be too obvious.

>>13290368
because bees get fucked on by birds

>>13290368
Because it's an old expression that stuck due to conveying an idea that's hard to talk about.

>>13284763
Really cute. It feels like it does describe Okayu's relationship with her fans, in an odd way.

>>13290368
It's vague and weird on purpose

>>13271193
Quantumly cucking Matsuri. No matter what she does, who she goes to see, whoever she wants to do anything with is too busy being fucked by you. It gets to the point where Matsuri, during a Corp outing in which every girl has their own room at the hotel, runs from door to door only to find you fucking whoever she's trying to visit, without fail. I want this menhera bitch to hear the ultra instinct music as everyone she wants to freak out over that day is too busy getting pounded into next week.

>>13295311
This but it ends with the reveal that matsuri's just experiencing her personal hell after she dies during a menhera episode.

>>13271193
Being in a relationship with Haato and any normal intimate things you do as a couple are payed back in degeneracy with Haachama later that night.

>Kiss in the morning before you leave for work? Wakes you up roughly riding your face claiming you kissed the wrong of pair of lips
>Loving handjob in the shower? Rough reacharound while she leaves hickeys on your neck and doesn't slow down even if you cum
>Gentle handholding missionary? Rides you like a jackhammer while shoving her tongue down your throat

>>13297592
Wait how does this work when Haachama is the true personality like her schizo lore implies? Would it imply she truly just wants absolute degenerate fucking?

>>13297890
>Would it imply she truly just wants absolute degenerate fucking?
Maaaaaaybe

>>13297890
You know, if you wear the mask long enough you'll believe it's the real you. Haato is Haato and that will never EVER change, no matter what that Australian whore does to her body.

>>13271193
Omega being an onahole for futanari Council as well as A-chan and IRyS. After all, someone has to manage their libidos.

>>13298102
I can almost smell who this is.

>>13298102
Honestly, /oo/'s archive probably has that. I don't know for sure though.

Night 1 of 7 at Risu's house survived. Hopefully anon won't be raped or something...

Today marks the 12th time I went over the 3K words I've written and rewrote some parts again. Surely this isn't me being paranoid about her personality and the plot or anything.

>>13298474
what

>>13298142
Most I've seen of Omega in the /infinity/ archive is (You) having gay sex with Omega.

>>13297890
I thought the schizo lore was that Haato was the real one and Haachama was her sister that got isekai'd by Truck-kun

>>13295991
Matsuri wakes up sequel?

>>13298712
Are clocks gayer than teamates?

>>13299205
Huh? I know the schizo lore is shit haato made up while editing it all together but I thought the general implication was that 'Haato' was never the real one the body has always been Haachama's with 'Haato' being someone that Haachama knew that died in the distant past.

Dead fucking thread.

>>13301960
Probably because its very early in the morning for most of the civilized world.

>>13301960
It's 6am for me man. Earlier in other places. Most of the authors here are for some form of the Americas. Chill.

>>13302099
>>13302194
>44 posts not including ours in 14 hours
Dead, so dead.

>>13302099
We need more Suisex to revive this thread.

I'm just lurking to see what requests get done.

>>13304147
Not a lot get done honestly.

>>13304231
nah

>>13304231
There's a few I'm interested in but feel as though I can't do justice.

>>13304356
Same here. I'm still stuck trying to do a yandere Watame doujin but i've literally rewritten it three times that it's starting to bum me out.

>>13304431
I feel the same way with the las vegas prompt. Something just isn't clicking.

>>13304431
>Finished Futa Luna story
>Spent so much time obsessing over getting Luna right writing the entire thing felt like I wanted to fucking die and I hate the end result

>>13304431
>doujin
I meant to write fic but same thing applies lol

>>13304662
You ready to get a whole 3 replies, one of which will be berating you for getting her character wrong?

>>13304794
Three? Holy shit, it must be Christmas.

>>13304794
Isn't luna's character just a drool sucking baby? Shouldn't be too hard.

>>13305117
I dunno, I don't watch her. Got filtered hard on debut when she was a stuck-up bitch, but even now I couldn't get past that baby-talk filter, even if I wanted to.

>>13304560
Oh you're doing the gen 1 buries Chris in the Nevada Desert prompt.
Yeah, do not envy you there. That prompt needs you to nail like three things, Gen 1' s characterization feeling right, making the Las Vegas section compelling enough to read through, and making the dark humor of them burying Hitomi Chris land.
I wish you luck, and I hope you can write it out.

>>13305117
Chuubas with verbal ticks provide the hardest of challenges. Rushia is easy mode, Pekora mid level, Luna is hard mode. You'd think it's simple but Luna is a very complex girl.

>>13305945
Luna is as simple and uninteresting as watching a freshly-painted brick on new seeded turf.

>>13306124
This but Fubuki, Sora, Azki, Aki, Lamy, Flare, Choco and all of HoloEN except Irys

>>13297890
>>13299580
Where the heck did you get that from? The final stream of the COEXIST arc:
https://youtu.be/LTcpdUrF4iM?t=546

explained that Haato and Haachama were sisters in childhood, until Haachama died in a traffic accident.

Later arcs (yes, the lore actually still continues to this day. It's just that the focus shifted away from their relationship after May to the supernatural side of Haachama) would further push the idea that Haachama became some kind of crazy-powerful god-like being with stuff like:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3-wS69j5eU

https://youtu.be/z28xfePCnmM?t=1036
(Haachama saying she's -3 years old)

https://youtu.be/mRCfFS0SsCk?t=108

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6DcLalmvkI

>>13297890
>>13299580
Where the heck did you get that from? The final stream of COEXIST:
https://youtu.be/LTcpdUrF4iM?t=546

explained that Haato and Haachama were sisters in childhood, until Haachama died in a traffic accident. Then as we all know, Haachama started returning and took control of her sister's body from 2020 onward.

Later arcs (yes, the lore still continues to this day. It's just that the focus shifted away from their relationship after May, to Haachama and the supernatural) would push the idea that Haachama became some kind of crazy-powerful god-like being after death, with stuff like:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3-wS69j5eU

https://youtu.be/z28xfePCnmM?t=1070
(Haachama saying she's -3 years old)

https://youtu.be/mRCfFS0SsCk?t=108

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6DcLalmvkI

>>13306195
Jesus fucking christ, this is a fucking fanfiction thread and I'm STILL cringing at that garbage.

>>13306181
>all of HoloEN except Irys
correct

Fuck, I'm watching first aid videos and I just realized now that I know how to do it I won't be able to properly write a clueless anon who doesn't know what he is doing...

>>13307158
Just do the opposite of what you think is right or something

>>13307158
>watch first aid videos
>complain when they give you an idea if how to approach first aid
Nigga Wut R U Smoking???

>>13306482
The fuck? I always saw it as Haato was the one that died in the accident and Haachama was the one that was the one that was the true owner of the body...
Though thinking on it a bit more. My theory is more based around the fact that during the stream bleedthroughs when lore broke into streaming, Haato felt like a hollow copy of the old personality that just had the 'seiso' while haachama was the whole part of the personality; with their fused character being more Haachama than Haato.

>>13308405
>I always saw it as Haato was the one that died in the accident
Nah, it's Haachama who died for sure since the dialogue in https://youtu.be/LTcpdUrF4iM?t=731 was coming from Haato.
>"There's no way Haachama is gone... We promised each other that we would stay together forever..."

>Though thinking on it a bit more. My theory is...
That's an interesting interpretation, but I think that's mostly because in real life, Haato is ultimately a character Haachama plays while the character of Haachama is basically just the streamer herself, so that's why Haato feels like a hollow copy/sometimes wildly inconsistent.

There's also the fact that Haachama kinda forgot what Haato was supposed to be like since she created Haachama, as debut Haato and the Haato from February onward is very different (debut Haato is a tsundere whereas Haato from February has none of the tsun, though I suppose you could chalk that up to her evolving to the final stage of being a classic tsundere).

And then there's this picture which I think is a very amusing comparison.

>>13271193
As a plan to satisfy a long-hidden fetish of hers, Korone takes to aggressively spoiling Okayu, doing chores for her, constantly asking for ways to please her, and never letting her lift a finger to strain or stress herself.

Over time, catto's personality begins to slowly shift to become whinier and more demanding as she expects doggo to fulfill all her whims until she's essentially an out-of-shape abusive househusband, constantly glutting herself on all manner of worldly pleasures and backhanding Korone over petty shit like not being able to know what she wanted for dinner without asking. Korone, of course, gets wet from the violence and attitude.

>>13311076
nice

>>13271165
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTE5EAyV5ycxMttRL0zF4RbYJLiZDZGfEb2GJbts7B55D3gRtrSPQloGFVWGd8JU4xeMbu9AkFlOmbb/pub

Two more chapters of Sakura Summer for you.

>>13312505
That was as intentionally unpleasant as the rest of it, so good work!

I do find Anon not commenting on Reine's schizo moodswings weird. Or maybe I'm just retarded and missed when he did.

>>13312505
I mean this in the best way possible. Reading this fic is like watching a car crash. I want to stop reading but I'm just too enthralled. Reine's moodswings and her taking complete advantage of Miko's innocence makes me feel so ugh. And I can't help feel awful for anon, he's going through hell.

Another bang up job anon, I look forward to the next chapters.

Enna LOVE

Was browsing Sankaku looking for references because I wanna write a Marine abuse/heavy Ryona smut fic, but saw a pic where's she's being fucked by black dude and her pussy prolapses. Now I'm disgusted and racist. There're some seriously sick shit out there under extreme content, reconsidering if my fic would be a good idea.

>>13271165
A fic about (you) growing up with the Myths after being adopted by Ina and having strange feelings for them as you get older. The happy times end when your home is attacked by the Nijis. The Myths are defeated, chained, and forced to watch as the enemy violates their most precious treasure; you. 8k+ words long.

First time writing in 2nd person and doing something like this, sorry in advance. For anyone that is /here/ I deeply apologize, this was not meant to advocate tribalism. I like both factions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSns-n2tzLE_sQwwAJhPOrqWdx5hTeFuJ7KZp5_-moKo2uMLCidA3c4o1FcqxdqVvlFhFj0wQfd5jGu/pub?embedded=true

>>13316769
I didn't need this kind of pain, anon.

>>13316769
Man, I've never had fic that left my dick hard but my heart broken.

The way each of Myth eventually cracks and begins to cry really got to me, but holy crap was all the Obsydia stuff hot as hell. It made for an excellent dichotomy.

Fantastic work, anon.

>>13316769
Where's the sequel where Gura summons all of Atlantis, Ina asks a favor from the Ancient Ones, Mori summons the entire underworld and every Ame from every timeline join forces, all to rescue you in a yandere fueled unyielding rage? Those niji bitches need to be put in their place.

>>13312505
This is absolutely compelling. The unease, that feeling of being powerless, the narration. I fucking love reading this... even if at this point the connection they have to their characters is at best kind of skin deep. Like I wouldn't have read this if the characters hadn't been them but it's kind of undeniable that at this point the characters really aren't them. I still find this compelling to read though.

>>13318752
Yeah, unfortunately that's true. I think I'm writing Reine alright but I know Miko isn't really Miko. I'm having to fit them into such a way that makes them both true to who they as while being true to what the story is based from which is difficult.

I'm glad you find it good regardless. I'll keep trying to write them a bit more in character but unfortunately I'm a bit restricted by certain things in that realm. Thank you though.

>>13313245
>>13315244
Thanks a lot. I appreciate the feedback. I'll probably have two or three more chapters before the grand finale'. That'll really be a spectacle.

As always though, I'll make sure it ends on a happy note. They're gonna be ok by the end of it.

>>13321196
>grand finale
reine's gonna make anon and miko fuck isn't she

>>13321553
Worse, my friend. Worse.

>>13322310
What? How can you get worse than that? Don't tell me

>>13312505
I have never felt more uncomfortable reading something in my entire life.

Enna LOVE

>>13322442
making them have sex would be shocking, disturbing, terrible. It'd stick with readers and hit them hard.

I aim to make the finale traumatizing. I intend to make it something so pernicious that it'll stick with viewers. No so much a bomb as it is radiation poisoning. I won't spoil it, but look forward to it.

>>13322447
Glad to hear it haha.

>>13323168
were you molested/are you a molester? abuse was way too well written

>>13323335
If this is the same guy who wrote the other fic about Anon getting raped by Marine and Suisei, then he said he was molested in the past, yes.

>>13323367
l-link?

>>13323419
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTtEm3gcVnCbzdQxEOLlAvgIO_hEEXfK1w0FIljjxNrF8AsaIM1NShNMOiEOj7PEm1w7ACoiC-lJjag/pub

>>13323494
>The apple of Her Eye
a classic...

>>13323335
I was molested yeah. This is basically me doing therapy right now and chronicling what has happened to me. Apple of Her Eye was the same. These are the tame memories too, except for the ending planned for Sakura Summer. Unfortunately I'll probably not be able to write the really bad memories because it's gross.

>>13323803
holy shit, these two fics aren't the bad stuff? god fucking damn

>>13323803
It sucks that you had to go through that but im sure writing about it helps

>>13323835
The ending to SS is going to be one of the single worst memories I have. The other stuff is just... degenerate in a way I know nobody will read. So I'll just save those stories for some other outlet.

>>13324022
damn, I know it's 4chan and all but damn, that's awful

>>13323803
Dude...I hope things are going better for you. Maybe that's why this shit is so horribly uncomfortable to read. Hopefully this makes it easier to deal with in some way shape or form.

>>13324006
>>13324132
It is helping a bit, especially ending it happily. Ending Apple of Her Eye with Sora like that was so excellent for me to write. It's the ending I wanted and I'll make Sakura Summer the same. I'm glad I found this place and am able to do this. It's helpful.

>>13324812
godspeed anon

I wish I was molested so I could write impactful stories too

>>13325321
>Amelia begins winding the watch while convincing Kronii that it's literally what he wants and she's doing the world a favor by allowing famed trauma author Anonymous to be born

>>13325443
Reminds me of the Ame grooming you to be the perfect husband prompt from like the really early abuse threads.

>>13324812
Well, shit, I'm super glad you've found a way to cope to with that kind of trauma. That's fucked up.

>>13324812
You'll write your own happy ending soon enough anonchama.

>>13324022
share them or no balls

>>13326182
This by a wide fucking margin, holy shit. Trust me, if Hell exists, I'm sure there's a special place there for whoever did this to him.

> tfw you realize you made the MC and several other characters of your series immortal because of some dumb shit you wrote in the first chapter
I need to think this through a bit more. "Any wound the shadowless get is healed as soon as the blood is cleaned" sounded good at first but now I just realize it's just immortality. I have an idea on what to do with it but it would mean no one would want to kill those characters because it only creates more danger.

>>13318520
>spoiler
I fully support this. LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOO !

>>13324108
4chan and having a moral compass aren't mutually exclusive, anon. Remember, we're Chaotic NEUTRAL, not Chaotic Evil.

>>13328453
What if it's an internal injury? Like a broken neck or a dying heart.

>>13328453
>as soon as the blood is cleaned"
Poisoned/tainted projectiles, baby, let's goooooooooooooo

>>13328625
you're a chaotic faggot

>>13328646
I don't know if you care enough about the series for spoilers but I have several ideas on what to do with it and some of them contradict each other. Once I decide what I want from it, in the next chapter I would explain it as one of these things:

> the wound actually heals when it isn't under exposure of light so you could wrap your hand around your cut wrist and it would heal, for example. This would imply however that your insides will always heal because there's no light inside which would be overpowered.

> you can only heals wounds under the light which would fix the internal stuff but would make the power very weak, which I guess it's fine.

> You can heal superficial wounds quicker than internal ones but the spilling of a shadowless blood attracts the shadow creatures or maybe creates them or even allows them to step outside the shadow to get to the blood, so the deeper the injury the more blood spilled, the longer it takes to heal and the more it attracts baddies.

> The amount of blood a shadowless person has is limited and doesn't heal, the implication would be that your shadow became your blood and that you can lose it by bleeding. This would mean that the shadowless can heal much faster but once they're out of blood they just drop dead.

It's hard to decide what I'll go with, and more ideas constantly pop up in my head. Option 3 seems the most balanced but also a bit weird to explain. I guess all of them are weird.

>>13329169
Oops I meant option 4 is balanced. I added another one inbetween after I wrote that conclusion.

>>13327783
I mean I'm not opposed to it per say but I'll just put it to you this way: most of it has to do with diapers.

That's why I'm pretty sure no one is gonna go for it. I mean if people are fine with it I'll give it a write but if you think this stuff is bad, you're really going to hate what my writing is on that.

>>13327207
>>13326182
I'm working for it. I've made a lot of recovery in recent months and this is only helping the process.

>>13329169
The second option seems the most balanced but I guess that demands on how much light is in your story.

>>13329169
I forget, didn't Happy Chaos have a bullet that damaged Sol Badguy and it didn't heal? What were the mechanics of that? Could you ape that? I dunno, I never finished the Guilty Gear Strive movie. Or Xrd Revelator for that matter.

>>13329507
Good Lord. I'd read it and I'd even suspend my retarded rule of not reading in progress stuff to do so. So you'll get at least one reader if you share all the trauma you experienced.

>>13329600
Unfortunately, light is ever so present in this series. It is more important than food or water, it is the lifeline of the survivors. Without it the shadow creatures take you so you need to always be not touching shadows aka staying inside light. The way I could make option 2 work would be that you need to directly shine the light on the wound for it to heal and that the stronger the light the quicker it heals, also that if you were to get shot on the stomach for example you'd have to walk around without a shirt to actually heal. It's complicated stuff.

>>13329169
I think option 3 raises more questions about what being shadowless means more than anything.
So in theory that sounds like it resolves shit, gives you some plausible story reason for your MC living through shit, while also still keeping stakes if they're wounded due to effectively meaning they'll drown in shadows if they try and regen tank wounds. Not to mention keeps a nice question that'll stay while readers speculate what being shadowless means in the setting... even if the discussion right now makes me think you have no clue what it means as well.

>>13330065
I mean, I have an endgame in mind obviously. Even though it's not very ironed out I have ideas for explanations and what the ending will be. It's just the "getting there while making sense" that is the hard part. I don't think you NEED to know what you'll write ahead of time, it's just that it creates some annoying plotholes that you'll need to fix later if you're not careful. I'd say Jojo but that series is too well known for its plotholes, but well, it is what it is. I'll admit however that hearing the author freaking out over what to do with the plot isn't very motivating.

Glad to hear Shadowlive is still going.

>>13331201
Why made you think it had stopped?

>>13331416
Poor phrasing. It's more like "I'm glad it's still engaging the author and they're enjoying working on it/discussing it".

>>13331525
Why?

>>13331716
Because creativity, energy, and the freedom to engage with both and start making something comes and goes whenever the fuck it wants, I enjoy the series thus far, it's nice to see someone brainstorming ideas and interacting with their reader base/getting the advice they asked for, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it when the time comes. That a comprehensive enough answer for the simple statement of "Oh, this isn't something that you're tired of, that's great"?

>>13331817
But why?

>>13331817
For now.

>>13331817
Serious talk tho I haven't started the 5th chapter yet but I already have it in mind how like the first 3-4K words of it will play out. I'm busy with another fic but I'm quite eager to get back to it. Thank you for reading it, it's very fun to do something SFW with some more creative tones, even if I don't know what the fuck I'm doing.

>>13331908
Forever

>>13271193
Suisei getting corrupted and addicted to Suisex.

>>13334112
Don't be greedy.

>>13316769
This is fine. This is fine. This is fine. This is not fine.

Whoa Whoa Whoa, not quite yet!

>>13337226
What, are we sliding that fast?

Been going through the backlog of stories I haven't read, just finished defective. Isn't defective just a metaphor for circumcision?

>>13337226
That is one fluffy tail

>>13338240
Yes

>>13337864
When I looked we were at page 10 yeah

>>13338675
It is. I love everything about Kujira's Fubuki, she always looks so soft

>>13339282
Gives me the same feeling that matthewanon's fubuki stories do

>>13339282
This picture makes me want to hug this fox and smell her hair.

>>13340649
I wanna hug her as tight as I can, cause if I let go I'm worried I'll wake up from my dream.

>>13340852
These photos make me want to fug the fox then hug the fox.

>>13340852
pet the fox

What ratio of "you" to word count is too much? Some anon mentioned this earlier that there are fics with over 10% of words being just "you" and it makes one question themselves.

>>13341935
Just...just don't think about it. Don't think about it, Anon.

>>13341935
Anon that's like asking if your using 'I' too much in a first person work.
Don't worry about it. Just make sure it's good to read through and worry about overuse if it's impacting the quality of the fic you're making.

Fuck, I now realize my supposedly smut fic is going to reach 5K words before any sex even begins. Hopefully it won't bore the shit out of readers with their cock in hand...

>>13342502
Nothing wrong with ample setup provided it's done well. It can increase the smut's quality, even.

>>13342633
Well the scenario is anon finding things odd and his suspicion slowly rising before he eventually figures it out and gets raped because of it. It's just that it's kind of niche fetish and not a mystery to the reader, only the anon.

>>13342671
Hey, also nothing wrong with that. While mysteries in which the actual culprit and the like is revealed to everyone - including the reader - the kind of mystery where you KNOW what's going to happen but THEY don't is still very entertaining. It's all about the tension breaking when it actually happens - like a slasher fic. Like, yeah, you know Jason's about to totally appear and fucking decapitate that dipshit, but THEY don't know that. When it all finally happens at once, it's great. Anon pinpointing exactly what's happening to him - far too late to stop it - is something I love exploring and reading about.

>>13342502
There's nothing wrong with a bit of setup before the fun.

Jesus all you guys talk about that isn't obvious bait is just sex sex and sex, same for the stories. When's the last time a non-memey sfw story gets posted?

>>13342727
Here, I wrote you a haiku.

Anon sucks veiny cocks
He whines but does nothing
To solve his issue.

>>13342727
Uhh....this fucking thread?

>>13342727
The fuck does non-memey sfw mean

>>13342922
Presumably just straight sfw fluff or something since they seem to have a stick up their ass about comedy

>>13342727
Sex good. Make feel good. Like sex.

>>13342727
I'll release one in the next week or two maybe? I just really want to finish my Risu fic before November ends so that I can marry that one anon.

>>13343627
so you can what

i am incredibly horny for suisei right now

>>13342727
Anon this story literally got posted this thread. >>13284763

>>13317282
>>13318414
>>13318520
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Was planning to upload to A03 as well but decided not to because of the potential arguments. I hope everyone can enjoy all vtubers equally without making it a competition.

>>13335169
Yeah the scene with the vine creeping near Ame's eye is definitely a Berserk reference, heh.

>>13344707
That purple haired giraffe laughs too much, MY purple haired giraffe is much cuter.

>>13329507
Oof. Glad to see you're on the road to recovery, Anon. You ever consider turning your story into an actual book, like what the author David Thomas did?

>>13271193
Fubuki in Aogami High School

>>13344730
But the laughter is the best part
Also, is your purple haired giraffe Towa?

>>13344881
Anon ERROR hasn't come out yet.
We still know fuck all about the thing.

>>13345009
I just think Fubuki looks cute in that uniform is all

>>13342727
AZKi's Day Off

Maledom or Femdom?
https://strawpoll.vote/polls/i4ti9alj/vote?s=0
Aka: abusive chuuba or abusing chuuba.
Personally I don't enjoy Femdom, I don't like losing control and being told what to do. But I know lots of you retards have shit taste and don't believe women are objects and their purpose is only for pleasure, fair enough I guess
Let's see what /wg/ prefers

>>13345570
I like both, but I like maledom more frequently.

>>13345570
Also like both but I find I prefer femdom for fics since that lets more character show.

>>13345570
Has anyone ever done a vote to see if there are any femanons ITT?

>>13345728
I think we had like...one who insinuated it but never exactly confirmed it.

>>13345570
I don't like abuse in general, but hitting someone makes me feel bad so I guess femdom

>>13345570
Oh, I misread. Count another for femdom, please

>>13345728
Given the usual bread and butter stories here I find it hard to believe there are any here at all.

>>13345570
In terms of abuse, I'd rather not hit people I like so I'd also choose femdom.

>>13345728
Yeah, it's me. I'm female. I'm also streaming as a vtuber after stealing this shiny stone from Atlantis

>>13345844
They just RP as the chuuba beating the shit out of (You)

>>13345859
Dom isn't just about abuse. It's also power and control, so if you rather the chuuba do you what say during seggs or the other way around.

>>13345965
Okay I realize this is a (probably) a joke, but I don't get how that'd work given that the second person perspective doesn't really work to let you insert you into the chuuba.

>>13347711
Classical third person, omit giving the victim a name and write around it. Could even make it where the chuuba is actively disgusted by the victim and chooses to address them with negative/derogatory language while never uttering a name.

>>13328894
Case in point

>>13339783
I'm so glad I'm not the only one that always imagines Kujira's Fubuki when reading MatthewAnon's stories.

>>13271193
Ina getting ravished by her own tentacles

>>13271217
Trying to stop your fucking menhera sister from killing herself if she doesn't get to touch your dick only for it to turn into fending her off!

>>13345177
I agree. Imagining Fubuki in a school uniform is one of my main driving forces writing the story that I do right now.
It's everything else in said story that's discouraging me.

>>13349591
I am eagerly awaiting your story

>>13350303
Thank you for the interest! I hope it meets your expectations.

You know, reading these two stories back to back probably wasn't the best idea now that I think about it cause I feel like absolute shit. One was an emotional gut punch whose bruise lasted the whole story and the other was like a knife slowly being pressed into your chest like that one scene in Saving Private Ryan and you could only sit and watch as it slowly digs in deeper while you can do nothing to stop it. Just fucking shoot me in the face, this is the worst birthday surprise ever.

>>13312505
Like the others have said, the feeling of unease and disgust that you managed to convey is absolutely spectacular in that horrifying kind of way. The way the story unfolds as it reaches its crescendo just off to the horizon is just incredibly compelling to the point that I can't turn my eyes off it even as it descends into such sickening scenes of debauchery. The Apple Of Her Eye was great but it was contained in the fact that it was written in greentext format so it felt more like a play by play of abuse, this however has no such restraint and your writing proves as much which impresses me just as much as it disturbs me.
My only complaints is that since this story is being filtered through Anon's perspective, the writing should reflect as such because there were one or two sentences that felt slightly off.
All in all, great work and I'm not looking forward to seeing the next chapters. Still gonna read them though.

>>13316769
I just fucking reread Berserk so this is just full blown pain throughout. I didn't read the spoilers so I was completely caught off guard when the story veered off into something I did not expect. The mindbreak of the other Myths as the Nijis violated you was just pain especially as they screamed and begged for it to stop. Ame was the most painful one, the way she was forced to talk about her dreams of the future as she watches it being forcibly taken away was just brutal, Calli is a close second, seeing her cry and beg for it to stop in contrast to how she was at the beginning just made me feel horrible. The semi chub I had throughout the story was also pretty horrible not gonna lie
As your first foray into 2nd person works this is honestly pretty great, is this your first work here because I don't recall reading non 2nd person fics in the archive. Also, I think you're overreacting when it comes to the potential arguments if you post this on A03. If people use the representation of certain chuubas in a fic to promote tribalism then their opinions shouldn't matter in the slightest

>>13271193
holo training arc where they try to learn incredibly complicated yet unoptimized competitive battle system of Pokemon.

>>13271193

A story about classic gang wars, some Compton-ass shit. Thugs with drugs and gangstas with guns, territory wars and shit, San Andreas style.

But the main character is Sakura Miko.

Everyone else treats this little Asian girl hanging out in tha hood, shootin't dice and gangbangin' like it's completely normal.

No other chuubas show up.

It is never brought up.

It is never explained.

>>13287146
Sauce for right image?

>>13349527
You know what, i'm gonna do it

>>13354233
That's the full image pretty much.

So, I just realized people RPs in MMOs especially FF14. Do they usually RP porn though or is it banned? Not serious though, it's just a funny thought because it's similar to wg.

>>13345570
In fictional fetish I prefer femdom, doujins, porn and the like. CBT, urethra insertion, edging, post orgasm torture, milking handjobs, whatever it may be. But when it comes to IRL, fuck no, femdom sucks. I'm very much the dom in the relationship, though I don't think I'm cut out for that slapping in the face or choking bullshit which I find weird for the same reasons I find CBT weird. I suppose my answer will have to be femdom even though I'm maledom IRL since that's the answer that actually matters here.

>>13271193
Making dinner for Suisei while she jokes about how you two are practically a couple.

>>13316769
Holy shit nice diz made my dick goes pew pew

I find it very interesting that no one is archiving the massive stories Luna's assistant author is dropping on the horny threads. I guess none of you browse there anymore? Anyway he just finished a third or maybe even fourth story and says he'll be going away for a while now so you lost your chance to request him some greentext of your fetish. I'm too lazy to link it all.

>>13359638
That rushia story cover most of my fetish so I'm cool with it

I just want to touch Marine's butt.

>>13362193
I've been thinking about writing a fic of you molesting Marine on a train and she just gives in and lets you take her to a love hotel afterwards but I don't think it's a good idea.

>>13271193

Here's a thought experiment

You, your favorite chuubah, and your most hated chuubah are all trapped in a shipping container, surrounded by other containers, trapping the three of you inside. It's going to be at least two weeks until you are freed at port. All the three of you have are some food which is the last thing you ate some water, and the stuff the container was shipping, which is the first thing you see when you look up from the screen you're reading this on

Who's stuck in there with you, what are you eating, what is it shipping, and what happens?

>>13362257
That sounds like a great idea what are you talking about?

>>13362257
I'm the kind of person who wants something consensual, sweet, and affectionate, which I know goes against the majority in these threads, but, getting the chance to grope her bare butt would be really nice.

>>13362273
Me, Marine and Ayame (I don't really hate any chuubas desu, just some minor dislikes), we have BBQ to eat with mayo and rice. The thing that I have in there with me is my whole damn closet.

Week 1, Marine cracks some jokes at first to alleviate the situation, saying we'll be fine and that someone will come for us and that we should just enjoy this time to talk to each other. I try to spend my time either working out or sleeping to save energy while Marine tries to get acquainted with Ayame. After the few days, the happy mask of Marine starts to crack, I can hear her sobbing herself to sleep silently in the cold metal floor of the container that is now her bed. Ayame is just really pessimistic and doesn't talk much anymore. In my closet there are some clothes and some common products like toothpaste, bodyspray, plushies, nothing useful at all except for making makeshift beds to ease the pain of sleeping on the floor. There is a metal stand for a guitar which I try to use to break open the container but it soon proves to be futile.

Week 2, we are running out of food. There was only so much we could do with the BBQ, and I'm now regretting skimping out on putting those extra beefs to grill. Marine has stopped talking as well, most of our days are filled by silence. There aren't even any tears left for them to cry.

Week 3, I start thinking about my past, all the things I wish I could do differently. I go through my old notebooks from my school days which I keep in my closet, chasing for any doodles that I used to do when I was bored or messages to remember. Ayame has begun to lash out at us, saying that this is all our fault and that we are going to die here, but I do not believe her. I can tell Marine still has a glint of hope inside her as well that someone will save us. I cry myself to sleep that night thinking about my mom.

Week 4, water has run out. We are starving. My stomach won't stop hurting, it's unbearable. I think I saw Marine trying to eat some moss in the corner but she couldn't swallow it and just spit it out. There's nothing left to do other than think about the past. I try to talk to Marine and she does actually talk back, but eventually when the topic of her friends came along she began to cry dry tears of sorrow.

Week 5, the pain has stopped. I'm not hungry anymore. But the silence is deafening, none of us can bring ourselves to speak to each other anymore. All that's left is the sound of despair.

Week 6, Ayame has stopped moving.

Week 7, Marine has stopped moving.

Week 8. Goodbye, mom. I'm sorry, I love you.

>>13271165
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTE5EAyV5ycxMttRL0zF4RbYJLiZDZGfEb2GJbts7B55D3gRtrSPQloGFVWGd8JU4xeMbu9AkFlOmbb/pub

Another two chapters of Sakura Summer. Just a bit of a forewarning, this chapter was so dark and intense I decided to add some comic relief and levity to break it up. Expect the climax to be in two to three chapters.

>>13351879
It certainly hits differently when I'm able to describe it beat for beat in a way you can't really do in greentext.

>My only complaints is that since this story is being filtered through Anon's perspective, the writing should reflect as such because there were one or two sentences that felt slightly off.

What do you mean by this? Like how did you feel they were off?

>>13363320
You only had to make it two weeks, anon. What happened?

>>13364444
another ship got stuck in the suez canal

>>13364444
I feel like I double triple checked to make sure there wasn't a time limit and I still missed it. Either way two weeks is very little time for anything interesting to happen.

>>13362273

Me, Fujikura Uruka, Takanashi Kiara (don't straight up hate her, but I do find her annoying), graham crackers, and apparently this thing is shipping thermostats.

Whiny chimkin starts screaming about the situation, making it all about her, until Uruka's hypnotic beautiful singing voice lulls her to sleep. Then we eat graham crackers together and chat awkwardly about music between bouts of chimkin rage.

Either way, I don't see this lasting for more than a few days before a bout of chimkin jealousy over Uruka's talent enrages Kiara so bad that she superheats herself and melts the floor of the container, dropping her down a few crates and giving her her own "apartment".

Meanwhile the superheating fucks with the chemicals in the thermostats and, in the confusion, Uruka ends up consuming some, transforming her into Uruhulk. She obliterates most of the boat with one massive pec flex, freeing us.

This accidentally crushes Kiara to dust, but by the time Mori arrives on a jetski looking for her chimkin, she's already revived and is just like "shit happens when you party naked".

Mori then goes on to produce Uruka's debut album, which breaks all sales records.

My body is never recovered, but they do dedicate the album to me in the liner notes.

They spell my name wrong, though.

>>13364444
>AT LEAST two weeks
Quads can't read

>>13364734
>They spell my name wrong, though.
I kek'd.
Great stuff Anon.

>>13363374
>Another two chapters
you mean three, right? unless i missed a chapter you posted before. anyway, this story keeps getting more and more intense and uncomfortable. my entire body was literally shaking while reading these chapters. and this isn't even the climax yet. part of me is dreading the "grand finale" and another part of me is eagerly awaiting it.

>>13351879
Yeah, it's my first work here. Writing in 2nd person feels really weird because sometimes I accidentally mix in present tense with past, not sure which is more appropriate. Thank you for your opinion on A03 and the fic, I really appreciate it.

>>13362273
Where does all the shit and piss go?

>>13363374
God how do you it make worse and worse each chapter? I kept saying no out loud as if that was gonna change anything. I know for a fact that I won't be able to handle the finale. You have serious talent for this. I love your work but it also makes me sick.

:Batchest: WOW, this chapter made me SO heckin sick! You are like sooo good with writing, holy moly! I loveee emotions! I can't even handle another chapter, I need to go pet my pupperino to calm down, this is SO sad!

>>13355770
Dude... FF14 is notorious for having a server with a load of ERP. It's pretty hot too. Got my dick blown by some dumb cat whore for five Gil in an alley. For five more she let me cum inside her ass. She then used the money to go get blackout drunk. I fucked her while she was asleep, knocked her up, and never saw her again.

>>13366508
>Spoiler
How's all that when it's just ERP>

>>13366580
With the power of imagination and words.

>>13366580
It's just like writing a story but with someone else. Imagine you're writing but someone else fills in the chuuba part based off of what you write before it.

>>13366580
ERP is fun but finding someone you're compatible with is difficult. A lot of people on Balmung are either new, or awful. I don't think the short character limit in FFXIV really promotes a lot, but, you make do sometimes.

>>13366783
But then why do you need to buy FF14 to do that? Just use a private chat room like back in the day when we used to use Cheetahchat.

>>13367394
Not me, I don't play FF. It's weeb shit. I'm saying that in general. How the hell do you think people play tabletop RPGs for example? Just imagine that but with sex bro.

>>13364854
I like to think I was vaporized between Uruhulk's crushing pecs mid-flex, which, honestly, is how I'd want to go anyways. But I wouldn't want her to know she casually obliterated me, it would upset her too much.

>>13367394
>Buy
You can just make a free account, specify as such in your search info, and have someone party invite you. It's not rocket science to figure out how to fuck.

god please not the ffxiv discussion
only one thing more boring than watching someone else play ffxiv and that's talking about it

>>13366235
in ayame's mouth. she has no choice, she can't run away

The Songbirds' Mating Cycle
--------------------------------------------------------------
Songbirds usually induce a pregnancy in a period of 20-30 days. The reproductive cycle is split between the fertilization period that lasts between 5-10 days and the egg-laying period that lasts between 10-20 days.
Due to the songbird's human-like form, they cannot store more than 1 egg in their womb, this causes the pregnancy of a songbird to happen progressively.
The fertilization period causes the female Songbird to be receptive to mating between 5-10 days to ensure a healthy pregnancy. The songbird has a sac that is responsible for accumulating semen from its mate which it uses for the next phase of its reproductive cycle. In its fertilization period, the female Songbird secretes heavy amounts of pheromones that has the effect of Sildenafil to its mate, in order to ensure that it has sufficient semen in its sac for a successful pregnancy.
After the fertilization period, the female Songbird then accumulated semen in its sac to fertilize and lay each egg individually (ranging from about 2 to 4 eggs) during its egg-laying period. The male typically has to provide food for the female Songbird during this stage as the female is rendered immobile by the egg-laying process.

>>13362273
Me, Korone and Mori (not a Mori anti per se but I legitimately see no entertainment value in watching her).

>Last thing I ate: Barbecue sirloin with mashed potatoes and mac and cheese.
>First thing I saw when looking away: A spray for throat infections made mostly of honey, propolis and mint.

I'm going to guess that the honey consumption needs to be left for survival purposes only because of the sugar content will get you quite sick if abused, but it doesn't get much more nutritious and long-lasting than fucking honey I guess.

Water to wash it down, we should be golden.

>>13366469
>feeling moved by a piece of media is reddit
>recognizing talent is reddit
>having emotions is reddit
i knew pekofag was pathetic but i didn't realize he was THIS pathetic.

>>13271165
Fucking Choco but it turns out she's all talk and has never actually seen a penis.

>>13372034
Now THIS I want to read!

>>13372034
Honestly I'm more interested in marrying her and finding out she's a virgin in bed and then loving making sex with her and pumping her full of your seed. I don't know what the rrats are but it sounds like she deserves some love.

>>13271193
After sex scene with Shion where it's just you cuddling with her after a vigorous session of sex. No actual smut, just comfy bed talk and sweaty cuddling

>>13372809
You know, you could just combine those two concepts.

>>13373240
Shion is a pump and dump gal. Don't expect sweet bed talk from her, instead expect her to leave while you're sleeping and never call you again.

>>13353375

This would only work if she says nigga just as much as everyone else, but nobody bats an eye.

>>13373642
>>13271193
FORCING Shion to cuddle with you and act lovey dovey after you cum in her seven times in a row and despite the fact that she desperately wants to leave.

>>13373240
Seconding this. This thread needs more Shion.

>>13372809
>virgin
>good
it really isn't. try actually having sex a few times then tell me you prefer them.

moreover, of all the girls, you picked choco to want to be a virgin? fucking hell, her entire charm is that she'd completely eclipse even the most virile of playboys in sexual prowess. leave the awkward virgin sex to people like aqua or towa

>>13375458
Who are you quoting? I never said the word "good"? Sounds like you're trying to desperately push a narrative anon. Getting a bit defensive about something?

Give me some good fluff. So many depressing stories in this thread, I need something happy and comforting

>>13375872
A sheep's warmth, A wolf mom's love, Loving a kusogaki are some pretty decent fluffs

>>13375458
All of them are virgins tho?

>>13375872
AZKi's Day Off

>>13284763
>>13375872

May you find your motivation.

>>13271193
Korone chases Risu up a tree so you need to calm her down (rough loving baby making sex) to give Risu a chance to escape.

>>13376485

>>13316769
Please make a sequel where you kill Selen and her child with a truck.

>>13383492
Ame driving a truck to kill Selen in every timeline

>>13383492
This but you kill everyone involved, including yourself, via means of truck

>>13271165
>>13357661
NTA, just linking this here

>>13384216
??? ??????????!

>>13384216
Look at the pleb writing in greentext form. Disgusting. Does he have no clue how much worse he's made his story formatting it like that?

>>13384565
Look at this pleb criticizing an Anons written work even though he himself has never written anything. Does he have no clue how much worse he's made himself?

Getting rejected by Fubuki, then saying "Fuck it" and getting your stalker Matsuri pregnant in your ensuing mental breakdown.

>>13363374
This is still pretty good... but it feels like it's dragging on a bit. I know it'll probably work better once all of this is done and the experience is seeing it get worse all at once, but the current 'serialization' is kind of dragging.
Thankfully the reassurance that the next release is going to be the end is well, reassuring. So I'm eager to see how this ends.

>>13386037
Nothing gets me harder than seeing obsessive creepy girls getting what they want. That emotional rush must be insane.

>>13384913
You might be a leech, but don't assume everyone else is.

>>13386270
>Matsuri is holding you as tight as she can
>full on leg lock, scratching your back as she screams in completely joy and ecstasy
>you still can only think about how Fubuki shut down your confession

>>13386675
Oh yeah, there it is. There's the erection. Goddamn that shit is so hot.

>>13386675
This of course, is a sub category of NTR. Netori

>>13386900
I wouldn't compartmentalize it so plainly, it does the idea a disservice.

>>13386900
Knowing this thread, they won't even complain about this kind of NTR because the chuubas aren't being stolen from them.

>>13387279
You say that like it's a gotcha

>>13387279
Basically. Few people seem to be able to appreciate painful emotions in addition to pleasurable ones. I can't understand it myself. It's a shame, really.

>>13386675
This but you cry holding onto matsuri afterwards because thinking about Fubuki made you sad.

>>13388167
This, but Matsuri kills Fubuki in a fit of jealous rage and presents you with her severed head, telling you that there's no reason for you to think of her anymore.

>>13388167
>Not getting annoyed and Fubuki's callousness and railing Matsuri until she gets bruises

>>13388443
Plot reversal: Fubuki kills Matsuri instead after finding out what you two did, as Fubuki loves (You) but rejected you for the sake of your own happiness since being with an idol would result in a life of you constantly being harassed and maybe killed.

>this, but
whatever happened to ‘yes, and’?

>>13388626
This, but we stop living in the past, grandpa

>>13389992
Yes, and the past sucks.

>>13390284
It licks and blows, too, and looks an awful lot like Matsuri.

>>13390565
You think your past is Fubuki, but really its always been Matsuri

>>13388559
Double plot reversal, Fubuki kills you and presents your head to Matsuri to remind her of her place, and that she'll never find happiness with a man.

I don't know if I should do it. I know Risu's jokes are cringy but do I REALLY dare to make terribly unfunny deez nuts jokes in my fic? I feel weird...

>>13391497
Risu has the humor of a 14-year-old boy. Failing to include a garbage "deez nuts" joke in a story that is literally about her nuts would not only be out of character, it would be a disservice to her, Risuners, and yourself as an author.

>>13391497
Risu would want you to do it, anon.

>>13391497
It's Risu, no one but people already into her are gonna read it. You may as well characterize her properly.

>>13391839
I feel bad, I'm writing a nice, otherwise SFW fic about a friendship with Risu and I'm going to taint it with these degenerate fetishes... It's going to happen soon, anytime now. But then I remember prisuners are massive cunts so I feel less bad.

>>13393311
what’s wrong with prisuners? I don’t go to their threads

>>13393475
I already mentioned this before but mostly it's them being against horny posting, being super annoying about it. Threads have died over them not wanting to bump horny posts. Any sort of mention of Risu sex gets ignored for half the thread and then eventually some retard who can't keep his opinion to himself shits on it for the millionth time. Think of it as the earlyfag appearing everytime someone mentions futa for example, but there are more than one of them. I also dislike their tight lips about member shit but I don't really care that much. I just wish I knew more about why Risu is so down in the dumps.

>>13393311
Degenerate fetishes are better than what we deserve.

>>13393475
He's probably mostly just upset that Prisuners don't leak membership content, but he does have a point. Not even Prisuners can stand Prisuners, which is probably a contributor to why our thread is so dead.

>>13393615
They sound pretty based.

>>13393615
I don’t get it? What’s the problem?

>>13393805
>>13393866
t. prisuners
the best things about your annoying 2view rat is her fucking hot avatar and vocal range. literal garbage otherwise

>>13394159
I'm only giving you a (you) because how pathetic that bait was.

>>13394193
lol seething

>>13394159
I wish Risu could play up her sexiness and do more lewd jokes. Her voice is pure sex and some of her innuendos get me rock hard. This retarded sexy slutty squirrel...

>>13393615
Just buy a membership

>>13394276
He's a poorfag.

>>13394276
I've considered but I don't watch streams too often. I don't like paying for something which I will not/won't be able to consume entirely and whenever I want.

>>13394276
This. Go through a vpn to get it in argie dollars

>>13394315
Then why are you bitching?

>>13394345
poorfag

New thread
>>13394357

>>13394345
What? Assuming you aren't baiting, I literally just explained it. I just want to know why she is so down in the dumps (plus catch her saying some lewder jokes and swear words if possible) but I would not be able to see all of them if I actually paid for membership. I do not like the idea of paying for using something for a limited time, not to mention in a month I couldn't even watch all her member content even if I tried. I'd rather buy myself a game which I can actually enjoy without a dumb time limit.

>72 IPs
damn

>>13394419
Then don't bitch when they don't want to share info.

>>13394482
You're genuinely retarded.

>>13394419
She only does membership streams once a week, if that, and those are the only streams of hers worth watching. That shouldn't be too hard to stay caught up on.

>>13380472
MOTIVATED TO GIVE THIS HORNY BUNNY THE FAMILY SHE NEEDS AND A SISTER OR BROTHER WHEN I FUCK HER MOM AT OUR WEDDING

I WILL rape Luna. Coco can't protect her and neither can you.

>>13397914
Not if I rape her first.

>>13397949
>BUNNY (somehow this word was instantly copy pasted to my comment so I'll keep it)

I'll scrape out your cum with the head of my cock. That's why they are mushroom shaped after all. My superior seed will be the one to impregnate her.

>>13398003
Anon...we can work together. Luna wants to be ravaged. We don't need to fight.

>>13398147
Sounds like something a cuck would say. Luna is mine and mine alone. I will her every hole, I will fill her every insides. There's no room for you here. Only for my cock and my seed.

>>13398213
Then prepare to die.

>>13397633
>Pekora's child and sibling are the same age
I feel like I saw this in a movie once