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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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>> No.12858814

Stop with the fucking Nijinigger OPs already they've been like this for millions of threads now and nobody wants to write about Vshojo-lite to begin with

>> No.12859205
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>>12858803
Suisei pretends to be a boy at beaches and bathhouses to get molested and gangbanged

>> No.12859302

>>12859205
This but anon goes to a bathouse full of Holomembers and he get molested and gangbanged by the holos

>> No.12859348

>>12858814
fuck off with your tribalfagging

>> No.12859553

>>12859302
This but Anon's chuuba GF is the one getting molested and gangbanged while he watches discreetly and jerks off

>> No.12859581

>>12858814
Kill yourself holotranny

>> No.12859700

>>12859348
Cope, you know I'm right
>>12859581
Those "Holotrannies" make up this general faggot you on the other hand are an invader

>> No.12859772

>>12859700
With the copious amount of self-insert and /ss/ troons yeah, its easy to see who's the main audience

>> No.12862213

>>12858803
>>12845220
>>12845231
>>12850420
Flare is so adamant about denying being a dark elf because her mom was impregnated by a black man who pumped and dumped and that gave her a severe case of racism.

>> No.12864280
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>>12858803
rejecting Gura's confession because you like hags

>> No.12867721
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>>12853422
Probably not. It didn't bother me much reading through it again, as I only used it to partly explain why she goes along with the exhibitionist act, her apprehension to sex for a while and how thst makes her act impulsively impulsively seeing Anon. Maybe making it just one person who coerced her and spread a video, or even just a video of her playing with herself, might have had the same effect without leaving as much of a bad taste. Either way, you can retcon that in your head until I go back and change it. I wouldn't bother usually but it's a fair point and I actually read it again sometimes.

>> No.12868136

>>12859553
Kill yourself
>>12859700
Kill yourself, I only watch Holos but this generals has welcome everyone since the beggining.
>>12862213
Go back to trash, Flare is the product of an Elf and a WHITE man
>>12867721
That actually made me mad. You could you know make that she had bad experience trying to form a relationship but only receiving lusty mires without love. Dont need to make her a whore

>> No.12868299

>>12868136
You're just giving me motivation to write NTR my guy

>> No.12868384

>>12868136
actually neck you faggot LARPer

>> No.12868756

>>12868136
Flare will get dominated by superior black cock and there's nothing you can do about it, cracker.

>> No.12868901

>>12868136
Cringe, based, cringe, cringe

>> No.12868973

This place became reddit with these faggots wannabe niggers

>> No.12869059

Well, this thread is off to a great start.

>> No.12869784

>>12868973
Wanna fit some more buzzwords in there, kiddo?

>> No.12869819

>>12858803
One of the menhera girls develops a sort of crush on you. Constantly trying to talk to you and show off she mentions that she's a professional streamer. You offhandedly mention that you'll watch one of her streams and she happily runs off and leaves you alone. The next day she asks if you watched her stream and you said you didn't get a chance to. this time she walks away while close to tears. The next day when you leave work/school you get attacked from behind and knocked out. You wake up tied to a chair with your eyes forced open pointed directly at a screen playing her streams.

>> No.12869841

>>12858689
only 21 replies and this thread is already a lost cause.

>> No.12870358

>>12869841
We need to go back to having literal whos as the thread op. Tribal shit doesn't happen when not even the OP knows who the girl in it is.

>> No.12870479

>>12858803
Marine learns that you have a fetish for red hair.

>> No.12870482

>>12870358
inb4 Robbit is the next thread's image.

>> No.12870768

>>12870482
Does he still stream? No one went and doxxed him or some shit when he came here?

>> No.12870813

>>12870482
I remember telling that guy to kill himself. Good times.

>> No.12870827

>>12869819
This but they're actually forcing you to watch a Livestream. They're upstairs, and you can hear them from both the TV and from above.

>> No.12871050

>>12870813
That's right that faggot posted ITT as well.

>> No.12871173

>>12871050
Actually that was was me.

>> No.12871533

>>12858803
Flare and Noel give (You) a double Paizuri!

>> No.12871720

>>12858803
Gura and Baelz tie you up and take turns sucking your dick after finding out how afraid of their teeth you are!

>> No.12871782

Ntr arc...

>> No.12872019
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>>12858803
Woke up with a weird desire to write this but I can't for a minute so I'll save it here.

Getting drugged and raped by Sana and Baelz, stealing you away from Kronii

>> No.12872153

>>12872019
>Korean fails to understand basic Australian slang
Typical. Fuck gooks. Reinstate the White Australia policy now.

>> No.12872247

>>12871782
It just that Matsuri fag

>> No.12872426

>>12871533
How does that even work though ? Noel's tits alone could engulfed your whole dick, adding Flare's tits would just be overkill.

>> No.12872907

>>12872247
who's the matsuri fag

>> No.12872981

>>12872907
NTA, but I think it's a guy who occasionally would ask for Matsuri cuck fics with varying prompts.

>> No.12873024

I've been thinking about making a Warhammer + Hololive fic for a while but I can never get my ideas straight.
Only consistent things are Rushia=Angron butcher's nails are just shuru pettan playing on repeat in her head
Haato/Haachama is Horus
Pekora is some mix of Perturabo and Erebus.

>> No.12873457

>>12872981
ah, him, huh. been a while since i've last seen him post
well, sorry if i gave off the same impression with the shit i posted in the last thread - i assure you i'm not that fag

>> No.12874210

>>12873024
I assume Yagoo would be big E in this ?

>> No.12874822

>>12873024
CN as the big four

>> No.12875009

>>12873024
That sounds like it's just trying to map out the primarchs to holomembers and doing the 'horus heresy but with them instead'. Which in fairness might lead to some fun scenes but doing it 1:1 seems both a bit lazy and simultaneously making it too hard on yourself since your artificially constrained trying to match them.

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>>12858803
That one episode of Gintama where Gin fucks every women he knows while drunk and has to take responsibility after but with Hololive members.

>> No.12877143

>>12874822
>CN as the tyranids

>> No.12879140

>>12872247
Nah. I know Matsuri cuck Anon. He's always been very, very civil about his fetish and knows people don't like it. He never went out of his way to bring it up unless someone else showed some vested, earnest interest in it. He's one of the few good people to actually enjoy that fetish.

>> No.12880118

Oof. It sucks to be brimming with ideas for your fic but you can't write them yet because the plot hasn't gotten there yet.

>> No.12880488

>>12879140
>the cuck is nice
>the insectfag is nice
>the scatfag is nice
Interesting coincidence

>> No.12880570

>>12880118
What are you working on Anon ?

>> No.12881004

>>12880488
>people with outlandish fetishes that inadvertently get a rise out of people despite generally being very polite/understanding that what they like is weird are more likely to get false flagged when someone sees said fetish getting a rise out of people and using it as an opportunity to shitpost for (you)s
Color me surprised.

>> No.12881050

>>12880488
I mean you kind of have to not be a massive jackass if you want to try and get others to 'get' your fetish so as to try and get them to write it.

>> No.12881625

>>12880118
>have doc with ideas about how to do stuff I'm excited for
>but need to do everything else first
Fuck

>> No.12881741

>>12880118
>>12881625
Are you guys me?

>> No.12881866
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>>12858803
Shion is deeply in love with (you), but you never show any intrest in her. She's getting desperate so she decide to spike your drink with a love potion. But after drinking it, you act completely the same and treats her just as you always does. She think this must mean you are already in love with her which makes her immensaly happy, when in reality the potion doesn't work because she fucks up while making it.

>> No.12882117

>>12880118
Ideas are cheap anon. It's easier to think up cool ideas than make them.

>> No.12882174

>>12880488
Oh my. Flattery will get you nowhere, sailor - you'll have to wine and dine me first.
While I certainly don't disrespect either of them for their fetishes, you can rest assured I'm neither interested in poo-poo nor heartbreak.

>> No.12882283

>>12882174
>Highclass MILF Anon that gets you into fancy restaurants because she likes to wear pretty dresses and play around with cute young men who just so happens to be into insects
Haah...haah...

>> No.12883334

>>12880570
A series. I'm actively working on two very different fics right now and suddenly I'm getting really good ideas for later chapters of my series, but I'm not fucking there yet and that hurts.

>> No.12883402

>>12881866
This but instead of messing it up completely Shion accidentally makes the juice that makes you cum super hard and she sees you in that state of orgasmic bliss after drinking her 'love potion'

>> No.12884120

>>12883402
Then you go insane like Caligula and fight the ocean.

>> No.12884201

>>12881866
Ooh, I thought of something. Imagine if Shion made you drink a love potion but it was too strong and ends up with you brutally raping her, blood, pain and everything, but she can’t blame you because she made you drink the potion and you couldn’t control yourself.
I’m not even into rape that much but this was just an idea that popped into my head

>> No.12884528

>>12864280
Genuine outcome if she did.

>>12872019
>Kronii
You mean Fauna.

>> No.12885519

What’s everyone’s favourite trope you see in stories, be it from the archive or anywhere else?

>> No.12885764

>>12885519
Non penetration, if futa even better. That can be blowjob, handjobs, any jobs really. Solo masturbation futa is the GOAT.

>> No.12885816

>>12885519
Seen a few 'chilling in the bathtub together after sex' moments and it's always great

>> No.12885863

>>12884528
Cucking a yandere is asking for trouble, with Kronii she'd be more likely to roll over and accept it

>> No.12887509

>>12885764
Anon, tropes are not genres/tags...

>> No.12887689

>>12887509
>>12885519
Don't really care but in that case... a battle you cannot win is always good. Like the final boss popping in as you exit the first boss arena and then you get decimated. Not even decimated, but having your objective as "Survive at all costs, you cannot fight or flee" and nothing else is pretty cool.

>> No.12887896

>>12884201
This leads to shion wanting it to happen more and more since everytime it happens you become more attached to her due to trying to make up for it.

>> No.12888112

>>12881866
I think having Shion miserterpreting your signs as you actually being in love with her could be fun. Shion shily making advances or flirting but you nonchalantly brushing them off because she's your friend. No clue what the ending would be, because I think if it ends with you actually falling in love with her it would be too cheesy for my taste. Maybe... you start dating someone else like Aqua or Marine, you suddenly bring it up to Shion and she thinks you're joking until she realizes you're not. That could be pretty good.

>> No.12888301

>>12885519
My favorite tropes will forever be "No ones allowed to kill you but me" or "I want you to win against me but no way in hell am I gonna make it easy for you". They always go pretty hard.

>> No.12888427

>>12885519
Too much rage to fucking die 12 labors style. There's no way you shouldn't already be dead but with your muscles torn and your bones grinded into dust, you still keep going.

>> No.12888430

>>12888112
Well when in doubt...
Shion, on the day she'd finally gathered her conviction to be honest about wanting to date you finds you balls deep fucking aqua.
Shocked and Angry she runs away, only to get hit by a truck as you and aqua catch up to her.

>> No.12888676

>>12888427
12 labors? Like the labors of Hercules?

>> No.12888796

>>12888430
You and Aqua catch up to a running Shion while still fucking? Shions final sight is your balls contracting directly into Aquas pussy? Shion dies a virgin while the fucking retard gets the dick she's always wanted? Anon that just seems cruel. You sick fuck.

>> No.12888908

>>12885519
“Tough guy who tries to be cool ends up getting dragged into silly people’s antics and breaking character” is a sort of common trope that I’m a huge sucker for

>> No.12888973

>>12888796
If naked anon chasing Shion while carrying Aqua and still fucking her isn’t part of the story, I don’t want to read it.

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>>12888796
fine then, let's twist this. You keep drinking the juice that makes blast cum, but since Shion, nor any woman is around, you become a raving beast looking to rut, uncaring of your target. The first person you meet? That twink of a boy Astel, so you pound his ass like swordsmith bangs on his anvil until you can't come anymore. It was the best orgasm of your life, and right before you white out, Astel then pins you down and fucks you into submission, giving you a taste of what you have been giving all this time. It's too much for you, and now you've denounced all women in your life, slaving away at your hedonistic desires with the real kusogaki of Holo.

>> No.12889053

>>12888676
I guess Fate isn't as common knowledge as I expected here. Basically Hercules (or Heracles) has the ability God Hand which allows him to revive 12 times as per his legend of the 12 labors, each time he is invincible to the thing that killed him the last time. I associate it with him because he is a beast of pure rage in this incarnation.
https://youtu.be/P3T_vmWVWC4

>> No.12889060

>>12888977
This but a truck crashes into the place you two were fucking at killing you both after your bodies get stuck in the truck's undercarriage.

>> No.12889065

>>12885519
The guilty lover, that is someone who loves a person whom they wronged in the past which causes them to have emotional termoil over it. Fubuki in Omelas is a good example.

>> No.12889088

>>12885519
Two characters despise each other at first but gradually come to respect one another

>> No.12889204

>>12885519
A character seems like dumb comedic relief but turns out to be an absolute badass

>> No.12889294

>>12889053
The only knowledge I have of Fate is that it turns historical figures into girls and there's like a battle royale or something. I'm very ignorant of that franchise.

>> No.12889491

>>12888973
Then the final scene cuts to shion on a therapist's couch relaying to her therapist that this was a recurring nightmare that she has. As the sessions comes to a close she gets picked up by you, the narration then becomes eerily the same as the beginning of the story.
The final reveal being that this was shion's personal hell. An endless loop of getting cucked and dying a virgin, her final sight you unloading your seed into Aqua's pussy.

>> No.12889527

>>12888977
Let's twist this a little bit too. After becoming a beast looking for anything to fuck, you rut your way through the entirety of hololive (minus Shion). After days of nonstop extensive fucking the strain on your body is great, your heart is growing weak. Yet your cock is still standing proud. As your vision darkens you let out one final order to the swaths of women you've impregnated, "Bring me the twink."


"And make Shion watch."

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>>12889294
Eh, you should give it a chance. There's not that many males turned into females in Fate, it's just that King Arthur, the most popular Fate character had this happen to her and thus it became a meme.

Explaining it in simple terms, there's a bunch of mages who want to reach the "root" which is in simple terms true magic that can do anything. But they can't get to it unless they have nearly infinite amounts of mana as the root exists in another plane of reality iirc. So to solve that problem, they used summoning rituals to bring powerful historical legends into the future and sacrifice their mana into a container known as the holy grail. When all 7 historical figures known as servants are killed in the battle, the grail is filled up enough with mana and a master (a mage who owned a servant) can make a wish, any wish. The mages want to use the grail to wish to reach the root so they can become the ultimate mage that can do anything.

Since the grail can only grant a wish to one person, the mages instead of just sacrificing the servants decided to instead battle it out and whoever wins is naturally the one fit to use the holy grail's wish as they see fit.

Start with Fate/ Zero if you actually feel like trying it. If nothing else, the animation is phenomenal. Do keep in mind the first episode is an exposition dump of explaining what I just said and how it works, as well as introducing the characters so it's a bit boring, but it picks up really quickly.

A lot of chuubas love Fate. There, now shut up jannies.

>> No.12889920

>>12885519
the penultimate "heroic moment", where in that one moment a character cements themselves as the selfless hero. Whether it is standing to face against an enemy impossible to be defeated, or refusing to fall even their body is at the brink of failure. These moments in which none can turn their eyes away from, these moments that even a child finds in themselves the urge to give their support, to cheer the hero on, the showcase that no matter what, the hero always stands. I am a sucker for this kind of trope, especially the buildup to it and the execution of this climax. In fact I would go so far to say I am enamored by the concept of heroism, and even now I am trying to find a way to include it in the stories I write.

>> No.12890212

>>12889920
Shit like this is hype.

>> No.12890242

>>12885519
In terms of porn tropes. I fucking love the lesbian getting dicked and turning straight trope. Shit's like a smug brat getting what they deserve but hotter.

>> No.12890264

>>12889920
What will being a hero get you? A nice title in an early grave? You are a fool! You cannot kill a god, why do you even try? Who cares about "inspiring the people"? What a load of idiotic garbage. You will not win anything by doing this. Cease at once, and you may live to see another day.

>> No.12890367

>>12889920
You're totally right, but I think it would be hilarious if you admitted that you're the writer of like Fat Cat or something totally unfitting of that trope.

>> No.12890608

>>12889920
What type of stories do you write?

>> No.12890696

>>12890264
Heroism - true heroism - isn't about something as petty as titles or glory. It's about doing the right thing - defending those close to you, protecting your loved ones, your home - at all costs. Though my body may break, though my soul may be shattered and scattered to the winds, though it may cost me everything, yielding is not an option - never an option. Nor is defeat.
Heroes are really fun to write, especially after they truly realize what's important to them after letting other things get in the way.

>> No.12890726

>>12890264
it is true that those smarter will live, and those more shrewd will allow themselves to swallow their pride for bigger cause.

But who's name is it that is passed down the generations, that even the children of your children will still speak of? Who's life will become a legend in the edicts of history? And who's actions will reverberate eternally through the halls of time?

It is through these moments that we as a species define ourselves against the dying light, that we may be a flicker, but we will still shine our light for those yet to come. In that single, fleeting moment, a man may have died, but a martyr, a hero was born.

>> No.12891019

>>12885519
My favorite trope is when a prediction or wish happens but it doesn't go the way it's expected. Like in Macbeth or in The Monkey's Paw.

>> No.12891299

>>12890696
Doing the right thing? Who dictates what is right, or wrong? You, an insignificant individual, one of many among the masses? No, no no. Right or wrong, in its essence, is not something you can control or yield or even claim to partake in. You are a fool to think otherwise. In my eyes, you, the self proclaimed hero, are nothing but a foolish villain who stands in the way of the ultimate hero, a god, the one who controls all. It is a matter of perspective, and when it comes down to it, my perspective is beyond that of which your feeble mind could ever comprehend. Yielding is not an option? We call that stubbornness. Being stubborn is not a trait, it is a disease. You truly wish to throw it all away just because you, an insect who believes in non existent standards of a concept of right and wrong, think that I, the true being meant to rule them all, is in the wrong? You won't win this, you can't. This will always result in your loss, whether you lose, or by somehow, with absurd means, defeat me. Your people will still suffer without my command. Without me to rule them, they are lost. Their worship is their salvation. I am their savior. You are nothing but an arrogant, stubborn and miserable little pile of foolish ideals and dreams of glory over yonder. Give up, you're nothing.

>>12890726
What is history to a god? Names that come and go, insignificant in the grand schemes of time. You will be forgotten, no matter your achievements. No, I will make sure of it that no one shall utter your name ever again. You will die like that, alone, forgotten both in body and spirit. That is your fate. Your species has had many of these "heroes" you idolize so much, I've seem them time and time again in their grand delusions of greatness. What is of them now? A couple words in books that sit there, collecting dust save it for the few stubborn followers that cannot let go of the past? A meaningless statue made of dirt and boulders that will wither away, given enough time? There is nothing to be gained from this. Your oshi is already under my control, she will serve as the new beginning to this era of stupidity. She has already forgotten about you, you cannot save her! You would really die here in a battle you cannot win for a fate you cannot change?! Your kind makes me sick. Once I get to rule the new generations that I will create with your oshi's essence, I will make sure to erase any traces of these useless ideals of "heroism".

>> No.12891322

>the anime arc is starting

>> No.12891510

>12891299
This is pekofag, isn't it? The chuuni manner of speech and narcissistic god complex sounds a lot like him.
You're not a god, faggot. You're a homosexual roleplaying twink on an anime forum. Get over yourself.

>> No.12891665

>>12890608
closest to this trope? probably HoloRealm, but in its current state it is not yet at the point which I feel fully encapsulates the emotions and feel of the trope of heroism. It takes time, and I'm doing my best to carefully construct and improve on it, as the latest chapter didn't hit it as well as I would have liked. But I'll get round to it, just hopefully soon. I suppose the next best thing is MW, although it's not a true blue rendition of the "hero" trope.

>> No.12891678

>>12889294
while everything that came after was of questionable quality, the original fate/stay night visual novel was a fantastic read and rightfully famous

>> No.12891751

>>12891510
yeah, that's definitely him

>> No.12891793

>>12891510
NTA, but isn’t this just a friendly discussion? It does sound a bit high and mighty, but that’s the point of the roleplay, acting like a “higher being” in front of the “weak humanity”, no? Besides, does it really matter if it’s that specific anon when we’re getting content? Also, I’m not replying, don’t want to derail too much.

>> No.12891814

>>12891793
This. For the sake of the talk of heroism and the like, it was a pretty appropriate response. They're good at playing the villain for sure.

>> No.12892582

>>12859205
That image is so fucking hot. I've been masturbating to the uncensored image all day

>> No.12892666

>>12892582
got a sauce for that? iqdb reveals nada

>> No.12892814

>>12892666
NTA but https://twitter.com/HugePome/status/1458517250718068736
>0TRAT

>> No.12892830

Give me an adventure story to write. I'm tried of writing fluff and abuse smut, too easy for me to do.

Only kicker is no military stuff.

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>>12892830
Mix of soft science fiction and high fantasy. Post-apocalyptic event, not necessarily global but on a city-wide scale. Scavengers looking for valuable materials/advanced technology wandering through a crumbling city reclaimed by nature, doing battle with its denizens and potentially each other. Magic may be an element, as may firearms - or perhaps neither.

Cosmetically, Sanctuary from Ark: Extinction is pretty much exactly the kind of city I'm thinking of

>> No.12893084

>>12892814
damn, that is nice. cheers my dude.

>> No.12893186

>>12892830
I would tell you a really great concept but it's my OC universe and I don't want you to steal it so I won't.

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>>12893186
well thanks for letting me know, faggot.

>> No.12893805

>>12893605
I just blew the biggest load to my oshi's ASMR after a full week of not nutting and I could not care less.

>> No.12894215

>>12885519
"The true final boss is yourself"

>> No.12894300

>>12892830
An isekai story involving generation 3

>> No.12894393

>>12892830
Vtubers in fucking MARS baby!

>> No.12895795

A question that's kind of been on the back of my mind for a couple months.
Why was Omelas so influential to this thread at the time? It was pretty good for the first part in regards to the emotional abuse... but the sequels were so forgettable I sometimes forget that the fan sequel wasn't the actual sequel.

>> No.12895932

>>12895795
No clue. I haven't read and never will, especially after finding out the author is such a prick.

>> No.12896064

>>12895795
Dunno. Abuse isn’t my thing so I’ve never read it

>> No.12896110

>>12895795
It was good. That's really just it.

>> No.12898129

>>12885519
Honestly I love the second person style done here/ on other image boards. There's something distinct but powerful about the use of you, even if it does feel like a cheap sometimes.

>> No.12898218

>>12895795
It was one of the first big real pieces of literature before we were a proper /wg/ and as such received a lot of glowing reviews, combined with the fact that part 1 is genuinely just good. The latter stuff was more mystical in nature and met with mixed reviews as a result of it not keeping closer to it s original routes.

>> No.12898620

>>12896110
>>12898218
So what I'm getting is that it started/ was a part of how this thread went from being an abuse thread to being /wg/ proper and as such had a big influence in its history due to just being good.
With the meme of Omelas haunting the thread just being from the fact that fubuki and abuse are thread staples.

>> No.12898711

>>12898620
That's more or less the size of it. Was one of the OG pieces that pushed us forward into /wg/.

>> No.12899965

>>12892830
It's 6000 bc. The jews are enslaved by the Egyptians and you are chosen by God to free them. With the help of mumei and the power of beyblades you free your people amd fight for their survival.

>> No.12900034

>>12858803
Putting Fubuki in a diaper and taking care of her

>> No.12900114

>>12892830
HoloAlt isn't just a cool anime in another world. The talents have actually been whisked away and had their memories replaced. It's up to you - Dimension Diver Alpha-Niner-Zero-Niner (more commonly referred to as 'Anon') to penetrate the barrier between worlds, subdue the talents before they hurt themselves (or eachother) and unravel the mystery behind what exactly ripped them away to begin with.

>> No.12900122

>>12899965
Wonder who could be behind this post.

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>>12900122
Who knows?

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Staying motivated?

>> No.12902058

>>12901964
No. I just woke up exhausted because this stupid lizard in my dreams stole a tiny little frog i released into the wild and then tried to attack me. At first I slapped him with a broom but then the mf got through and I had to jump on a table. The thing may or may not have jumped onto the table at this point, the dream didn't say as it forced me into fight or flight and woke me up. I went to sleep at 5:50, it's 9...

>> No.12902160

>>12901964
I'm not, I'm afraid. I have several WIPs and no idea how to finish them.

>> No.12903447

>>12902160
>NTR
>Truck
>Brap
>Suicide
Am I missing anything in the repertoire for, 'oh shit I need an ending'?

>> No.12903701

>>12903447
>major series ends with a fart joke

>> No.12903956

>>12903701
Unironically not even the worst ending for a series here.

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>>12903447
I like your thinking.

>> No.12904211

>>12903447
Oh, yeah, then there's "I woke up and it was all a dream."

Or "Suddenly, rocks fell from a cliff and we all died."

>> No.12904625

>>12903447
>every character is dead and the story takes place in the afterlife
>it was all a childrens bedtime story
>the main character was in a coma the whole time
milage may vary

>> No.12905014

>>12904211
>>12904625
>a combination of all these

>> No.12905838

so which arc are we in now for /wg/? so far from this week, we've got:

>monkey's paw(as usual)
>NTaRc
>hatesex, with Miko in particular
>abuse, abuse, abuse
>weirdanon v2, fulfilling another anon's wildest dreams
>shortlived shonen anime/hero arc
>back to monkey's paw arc again.

Where are we headed to, /wg/? What lies beyond the horizon for us?

>> No.12905902

>>12905838
I can only hope we’re returning back to this thread’s roots with more abuse fics.

>> No.12905948

>>12905838
I can smell the sordid, pungent stench of a schizo arc on the horizon.

>> No.12906026

>>12905948
I thought the existence of /infinity/ keeps the schizo arc away.

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>>12892830
Getting isekaid into the Hololive universe and using (you)r knowledge from watching streams to help them solve their problems.

>> No.12906130

>>12905902
Seconding this, we really need more chuubas abusing (you).

>> No.12906261

>>12906084
This, except you're the faceless bandit from every isekai rape doujin ever and you use a conveniently-obtained mystical artifact (which is inexplicably used solely for weakening girls and forcing them into estrus) to sexually abuse them.

>> No.12906586

>>12906084
Honestly I dislike the Isekai genre in general with a few exceptions, but this could be a pretty interesting premise for people who are interested.

>Girls in the alternate world have the same personalities, life experiences, etc. as the livers
>(You) then know a lot of facts about them they never shared with anyone, or know how they'll react to a situation before they do

Then the writer just has to reverse engineer situations that fit, and you might have an interesting story.

>>12905838
Hopefully we go back to last week's "10 stories posted per thread" arc.

>> No.12906919

>>12906586
Anon you do realize that was because it was halloween right?

>> No.12907003

>>12906919
More than that, I think most of them were done by one person; the author of Moona's Ordeal (amongst many others), Dude spat works out like a chain gun.

>> No.12907973

>>12907003
Yeah, weird to think that author came from an abuse thread that timelooped into a writing thread.

>> No.12908258

>>12893057
this sounds like a really cool setting. kinda reminds me of starsector's tech mining

>> No.12908866

I wonder what Botan's minge would taste like.

>> No.12909037

>>12908866
same as for everyone else - like stale piss, sweat, and the cocktail of chemicals excreted in skin oil

>> No.12909150

>>12909037
That sounds delicious... Imagine the smell...

>> No.12909261

>>12909150
sounds pretty gross to me tbqh

>> No.12909800

>>12909150
Don't recall posting this. Let's keep going. How hairy do /we/ think it is?

>> No.12909826

>>12909800
Very hairy and musky, like a hag vag should be.

>> No.12910120

>>12909800
Botan's bush'd reflect the Savannah from which she came for sure; wild, unkempt and overgrown.

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That anon who brought up the overuse of "you" or "your" before really opened my eyes. I mean, 8% of all the words in a story being the same is quite concerning. But I can't think of good ways to fix that.

>> No.12911343

>>12909800
Imagine a lion's mane in between her legs

>> No.12911378

>>12910936
it really do be that way. i fucking hate it; feels like i'm writing a CYOA or an old dungeon crawler rather than a piece of literature

>> No.12911816

>>12910936
How were you writing with your eyes closed?

>> No.12911841

>>12909800
Clean-shaven because she's not an animal. Metaphorically.

>> No.12912981

>>12867721
>irrumatio handlebars
she's so damn sexy

>> No.12914869

>wanted to take the next level for fan content creation
>/vt/ killed my drive
I don't know if I should be thankful or not. I was really interested in trying more fan stuff but the constant reality checks about the girls and how they'd likely be the kind to call us losers and make fun of that makes me wonder why I should bother.

>> No.12915115

>>12909826
>>12910120
>>12911343
Excellent.

>>12911841
AkuShion is that way.

>> No.12917636

>>12914869
>self-conscious about being called a loser by women roleplayers
>perfectly okay with blogging about being a sad sack on /wg/
Me: getting chuubas to read their own fanfiction live on air
You: caring about gay shit

>> No.12917924

>>12914869
>they'd likely be the kind to call us losers and make fun of that

Sounds to me like you're just picking the wrong vtubers to make fancontent for, bud.

>> No.12919188

>>12858689
Long hair Hana Macchia is lovely ^.^

>> No.12919663

>>12914869
>>12917636
>>12917924
Idk if this isn't obvious but the girls that do Vtubing are in fact the least likely to find you disgusting. They are weebs, and not just any weebs, weebs in a niche genre. Any normal woman or person for that matter would find you repulsive, everything about you screams pathetic loser. In fact just being on this site will already brand you a loser. But chuubas, the bigger ones, are so used to your kind that they don't really care if you like to jerk off to drawings of children getting raped or of them being impregnated by insects. Sure, they'll still find you weird, but nothing that extreme like normies would think. It's very likely that the chuuba you follow is a degenerate just like you even. Matsuri drinks her own piss, Marine wants to be raped, Noel likes to smell animal's assholes, then there's the lolicons, the wakipais sweat licking and so on.

>> No.12920008

>>12919188
I wanna fuck her while her dad is forced to listen in the other room

>> No.12920574

>>12858803
Now that I think about, Marine is into insect sex after she kept looking at insects to tone down her libido but it backfired. Marine insect rape sounds cool.

>> No.12920724

>>12858803
Having a lovely dovely time with any chuubas of your choice but everything changed when she learned she's stronger than you

>> No.12922315

>>12919663
Noel likes to what

>> No.12922356

>>12920574
>the ntr arc was actually the insect arc
kino subversion

>> No.12922452

>>12922315
She loves to put her nose on her hamster's asshole glans and take big whiffs. It sounds like she actually gets high from it almost. She says the feral smell is intoxicating. It's pretty odd, but in all honesty it's kind of just an evolution of liking the smell of sweat or the musky stench of a cock for example.

>> No.12922726

>>12919663
>Matsuri drinks her own piss
Fucking what ?

>> No.12922905

>>12922726
Man it's kind of sad that, with so many new Holos showing up recently, Matsuri really has fallen so far.

A year ago nobody who was in this fandom wouldn't not know of Matsuri's watersports antics.

>> No.12923079

>>12922726
There's a video, a clip I think it was a collab with Nijisanji where she says she drank her own infected UTI piss on a bathtub with a little cup and then puked all over herself from the taste then went on to ask the Nijisanji male she was collabing with to piss in her mouth because it "tastes better if it's someone you love". Of course she also has said many times she wants to drink Hoshikawa's piss and if you thought it was a joke, it wasn't.

>> No.12923268

>>12923079
>Festival The Aristocrat

>> No.12923703

>>12919663
Your whole post made me realize that I might be giving too much time to holoEN. I've completely forgotten about Matsuri and Noel's antics.

>> No.12923927

>>12923703
Everyone in this board gives too much time to EN. People can listen to songs they don't understand but suddenly when it comes to Vtubers it's a big deal. If your oshi isn't Japanese you shouldn't be on an anime board.

>> No.12924043

>>12923927
YWNBJ

>> No.12928355

>>12922905
>>12923079
Jesus fucking Christ.

>> No.12928866

>>12928355
It actually gets worse, because when Matuli was young she would get all tingly from holding in her pee as long as possible until it was painful. But she kept getting unknown UTIs for some reason, until she had to actually tell the doctor what she was doing, which ended up being the cause.

(And then years later she tells her mom this on stream)

I miss classic Festival...

>> No.12929091

>>12928866
A surprising amount of girls hold their pee so much so that the NHS issued a psa about it.

>> No.12929733

>>12929091
It's actually much easier for females of any species to get a UTI if they hold their pee for too long compared to males. These dumb fucking retard chuubas doing "hold your pee in challenge" don't realize that they will lose bladder control at age 55 from doing it too much.

>> No.12930337

>>12929091
>pee-sa

>> No.12930578

>>12929733
Most men live their lives without a UTI yet chris chan has gotten several. I wouldn't mind if Festival pissed in my mouth desu

>> No.12932333

>>12906586
I honestly think isekai is only cool when there’s that element of magic vs technology. So it’s not some random teenager getting sent to a world of elves and shit, it’s a guy with a gun. The anime Gate for example had a good concept where the military goes to another world and fucks it up Too bad it was ruined with all the fan service.
One underrated genre I think is reverse isekai. Guy from medieval magic world goes to modern world. It’s a concept I’d like to see more of.

>> No.12932966

>>12932333
Any sufficiently advanced technology would seem like magic to the spectator. In short, there's not much fun to be had because all reactions would be "woah what's that" followed by them learning how it works and then onto the next thing. The Hitler movie "He is back" has it if you're actually interested in it tho.

The Hitler movie is a reverse isekai...

>> No.12933306

>>12923079
I recall that clip. She was collabing with Chaika.

>> No.12934026

>>12932966
Magic vs technology has always been a really fun concept/trope to me. It's like the power of the mind versus... the power of the mind in another way. It's hard to put into words but one is so mystical and fantasy like while one is much more straightforward and real, and that contrast is something I like. That's why Final Fantasy has always been pretty cool to me with guns and magic. Crossovers are cool too, like Skyrim vs Fallout and Holofantasy vs Holocalypse. It's just something I'd like to see more everywhere.

>> No.12934526

>>12934026
I mean I also like that kinda shit conceptually, it's just that I haven't really found a story like that where one side isn't a massive strawman, with magic either being impotent and pretty much reduced to low tier dnd shit or the tech side being either 'burn nature' or hilariously wanked up.

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>>12934526
pic related

>> No.12938977

>>12859205
This but nothing happens physically, and the entire story is Suisei fantasizing that something might happen.

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>> No.12939491

>>12939100
It will be out when it's out, you do realize you're being just as autistic as the brapfag right?

>> No.12939545

Weird question but which of the holos could you envision as Don Draper? Specifically being able to wow people with creative vision and win them over with words. Not so much the cheating and alcoholism.

>> No.12939727

>>12939545
creative vision and charisma? none of them particularly fill this image, although fubuki probably the best shill hololive has. i wouldn't say she's particularly adept at working a crowd, though, like peter molyneux or freddie mercury

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>>12858803
Beating Fubuki's delicious tummy to the point of bruising and Fubuki begging for more.

>> No.12940306

>>12939960
Ryona roleplay with my Girlfriend

>> No.12940373

>>12939960
she's not actually into ryona as this thread thought months ago; i have no idea where this idea came from. she's actually more on the abusive side than the abusee; went so far as to mention during her...september? asmr whilst doing an impression of her white buri nyan character (similar to a valley girl) that she disliked the character's personality and felt an intense desire to punch girls like that in the stomach

>> No.12940539

>>12940373
august asmr

>> No.12940920

>>12940373
>Abusive Fubuki fics are canon

>> No.12941205

>>12940373
>have no idea where this idea came from.
I mean her saying on stream that she wants smoke blown in her face is a good place to start

>> No.12941307

>>12941205
think she was just fangirling over mads' character at the time

>> No.12941628

>>12940373
Idk man I just saw the pic on twitter and my mind immediately went "I really want to punch that belly and I bet she'd like it".

>> No.12941666

>>12941628
you know what?

fair enough.

>> No.12941935

>>12941307
FBK has good taste

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>>12941935
i'll bet she tastes good too

>> No.12943619

>>12942989
I already wrote an ass eating fic with Foobs don't make me want to write one about drowning in her pussy juice next...

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>>12943619
cannot comply with this request

>> No.12944000

>>12943619
Please write one about her eating icecream with sushi at her 15th birthday party with you and her best friends there and then puking all over her skirt because you rubbing some ice on her back made her sick apparently and then she never talks with you again and you regret it for 7 years and counting.

>> No.12944014

>>12939545
That's funny... You got me thinking seriously about this, and I have to agree with >>12939727 that none of them give such an aura.
The closest I'd say is either Sora while being somehow possessed by her "real goddess concept" or without any lore bs I'd argue A-chan. She probably won't have much of a "wow" shock but she definitely gives the aura of someone that'd be smart enough to plan ahead something grand that would benefit the whole troupe.

>> No.12944169

>>12944000
Is this based on a true story, anon?

>> No.12944174

>>12943619
Please, I want to drown in Fubuki's pussy juice, please write a story like that

>> No.12944450

>>12943619
Hey, you wrote a Mouthful of Fox? That's one of my favourites, dude, think I've "read" it like 6 times over. Great work.

>> No.12944500

>>12943619
Please do, by the way. I DESPERATELY want her to grind her hips against my face and Foxes over Ducks ignited that passion hard.

>> No.12945411

>>12944169
Yes, though I'm omitting some details like how I let her best friend lay her head on my lap in the heat of the moment right in front of her which was most likely a test of fidelity she set up for me because... damn it's a long story. See, I first met her 3 years before that party, high school first love at first sight. On the day I confessed my love to her, I also admitted to flirting with her best friend because I was feeling guilty. That made it so she stopped talking to me for a year. Then she flirted with me all of a sudden, maybe indicating she was forgiving me but then she dipped to another school. Then, 2 years later I met her again at a attraction park that all schools take you to when you graduate, so she was there. I gathered up my courage and messaged her after that day, then we went on a few awkward dates and eventually this birthday thing. After what happened there, she became really hostile to me and 6 months later she spoke to me her final time. That was many years ago. Even seeing someone that remotely looks like her makes my heart race. I have bad memories of my screw ups almost every day. Worst thing yet is that I found out she not only goes to a course with my current female best friend and she said she doesn't remember me, but I also found out last year she also lives like 200m away from my house. So whenever I go out and pass her house I fear she'll be there one day.

This story reminds me of Fubuki. Perfect girl, but then you screw it up and you never see her again.

>> No.12945491

>>12945411
Uhhh, she doesn't sound perfect, anon. Although, to be fair, you also sound like a social autist.

>> No.12945742

>>12945491
I found her perfect because she wasn't perfect you feel me? She was an odd girl. What made me fall in love with her was the first time I saw her she was swinging on some handle bars showing off her acrobatic skills she went on a course for. Everyone thought she was weird but I found it really charming. She was funny, cute, smart, had a really unique voice and was actually relatively social. On one really boring school assignment about planting shit in the garden, I hit her up, we asked each other some really generic questions and then to have fun and pass the time we played baseball with a broom and some plastic soda bottles. Shit was fun, everyone was weirded out but we didn't care.

Btw she's a rich model who made it into the news, before you say anything. I know it sounds really bad when I can't explain my memories but bro, if there's such a thing as a soulmate, she was one.

>> No.12946502

>>12944450
Thanks, glad to hear. It didn't seem to catch the eye of a lot of anons at the time, but again I guess not everyone's into the subject matter.

>>12944174
>>12944500
I'll keep that in mind after I'm done with what's on the backlog. Imagine Fubuki squirming and panting with her soft thighs around your head. Haa...haa...

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>>12946502
>spoiler
oh god oh god

>> No.12947193

>>12876274
I must have missed that episode.

>> No.12947425

>>12880118
>>12881625
>>12881741
Me too! This time I'm going to try outlining with a theme first. I know who I want to be in it and most of the fluff, but plot evades me. Maybe I should watch / read something other than CGDCT.

>> No.12947551

>>12883334
Write that part first. You can write the beginning later

>> No.12947772

>>12947551
this, especially given that it might present problems otherwise.

something i've found when writing on spur-of-the-moment inspiration is that these ideas are way cooler in my head, or that i'm just not a good enough writer to accurately convey my thoughts to the written word.

writing this out first allows you not only to build the rest of the fic around it (rather than potentially having to shoehorn the idea in if you write the beginning first) but also determine whether or not the idea is worth writing about in the first place

>> No.12947872

>>12945742
A lot of people’s first love/first relationship will be looked at through rose tinted glasses mate, I can assure you most guys (me included) feel this way.

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>>12858803
non consensually beating the shit out of Suisei

>> No.12948052

>>12947772
Hmm, that’s an interesting way of doing things. NTA but I definitely should have done this, because I’m deeply regretting some stuff I’ve already written and released in my series, which probably could have gone better if I had done this.

>> No.12948512

>>12947872
Tbf she was my first love yes, but during that gap where she moved schools I had 3 gfs and it just didn't feel the same. With her it was love love, with the others I just wanted to make out with them but with her I didn't even think of her sexually. Crazy stuff.

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>>12948052
hope it helps you

>> No.12949476

>>12949374
Hope deez nuts fit in yo mouth bitch

>> No.12949730

>>12949374
So do I, thanks.

>> No.12949927

>>12949730
>>12949374
So, you guys gonna kiss or something?

>> No.12950870

>>12949927
Yeah.

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>>12947996
>Suisei demanding you punch her in the face while she holds a switchblade to your stomach

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>>12949927

>> No.12951129

Guys I miss Koone...

>> No.12951211

>>12951129
everyday life you take for granted etc etc.

>> No.12951213

>>12950890
How the fuck does someone with such a supposedly extreme fetish not manage to say anything other than repeating the same fucking cookie cutter prompts and stories over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again? It's always "threatens you to punch her" or "you punch her because she didn't learn to speak X language", jesus Christ get better material.

>> No.12951305

>>12951213
Ahh, gomen gomen.

*ahem*

Suisei demands you elbow her in the forehead to open a cut on her brow that will require 12 stiches and an X-ray to confirm that she did break her orbital bone

>> No.12951417

>>12951305
NTA and i disagree with his overly hostile approach but i do think you're gonna need slightly more than that tidbit, because there's no hook.

most shorthand prompts like that get picked up because the author shares interest an interest in the material but this sounds pretty unique and i don't think you've got much of a chance if you don't include a more in-depth look at the situation - why suisei wants this, why it's hot, etc

i would write more but i'm not entirely convinced this isn't just a shitpost

>> No.12951586

>>12951417
>i'm not entirely convinced this isn't just a shitpost
You're right because I was just kidding around be cause "non consensually beating the shit out of Suisei" would be funny if (You) were the one not consenting to beating her

>> No.12951636

>>12951586
i thought that might have been the case, yeah

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>>12858765
>>12893057
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTnMWM5ARFrVVNISapSNBJ0nTKIjxnlvCAgK4-FreTwx7G5yC9b9Li74a1SyQw4D1gg_vfNfflCaPb4/pub

In Hushed Whispers, based on anon's request. With a special mention of Botan's minge.

tags: adventure, survival, fantasy, Botan, (you)

>>12907003
now if only I could finish them. I'm stuck on pretty much every one of them on how to continue them. It's my worst weakness as an author, can't finish what I start half the time.

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>>12923927
NTA, but I literally cannot, which is why despite being a huge classicalfag, only I go to see ballets but not operas even though they are basically the same thing.

>> No.12953184

>>12953034
I swear I'm an EOP burger, it's just really early.

>> No.12953738

>>12953034
You can't... enjoy songs in other languages?

>> No.12954073

Sorry guys, can't write today either. Tummy hurt. I'll retract into my blanket cocoon and activate RTR form. I'll maybe pump out something tomorrow...

>> No.12954126

>>12952607
Really cool. Genuinely interesting premise and a thrilling turn of events. Also, I don't mean to make light of your other works saying this - that isn't the case at all - but of the numerous series you've got going, I'm by far the most hooked on this one. With that being said, this is just about self-contained enough that you could leave it as-is and it would still be perfect.
Alternatively, you could take a different angle, and make each chapter episodic, with the cast of characters changing each time. Different anons and/or different chuubas.

I think this is the only time I've ever been really interested in an SFW fanfiction, especially given it's carried by the setting and writing rather than the characters.

Incidentally, was Botan getting high at the end inspired by that one prompt a while back of smoking with Botan?

>> No.12954131

>>12954073
Who tf is you fool?

>> No.12954349

>>12952607
This is a really good start for a new series, and that's pretty much all I can really say, I mean dialogue could be better since right now it's pretty barebones... but that could be intentional.
I guess the setting also needs clarification, since you wouldn't really get the picture of what it is unless you know of the original prompt.

>> No.12954400

>>12952607
Interesting, I’m excited to see the world building. Also you don’t have to do it but like >>12954126 said changing the characters each chapter with a new Anon and chuuba each time while slowly uncovering different parts of what’s going on could be really cool. Either way I’ll keep reading wherever it goes

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>>12954126
>>12954400
I'm so glad to hear it! I'm always worried a lot of my non-smut works won't be well received.

You know, i never even considered making it episodic and switching between multiple sets of people. That's a really good idea. I'll try to write a chapter like that and see if I can make it work, never tried a thing like that before. Thanks for the tip.

I didn't even see the prompt. I just find super serious coolgirls smoking a nice flourish lol. Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciated it.

>>12954349
Alright. I'll make sure to flesh both out come next chapter.

Anything specific, or is it more just general?

>> No.12955098

>>12953738
Only if I understand the lyrics, ie Beethoven's Ninth.

>> No.12955131

>>12955098
For that matter, if it's in English and I still can't understand, like most death metal, I still cannot listen.

>> No.12955419

>>12858803
Chuuba challenges you to a game of Twister hoping to wind up in "accidental" compromising and lewd positions, but you're too autistically competitive and flexible to let that happen

>> No.12955442

>>12955419
I want to try writing this... eventually

>> No.12955839

>>12952607
Scavenging about a wasteland with Botan always seems cool. Thanks for the story anon.

>> No.12956698

>>12955058
I mean, in terms of like specifics regarding the worldbuilding. It's kind of really not clear 'where' they are in regards what the world/setting they are in. I think at least a couple of sentences establishing that are needed to make what's happening clearer.

>> No.12959037

Don't die on me /wg/

>> No.12959059

>>12959037
You don’t have to force this to be alive you know.

>> No.12959063

>>12959037
You do know we can always make a new thread, right? You don't have to bump it.

>> No.12959083

>>12959037
Let the thread die if there’s nothing to discuss. Christ, you make it seems like it’s terrible.

>> No.12959119

>>12959037
Early morning in NA. It's expected.

>> No.12959124

>>12959037
So, since you bumped this thread, what do you have to discuss?

>> No.12959135

>>12959119
What's wrong with letting it die? We can always make a new one?

>> No.12959155

>>12959135
>>12959124
>>12959083
>>12959063
>>12959059
we gettin raided?

>> No.12959165

>>12959135
I never said anything was wrong with it dying, did I? We've only ever had a real thread die on us once as far as I know, anyway. I suppose it's just tradition to keep it alive by this point?

>> No.12959179

>>12959155
Raided? anon, there's nothing to discuss, and we can always make a new thread if these gets bumped off. I don't know why you even bumped it.

>> No.12959184

>>12959155
Looks like it, I refuse to believe any regulars would get pissy over what >>12959037 said.

>> No.12959194

>>12959165
Three times, from my estimation.

>> No.12959215

>>12959184
yeah figures. /wg/ can't catch a break

>> No.12959223

>>12959184
Not going to lie, but I was prettt excited when this was on the first page. I though a new story was posted.

>> No.12959233

>>12959194
Yeah? I only recall one where it was business as usual and we suddenly careened off a fucking cliff into Pg. 11 in about forty minutes. Some big event utterly spiked us

>> No.12959259

>>12959223
Same.

>> No.12959270

>>12959233
>Some big event utterly spiked us
Second might have been with Matsuri and Haachama drama.

>> No.12959339

>>12959155
People getting mad at you for bumping a dead thread isn’t raiding.

>> No.12959354

>>12959233
>Yeah? I only recall one where it was business as usual and we suddenly careened off a fucking cliff into Pg. 11 in about forty minutes. Some
Was that the one with a Mito photo? Because I remember a Mito thread just being archived before the bump limit.

>> No.12959390

>>12959354
No, it was like halfway through the thread. I remember I was talking with the Gunned Down author, they used Botan photos a lot. Nice guy.

>> No.12959427

>>12959390
Well, I remember there was a /wg/ Mito edition that got archived before the bump limit. Might have been dead hours though.

>> No.12959486

>>12959339
it has never happened before and the unique ip count keeps jumping in this "dead thread".

you're probably the earlyfag and have learned how to switch ips

kill yourself dude

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>>12858803
>No kson prompts in the prompt archives
LEt's change that. Kson femdoming you in bed.

>> No.12959587

>>12959538
I wouldn’t mind working in this, but how would this work? Isn’t she a lesbian?

>> No.12959636

>>12959587
>Isn’t she a lesbian?
She's heterosexual. Don't know where the rrat of her being a lesbian pop up.

>> No.12959645

>>12959636
cuz she outright said she likes girls on stream

>> No.12959711

>>12959645
A lesbian that likes NTR? Sounds like my type of woman.

>> No.12959731

>>12959645
Anon, just because she mentioned wanting to fuck a girl on stream, doesn't make her a lesbian. She could be just experimenting.

>> No.12959778

>>12959731
man i hate yurishits myself but this is just cope.

>> No.12959819

>>12959778
Anon, studies have shown that women are likely to experiment with their sexuality, however, in the same study, it shows that it doesn't make them gay.

>> No.12959844

>>12959819
Anon, stop coping. Kson will never fuck you, much less know you.

>> No.12959870

>>12959587
So is Miko, and that's never stopped anyone.

>> No.12959877

>>12959844
she will if you hold her down first

>> No.12959892

Christ, this is like deadbeats going schizo over Mori collabing with men.

>> No.12959920

I legit have to ask, but you guys do know none of these girls will meet you, much less fuck you.

>> No.12959936

>>12959920
fubuki is literally underneath my desk between my legs right now so idk what the fuck you're smoking

>> No.12959956

>>12959920
I ain't schizo enough to believe that.

>> No.12959969

>>12858689
Who is this messy haired angel?

>> No.12960006

>>12959969
>another new ip
it's getting pathetic now

>> No.12960009

>>12959969
A prophet who tried to warn /vt/ of Vtubers.

>> No.12960031

>>12960006
Take your meds, anon.

>> No.12960076

>>12960009
>A prophet who tried to warn /vt/ of Vtubers.
How about a prompt about Hana, your childhood bestfriend, trying to warn (You) that vtubers are just another form of e-thots and failing.

>> No.12960140

>>12960076
I wouldn’t do this. Hana’s statement is already controversial as is.

>> No.12960166

>>12960140
It has the potential to be quite the tearjerker. Besides, Hana needs some love.

>> No.12960203

>>12959920
Kiara took a plane to my country just to fuck me

>> No.12960207

>>12960166
She needs a bullet.

>> No.12960209

>>12960166
>Besides, Hana needs some love.
Yes, love, not hate. Which this fic will bring to her since the vast majority of /vt/ are schizos.

>> No.12960261

New thread
>>12960219

>> No.12960494

wow, look how posting activity drops like a fucking stone

what a schizo

>> No.12960677

>>12960494
It's a little amusing that there's one guy who dedicates a decent portion of his life just to make early threads.

>> No.12960714

>>12960677
It has to be automated. There's no way it isn't. At the very least they're timely, I guess. Everyone bitching about early threads made some person so fucking mad they've taken up this mantle. It's almost awe inspiring. Good for them.

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>>12858803
IRyS smut involving naked apron cooking, naked apron rawdogging against the kitchen bench, and then a wholesome meal cooked by your goblin wife.

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