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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>12696769

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12797773

STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.12797809
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12797809

Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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>> No.12797852

>>12794378

>> No.12798890
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>>12797809
>"Do you feel better now?"
>"Did something bad happen to you today?"

Flare insisting that you abuse her whenever you're upset and being thrilled when you finally do it unprompted.

>> No.12799635

>>12797809
Petra Gurin's daily routine, training up to assassinate Gura.

>> No.12802223

I almost want to write an ovipositor fic solely out of pity for the insectfag

>> No.12802487

>>12802223
Did I make this post? Because I'm already writing one but not out of pity.

>> No.12802640

>>12802223
I dunno anon, the last time we got an insect fic was 'Dog Maggots' by that maximalist anon and that one was kind of a mess due to the writer not really 'getting' the insect fetish and just writing a fic that didn't know what it was going for; so a fic born out of pity might not really satisfy anyone.

>> No.12802874

>>12798890
>Flare comforting you and telling you it's okay even as you land blow after blow to her already bruised face
>Flare telling you she still loves you as she attempts to get up from her battered position
>Flare asks if she's done something wrong to make you angry as she tries to limp closer to you only to collapse into your body as her wounds finally catch up to her
>Flare apologizing profusely when she notices she got her blood all over your nice clothes when she fell on top of you
>Flare hugging you and asking you not to leave her and that she'll try her hardest to be a better girlfriend

Guys, why the fuck am I so turned on by this scenario

>> No.12802950

>>12802223
>>12802487
If you are interested in what such a fic might read like, or what kind of description to use, check this one out.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/32667631
I commissioned this a couple years ago. Not chuubas

>> No.12802964

>>12802874
Because you're lonely and the idea of a woman that will never leave you even as you descend to the absolute worst point you can imagine is incredibly attractive.

>> No.12802994

>>12802964
Anon...he was asking a rhetorical question.

>> No.12803025

>>12802874
I momentarily felt like actual human garbage reading that. I really enjoyed the sadistic start - reminds me of that old Ayame masochist pic - but everything after that tugged away at my heart strings and made me guilty.

>> No.12803063

>>12803025
>I momentarily felt like actual human garbage reading that
You felt like garbage reading the fictional musings of another person? Why?

>> No.12803115

>>12803063
Because I enjoyed reading about raining brutality upon someone who doesn't at all deserve it, but then reading the aftermath drove that last point home.

>> No.12803263

>>12802950
H-how much did that cost?

>> No.12803393

>>12803263
I think it was $100 USD.

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>>12802950
dude...

>> No.12804812

>>12804357
Great, isn't it?

>> No.12804916

>>12803393
Man, I could be making bank if I wasn't too dumb to figure out these transactions online like shitcoin. What a strange world. I'll still never believe that people pay 30 dollars for some shitty arts and 100 dollars for a story that isn't even a third of the length of a published book. But well, even though I'll never understand those retards, I could still exploit them. If they feel like paying that much, why not take it?

>> No.12804997

>>12804916
I guess if the supply is incredibly low and the demand from one thirsty niche-fetishfag is incredibly high, it's not really exploitation, is it? It's a service that no one is willing to perform

>> No.12805058

>>12804916
>wasn't too dumb to figure out these transactions online like shitcoin.
That's actually sad, dude.

>> No.12805076

>>12804997
In my eyes, it's like a hooker overcharging. She's just a common whore, why does she think she deserve that much money just because she lets someone pee in her mouth? Just because some people are so deranged they'll pay anything to get what they want, doesn't mean someone has to take that "any" amount.

>> No.12805129

>>12805076
Gee, I wonder who this could possibly be.

>> No.12805145

>>12805076
are you that dumb fuck BR who complained about artists overcharging for their work months ago?

>> No.12805148

Bugchama I don't think I want to be your friend anymore. Fertilizing your loving insect wife's abdomen is one thing, but...

>> No.12805162

>>12805076
It's simple simple supply and demand you commie.

>> No.12805186

Honestly 100 dollars for a 9k word story is a steal on the buyers side.

>> No.12805290

>>12805148
Sorry you feel that way, I guess?

>> No.12805389

>>12805162
Let me put it in better terms for you. People are buying bread left and right for the usual price, hm, bread delicious. But then one day they see at the market something called "jesus bread". It's bread, regular bread, but it has Jesus face carved on it. Also, it's 100 times more expensive. Now, the average person would go "what the hell is this? Who would want to buy this bread that tastes the same but is more expensive just because the other breads don't have Jesus on them?" and then comes an old lady, extremely religious, strolling down the alley and she drops to her knees as she sees the bread. "Oh thank you, thank you for making this bread! I will buy it! In fact, 100 times the price of regular bread doesn't even cover it!". Now, the average person would find that old lady a fucking nutjob who was just scammed. But you people, you agree with that old lady. Some of you even are that old lady. It's so fucked up that you can't EVEN see my point. Just because someone is willing to pay for it, it does NOT make it not a scam.

>> No.12805421

>>12805389
Being a stupid third worlder, you don't have any clue what money is actually worth to your superiors.

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>>12805389
ogey

>> No.12805523

>>12805389
>expecting anyone to read this
kek

>> No.12805524

>>12805389
...
Why are you in the vtuber fandom if you find the concept of people spending money on something you think is pointless, a scam? Because a man donating an akasupa is doing it for their own enjoyment and satisfaction, in much the same way that woman who thinks she's found a religious relic would do.

>> No.12805584

>>12805524
It's the pekofaggot, there's no need to actually pay it any thought

>> No.12805790

>>12805584
Thought gays were hunted down in BR

>> No.12805834

>>12805790
Apparently exaggerated

>> No.12805856

>>12805524
And you think I don't consider superchatting retarded too? Paying for a millionaire's salary so they can spend 10k in gacha games every week to get their PNG or other forms of gambling? Again and again, two wrongs do NOT make a right. To me it seems you have accepted it is a scam, deep down, but you don't care anymore. You let them do it, and you happily pay up. Money is a chunk of your life. You're literally giving away the most precious thing one could own, time. It's sad. Or is it maddening? I am probably going to go insane if I kept looking at artist commission rates, or the sheer amounts of cash people throw at Vtubers. And I'm not even talking "I made 10 billion in shitcoin so it's fine", there are people here who just receive a regular salary, and are still blowing 100 dollars on a goddamn 9k story like it's "only natural". It makes you wanna tear your hair right out of your head.

>> No.12805899

>>12805856
>And you think I don't consider
Don't actually care what you think, sorry

>> No.12805943

>>12805856
Again, you have no clue what a regular salary is.

>> No.12806179

>>12805856
...
Why are you in this fandom if you find this so abhorrent?
This is like getting pissed at the concept of a tip, or a commission just because others more fortunate than you find their enjoyment where you cannot.

>> No.12806278

>>12806179
I'm here because it's free to the public to watch without ever having to pay a dime. Do you not realize the irony of you asking that?

>> No.12807404

>>12805389
Depends, how good does the carving of jesus look?

>> No.12808125

why are there so many abusive chubba stories?

>> No.12808194

>>12808125
there aren't enough

>> No.12808264

>>12798890
ask and ye shall receive.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR25Upp1Aq1aTkwGRDAWz2lITYy-labq5anK7zzwYqTjcpFwv4qYMj-xIDQc4VOncmL6Ix5Cqf1MCCD/pub

Tags: Flare, SFW, Chuuba abuse.

Still trying to shake off the burnout, so I apologize if it's a bit short/unsatisfactory.

Anchor: >>12797773

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>>12797809
Raising a family with Mio!

>> No.12809903

>>12809726
Kintsugi, A Wolf Mom's Love

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>>12808264
A-anon... I was only shitposting when I said that the thought of beating up Flare turned me on. I didn't actually expect someone to take it seriously much less write a fic about this scenario.
I feel like absolute garbage reading this fic, I wouldn't even call this a monkey's paw scenario since I actually thought of this scene when I wrote that greentext but I think that just makes it worse.
I'm sorry for having a hand in creating this prompt, I'm sorry for inspiring you to write this, and I'm sorry for everyone who read this and who will read this in the future.
Flare deserves better.

Please forgive me /wg/

>> No.12810002

>>12809940
Go sit in a corner and think about what you've done.

>> No.12810928

>>12809940
You caused this, anon. You see Flare's massive bruises? The blood dripping down her face? You did this to her.

>> No.12811318

>>12808264
Hey, thanks for the read. It was enjoyable, but I'd much rather have the narration told from Flare's perspective - the incongruity of Anon's thoughts and actions just fell flat. I think writing from her perspective - how much she loves this man, how she thinks thoughts of happy times with him whilst he viciously beats her - that would have pulled a greater empathetic response from the reader whilst maintaining the image of Anon as the bad guy, because he's humanized a lot less.

That's just my two cents, though. I enjoyed it, and hope your burnout ends soon.

>> No.12812807

>>12809940
You should now write a fluff-filled story about taking care of Flare and showering her with love to make up for it.

>> No.12812875

>>12809940
Ask for her to be raped next.

>> No.12812970

>>12805389
Anon we live in a world where Jews sell water in bottles. You didnt need to invent a stupid example with bread

>> No.12813191

>>12808264
I... got a bonner... I want to punch a women so bad bros...

Anyone usually enjoys fluffy vainilla a lot and want to have a perfect family life but get super horny with ryona fics? its like something primal wake up inside of me

>> No.12813227

>>12812970
> even though water is an extremely limited and valuable resource, it should be free because... uhh... i-it just should ok?!

>> No.12813294

>>12813191
No, fluff is like shovelling unseasoned rice into your fucking gob. It's plain, boring, and too much of it for too long makes me want to kill myself. It's much better accompanying other elements.

>> No.12813313

>>12813227
>water is an extremely limited and valuable resource
You live in a planet that is 80% water. Even selling water is relatevely something new. But well you know those who make water be a limited resource are the one that sell it in bottles

>> No.12813355

>>12812970
>where Jews sell water in bottles
Don't blame the opportunist, blame the people paying for it. They're who're actually propagating it.
t. bottled water drinker

>> No.12813364

>>12813294
I enjoy fluff. I still read those Mio and Fubuki fluffy fics. they even better when they are NSFW. Its nice to accompany with other elements but its also good by itself

>> No.12813399

>>12813355
>No dude you cant blame the Cartels for selling drugs
you have to blame the one buying despide they were indoctrinated to consume it.

>> No.12813447

>>12813399
Man I fucked the greentext, what lack of Mio fics does to a mf

>> No.12813475

>>12813399
>despide they were indoctrinated to consume it
Another fucking schizo. I don't know what kind of life experiences led you to this retarded conclusion, but I can only hope you're put out of everyone else's misery sooner rather than later.

>> No.12813584

>>12813475
>Implying Propaganda doesnt exist
Anon it's not a secret that propaganda makes you think that you need something when you dont. They teach it even in primary school

>> No.12813617

how 'bout them chuubas, eh?

>> No.12813633

>>12813313
By 2050, 6 billion people will be suffering from water scarcity to a degree as bad as it is in African villages nowadays. It will be more expensive than gasoline by then. Hope you stock up a lot on saltwater bud, cause that's all you're getting for retirement.

>> No.12813671

>>12813633
And who's fault is that?

>> No.12813690

>>12813671
People like you who think water is free and waste it.

>> No.12813703

>>12813617
need Mio fics

>> No.12813745

>>12813690
Yeah I'm sure the owners who control the water in every country are pure angels

>> No.12813788

>>12813633
That really sucks. Really, honestly and truly. I feel so bad for the billions of third-worlders. Won't be me, though, as I live in an actual first-world country.

I suspect mass-scale desalination plants will be a thing long before that actually becomes an issue.

Also, Fubuki. There. This is now chuuba-related.

>> No.12813891

>>12813788
It's been a long time since the last Fubuki fic. I'm worried anon started to forget about her

>> No.12813918

>>12797809
Fic about Fubuki doing what she does best: shilling. What is she shilling? Bottled water.

>> No.12813942

>>12813918
Now I need it. Fubuki shilling that Coca-Cola water that is popular in japan

>> No.12813997

>>12813918
This, but the water is bottled Fubuki Sweat, and she clearly wishes she didn't have to shill it.

>> No.12814019

>>12813788
Could always be worse. Some countries you'll either have to move away from, or buy oxygen to live. The air pollution is that bad, there are even signs saying to avoid certain streets because the pollution fog is too dense for your safety. By 2050 we will have 9.9 billion people, and assuming you aren't from the "first world country" third world country called USA, these third worlders will seep into your country like a plague.

Certainly, you'll be able to afford it. A lot of people will. But as I said, water at the price of gasoline will limit your uses for it by a fuck ton and it will be a real drag on your wallet. If you can't afford to buy 2L of gasoline every day now, imagine 2L of water then. Same thing.

The first chuuba to die of dehydration will be Aqua. Ironic, but true.

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>>12813918
I laughed

>> No.12814192

>>12814019
Wonder how long it'll be before Onions Green becomes a reality. Bet we'll all be dead before then, though, so fuck it, not our problem.
>>12797809
Aqua dies of dehydration and her corpse is quickly claimed by a government disposal unit, where it's recycled into nutrient blocks along with the thousands of other nameless, malnourished bodies.
The fic should be narrated from the perspective of Aqua's genmates as they chow down on storebought nutrient blocks, wondering if they could be eating their former friend and contemplating their own mortality.

>> No.12814213

>>12814192
Pfft, what the fuck is that word filter?

>> No.12814525

>>12814213
What were you trying to say?

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>>12808264
That was...wow. nice.

>> No.12814947

>>12814525
NTA but s o y lent green

>> No.12814997

>>12814525
What >>12814947 said. Old movie about this very issue.

>> No.12815077

>>12814692
Flare cunny...

>> No.12815369

>>12811318
strongly agree with this. the actions of storyanon were completely unrelateable

>> No.12815524

>>12815077
Some would call it Funny...

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>>12797809
Saving Watame from an abusive family, or abusive partner, or whatever else sad predicement she is in. I just really need a fic to fullfiled my saviorfag fantasy.

>> No.12816018

>>12815934
This, but raping her instead of helping her.

>> No.12816034

>>12815934
This but you end up abusing her too

>> No.12816239

>>12815934
This, but hooking her up with ecstasy, letting her get a tan, and leaving her so she has to fuck homeless men for drug money.

>> No.12816246

>>12815934
this but you slaughter her for her meat and enjoy it as a nice christmas dinner

>> No.12816319

>>12815934
This but you're the abuser in disguise and you double down on her for seeking help

>> No.12816349

>>12815934
This but her dad comes back and you guys beat her up together

>> No.12816364

>>12815934
This, but she continues the cycle and abuses (You) until you need to be rescued.

>> No.12816378

>>12815934
This but she gets trapped in a zoo with other sheep and rams and she has to clean their cocks and get bred by them on a daily basis while the public watches and she pretends to be a sheep.

>> No.12816443

>>12815934
I'll join in!
This, but the monkey's paw curls and a reprieve from her abuser is granted only at the whims of a humongous wasp, which carries her back to its hive and turns her into a nursery.

>> No.12816470

>>12816378
I could see this one being a comedy

>> No.12816484

y'all are damaged

>> No.12816647

>>12815934
This, but it ends up in (you) and Watame running away to a faraway land and leaving behind all your worries and bad memories, falling in love and raising a family together in the countryside.

>> No.12816663

>>12816647
This is the best one.

>> No.12816689

>>12816647
then she gets hit by a truck

>> No.12816704

>>12816470
I'm sorry but in what way could this be considered comedy?

>> No.12816753

>>12816689
one of those 18 wheelers

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>>12816689
HA, I EXPECTED THIS
THUS WHY THE COUNTRYSIDE STIPULATION.
Trucks can't go up those mountains, anon. Or through the bog. Give up, your monkey's paw has been defeated this time.

>> No.12816792

>>12816704
Rape is funny.

>>12816647
I bet you ask for plain cheese when your mates are ordering pizza.

>> No.12816817

>>12816767
Alright then, she gets kidnapped, raped, and murdered by some crackhead.

>> No.12816845

>>12816767
Trucks are a designation that come in all shapes and sizes, anon. Pickup trucks certainly do go up mountains.

>> No.12816889

>>12815934
This, but it's Greenpeace that answers her call for help. They release her into a nature reserve, where she is promptly killed and eaten by Mio within a day.

>> No.12816938

>>12816767
My truck (the name of my AR) certainly can

>> No.12816992

'this, but' twists never cease to amuse me

>> No.12817164

>>12816992
This but I don't actually feel amused.

>> No.12817183

>>12817164
i'm sorry to hear that

>> No.12817204

>>12817164
I’m sorry, anon. I’m sure your prompt will get written some day.

>> No.12817354

>>12816938
The faraway land is a gun-free zone.
>>12816845
Pick up trucks are loud and slow through country roads. Watame could hear them from a mile away.
>>12816817
Frank Castle lives in the nearby village. Crackheads go missing all the time, that's just impossible.

>> No.12817392

>>12817354
Allah himself smites Watame

>> No.12817502

>>12817392
NTA
Both Watame and Anon are not Muslims.

>> No.12817518

>>12817502
Does not matter, Allah is supreme.

>> No.12817632

>>12817354
watame dies of a brain aneurysm

>> No.12817675

>>12817632
At the old age of 93, after living a happy and fulfilling life at (your) side, in the presence of her 6 children and 20 grandchildren.

>> No.12817859

>>12817675
But the aneurysm was her fourth, which was the fatal one. The ones that came before left her, in this order, dementia ridden, then amnesia, then vegetable on a wheelchair. The first one happened at age 63 when you found her completely red on the ground with your kids screaming. After she got dementia, she began to act really childish and couldn't act proper in front of your grandkids so your family didn't visit you anymore for their good. When she got amnesia, she couldn't even remember your own face, but you took care of her nonetheless. When she couldn't even move or speak anymore, idling away her days on a wheelchair and drooling all over herself, you still were there for her. But god knew you had a gun in your drawer ready to end it as soon as she passed. And finally, that time had come.

>> No.12818053

>>12817859
>dementia ridden, then amnesia
anonchama...

>> No.12818057

>>12817859
Alright this one hits too close to home, I'm done playing.

>> No.12818207

>>12817632
Why.

>> No.12818277

>>12818053
If someone is demented, it's different from amnesia. My grandpa has dementia, after his first aneurysm he used to shit himself, walk to the streets naked, enjoy new types of music like hip hop and rap, that kind of stuff. He still remembers everyone around him, hell, he knows more than anyone I know does about general trivia, the guy's still a fucking encyclopedia even at age 75. In short, dementia but no amnesia.

>> No.12818498

>>12818277
Looks like I got dementia and Alzheimer's mixed up

>> No.12818526

>>12814947
>>12814997
Sorry, I'm retarded. Yeah I don't think we're close to a Green scenario yet, but things can easily get worse.

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>>12797773
I still don't think I understand this fetish but I gave it a shot anyways.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSWJA-hHVFTE5Bk01QMYQuSc6vqUy-O6PmtVS6iodCq6Yj2aYI5b14xqHmfFcGCkTL84Qr3uvkz9IqG/pub


Tags: Mio, oviposition

>> No.12819651

>>12819599
Why are you like this :c

>> No.12819652

>>12819599
Lmao someone paid 100 bucks for what others do for free

>> No.12820306

>>12815934
this. no buts, just this.

>> No.12820364

>>12820306
This except not this

>> No.12820371

>>12819599
I'm not gonna read it, but your scarifice is not in vain if it means we don't get the bug prompt anymore, so thank you

>> No.12820405

>>12819651
same reason why I wrote the scat fic: the challenge
>>12819652
I wish I got paid money to write this

>> No.12820578

>>12819599
Surprisingly enjoyable, but that's probably because I have a fetish for girls being overcome with lust to the point they will accept anything for an orgasm, rather than enjoying the insect stuff itself. Considering the scenario took place in a low visibility environment, I think you did a good job of describing the other senses to keep the situation vivid. I also enjoyed that there were some humorous bits thrown in, so it wasn't just viscerally disgusting from start to finish.
My biggest criticism is that you should really have more variety in the subjects of your sentences. You pretty much refer to Mio as "Mio" or "she" throughout the whole story, which becomes a little monotonous. Perhaps you could throw in a few "the wolf girl" or "the [adjective befitting the situation] girl" or some other stand in to keep things interesting?

>> No.12820922

>>12817354
>he thinks gun-free zones exist
Anon, people can make basic guns with a few sheets of scrap metal and hand tools these days. Not something as advanced as an AR, but to suppose that guns couldn't possible exist in a modern setting is a bit silly.

>> No.12821253

>>12819599
This criticism is coming from someone who can't jerk off right now, and I honestly also don't care about being gentle. If you are a pussy about criticism, don't read this.

The writing was good, but that's the only thing I'll give you. I think you did indeed miss the point of the fetish.

First off, what kind of reason was that for her to go into this rusty house with creaking floors? Because she could somehow "save money" if she broke in? Why would she want that house anyway?

Second, how did her eyes have to adjust to the dark if she was already inside a dark house? Assuming she fell through the floor, say the lights above were on and not just dark, there would be enough light seeping in for her to see her surroundings in the basement.

Third, the creature. A lack of description and a severe misunderstanding of the genre. What's the point of making it a story about a creature if you could replace it with a regular guy with strong arms and maybe a knife? The slime served no purpose, it didn't trap her, it wasn't for any eggs, nothing like that. Why did you even bring it up? The expositional dialogue about ovipositors was extremely out of place too.

The rape. Actually, the "rape". As usual, she starts feeling good and cumming her brains out 20 seconds in. Worst yet, you could have had an excuse. It's vaginal! Cool! It resembles a dog knot! Cool! But it still wouldn't feel good if she didn't want it, unless you know, you used a sting from the creature or something. Something bugs are known to do?

If the creature is an ovipositor that relies on rape to lay eggs, it wouldn't let her do the movement. That's not how it works on insects. Though I'll give you that it's an unknown creature. Whatever.

The egg was rubbing her g-spot? Really?

Anyway the rest is just the same complaints as the other part about a half assed rape. Good for you for writing it, you can actually write well. But as you said, you didn't really understand it so it was probably best if you left it to someone who is actually into it to do it.

>> No.12821474

>>12808125
This place used to be an abuse thread

>> No.12821494

Do we have a rape story in which the chuuba is kidnapped, raped whilst screaming and crying, wanting it to stop, but the (you) character just keeps going? After the rape, he keeps her imprisoned, forcing her to birth his children and then raping her again?

>> No.12821796

>>12821494
This but with Okayu

>> No.12821930

>>12821494
This with Shion or Rushia but no rape, just beating the shit out of her.

>> No.12821970

>>12821253
Thanks for the response but I see flaws in some of the points you make. About her eyes adjusting, I wrote when she goes into the house she turns the lights on and then she falls into a dark basement. There wouldn't be enough light for her to see the entire basement. Secondly, the slime is to show how disgusting the place is not everything mentioned in a story has to be plot relevant and I have to explain what an ovipositor is because most people, including myself, don't have knowledge of insect anatomy. Speaking of which >thats not how it works on insects. who cares? It's a fucking bipedal creature not to mention realism was tossed out the window the moment Mio is even mentioned. By the way in my mind's eye I pictured the creature as a vonnegut. Also about the enjoying rape part: maybe you don't know this but some women have orgasms during it (is that consent? no.) so I tried to show that but obviously failed. I'll agree on your parts about me not understanding the genre because I don't and I don't think I ever will. By the way when you start off by saying you're going to be extra critical actually be critical.

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>>12821796
Okayu is a gentle soul and doesn't deserve such treatment

>> No.12822364

>>12822254
I’ll never forget what she did to my oshi. She deserves every bit of it and more.

>> No.12822408

>>12821494
There was an Anon who was working on such a thing before, but he dropped it, apparently.

>> No.12822475

>>12821970
The light would still seep into the basement, if it was a hole large enough for her to fall through. I never said "entire basement" now did I? It's just unreasonable she wouldn't be able to see her attacker. The slime, you are admitting to being used for meaningless gross value, yeah, good one. Explaining what an ovipositor is is as retarded as explaining a cloaca, or a parasol, or whatever word you want.

You shouldn't write exposition dialogue for a word unless you're deliberately using a word that you wanted to be complex.

Not caring is not an argument. You may delude yourself into thinking it is, but it's not. Especially when defending your own work. Yes, there's no realism. That doesn't mean I'm not gonna complain if you throw in a one legged unicorn pissing gold at the end of a rainbow in your story for no reason.

You sure didn't manage to give off the image of a "Vonnegut" in my mind, I'll tell you that.

"Cumming during rape" yeah, during rape. Actual rape, from a man, having sex with a woman. Not from a creature inserting it's oversized ovipositor and just leaving it there. That would be like saying woman have orgasms from tampons. She didn't begin to feel good because rape was happening, she began to feel good because you wanted her to feel good, and that's all there is to it.

The warning of criticism is just something I was told to do, it's engrained in my mind. Fags complaining that I'm too negative or something. Nonetheless, the criticism was valid but I'm sure you knew that. You just wanted to get a final word in. Don't worry, everyone does. But maybe, take the criticism instead of hiding behind a thin layer of sarcasm or maybe next time actually say something instead of being passive aggressive because if I'm being honest, you just cemented yourself as one of those faggots that can't take criticism in my eyes by being so defensive. How ironic, my warning was for you after all.

>> No.12822603

>>12821253
>if you left it to someone who is actually into it to do it.
lmao good luck finding someone else here bugnigger

>> No.12822797

>>12822364
I'd say Okayu was lucky, getting to touch all over Aqua like that.

>> No.12823554

>>12822475
How the hell did I come across as passive aggressive? And you're still being retarded. Who would've guessed that the faggot with a weird fetish is well a faggot. One last thing is that I wasn't being defensive. I was just pointing out certain flaws in your criticism. If I'm to be perfectly honest the sex in the fic is rather boring and there's a severe lack of detail when it comes to the bug eating part. It would've been better to just write it about Mio and Miko at the shrine goofing off. If I still come across as passive aggressive then you still come across as a nitpicky faggot that wants uber realistic insect rape.

>> No.12823839

>>12823554
You don't even realize what you're saying. You're complaining that you didn't want to write about this genre, and complaining that someone wanted to read the genre you were saying you wrote but they just didn't find it in there. Do you not see the contradiction? If you didn't want to write it, are admitting to it and saying you don't even get it, how am I the one at fault for complaining that you didn't write the genre correctly?

>> No.12824186

>>12819599
Oh gosh, someone went ahead and actually wrote it out. I can't wait to read it, anon. Will give feedback after work.

>> No.12824275

>>12821253
>>12822475
>>12823839
This twat's not me, by the way.

>> No.12824304

>>12824275
It's probably pekofag false flagging again, isn't it?

>> No.12824363

>>12824304
Surprisingly enough, there's not only one person in this general that is into oviposition. Though it's not an active fetish of my mine, I very much so enjoy the occasional bug rape.

>> No.12824380

>>12824275
oh damn lol
guess I should stop replying to an obvious troll then.

>> No.12824402

So is the 'this but' posting for that watame prompt just memeing or is there actually some desire for a series of events that just keep getting worse for watame.

>> No.12824438

>>12824402
It was just memeing but I would actually be interested in reading that.

>> No.12824450

>>12824402
Probably just memeing, but a story like that could be quite funny if done well.

>> No.12824463

>>12824402
Just memeing. Please write fluffy Watame saviorfagging, I need it. Please.

>> No.12824498

>>12824304
Maybe. Regardless, I won't ever shit on you for writing out a niche fetish like mine despite not possessing it yourself.

I genuinely am so thrilled right now. Giddy, even. I don't think my boss would appreciate me whipping it out now though, even if I am on break, so sadly I shall be back much later. Thanks again, anon!

>> No.12824501

>>12824402
I'd like loli Watame to be molested if possible. Thank you.

>> No.12824534

>>12824402
Juat memeing, but I would absolutely love to read something like that

>> No.12824548

>>12824402
Make sure to include Watame having a miscarriage.

>> No.12824601

>>12824402
I would prefer the Watame saviourfag but I'm fine with some of the memes as well.

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>>12824402
>Watame is born
>At a young age, she is abused and molested
>You've grown up with her, knowing this, but unable to do anything
>Finally, you both turn 18
>No longer minors, you take Watame and flee to remote mountain village
>Years of watching her abuse have left you scarred, and you begin to abuse her too
>At first, it's only verbal, but over time you start to beat and rape her too
>The entire situation culminates one weekend, when you carve her up, piece by piece to create a feast for the village that took you in so many months ago
>She screams, again and again, but gagged and within the dark cellar, none hear her cries
>By the Sunday night, where the feast begins, Watame is just a husk. The memory of every slice, the tearing of her flesh, having broken her
>Seeing her strange behaviour, other women in the village try to comfort her, only for her to cry and run at their touch
>Eventually, the truth is revealed
>You're arrested, and Watame taken in by Greenpeace, and after rehabilitation, is released into a nature reserve
>A few months later, the reserve rangers perform their half-yearly check on the wolf population
>They find Mio, and her pups consuming Watame, shocked to find her flesh continually regenerating
>By now, Watame has been eaten hundreds of times
>The rangers take her soulless body away, unable to bear the sight of her suffering
>She's taken to a commercial petting zoo, Greenpeace no longer sure what to do with her
>Proceeds to be raped and bred repeatedly by the sheep, allowing the company to rapidly expand operations
>The petting zoo becomes a huge international business, famous in every household the world over for their adorable and fluffy sheep
>At the centre of it all is one sheep, alone, abused, and nothing but a husk of her former self
I imagine it going something like this.

>> No.12824926

>>12824905
>>12824548
Dang it, I forgot to include the miscarriage.
Anyway, this isn't a story, so don't archive it. It's more like an overly extended prompt.

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>>12824905

>> No.12825081

>>12824905
WHY

>> No.12825139

>>12824905
Holy shit.

This is a thing of beauty. I love it.

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>>12824905
I don't like this

>> No.12825221

>>12824905
I can't believe you managed to fit all of them in. Well done.

>> No.12825240

>>12824402
It's absolutally just people memeing. There's probably only two people who would enjoy a story like that, it will mostly just be met with a "I can't believe you actually write that" just like the insect and scat one.

>> No.12825420

>>12824905
this was well done got a good laugh out of me. Her constantly being eaten reminded me of Fire Punch.

>> No.12825622

>>12824905
If anyone ends up turning this into a full story, make sure to include the miscarriage.

>> No.12826088

>>12825622
Can't forget the miscarriage, after all.

>> No.12826138

>>12825622
>>12826088
Double dubs. In my opinion, the miscarriage would work well as the catalyst for (you)r abuse of Watame. You blame her for "killing" your child, and so you yell and assault her as punishment.

>> No.12826264

>>12824905
Holy shit.
I don't think a full story of this would work since the entire gag is that it keeps getting worse wouldn't really work in longform as the length would contribute to people just getting tired and bored of the hope spot then crushing despair structure but this is a damn fine greentext.
Though in theory it could be done as a series but fuck man, I don't think anyone here can write despair porn for the 5/6 part series needed to get through that greentext outline.

>> No.12826326

>>12824905
This greentext is like any other greentext

>> No.12827160

How do you write a "gulp" sound effect, like someone swallowing saliva. Not even out of fear, just in any situation really.

>> No.12827424

>>12827160
*gulp*

>> No.12827575

>>12827424
I guess a sound effect was a retarded way to put it. Right now I just write "she gulped in anticipation" or something, but I've seen better ways to do it, I just can't remember.

>> No.12827597

>>12827575
Swallowed is a good one too.

>> No.12827875

>>12827575
Just pick a verb that sounds right then rewrite the sentence if it doesn't work. Don't overthink it, just write what feels right.

>> No.12827968

>>12827160
Something about a 'lump in her throat' sounds familiar? And trying to swallow or force it down. Other than that, just this >>12827875. It doesn't sound like it will muddle up any meaning or even be noticeable in an entire story.

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>>12797809
I am once again asking for another Vampire Polka Story.

>> No.12830546

>>12830411
Sorry anon but I'm pretty sure the thread is still recovering from the threadshitter that reposted 10 prompts every thread that started with a polka prompt.

>> No.12830601

>>12830546
That was 3 months ago

>> No.12830634

>>12830411
Is the prompt just Polka but a vampire?

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>>12830634
Yes.

>> No.12833440

thinking about loli Polka

>> No.12833575

>>12808264
Honestly this feels like it needs the buildup from the original prompt in order to make the 'hit' hurt harder since as an independent scene, while it does work and does properly convey the internal pain, I feel like it needs more context to convey make the "I am such a huge piece of shit" nature that you were going for in regards to the thoughts of the anon as he has become someone who does this.
Overall though. Good Fic, and good pain.

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>>12797809
(You) saved Watame from her abusive parents by beating the everloving shit out of them. But because of this, your parents sent you to study abroad because they think that your hometown is bad influence. Now, 10 years later, you finally got the chance to meet her again. That's it, no tragedy and no twist. Just some wholesome Watame fluff.

>> No.12833968

>>12833791
Then she gets hit by a truck

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>> No.12834138

>>12819599
Not OR but this is just so cute! Adorable buggies making a meal out of their Mio-mama.

>> No.12834141

>>12833968
While pregnant, barely surviving, but becoming quadriplegic, and miscarrying.

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Retain your motivation.

>> No.12834219

>>12834141
Then she gets raped by a crackhead, made a meal out of, sent to a zoo to get raped by sheep, and smited by Allah.

>> No.12834261

>>12834219
at least she'll get to heaven

>> No.12834397

>>12834261
Then she get sent to hell for the crime of beonh raped.

>> No.12834637

>>12834161
Motorboating bunny butt!!

>> No.12834709

>>12834161
Does peko ever act lewd on stream? I've only watched her tf2 stream.

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>>12834709
No but she loves nousagi's like nothing else

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>>12797809
(You) are a lonely highschool student who constantly get tormented by bullies that made your life a living hell. But your life dramatically changes when a new student by the name of Shishiro Botan enter your school. She quickly became one of the most popular student in the school. She's friendly with everyone but hostiles to the unpopular kids and she seems to singel you out especially. Her bullying doesn't make you hate her however, in fact, it did the opposite. Ever since she started picking on you, all the other bullies stop picking on you from fear of her, which causes your mind to associate her with feelings of safety and comfort. Because of this, you slowly start to fall on love with her.

>> No.12835364

>>12835084
so Bully Girls but just Botan?

>> No.12835600

>>12797809
Watching a chuuba absolutely destroy the toilet while you watch due to a male not agreeing with her

>> No.12835734

>>12835600
Whoops. I meant meal, not male

>> No.12835854

>>12835600
Because she's a feminist and that male was Ben Shapiro and she just got OWNED like a libtard. Someone like Kiara would be the best fit for this but any EN girls except Goomba and Irys fit the bill.

>> No.12836180

>>12835600
Why would having a man disagree with her lead to her having an ass eruption? I don’t get it.

>> No.12836199

>>12835600
hello /ringo/

>> No.12836216

>>12836180
Anon means literally destroying. Like in a coming-of-age movie, she and Anon head to a junkyard and smash old toilets in rage while they talk out their feelings.

>> No.12836253

>>12836180
she destroys the toilet with a sledgehammer out of rage.

>> No.12836491

>>12836216
I’d read it

>> No.12836661

>>12836216
and now we can loop it back to the hatesex and all is well in the world.

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>>12797773
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR4SkEgj36I7AjPpp7obyHrzxgCjdEADQU9PuRk34LIPCVdvJyl2k4gm5rTB5ROyQkmndrlRgiw7Dnf/pub

Some more /ss/, featuring (you), Reine, Ollie and Moona.

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>>12824905
I hate it here

>> No.12837432

>>12836813
Ah, to be molested by Reine and/or Pochi as a young man...

>> No.12837874

>>12797809
(You) have always had a sort of peculiar problem, every woman you've ever met has tried to rape you at least once. As part of an extensive years long therapy, you've been assigned to work at a company almost entirely staffed by females. Join rapebait Anon throughout his harrowing tenure working for Cover.

>> No.12838337

>>12837874
This but you’ve honed your anti-rape skills during a few years in therapy (training) sessions and successfully stop all attempts at your body

>> No.12838372

can we please stop making prompts? my god

>> No.12838419

>>12838372
no<3

>> No.12838462

>>12838372
This, but we make even more prompts.

>> No.12838875

>>12836813
>>12836813
Wasn't expecting much when I began reading, but it was pretty nice. All the chuubas felt like they were written pretty well, while Reine having her way with you was hot.

>> No.12839404

>>12797852
>>12839336

>> No.12839510

After all the stuff about Watame and abuse in this thread has made me weirdly bloodthirsty. I like Watame and don’t get off to abuse shit, I just want to see her to get the shit beaten out of her in a non sexual way. What has happened to me?

>> No.12839979

>>12836813
i find it kinda weird how moona completely disapears from the story 3/4 of the way through. i was expecting her to show up again at the very end, but after the bath scene, she's never mentioned again. reading it again, she probably went to bed immediatly after the bath scene, but it still feels a little strange.

>> No.12840688

>>12839510
I think it's similar to the appeal of moral degeneration where it's not even about the sex, but in how fucked the girl becomes.

>> No.12841127

>>12839510
You've seen a small sample of what abuse chads have to offer, and realized that they're just words on a screen. You've begun to see the light.

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Looking to spice up your reading? Imagine Anya is looking through a crack in the doorway the next time you read a Fubuki smutfic. Bam! Now, it's NTR.

>> No.12842107

>>12842072
>Imagine Anya
i'm trying to wank not go to sleep

>> No.12842149

>>12842072
All this reminds me of is that one writeanon who tried write an Anya fic, but couldn't because she was too boring.

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>>12839404

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>> No.12842488

>>12842072
NTR is dumb and boring

>> No.12842741

>>12842149
The fact that she has 3 writeanons who've tried and failed to do anya reps to try and write her is the second funniest thing to come out of her.
The first of course being her fanbase deciding to merge threads with Petra; seriously that suggestion could not have come from anywhere but as a joke, and the fact that they went with it is the funniest shit.

>> No.12842905

>>12819599
Wow, anon. I must admit, I didn't actually expect much. I thought it would be like the scatfag found the fic you wrote for him - that is, a valiant attempt but missing the minute details which actually make up the core of the fetish.
Imagine my delight, then, when I found that this isn't just a competent work in the genre - it's something I had an earth-shattering orgasm to.

Spoilered for the icky details that some anons may not want to read.

I agree with >>12820578 in that you've done a great job of showing Mio giving into a primal lust. On top of that, the details of the process - the pleasure she feels as the eggs push into her, expand her belly and roll around inside her... it was just so damn good.

The only thing I really don't like - and this was MY FAULT for mentioning otherwise in a previous post - was the snuff at the end. Apparently I didn't really understand my own desires, and the threat of death is way more arousing than actually dying. I'd have preferred she willingly live her days out as an incubator for these creatures.

Yes, it could be better - I think the intro was so detached from the rest of the story that it could be cut off and you wouldn't miss anything - but the core fetish is so well written that I'd say your attempt at challenging yourself to write a niche fetish is a resounding success. I've made a backup of the fic and I most certainly will be reading it again in the future.

>>12820405
I'm also willing to put my money where my mouth is - literally. Leave a ko-fi link or a paypal address in the document, and I'll send you some money for this. It was 2247 words - I'll pay you $30 USD for it.

>> No.12843523

>>12842905
Wow. All I can say is that I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it so much. As you said there's still room for improvement but I didn't realize I nailed the fetish down. I gotta ask is having the creature fully explained hotter or is it better to leave the details up to the reader's imagination?

As for the money I think you should keep it. I'm flattered that you'd offer some to me but this is still a fun side hobby for me and I don't want to worry about that type of stuff. But again thanks for the offer and thanks for reading. Your response unironically made my day.

>> No.12843666

>>12843523
Its cosmetic appearance is up to the author's choice, because either way has an impact on the overall fic; while an ambiguous appearance lends more to the fear aspect, I personally feel that this lends itself better towards visual media rather than the written, where detail is needed to conjure up a scene.
It's in my humblest of conjecture that it's better to amp up the detail and push the grotesque aspect. Chitinous plates, probing feelers, multitudes of eyes, a slimy texture, mysterious liquids exuding from its body, the smell of formic acid... all of these things and more reinforce the idea that whatever this thing is, it's fucking disgusting.

Okay. I won't force the issue. I just wanted to let you know that your work was strongly appreciated. Thanks for giving it a shot, anon!

>> No.12844032

>>12843523
>has written scat
>has written insect egg laying
do we have a new weird anon?

>> No.12844235

>>12842149
>>12842741
Just watch some clips man. And if that's too much then just read her vtuber wiki page.

>> No.12844324

>>12844235
Failing that, just write a fic based on her backstory and a description of her personality - that is, standoffish and slightly bratty.

Chances are whatever you come up with will actually be more compelling than the real thing.

>> No.12844341

>>12844235
Anon. People have tried and People have failed at writing an anya fic.
This isn't a 'haha anya boring' meme. It's reminiscing about thread history.

>> No.12844345

>>12843666
Ok thanks for letting me know
>>12844032
If people keep making prompts with unusual/weird fetishes then I'll keep writing them lol

>> No.12844394

>>12844345
Can you hear that in the background? Is that...music? Kind of sounds like Ride of the Valkyries...

Oh, hey, someone's banging at the door. I'll get it.

/d/? Is that you? What are you doing here?

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>>12833791
Watame is made for wholesome fluffy stories. And also rough babymaking sex.

>> No.12845551

>>12830411
Smut or not? What are you looking for in it? It might take a while for me to get to it.

>> No.12845893

>>12845551
NTA but a story about vampire polka being disgusted by the taste of your blood.

>> No.12846218

>>12845893
Please anon, the only thing a girl might ever like about me would be the taste of my blood. Don't take this away from me.

>> No.12846869

>>12797809
Attending Pekora's Perfect Math Class in which she fucks up multiples of 7 to such a painful degree that the kids she's supposed to be teaching need to comfort her and teach her instead.

>> No.12847193

>>12846218
Accept that your vile blood makes you the natural enemy of vampires anon.

>> No.12848025

>>12836813
>tfw 33 and too old, bald, fat, and ugly to be ara ara'd

>>12847193
NTA, but I'm diabetic so vampires would love me.

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>>12848025
>33 and too old

>> No.12848087

>>12847193
>JUST TASTE IT! TASTE IT AGAIN
>ANON HOLY SHIT IT'S LIKE YOU'VE EATEN NOTHING BUT GARLIC FOR THE PAST FOUR YEARS PLEASE
>BITE ME YOU BITCH

>> No.12848329

Are there any cute, cozy, or otherwise feel good stories with Bae?

>> No.12848397

>>12848329
ritual book. smut tho

>> No.12848679

>>12848329
>>12848397
Fair warning though, Bae is extremely Out of Character in that fic, so it might not be to your taste.

>> No.12848697

>>12848679
yeah she's actually interesting

>> No.12849050

>>12848397
>>12848679
Sad. Maybe I'll up and request something.

>> No.12849206

>>12849050
Too many requests as it is. Still haven't gotten anyone to do the Holodeath juice-that-makes-you-cum-super-hard or Takamori Mori's-skyscraper-dwarfing-cock-cumflates-Kiara-to-galactic-levels-before-bursting requests yet. Request list reps.

>> No.12849252

>>12849206
Hell are you talking about? They haven't been done because there hasn't been anyone interested in them, not because there's a waiting list.

>> No.12849306

>>12849252
Maybe a little from column A, and a little from column Burst that chimkin with your universe-stretching girlcock

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>>12849306
whoa

>> No.12849621

>>12836180
This >>12835600 but it's because she swallowed a man whole and alive and is now having trouble pushing out his bones

>> No.12849668
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>>12849621
what the fuck?

>> No.12850061

>>12835084
>>12835364
Sounds good

>> No.12850084

>>12836813
Are there more /ss/ stories?

>> No.12850087

>>12848072
If you can find me an ara in her 40's or 50's attracted to men in their 30's please let me know.

>> No.12850455

>>12850084
hundreds.

The one's I've written are Apple of Her Eye and Nurse Aki's Special Exam.

>> No.12850528

>>12850084
Ride is a good one.

>> No.12850913

>>12850087
Anon that's just called cougar hunting.

>> No.12850918

>>12849206
I was thinking about that juice-that-makes-you-cum-super-hard prompt, but I wanted to use Towa instead, who procured the juice as a "devilish prank", but ended up drinking it instead, which leads to you(or another holo) having to help her tide this out.

>> No.12851104

What's one of the most degenerate, dark fantasies you want written?

And before he says it, I'm not asking you insectfag.

>> No.12851527

>>12851104
Unironic Rushia Rape fic with an aftermath that leaves her a broken woman.

>> No.12851692

>>12851104
exploring how the sudden and unexpected death of a holo would impact her friends/genmates

>> No.12851730

>>12851104
Last month, I made a request for a Bae story. Specifically this one:
"I need a Bae onahole, minigirl stomach bulge fic where she is shrinked to a size similar to the one she did in her last chatting stream and some dude goes to town on her. Make it non consensual/rape if possible and try to make the details as painful as possible.

Bonus: Anatomy discussed and anal round afterwards

Thanks"

Seeing her get scared from the giant dudes from little nightmares awoke something in me, especially after she downsized her model the following stream. I wanted it to be in character, ending is really up to you. Essentially a horror, Non-con, stomach deformation, Minigirl, violent/brutality rape fic. You are free to make up any extra aggressors.

>> No.12851775

>>12851104
The 'Matsuri rapes you so hard you can never find pleasure in another's arms' story.

>> No.12851806

>>12851527
Ending scene featuring a dramatic recreation of the Rushia in the shower post

>> No.12851884

>>12851104
>I'm not asking you insectfag.
Y'know, oviposition is like not even 1% of the posts I've made here. You just don't see it because I'm anonymous.
I was going to suggest AA's Matsuri Child abuse outline from a few months ago.

>> No.12851925
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>>12851104
Yandere Rushia kidnaping (you) and trapping you in her basement where she brutally rapes you and comfort you after. She has done this so many times and for so long that you developed stockholm syndrome and falls deeply in love with her. It could end with her accidentally unlocking her basement, but you are so broken that the thought of escaping doesn't even cross your mind. She take this as a sign of your love and end up forcing you to a marriage.

>> No.12852131

>>12851925
I don't give a fuck if this story has been done before I love this concept and I want to be fucking brutally maimed and borderline disfigured in the make of love by a chuuba who forces me to knock her up and absolutely shattering my rapidly weakening psyche into loving her please bitch break my fucking legs at the knees so I can't run carve your name into my skin cut open my chest and kiss my still beating heart and use your weird necromancer friend to stitch me back up FUCK

>> No.12852342

>>12851104
i've had this idea in my head for a long time ever since i read about some anon here writing a high school story involving bullying

this is the premise:
you and a holo of your choice are friends in high school and through the whole thing you're being bullied because you're friends with her. you say nothing about it and just endure it as to ntot worry her, but she notices either way and goes to speak with your bullies and try to convince them to leave you alone. they agree on it but only if she allows them to have their way with her which she reluctantly agrees to. this happens more than once as one time was simply not enough to deter them.
eventually you start to notice that the bullies arely approach you now and even if they do, they don't do anything to you. but just as the bullies distanced themselves away from you, so has your friend. every time you ask her to hang out, she refuses, saying that she's busy.
one evening you receive a link to a video from an unknown sender and it turns out it's an hour long video of your bullies fucking your friend. she doesn't seem the same as the one you knew previously, as her eyes now seem hollow. throughout the video, your bullies openly mock and talk about you as they plow at her, seeing if she'd react. to your horror, she doesn't, only caring about the pleasure she's feeling. as the video is close to its end, one of the bullies turns towards the camera and says that they're done with you and that your friend is now their property. the video ends with the holo covered in their cum, staring blankly at the camera with her mouth open and drooling

i don't even like NTR yet i can't get this out of my head
i hate it

>> No.12852412

>>12851925
This but it's all of gen 3 doing it to you.

>> No.12852949

>>12852342
I got an unironic boner from this fuck.

>> No.12853204

for the newfags who don't know what this>>12851775>>12851884 is, allow me to elucidate:

>The story begins with a journal entry - there are several throughout the story, indicating the passage of time. Anon, a Xnd grader, aged X, is to write a journal over the summer vacation.
>Anon excitedly writes that he’s very glad that summer is here, as it means he gets to spend much more time with ‘big sis’ Matsuri, his highschool-aged caretaker who often babysits him due to his parents working long, long hours. He more or less lives with her, at that point.
>He describes in awkward, innocent detail about how happy she makes him. He even sheepishly admits that one day he'd like to marry her. He told her as such and she said okay.
>The entries go on to describe Anon's days with Matsuri. Playing, sleeping together, bathing together. He even got to kiss her. It was an 'adults kiss', she said.
>The journal entries abruptly stop a few days after that, after Matsuri had gotten more and more handsy, as indicated by his entries. They pick up three weeks past, the only hint being one phrase.
>"Matsuri did a bad thing"
>Cut to the day of said bad thing. Matsuri asks Anon if he wants to play a game called 'rope escape'. Anon is of course interested in a game, especially if it's with his lovely big sis!
>Anon is taken to his bedroom, where Matsuri hurriedly ties him down to the mattress by his wrists and ankles. Anon gets to work trying to escape them, but finds the ropes far too tight. He insists Matsuri is cheating...and is stumped when he sees her beginning to disrobe.
>As he questions what she's doing and why she's getting naked, Matsuri roughly lunges at the boy, kissing him deeply. Violent, violent /ss/ occurs. For three hours, Anon is subject to the whims of Matsuri - every single dark desire she's ever harbored is unloaded upon the boy, using him as a dummy with which to pleasure herself. His cries of confusion and anguish eventually go silent. She continues to abuse him long past this. It isn't until she's caught in the act by Anon's mother that she finally ceases.
>Matsuri is sentenced to fourteen years in prison for her crimes. Anon, mercifully, is given access to a therapist to try and work through his feelings, and is given back his journal. It was confiscated and copied for use in court against Matsuri.

>> No.12853241

>>12853204
>Life proceeds. Anon's grown quiet and terrified of the world. But, luckily, he's finally made a new friend. Her name's Aqua. She's nice...and what's better, the niceness feels genuine. He can relax around her.
>Cut to early highschool. Aqua has finally confessed her feelings to Anon, who awkwardly reciprocates them. He admits that he does love her in the same way she loves him, even though he has trouble expressing it and letting her in. His heart has been closed off since Matsuri. Gradually, he learns to open up more and let her in, feeling a genuine attachment to the girl.
>Everything is fine until they have sex.
>Despite his best efforts, Aqua simply cannot make Anon cum. Everything just reminds him of Matsuri, though he keeps this to himself. Months and months of railing Aqua mercilessly without proper, soothing release begins to grate on him. She's too submissive. She's too quiet, she's too...willing. Something is missing. He begins to think he has a problem, sexually. Matsuri crosses his mind.
>It isn't until he thinks of Matsuri's attack on him during sex with Aqua that he's finally able to cum; a breathtaking, leg-shaking orgasm at that. Aqua is glad.
>Except he said Matsuri's name at the climax.
>Aqua knows exactly who Matsuri is. When confronted with what he's done - what he's said - Anon has a breakdown. In the arms of his lover, he goes over every excruciating, nightmarish detail of what he's been dealing with, his struggles, and finally his perceived impotency. Aqua quickly becomes overwhelmed. At a loss for words, she merely holds the crying boy in her arms, which only makes him feel worse.
>Aqua desperately attempts to become more dominant in the bedroom, but fails miserably. When Anon realizes it's her attempt at trying to appease him despite it not being at all in her nature, he feels sickened to his stomach. Eventually, he resolves to break up with her. Aqua is adamant that she can do better for him, that they don't have to separate, but in his heart, Anon knows that this is for the best. That she doesn't deserve to need to do this for someone.
>Rumors spread throughout the school of the break up. How Aqua was inconsolable for weeks. It doesn't take much thought to peg you as an abuser, even if Aqua always rushes to your defense. The rest of high school is a nightmare.
>Move on to college. Anon has become estranged from his parents, living in an apartment a city over to attend school. Deep down, he resents his mother for finding him that night. If she hadn't, Matsuri would still be out. What's more, he's become the sort of 'college bicycle', turning to cheap flings to try and find anything resembling an emotional or sexual connection. Nothing clicks. It always comes back to Matsuri.
>The idea strikes him, then. Matsuri. It's been years and years since she was incarcerated. He never once thought to try and find her.

>> No.12853281

>>12853241
>He uses his connections as the victim of the crime to track the woman down. Uses the excuse that he wants to confront her in prison as a way of closure, some stupid shit like that. With the address to the prison she's in, he quickly makes his way there. At the visiting area, he waits patiently as she's called and brought out.
>Natsuiro Matsuri - notably more mature - is brought to her end of the plexiglass, escorted by two guards. She looks tired. More than tired - the spark in her eye that she had as a teenager has all but been snuffed out completely. When she sees exactly who's there to visit her, it takes a moment or two of processing to realize exactly who she's looking at. The clarity washes across her face in waves of deep horror. She sits, and shakily reaches for the receiver. She has trouble meeting Anon's eye.
>Expecting to be berated, Matsuri is instead spoken to in a soft, gentle voice, much to her surprise. Anon asks her how she's been. The response she gives comes out as an agitated whisper, something along the lines of 'what do you think?'. Still too scared to be fully angry. It isn't until Anon mentions how beautiful she still is that she becomes completely flabbergasted.
>Confused, she asks him what he actually wants. She expected him to just yell at her for twenty minutes then leave, like his mother does every so often. Anon, having already come this far and having dedicated himself to this path, quietly and carefully explains how badly he needs her. He tells her of his relationship struggles. His inability to connect with others, his inability to cum...everything leading back to her in his mind. He tells her how he thinks about what she did to him every single day, and how he hates her - not for what she did, but for showing him a glimpse of heaven before leaving his life forever. Matsuri sits in silent shock as Anon continues to explain his feelings towards her - for her - until he finally, for the first time in years, feels at peace. He asks her when she'll be released. She tells him it's a manner of months away - she's managed to get some of her sentence reduced for good behavior.
>Anon makes her a promise. He renews his promise to marry her - much to her furthered confusion - and tells her that when the time comes, when she's free, he'll be there for her, to take her away from this nightmare. Matsuri agrees in a daze.
>The months fly by. The day of Matsuri's release comes. Her own parents abandoned her long ago - no one besides Anon is there to greet her. Shuffling out in boring plainclothes, far from the orange she donned in her youth, Matsuri is swooped off her feet by Anon, who brings her into a tight embrace almost immediately. The girl lets out a confused yelp as she pounds at his back in embarrassment, and as he lowers her, he can catch a tiny glint of life back in the girl's eyes. He offers to let her live with him, should she want, until she can find a place on her own. Matsuri reluctantly agrees, and the two depart.
>Anon, however, cannot wait that long. He stops at a hotel roughly halfway between his home and the city and beckons Matsuri inside. Confused - and admittedly a little afraid that this will be her (in her mind deserved) end - she follows him in. As soon as they entire the room, Anon attacks Matsuri, pulling her into a deep kiss that mimics the first one he ever shared with the woman. Though Matsuri makes an attempt to fight it, to tell Anon what she did was wrong and that he should hate her, he questions her own feelings. When faced with the prospect that she's been imagining it since that day as well, Matsuri freezes on the spot, unable to defend herself against the claim.
>Almost step for step, Anon and Matsuri take their time, carefully recreating their shared 'romance' from years past with no mistakes - the acts burned into their mind so clearly they don't need reminding. For hours, the pair of them are able to vent their years and years of frustration in one another's arms.
>The story ends with one final journal entry a year after Matsuri's release. He wonders if it would be in poor taste to send Aqua a wedding invitation.
Fin.

I do have intentions to write this, but the flow has yet to come to my mind.

>> No.12853339

>>12852342
Which holos would hurt the most for this shit? I'm thinking the holo hags like Mio or Watame. Or other holos like Aqua or Miko.

>> No.12853422

So I was reading "My Sexually Frustasted PE Teacher" chapter 4... and was it really necessary that Choco was passed as a common whore? I feel cucked reading this now. Fuck

>> No.12853483

>>12851104
I want the Holos to kidnapp me and keep me as their HouseHusband. My obligations? Coock and satisfy all the members of Hololive

>> No.12853575

>>12851104
I don't have dark fantasies because I'm extremely vanilla except for being one of THEM, so, uh... Stuffing my face into Fauna's rainforest.

>> No.12853735

>>12853339
It absolutely needs to be someone who has 'purity'. This entire prompt's appeal (aside from the NTR) is in the moral degeneration so it needs someone who's thought of as pure like Sora or non-sexualized like Suisei in order for the moral degen hit to work. Since from what I read the appeal is in seeing that girl you love lose herself to sex and pleasure that you could not have give to her and the interplay of emotion from bearing witness to this from an NTR video.

>> No.12854299

>>12853339
>>12852342
I FUCKING HATE NTR FAGS FUCK OFF GO BACK TO /Trash/

>> No.12854665

>>12851104
Dark? None. Degenerate?

I want a pet. I don't want to force a holo into being my pet, I want her to willingly go along with it and enjoy being my pet. So many of them fit my fantasy but Aqua or Miko, Botan maybe would be my favorite choices, each for different reasons.

I want to come home to one of them waiting for me at the door naked, with only a collar and a leash around her neck, shaking her hips with a tail plug stuck deep in their ass. I want her to glomp me on sight, rub her face all over my chest and say just how much she missed me and for her legs and shoulders to tremble and shake when I pet her head and give her a quick kiss.

I want to be having dinner while she slowly suckles and nurses my cock under the table until I cum, and on occasion making me splooge on her food as a delicious sauce. I want to head for the living room to watch some TV and have her lay her head on my lap for me to pet and play with all night, occasionally squeeze her tits and play with her plug until she's so wet she can't help but beg me to finally fuck her. I want her to crave my touch and companionship more than anything and to always be available, and be sincerely ecstatic whenever I give her attention.

In bed I want her to lick me all over; face, mouth, ears, chest, stomach, legs, happily shaking her behind as she does it. She sniffs me all over and shoves her face into my balls, moaning in pleasure from the smell until she can't handle it anymore and starts lapping furiously and messily, whimpering and rubbing her legs, and finally she gives me an enthusiastic rimjob and handjob combo until I nut again and she laps it all up from wherever it landed be it her face, my stomach or the sheets. I want her to beg to remove the plug from her ass, shaking it in front of me that she can't wait anymore, cum when I keep removing and shoving it back inside before she gets on all fours and cries and whimpers for me to make a mess out of her.

That's all I need.

>> No.12854911

>>12854665
Seconding this

>> No.12855062

>>12854299
you think i like the fact that the idea's been living in my head this long rent-free?
you think i enjoy this?

i don't. i fucking hate NTR. i fucking hate the very idea and concept of such a thing happening. i fucking hate the suffering it brings. i fucking hate everything about it.

>> No.12856513

>>12851104
Genuinely surprised there hasn't been a gore prompt. Not that that's a bad thing.

>> No.12856791

>>12853281
Damn I forgot how good this prompt was. I will wait patiently for whoever decides to take it up.

>> No.12856825

>>12855062
Then bury it you faggot. You will inspire that Matsuri Cuck and hes gonna write about it

>> No.12857246

>>12856825
i've tried it already you dumbass. it lingers in my mind and i can't get it fucking out.
i thought writing it down would help me move on. it's sorta working, but it's still there.
fuck

>> No.12857348

>>12854299
>>12856825
Actual brain damage.

>> No.12857366

>>12857246
You pass it to my mind now faggot. I'm fucking angry because of the mere thought of it. AAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE

>> No.12857397

>>12857348
Go back to /trash/ cuck

>> No.12857464

>>12857397
No, you.

>> No.12857546

>>12857366
that's your own fault then. it was weighing down on my mind, not yours. if you choose to entertain yourself with something this twisted, then you have no one to blame but yourself
for me - i have no choice. my mind spontaneously came up with it and i can't get rid of it. simple as that.

i get what you mean you fucking fag, i hate NTR just as much as you do, but if i have to spell out what goes on in my fucking mind to get rid of it, then i'm willing to make the sacrifice

>> No.12857580

>>12815934
This but it ends with abusing all the anons who wants the story end with more Watame abuse

>> No.12857664

I suspect that if someone writes that hs story the chuuba is either going to be fubuki or watame or suisei

>> No.12857899

>>12857664
don't say it, you'll jinx it

>> No.12857980

NTRfags deserves the ropes

>> No.12858016

>>12857980
Careful on that edge. Might cut yourself.

>> No.12858066

>>12852342
Why do you remember what I'm working on? And why did you twist it in such a way?
Sure, I'm planning on writing a HS story but this is not even remotely close to what I'm writing. NTR is not my thing. Never has, never will be.
I hope that once I finish it and release it, you'll be able to stop thinking about something like that. In fact, I'll try to make it extra fluffy just for you.

>> No.12858117

>>12858066
>make it extra fluffy just for you
Unfathomably based.

Also I don't think he's claiming that's the premise of your story. He's saying that your high school bullying theme prompted him to fantasize about what he wrote. Two different things.

>> No.12858553

Bump limit but no new thread huh. Can get we get maybe a sexual image of goomba for the OP?

>> No.12858746

>>12858553
Earlyfaggot must be sleeping.

>> No.12858804

>>12858746
yeah, sleeping with the fish.

>> No.12858856

New thread
>>12858689

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>>12858856
> not me

>> No.12859267

>>12858066
>extra fluffy
Hello based deparment?

>> No.12859382

>>12858117
Oh, is that so? Sorry, I must've misunderstood. Still, I'd just like to say that it's not gonna be the case.

>> No.12862294

>https://twitter.com/nekomataokayu/status/1458667274437468160?s=21

I just finished a behemoth Ogayu story and this cute cat keeps making me want to write more.

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