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>>11462282
We need a abusive Sasaki story. she’s the perfect fit with how short-temper she is.

AUTHORS DOKO

>>11469578
Not here.

>>11469578
Progress goes slowly.

Damn, just had a oddly depressing dream. I found Korone and Mio in a shopping fair, lying on the ground talking on top of a carpet many years after they quit Vtubing, and I asked how she was doing and all, she said she wasn't getting much money and things weren't doing so well while Mio looked at her with a sad face, apparently Okayu had left long ago, I offered myself to buy her whatever she offered at the fair, and she told me to take her to my home. Then when I got home she revealed that she was commissioning herself to cook really good food for others like as a rental mom, and I scoured my fridge for something and there was nothing for her to cook other than frozen strawberries. The dream ended on me searching for like 10 minutes scouring the fridge for anything at all for her to cook and thinking on how to tell her that I had nothing for her and that she would have to go back.

>>11471910
I can feel the awkward pain of this dream.

Read through all the available parts of First Summer Memories. Are there any plans to continue the series?

>>11462282
Well, my previous prompt finally got done, even if it was a complete shitpost at the exact opposite of what I envisioned (I'll write a fic based on the prompt the way I expected it to be done sometime, kek), so here's a new prompt which takes place in the Mythbreakers setting this time around:

(You) are a werewolf. You were severely injured during a battle against a malicious and powerful spirit and left for dead by your pack. While bleeding out and desperately seeking help, you stumble across a group of humans who decide to take you with them and nurse you back to health.

>>11474351
??? that's not chuuha no matter how much you spin it around.

>>11475695
Good point, I guess. Sorry, I thought Mythbreakers counted.

>>11476854
Ironically if this was literally a hololive thread, it would probably count since the understanding would be group of Hans means Author's choice of holos.

>>11478738
Yeah, I guess you're right. Sorry, my bad.

>>11479660
What was your previous prompt tHt got written?

>>11415513
Just read through this chapter and I really enjoyed it for the most part. There was one or two grammatical errors here and there and a few weird word choices but it wasn't enough to pull me out of it. The actions scenes were nice, it felt fast and flowed well enough that I could keep up with and visualize the scenes while not being too wordy that it feels like a slog. If there's something I could think of for a critique it would be that there was one bit of dialogue that was a bit weird.

“Looks like they really are taking us seriously.” You turn to Amelia. There’s a look of disgruntlement laced with annoyance on her face. “Don’t think we’ll be able to get out of here easily at this point.” You continue. Amelia just keeps grumbling, probably trying to think of another way.

“How about this. I go and stalk them and perhaps get more information, and then we make a plan of attack, or escape.” You suggest.

I kinda feel that it was unnecessary to separate these sentences since the same person was speaking and that there were no other paragraphs in between them to suggest a need for you to do it. Again, this is mostly nitpicky but that's all that I can think of in terms of criticism. Also, why the hell did Anon antagonize the guards in the first place? Was it so that they could gather everyone into one place before taking them all out at once? Because if so, you should've indicated that in the beginning or during the encounter when Ame shot one of the guards if you wanted it to be a surprise for the readers. It just felt weird as to why an outlaw would go out of his way to show himself if not for that.
Overall, I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to seeing more over the top shounen bullshit from you so keep it up my man.

>>11473515
Still here and still planning on continuing it, I finished the outline for the next chapter but I haven't started on actually writing it due to college enrollment shenanigans and binge-reading a new book I just bought. Also, have you any types of criticism you could give? Even just telling what you liked or disliked would be great.

What's with the surge of 300 page essays on critique recently? Is it because of authors leaving the place for better feedback?

>>11482196
i like to think that it's a feedback loop of people recognizing better critique and trying to apply some themselves

regardless of what it is, it's far better than a simple "hey nice story bro" because it indicates effort and appreciation on the part of the reader

>>11482196
Don't know but feedback is never a bad thing

>>11482893
It helps the writer of the story because he is inclined to check it out, but to outsiders it's a wall of text to be ignored, even if you are a new writer looking for tips.

>>11483642
>but to outsiders it's a wall of text to be ignored
Speak for yourself

>>11483642
That's not the person posting their feedbacks fault or problem

>Pg. 10 after 56m
fuck off

>>11462282
Reposting from the previous thread.

I just want some good Fubuki fluff, just something that would really make me smile like a fool reading it. Please.

>but there are tons of Fubuki fics already
I know, but I need more! I can't ever have enough fluff stories with Fubuki.

Bonus: Fubuki fluff but it ends in an equally fluffy tailjob and cuddling.

>>11486786
Here you go
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTYBczf-U06wtxc7VJfOosUpzTXuGKZfReNpgR4Wvpkk0PZuH5r8ONV57wg7bWwm7rqSRMzTTacV146/pub

>>11486870
fuck off cunt

>>11486870
Again, I laughed at it, but not what I'm looking for.

>>11486786
never thought i'd ever say this but take a page out of the deadbrap's book you faggot prompt spammer
t. sukonbu

>>11487963
Now that's just rude. I literally only posted it last thread. Almost as it was nearing bump limit, no less.

>>11486870
Would you please stop reposting my story? It's obnoxious when you do so.

>>11488056
Don't worry, it'll just happen whenever someone asks for a Fubuki fluff story, especially now that they have confirmation it pisses you off.

>>11462253
I wrote that Fubuki story that the one anon wanted from the last thread. I gagged while writing this and if anyone reads this I recommend to read it on an empty stomach. I do want to know if that specific anon got aroused by this so please let me know. On a side note, after writing so much it seems that English really loves its subordinate clause like how Latin likes its participles. Anyways, Abandon all hope ye who read this.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSzPueCcfE9xWAYLSZxCMsJ7VdnEvx4NaElqEof7asl5IeDhPoc4-MkTNX5WFLqm1ghPWS_WP-mPblY/pub


Tags: Fubuki and scat

>>11488411
I'm gonna be honest anon. I'm not going to read this but good job anyway. You took one for the team.

>>11488411
I shouldn't have read this. Nice job anon.

>>11488411
good fucking lord
it's magnificent
i am absolutely disgusted, in every fibre of my being. well done. god bless you anon

and if the requester manages to find this arousing, well... seriously, take your meds

>>11480459
The one about anon dying and becoming Mori's assistant.

>>11488558
What "team"? Why does this " team" of ours need or want to please scat degenerates?

>>11488411
I will not read it but I do respect the effort.
Man, it's way easier to just say "nice job writing something" than actually giving criticism.

>>11489299
When you it put it like that, it makes sense so I shall rephrase.

Good job >>11488411 You dealt damage to the team by your efforts are appreciated nonetheless.

>>11488411
"Paradise Lost"... fantastic title, honestly. I'm about to read this while eating lunch - some pre-made maki rolls from a sushi kiosk. Salmon/avocado and teriyaki chicken with cucumber.
I bring this up for extra flavour to the imagination.

>>11489299
I'd take scat over futa any day, honestly. At least the scatfag seemed to be reasonable and sane. Don't even get me started on that tumor pekofag.

Don't mention his name, you'll summon him.

>>11489866
Foolish to assume they ever leave

>>11490118
Even if he's here, at least he stays quiet.
At least until he's mentioned.

>>11488411
>>11489671
Hoo, boy. Well done, anon! I'm grossed out. Like, it took a little bit to get to the 'fun' part, and for a moment I almost forgot what I was reading. Until I got to the last paragraph, that is!
So I'm gonna spoiler my feedback so no one has to read it that doesn't want to.

“Fubuki, in America it’s illegal to defecate in public so please go in my mouth so you won’t get in trouble.”
I pissed myself laughing, dude. I'm not gonna critique it like a normal story because it's clearly just a little shitpost - literally - that you tried to have fun with for the sake of another anon.
So, normally I try to put myself into the mindset of this fic's intended audience in order to deliver better feedback, but this time I can't imagine what goes through a scatfag's mind and I don't really want to, either. No offense scatfag, if you read this.
Kudos to you, anon, for delivering on a fic no one else wanted to. It didn't quite put me off my food, though - this sushi is delicious.

>>11489866
Sorry. Still, I think it's better than unironically saying "you-know-who" or "he-who-shall-not-be-named" like we're channeling fucking Harry Potter.

Pic unrelated.

>>11490398
Pic unrelated make me audibly wheeze at nearly 4 AM, thank you for that.

Thanks for the feedback so far guys it made writing that fic worth it

>>11490845
Even though it was certainly disgusting, I'm always pleased to read stuff like this. It... disturbs the senses and actually makes me feel grossed out, and anything that provokes an emotional response is at least an 8/10 in my book.
So thank you, anon. Tell us what writing it was like for you? Was it just as disgusting as it might have been for the reader, or did you have a smile on your face the whole time trying to make it as foul as possible?

>>11490845
Assuming you made that Fubuki scat fic, you now have to make a vanilla fluff smut fic of Fubuki to restore balance upon these cursed lands.

>>11462282
I need a Fubuki rape fic

>>11491288
Some have tried and failed to make one.

>>11491288
I mean... she cried at the end of the scat fic.

>>11491330
I don't think shitting in someone's mouth counts as rape

>>11491371
Depends who you ask. I dunno about you, but if someone tried to shit in my mouth, I'd definitely consider that rape, among other things, like crime against humanity.

>>11491479
What if someone forced you to shit in their mouth?

>>11491161
I had a grin on my face until the shitting started then I unironically gagged a few times but it was overall a fun fic to work on so I'm glad I did it. I was worried that there wouldn't be enough scat but judging the reactions there was enough lol.

>>11491508
I'd be a lot more comfortable about the whole situation - at least compared to the alternative - but it'd still be mortified and it'd still be rape.

>>11491692
Rape is when you force someone to do something sexual with you. I don't think mouth shitting is inherently sexual.

>>11491609
Any scat is going to be plenty for the vanilla denizens of this thread. Frankly, I am super eager to see the scatfag's response to it when he sees it.

>>11491743
Yeah, he was super civil about the entire thing, sort of like Matsuri Cuck Anon.

>>11491739
It is if they're getting a sexual thrill out of it, as the scatfag would be. Why else would someone FORCE you to shit in their mouth? Unless your post-digestion corn kernels were the cure to cancer or something.

the direction this thread is going in is... somewhat concerning.

perfect time to start my next new vegas playthrough, i think.

>>11491817
I think the act has to be recognizably sexual for it to be rape. For example, someone could theoretically get sexual pleasure from forcing someone to shitpost on /vt/ all day, but it wouldn't make it rape.

>>11491977
People discussing a fic is concerning?

>>11492013
Yeah... yeah, it would be rape. It sounds inconceivable, but as long as someone's getting horny from it and it's against your will... it's rape.

>>11492049
don't get your panties in a twist, it was just a humorous observation. discuss what you want
if it turns into scat central though then yeah it'd be concerning

>>11491977
if you don't want the thread discussing scat you gotta give us something to replace it in our brains

>>11492061
> unlawful sexual activity and usually sexual intercourse carried out forcibly or under threat of injury against a person's will or with a person who is beneath a certain age or incapable of valid consent because of mental illness, mental deficiency, intoxication, unconsciousness, or deception
The dictionary definition of the word clarifies that it must be sexual intercourse in order to be rape. If there's no sex of any type it's not rape.

>>11492301
It says "usually" sexual intercourse, not specifically. What it specifically says is "unlawful sexual activity", which is specifically left ambiguous to cover crazy bullshit like the situations you're coming up with.

>>11492426
But that once again raises the question of whether shitting in someone's mouth is considered sexual activity or not

>>11491977
Bro I bought the DLC's for that game yesterday and I've played 26 hours since then. New Vegas is so much more than I, expected, also another quote that I saw in memes a lot and surprise surprise, it was from Fallout, "we can't expect god to do all the work". Going through the casino DLC rn

>>11492516
Well, the "activity" part should be self-explanatory, which leaves the sexual part in question, and I stand by defining whether or not something is sexual in a given circumstance by whether or not someone is getting off to it, and if the person forcing you to shit in their mouth or to shitpost on /vt/ all day is rubbing their dick or flicking their bean while it happens, then it is sexual.

>>11492621
Perhaps you're right, maybe being forced to shit in someone's mouth is rape.

>>11491977
Ah, hello pekofag. I expect to see you get fucked by Oga‘a BBC very soon

>>11492835
Actually I'm this guy >>11492579 but good try.

>>11492835
actually, i was the one arguing for removal of pekofag's autism from the archives on the basis that there's no chuuba involvement at all a couple threads back. so yeah, try again

>>11492835
Didn't he say it was going to be with a woman?

>>11492898
Sierra madre DLC is my second favourite because of how challenging it is. The best one is lonesome road though, wait till you get to that one

>>11492749
Well, if you're not convinced, you could always take a trip down to your local law enforcement agency and force one of them to shit in your mouth... or just ask them if that'd be rape, I guess.

>>11493009
I guess I might have unintentionally come of as sarcastic. I didn't intend to, I was just saying it as a testament to the absurdity of the statement. I'm convinced that it is rape, I just never thought I'd have to think about the sexual nature of mouth shitting.

>>11493109
>I just never thought I'd have to think about the sexual nature of mouth shitting.
I guess it's proof we live in a society of abundance when the issues we concern ourselves with are eating shit.

>>11462282
I need a Bae onahole, minigirl stomach bulge fic where she is shrinked to a size similar to the one she did in her last chatting stream and some dude goes to town on her. Make it non consensual/rape if possible and try to make the details as painful as possible.

Bonus: Anatomy discussed and anal round afterwards

Thanks

>>11462282
Lolichama femdom.
https://youtu.be/AP-65Eu0m5w

>>11469578
I’m doing my best Anon

>>11469578
I've been on a break for a while now but I'm thinking of starting up again, but I've yet to decide on what to do. I'm considering a series but it's gonna be cringy shit probably especially since it would be SFW most likely. I could do that or some Risu stuff, or some Polka abuse.

>>11496949
I think all the series in the archive are at least a little cringe, that’s just the nature of fanfiction. Doesn’t stop me from enjoying them though.
t. Author of a series

>>11496949
Anon, this is a vtuber fanfiction thread, you shouldn't be worried about cringe.

>>11497628
>>11497683
See, but I pulled out a fic for being too cringe before. I can't handle it. It literally haunted my dreams. I'd be going about my day and legit a shiver would go down my spine from remembering it.

>>11488411
I don't know if it was because of that ridiculous line about how "Fubuki, in America it’s illegal to defecate in public so please go in my mouth so you won’t get in trouble." but the actual scat was fucking hilarious. Setup was nice and fluffy too to set up the disaster. Good stuff.

>>11469578
struggling to cope with my genshin impact addiction

>>11469578
I've finally been able to sit and down write something I feel good about. I got the skeleton written out and the beginning too. It's looking good so far

>>11469578
Sorry I'm struggling to clear Metroid Dread

>>11498062
Anon the primary genre here is 2nd person reader/anon insert. Being cringe was always going to be a thing for any kind of fic made here since making fanfics about having personal interactions with chuubas is kind of indulgent..
Accepting that it's cringe and getting on with it is the only way you can unironically write these kind of fanfics.

>>11501111
digits confirm this is fact

>>11482196
I think it's just a positive feedback loop like >>11482397 suggests where people see people dropping bigger critique and comments more than the usual and following suit.

>>11503470
It's welcome either way.

>>11505013

>>11505075
If faggots don't want to read in a thread about posting stories they can go fuck themselves. As long as the criticism and feedback is of merit to better sculpt the mind of the author in the future to either warn them of pitfalls or fine-tune what people like, it's good.

>>11488411
This has gotta get reposted in the ringo thread

>>11488411
This is the definition of high quality shitpost. This fic was charming, hilarious and genuinely seems like something I'd come back to because I find it funny.
Genuinely one of the best fics posted in a while.

>>11488411
/ringo/fag here, nice job anon. It's hilarious and while I'm not a big fan of eating shit, it's still hot.

>write thing
>unconsciously writing something similar to something i didn't know existed
fuck

>>11508775
details

>>11508936
What was intended to be a vague allusion to Castlevania has also ended up grasping at lore that's incredibly similar to the plot for Castle Drachenfels without my knowledge

>>11508985
Anon there is nothing new under the sun. People have been copying concepts and shit, unintentionally or otherwise since forever. What's important is doing what your doing well.

>>11509957
This. Don't worry about your plagiarism, anon. Leave that to us after it's written.

Would roommate fics be considered too taboo or privacy invading?

>>11511583
I think that depends entirely on the premise and how it's phrased.

>>11511583
technically there are no chuubas involved in them, but fuck, if AA'll leave in that cancerous shitstain's drivel then roommate fics should be fine too

>>11511583
If the roommates are chuubas then I don't see a problem but it would probably cause a shitstorm

>>11511583
What exactly do you mean? I'm assuming you have some kind of prompt in mind so what is it?

>>11511583
If you mean straight up actual, the actor not the character, roommate fic then no, pretty sure that would get you board banned due to stuff about that being against the actual board rules.
Though I assume you don't mean that and are asking as a part of an idea/prompt, so what do you mean exactly.

y'all watchin kson's live2d debut? this shit is fucking wild

>>11513543
YES
I'M SO GLAD COCO LEFT HOLOLIVE

>>11513896
>>11513543
holy fuck she's hot

>>11513543
>>11513896
Amazing hairstyle and really cute face but holy shit is that outfit ugly. It's very 'kson' though.

>>11513896
The fact that her original artist for Coco made another design for her makes me happy.

>>11462282
The rrats were true. At least partially. Ayame is a huge slut who whores herself out on a daily basis. You're her favourite 'customer' that has a crush on her despite the circumstances. Little did you know, she feels the same way towards you. Will you convince Ayame to quit her whorish lifestyle and live happily together or will her sex addiction overcome her love for you and continue being a whore?

>>11514316
>Little did you know, she feels the same way towards you.
i get that this is fanfiction but you've gotta make it at least SOMEWHAT believable

>>11514337
Ayame's hatred towards gaijins are purely because the thought of being bred by their disgusting smelly cocks turns her on beyond all belief.

>>11514401
not what i was getting at; ayame is too much of a self-centered cunt to fall in love at all

>>11514676
That... just sounds sad.

>>11514912
she's a very sad person who replaced empathy with substance abuse

>>11515096
Now this is less believable than her falling in love, a pure nihonjin like her will never substance abuse. It goes against her very beliefs.

>>11515270
yeah pretty sure a yamato nadeshiko wouldn't be a town bicycle either, and there's no fucking way you'd say ayame at a tea ceremony
your image of her is stilted

>>11515270
Anon, the substance she was indulging in is penis.

>>11515378
>implying most modern jp teens aren't whores at their local highschools.

>>11515470
>pure nihonjin
>implying most modern jp teens aren't whores
i'm getting mixed messages from you

Ayame bullying will never cease to be hilarious to me

>>11515605
It's really interesting how heated people can get whenever Ayame is mentioned.

>>11515755
I'm sure most of it is shitposting but it's still funny. My favorite ayame image is her tweet to ina after she drew her.

>>11515755
Yeah, the way they talk about her you'd think she killed their mother or something instead of just not streaming.

>>11515755
i'm mostly joking on my part but i do hold genuine contempt for her over her disregard for colleagues
most of the shit she DIDN'T do was back when hololive still had its "big family" image going

>>11515908
but hololive still is one big family

>>11516133
>laughingwhores.jpg

>>11514316
All jokes and rrats aside, this prompt kinda interests me so I'm gonna attempt it. I'm only afraid that I might spark another controversy when I finish this fic.

>>11516993
everything is incendiary these days. rather than tread on eggshells all day long, i suggest you just lean into it full-throttle and watch the fireworks

>>11517083
I already ignited the incest/OC controversy before. I'm scared that I'll make another one by making a fanfic of a chuuba being a whore.

>>11517131
You're probably good anon. I don't think anyone is gonna get panties in a twist over that, maybe schizos or purtity fags but that's inevitable. You'd be debuffing yourself if you curved the story for sake not angering anyone.

>>11516993
What fucking controversy would you spark?
The ayamewhore rrat is pretty much a rrat exaggerated to the point it's just a funny meme rather than anything damaging since it's plainly too ridiculous.
>>11517131
Anon the Miyuki thing was because it was threading the line of being board related, this prompt meanwhile takes a ridiculous position that people only jokingly believe in, and is solidly board related.

>>11517131
think most people were pissed off more with the fan sequel and the fact that the OC fic wasn't just a one-and-done thing tbqh

anyway, i strongly doubt it'll be more controversial than the fic about literally eating shit, so get in there and start swinging

>>11517279
>it was threading the line of being board related
one big fat example of hypocrisy on the part of the retards that post here

>>11517332
If you're talking about who I think you're talking about, I completely agree

>>11514316
What about Ayame being a massive whore who just fucks everyone she sees, but when she tries to fuck you you’re like nah, which surprises her. Cue Ayame constantly trying to fuck you and figure out why you don’t want it while you calmly avoid her advances while being very kind.
After typing this out I actually want to have a go at this, maybe I will.

>>11517462
go for the comedy route and treat her like shit

>>11517594
That’s actually not a bad idea, I might do this instead

>>11517653
no, go for the fluff route and treat her like a princess

>>11517678
Decisions, decisions. If I find time I’ll do both

>>11517726
go for the wageslave route, do neither, and become financially solvent instead

>>11517785
I don’t mean to doompost but we don’t know how long this general is going to last, anything could happen which is why I want to write as many stories for it as I can before it dies; Uni studies and wageslaving be dammed.

>>11518533
Realistically I think the steady dripfeed of people coming in due to wanting hololive/vtuber fanfic will be enough to keep this general going ironically unless hololive alternative makes hololive fanfiction 'mainstream' (i.e. acceptable enough to break the slight weird taboo of being kind of close to an RPF) and thus causing there to be a place to have a thread to discuss and make chuuba fic that isn't /here/

>>11462253
Selen trapped in the Apex sex dungeon

>It's been 10 hours since the stream started
>Uto won't let Selen go
>Selen says in agony "Please let me go haha..."
>....No
>"Come on I'll do whatever you want just let me go you bitch"
>"oh we lost game, selen needs motivation yeah" says Uto while kicking Selen in her dragon balls
>"HAHAHA THAT FUCKING HURT, OHH when i get out of here you are so fucked uto HAHAHA" says selen in desperation
>Uto kicks her again
>"ah I die because i kicked you, selen you better win now ok? ok?" says uto while grinding her feet into selen
>"HOW THE FUCK AM I GONNA WIN?? we are getting third party and I---" selen gets interrupted by uto slapping her in the face
>"Ah bad bad, again one more game ok ok?!" says uto while grabbing selen's head
>Chat is worried, they don't think this is just an act anymore
>"Of course this isn't real, please send help I'm dying here haha..."
>"Selen no go ok" says uto while starting another game
>The stream continued for 10 more hours

I honestly didn't expect to make it an abuse story but it ended up like that

>>11520802

>>11518533
Don't put your hobbies ahead of your career unless you plan on turning them into one, dude
You will NEVER get that time back and it will haunt you

bump

>Looks through my WIPs
>Finds pic related
>Deletes

So can we all agree there's no point in writing a fic about Kson because it's literally just Coco but with a less interesting design that you can't explore as much?

>>11524811
Let me think about it

She is less removed from the real world - had her (pretty great) body and face in view many times and her real life room. I would imagine she doesn't use much kayfabe either.
In her Coco image she hid behind an avatar and had some (not really used, but) defined lore - dragon from the overseas, has her own mafia.
Kson doesn't leave much space for imagination to fill in the details. And it would feel like writing about a real life person, not a character - many are weirded out by reading/having to write fanfiction about real people.

>>11524811
That point was never in contention to begin with

>>11481686
hey man, thanks a lot for the detailed criticism. I did a cursory look on that part of the dialogue and I agree it didn't ring the best, and I'll try to improve on it. As for that specific scene, I had the whole sequence planned, but I was worried on the "show, don't tell" principle as I didn't want to chock every piece of dialogue with expositional slog(which was one the reasons I named the chapter such). Nonetheless, I'm happy that at the very least my action scenes carry well which was something I was doing my reps on considering this is a shameless shounen story and my previous works never really focused on action. My end goal is to do some seriously epic scenes of war and 1v1s, which is I feel is quite and effort to show in writing form.

Also really love the 'First Summer Memories' series, keep it up writeanon!

Remain motivated.

>>11525141
Yea with Coco you also could do shit with her before she got to Earth/AUs because BIG FUCKING DRAGON
Regular boring human who was VERY VERY open with her actual human face is bland as fuck.
If I wanted to write about a human character I'd write about Rushia (she's actually human right or is she a lich at this point) or Amelia

And yea Real Person Fanfiction is just incredibly uncomfortable to deal with

>>11526350
Thanks CH Anon.

>Pekosweat Red Bull
mmmm

I just feel like this belongs here.

>>11462282
Rejecting your spunky tomboy childhood friend's confession!

>>11462282
Fubuki puts on a very small amount of weight from overindulging her burger fascination and is lightheartedly teased over it by other Holomem as in >>11527570 . The experience is indescribably sensual and causes her to awaken to a verbal humiliation fetish.

In the following weeks, she tries all sorts of things to bait people into harshly teasing her, but can never quite get the fix she wants. Eventually, in sexually deprived desperation, she comes to the conclusion that the only way she'll be able to get off again is to intentionally gain weight, so she gluts herself to the point of discomfort for a couple weeks until people start calling her out on it, marking the start of an addictive spiral

It's not time for sleep yet. Open your eyes.

>>11532594
I'm literally passing out from how tired I am anon. I'm taking breaks from my work every 15 minutes as I'm in a constant state of getting a headache, power resting, then continuing and repeating. I'm finally done and I deserve my sleep.

>>11532780
Then YOU have earned your rest. Go get some sleep.

>>11532994
You don't get to me tell me what I've earned bitch. It's my life.

>>11462282
Suzy's parents calling her mid-coitus on the morning of her birthday. She takes a break to focus on the phone call, but you're impatient and start playing with her, and Suzy has to hold in moans while speaking to avoid alerting her parents.

>>11533319
>It's my life.
Yeah, it's now or never.

>>11533319
I brought you into this world and I can snuff you out just as easily

>>11533370
I ain't gonna live forever!

>>11534742
I JUST WANNA LIVE WHILE I’M ALIIIIVE

Shaddup, beach! Thissu issu... uhh... Hololive boardu! No singingu!

>>11537043
>Hololive boardu!

>>11524811
I'd disagree with the less interesting character design since that new model is pretty cool... even if it's in effect pretty much a "2nd outfit" costume ala the roommate/casual designs but in reverse since it's a cool conceptual design that doesn't have lore/fantasy behind it.
But yeah, pretty much Kson is Coco with less fanfiction space due to the double whammy of not being in kayfabe/having lore and being a 'real person' and not a character.

>>11462282
A chuuba of your choice dropping the mask and facade she keeps up, finally allowed to be her true self around you without worry after months of worrying about being the perfect ideal girlfriend at every moment. A fluffy piece about finally being able to fully trust one another.

>>11541394
Ayame drops her mask and reveals to you she's being spit roasted on charcoal for all those months you've been together and that she has only been using you for money and gifts. She also reveals that she loves to kiss you after she sucked someone's cock, sometimes even taking cum in her mouth home just to kiss you.

>>11541587

>>11541587
Because of course we've circled back to the Monkey's Paw arc. Time is a flat circle and I theorize in a week we'll be back on the month and a half schizo arc.

>>11541690
Yeah? That so?

>>11541690
Don’t tempt them

>>11541587
I'm starting to think it's not just shitposting and you guys just have an ntr fetish

>>11541755
>>11541826
I can only hope. You faggots need whipping back into shape if we're back to this shit again.

>>11541880
Monkey’s paw arc wasn’t even that bad though, it was funny. And if people really want their prompts written they can just write it themselves

>>11541988
That exact same phrasing was what was used when promptposters were called leeches for bumping the thread, and then it was co-opted by shitposter-kun and posted nonstop. Time is a flat circle. One week.

>>11541861
You're just now realizing this?

>>11542105
You have legit PTSD over the shitposting arc, don't you?

>>11542105
You’re not cool

>>11541587
So this gets monkey's pawed into being the matsuri ryona fic, Ayame version right?

>>11545417
It should be flatout murder at the end

>>11545417
It should be flatout worship at the end

>>11545417
It should be flatout white genocide at the end

>>11545417
It should end with you fucking all the guys that she cucked you with up the ass, thus completing the cycle and establishing you as the alpha male.

>>11545874
based

>>11462282
Valley girl Fauna and Gura fail your class so they have to have sex with you which leads to them fucking up on purpose to have more sex with you

When does it start to become too late to introduce the chuuba? Or does it not matter?

>>11556119
Depends on who you're asking. As long as said Chuuba is still relevant to the story I don't think it really matters when you introduce them.

>>11556119
You need a hook really early otherwise you'll lose the reader's attention. If you don't introduce the chuuba within a page or maybe two, then I'd make doubly sure what you've written is your best

I really, really, REALLY love the term "Meat Urinal". This is definitely one of the better imports from Japanese culture.

>>11558296
I really, REALLY love when you don't speak at all.

>>11558296
I really, really, REALLY hate the term "Meat Urinal". It's definitely one of the worst imports from Japanese culture.

>>11558500
>>11558532
What, have you got a better description for Ayame?

>>11558579
Built for BBC

>>11558579
cute

>>11558579
cute

>>11558597
>>11558606
>>11558622
All garbage, try harder. As I expected, meat urinal is the best.

>>11558636
your mom is a meat toilet

>>11558736

How long should a story be before it is reasonable to make it in chapters instead of one big thing? Is a chapter with only 2k words stupid?

>>11559458
It's a matter of pacing. If you've reached a point where it feels right for things to end for the time being, then just do it.

>>11559458
There's no word limit, but there needs to be a point to the chapter. Something significant to the story's progress needs to happen, be it character or drama development, a defining point in the story, plot resolution - whatever. Think of it as compartmentalizing elements of the story.

>>11559458
What both these anons>>11559589 >>11559675 said. Something needs to happen in the chapter and whatever point you feel is good to stop, stop. Some chapters in some of the series' are only around 2k words, while some are 10 times that. Don't limit yourself to a certain word count

>>11559458
This is basically an echo of the other posts but your chapter can be as long or as short as you want it to be it just has to continue the story.

>>11462253
Well, not sure if this is interesting. I haven't read Holocalypse so I dunno if the concept is too similar, but I wanted to write something like this either way. Making a series sounds fun. Don't know if it will be entirely SFW but if it does stray to NSFW it probably won't be the main focus. I chugged it all out in one night hut I did proof read it so hopefully it isn't too bad.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQl01ASRtVpqUTeIwPesapLNzqHc5yJzV1_FPW4E2lRXmQsJvjw6xTTj_X0EhgeH1NBeWnvrAbJ0Tnn/pub

Tags: Ayame, SFW, post-apocalyptic

>>11561447
Is she going to live through this series?

>>11561447
Will this be "the Road" of hololive fanfics?

>>11561447
This better have at minimum two glorious "beating the absolute shit out of Ayame" scenes planned out. Other than that it's pretty good for a first chapter. Not any issues really sticking out or anything like that. Good job writeanon.

>>11561648
No clue. Most of this stuff was made up on the spot. I do have some juicy stuff planned for her but she probably won't be the main partner. I have some ideas that I really want to get down but I don't have the full story panned out yet so there's a lot of things that still need to be decided.
>>11561720
Kind of, if you replace the sea with a nightless city that nevers stops shining and the savages with shadow creatures

>>11561834
>Spoiler
So "I am Legend" with chuubas?

>>11561814
This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>11561961
>Korone's going to die

>>11561834
That spoiler got me interested

>>11561834
>Spoiler
Ah, Shadowbringers, my favorite.

>>11561961
Nope. The shadow creatures aren't going to always be humanoid, or human sized for that matter, though how to deal with them is still undecided. I'm going for a Death Stranding kind of feel.
>>11562020
Ko'one...
>>11562060
Anon...

>>11562060
"If you had the strength to call me a whore again, could you do it?"
-Ayamebert

>>11562158
"A cock(in your mouth) better suits a whore"

>>11561447
I think the premise is pretty interesting, and in case you're worried it isn't really anything like Holocalypse from the looks of it. One thing that annoyed me was your spelling of "though". It's just a pet peeve but I only see "tho" used in texts so I don't like seeing it in proper writing. Anon's reason for wanting Ayame to stay was also a little strange, considering lighters and electric stoves really shouldn't be that rare.
Other than that though this could really go somewhere, looking forward to the next chapter.

>>11488411
"A turd in the mouth beats two in the bush." Great job, anon!

>>11562711
I wonder if 'tho' will replace 'though' in writing in the next couple of generations

>>11563144
I wonder if humanity will forego our current writing system and (d)evolve into exclusively using emojis to convey emotion in the future.

Maybe that'll give me the motivation needed to eat a bullet.

>>11563220
>Wingdings but more retarded

>>11563220
A truly terrifying thought

>>11561447
I love that you adopted the rrats about Ayame into this story and made her a two-faced bitch. It really does make for an interesting story instead of just a heroine that is "cutesy and helpless". It makes me hopeful for a good character development for her as well. I'll be eagerly waiting for more.

>>11563264
i imagine something like those retarded discord messages

>>11563310
i hate that these things never fail to get a grin out of me at worst. they're so fucking stupid but it hits the retard center of my brain just right.

>>11563310
Is that message comparing having a bush to 9/11? What the fuck and why did it get a laugh out of me.

>>11563450
am i seriously so old that nu-channers don't remember "bush did 9/11"?

>>11563483
am i seriously so old that nu-channers don't remember how to read a sentence properly?

>>11563591
oh, i read your sentence properly. i just don't get how you arrived at that conclusion. maybe put a few more points in your intelligence stat next time - even two more points'd be triple what you've got now

>>11563629
I'm stating that it's a strange comparison, retardchama. Plus, I'd bet that you don't even know who hole guy is.

>>11563780
Stop taking the bait.

>>11563780
>hole guy
Is this a ligma because it feels like it

>>11563780
talking to you anymore is going to make my brain melt

>>11462282
Schizophrenically beating Watame then caring for her as of you don’t know what happened!

Any writeanons have any advice on how to do a messaging app segment in a word doc?

>>11565287
First summer memories Anon did it well. Italics, with (You)r texts on one side of the page and the other person’s text on the other side of the page

>>11565287
Pumping ToKnight and First Summer Memories.

Safety bump.

What are you looking forward to?

>>11568510
Unironically looking forward to the Ayame fic that incestanon is working on.

>>11568510
Next chapter of Summer Memories, I guess.
Also whatever new Fubuki story is in the works.

>>11565287
To add onto the other anon's advice you could also make a literal fake message image with some of the apps/websites out there, save the image then embed the image into the word processor/publisher of your choice.

>>11561447
I like how this reads and the concept is at least interesting enough that I'd read what you'll put out next and while I do dislike, for lack of a better term, rrat!ayame in regards to how you interpret her character... I do actually enjoy reading about how you characterize the bitch and want to see how you handle it going forward.

>>11565287
When doing online conversation, I had the other person's text messages tabbed and color-coded to show who's speaking while (your) messages were not tabbed and colored black. I also added a > to any received messages to emulate a reply.

Rather than do one paragraph of dialogue, I broke it up into multiple lines to show someone sending she speaks. Shift+enter allows you to create a newline directly under the first line to show consecutive messages.

>>11568510
The next chapter of pretty much any of the ongoing fics in the archive. Actually, I'm not sure if there're any new fics in the works that other Anons have talked about here other than the Ayame fic incestanon's working on.

>>11570825
I feel kinda bad that that guy's stuck as being 'incestanon' forever now.

>>11565287
When doing online conversations, I had the other person's text messages tabbed, color-coded, and marked with a > to show who's speaking while (your) messages were color coded black and not formatted to show your response. This helped identify who's talking without having to copy and paste a username and allows for group DMs without creating confusion as to who's speaking.

Instead of doing one paragraph of text, I would break it up into several smaller sentences to show someone sending as she speaks. Shift + Enter allows you to make a newline directly under the previous line for that purpose.

>>11570979
This seems like even more work than the two other text message formatting solutions already suggested.
Do you have a story you used this in? I think seeing it in action might convey it better than how your explaining this.

>>11572430
It is more work, but it gives me more flexibility to identify chat messages and make smoother transitions between chatting online and doing real world stuff without having to writing about looking away from your phone. Although, it does come at the cost of more visual noise.

>>11572965
NTA but hang on, isn't this the Shion story that was removed from the archive at the behest of the author?

>>11573593
Man I genuinely enjoyed that Shion story. Kinda hoping that something similar will appear in the future.

>>11573593
Yes, it was. I had fun using formatting as part of story direction, so the chat messages were something I really enjoyed setting up.

Maybe a little late into the thread, but as the writer of HoloRealm(the misandrist fantasy shounen series), would like to ask you anons anything you expect/would like to see in the series? I've already planned out the skeleton of the plot but I would still like to hear some ideas or opinions you might have. No guarantees it gets in though.

>>11578311
If Anon doesn't punch someone using magic I'm going to be disappointed. You're allowed a lot of agency if you're going full shounen; have fun with it, get whacky with it. Do what I can't.

>>11578311
I'd like to see all of HoloEN crucified.

>>11570888
kek i feel the same way, especially given he's written a whole variety of works

>>11578311
I know it's a world of magic but I want to see some more unarmed combat, some cool martial arts. Love that shit.

>>11578311
I'm not sure if >>11580191 means that he wants Anon to punch someone while he himself uses magic (the rod) or he means that he wants Anon to punch someone while they're in the middle of casting a spell but I really want the latter.
I'm imagining a scene in which some powerful mage is about to unleash a spell that'll kill Anon and he just rushes in to deck her in the face before she finishes casting, dropping her like a sack of potatoes. Bonus points if said magic user gives a monologue about how powerful her magic is right before Anon sucker punches her in the face.

>>11562711
Lighters are usually carried on you, not with you like in your car or something so they wouldn't stay behind very often. You can probably find a fuck ton of lighters at the entrance of houses cause when people get home they take out their wallet and shit and put it on the nearest table usually. As for electric stoves, there's no way you could find one easily, at least not without going inside an appliance store. Maybe at one of those survival tool fairs if you're lucky, but that would be totally plundered if not guarded already.

>>11581553
The latter. Just rush in or use the rod or whatever to get in but just fucking deck someone. Go full anime with it, I don't care. I love shit like that.

Dead thread XD let's talk about chuubas guys

peko

what secrets have you hidden within your works
references to something obscure that were never picked up on, etc.
if you look hard enough I'm sure there's an actual murder confession hidden in a fanfic, somewhere, just ciphered out

>>11587190
I've hidden one of my almost rape stories in one of my fics, that's the biggest one. Reality will always be better than fiction. Other than that, only some small references to Youtubers or animu that I liked.

>>11587262
>I've hidden one of my almost rape stories in one of my fics, that's the biggest one
...What story?

>>11587688
Wouldn't be a secret if I told you.

>>11587964
A-Anon...were you the rapist or the victim...?

>>11589788

>>11587262
Wait, are you the guy that said he’s almost committed rape a few times?

>>11590795
Nah, that was me. Almost did it again today - looked a woman right in the eyes as I got on the train to work.

>>11590795
Unsurprisingly so, yes. Writing is a good way to cope with my urges.

>>11462282
Kson's new model is pure sex, I need a fic where she fucks anon like there is no tomorrow.

>>11587262
Anon... That isn't a good secret now that you're narrowing it down since it's narrowing it down to, story in the archive that's kinda rapey.

>>11462253
Not mine. Would be a crying shame to see this go to waste, though. Heavy abuse.
>>11534487
>>11534960
>>11536191
>>11536686
>>11537393
>>11538190
>>11574801
>>11576959
>>11577791
>>11584147
>>11584538

>>11592129
Could be Luna's assistant author but I don't think he ever namefagged. Would explain him not coming here directly though.

>>11587262
>reality will always be better than fiction
hahahahahahahahhah
You can't seriously believe this.

>>11592273
He never namefagged, no.

Could Ollie survive with her head off her body?

>>11593346
only if her mouth was around my penis.

>>11593346
She's a zombie. unless there's a bullet lodge in her head, she'll survive.

>>11594506
Is she really a zombie? I thought they pulled a marine on her and might have said she’s a larper or something.

>>11594649
nah she's undead she even has a human form

>>11594714
Yeah, I think that's what he's referring to when he says larper.

>>11462253
Due to the nature of how long this one was, I didn't feel like proofreading it. There's probably a couple of mistakes switching between past to present here and there. Honestly I wish I could just use both but that would be wrong I guess... I can't believe I'm putting these out so quickly, I usually took much longer to make smut. I feel like I write too much dialogue but it should be fine.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRdv41pf_aQLDzXB_vnYhkg6DPqvvvAb41-8ZDzP-rw1U5W1P8XSBnw5AkJDo-02iNuZz-kOr9EP4i4/pub

Tags: Ayame, SFW, post-apocalyptic, gore, Risu, Iofi, Moona

>>11595134
Throw out a series description while you're here

>>11594649
Nah the Olivia thing is pretty securely an alternate universe thing. The zombie thing is still very much her thing even if she doesn't kayfabe her shit much.

>>11595134
damn that was fast

>>11595295
that's what she said

>>11595184
A big flash of light known as the Lightening took out most life as you know it. In this world, shadows live. They roam; they hunt; they kill. As one of the special survivors, you were one of the lucky few to have your shadow taken from you. Now shadowless, walking through empty streets and hopping from town to town, your only chances of survival are to reach the "nightless city", a town mentioned in rumors in which the lights never go out and the shadows have no place to live. If it's even true to begin with...

Meeting partner after partner in this long journey of yours, avoiding the shadows at all costs, and the survivors of the Lightening as well, will this promised paradise turn out to be true... or just another fairy tale?

I think that should be fine.

>>11595134
I'm really fucking enjoying this anon, Ayame being a dumb bitch is probably going to piss off people that unironically have her as their oshi but damn is it a refreshing take on a chuuba to see in a story. Keep it up, I really like this story,

>>11595134
Why is Ayame such a bitch?

>>11595919
Standard ojou-sama.

>>11462282
Noraneko is acting clingier than usual to Fumi, wanting to come over to her house often and practically sit in her lap rubbing her face and breasts all over her. Turns out she is in heat. Fumi is a fox god so she can change her appearance to suit any need, even if it's the need of her retarded cat friend begging to be fucked by a penis, her friends penis

>>11595919
NTA, but if you want an actual answer that isn't just board memes it's because rrats exaggerate her not publicly congratulating or acknowledging her fellow holomembers plus not streaming into her being a giant bitch who doesn't care for hololive and just play LoL and (going into rrat territory) whores herself out to old men for cheap... presumably the smoking is extending the stereotype of Japanese Bitch since it's a common trait among how the word is used over there.

>>11595919
She’s a high-class whore.

>>11596171
Well, I don't follow her rrats that much, but I do remember that one time when she announced she was taking a sick day and cancelling a stream, she was actually playing LoL because people following her account saw a number of new matches on the same date

>>11596225
When will someone write a soprano story of Ayame getting killed like Tracee?

>>11596311
Would be based.

New thread
>>11596355

>>11596311
This feels personal, what did Ayame do to you, anon?

>>11596255
I remember that. I wish I had saved the screencaps of her match history. Oh well.

>>11488411
We've finally reached the bump limit! I was quite afraid of derailing the thread again, since I arrived after the story was posted, so I've been waiting to say something.
Thank you so much for giving it a shot at writing out my request. It isn't lost on me that it's extremely difficult to write about something that not only doesn't interest you, but actively repulses you - I appreciate it!
The build-up is imaginative - I kind of thought that anybody writing this would go with the "mistakenly eating mold" idea posted a week or two ago instead of overfeeding junk food. Also, as others have stated, the line about asking her to use you as a toilet to avoid breaking the law was very funny.
It's not the kind of erotic that I was looking for. You've focused quite a bit on describing how putrid and vile the act is, when I wanted to hear about the sensation of her soft cheeks pressed against your face, the warm sensation as it travels down your throat and the relief she feels afterwards. The ultimate boner-killer for me, though, was that she ran away crying at the end. Extreme fetishes tend to be a soft spot for people that hold them because they're so universally reviled, and this hit particularly hard for me.

I honestly didn't think I'd ever see this written. Again, thank you, anon, from the bottom of my heart!

>>11597185
Ay, I finally got your response. I'm glad you seemed to enjoy it even it didn't tick the boxes you were hoping for. My assumption was that scatfags reveled in the grossness of the act which is why I described how disgusting it was. Anyways, thanks for reading the fic.

>>11597185
>the warm sensation as it travels down your throat
what the FUCK possessed me to read the spoiler

>>11599157
We can't expect god to do all the work.

Pekofag sucking my balls while fucking Marine.

Loving sex with Noel AND Flare!