/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-9gRH1HkhGg
Watched this multiple times to figure out why I don't like it even though that stream was pure kino. Some anons criticized the overuse of zooms and memes but I think the actual problem is that it's a bit too faithful to the vod.
It would have been better to just 'tell a story' with clips from the vod instead of making a super cut of what actually happened and then trying to make it funny. Shuffle stuff around, cut out or add missed shots, deaths and hits depending on what you want to convey to the viewer, if the video is good and you aren't too blatant about it nobody is going to notice it. Also, a small intro with reviews, forum posts and memes about how unfair the RNG in XCom is narrated by Lumi talking about how godly her luck is and then extending the beginning 2easy4me part would have made the later parts of the video more exciting(subverting your expectations and all that).