/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>72937679
It's coming along, but it's been hard to write lately. I think I'm burnt out on everything else in life so finding the mental ease to sit down and write is tougher. I took a break yesterday and browsed a bookstore though while my wife was on some errands. I found a few fantasy books with poise I really enjoyed, while also finding the smut in what would be considered the mainstream smut shelf, not too impressive.
>Bonus
I'm going to try something different and wait till I've wrapped up all the action in the current part of my story before releasing it. I'll probably need 15-20k. Could be end up being more knowing me.

>>64155337
As fledglings, they aren't expected to add anything during the conversation, unless one is purposely trying to assert themselves and show initiative. As for Moona, that might make sense then, but it might help a reader to possibly showcase subtly how either Reine finds her manner of speech odd, or that she has a really thick accent or something. Otherwise it just kinda reads awkwardly since I wouldn't have the context of whatever explains it later, or rather even expect it to be explained or know that something is actually off.
Glad you're having fun and bringing your own story about the way you want to. I know you like to go fast, but remember to pace yourself. You can afford a day or two to let your own ideas simmer for a bit and build off them before you call a chapter complete. Take some time to consider all the angles, and you might stumble upon something about the chuuba involved that you would like to include.