/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>38738909
>"Do you feel better now?"
>"Did something bad happen to you today?"

>>38738987
She's Not. She's loving romatnic sex where you constantly assuage her concerns over being too old and having weird ears.

>>26474923
To Slay a Monster: Chapter 4

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSULtt_giqjJjkgIHcp0dURnPj5IT4q50ANGqyLAyvHvWlojtYdaCbMxlhGaAhZw_pHnM2fdUDRscMT/pub

Tell me what you think about this. This is my first attempt at writing a time skip and I don't have a lot of experience writing fight scenes so doubtless something in there needs improvement. Do tell me your thoughts.

tags: (you), Flare, Noel, fantasy, adventure, mystery

>>25114766
It's...interesting. Like a lot of your stuff, it's a little too early to tell as it hasn't hit it's stride yet, but I'll keep reading.

Though, I do find Anon is kind of inconsistent in his actions. One minute he threatens to not pay if she's hurt, but doesn't blink at her getting shot and even slaps her immediately after, only to threaten someone again when they call her a coffee elf. Also, Flares eyes are red, not yellow. Unless that's part of the gradual darkening thing

>>10861503
Very nice dude, I'm glad you kept working on this. Like the other anon said the mood and dialoguye are A+, and it's as gripping as the previous chapters were.