/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>16139577
Malices new model looks kinda weird
I don't like it

>>16133456

kiki's new model bothers me so im trying to give kiki a makeover, to the best of my ability of course. this took me around 1 hour so pretty much still a rough sketch.
before i go further, im not trying to shit on the artist here, obviously he's just taking kiki's request and tried to make her vision come true and the product on technical level is amazing, so what im criticizing is kiki's vision about her character not the artist.

>change her hair color to one with more saturation to get away from the depressing grey tones. art is about contrast if you have desaturated color in one place you need to have saturated color on another to complement it
>simplified her pupils, too much details can be too distracting. added beauty mark (just my personal preference) and orange eye shadow so instead of having the details focused on the pupils i spread it around the eyes, so your attention won't always gets pulled to one point
>smaller 4chan hairpin because having that as your personality is cringe
>age her face a little bit
>remove the gimmicky mouth shape, it's ugly imo. literally haven't seen a single artist manage to pull gimmick-mouth well, yes even on korone. kiki's mouth on the previous model was way more subtle.
>change the ears color to white so it contrast against the hair
ear-lop bunny girl is really hard to design especially the ears, i did what i can.

i can draw kiki a new model for free i don't have twitter right now but i'll make one if she's interested.
caveat being im not a pro, i have a job, drawing is just a hobby for me so im really slow and don't expect me to have a deadline for this because i have very little free time usually around 1-2 hours to draw when there's a free time, and i have never drawn a vtuber model before so im literally going to learn as i go.

positive points
im really good at copying, given enough references i can copy any style
dedication and my love for kiki, i won't abandon the project, i'll finish it no matter what.
not a groomer, so no grooming. also im an idolfag so i can relate and know to keep my distance, nothing beyond professional business partnership
i can share the progress here and we can incorporate inputs from the thread to create the best kiki we can get
she don't need to use it if she doesn't like the finished model and the most important thing: "they do it for free"

if you're interested just make vocaroo or something i'll contact you later, if not that's fine too, im still going to watch her no matter what her model is anyway, that's all.
KIKI LOVE.