/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>20631558
I'm guessing I'm missing a scene you can linger on? The strategy I tried to counter act this was to rapid fire fuck Anya in every way possible with no break so one can just keep jerking, but there's no way that'd be enough. But I can't really keep dragging out a scene or a cumshot by adding more descriptions because that breaks greentext format... not to mention LA author didn't do either of these, so that's not the problem. The problem is just me not being good enough, really. Also wtf I literally said thank you there and you still didn't realize I wrote it?

>>20631934
But that implies the nectar comes from her, too. If I had a scene about tonguing her wet vampire slit that'd be fine, but I'm not feeling it.

>>20631938
To me, what I expected to be the line that hits hard is the "good boy" one, but looking back I even screwed up that one. But I suppose If I tried making more lines to be hard hitters instead of just one at the climax, it could make a difference.