/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

Right, time to start the reviews of the contest fics I haven’t read yet.
>A Cursed Dagger
Well shit, this was fantastic. I’m a fluff fag through and through so this hit the spot for me, and I also love shortstacks so I’m probably biased. This is currently a strong contender for my favourite entry. The jokes got a few chuckles out of me, I loved how you wrote Anya’s slightly ESL speech and the epilogue was the exact kind of stuff I like to see at the end of a story. The date might have relied on sequence breaks a bit too much, but that’s really only a minor gripe. I know it was a SFW fic, but it felt a bit like Anya’s horniness didn’t come through enough, as in her thoughts from the mind reading and her actions didn’t match. I think her horniness should have been implied more during and after the date so the crystal would have more relevance. There were also a few grammar issues, but that’s understandable since you were under a time limit. Overall I loved this from start to end, I’m definitely going to read it again sometime.
God I want to pick Anya up by the armpits and manhandle her.