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When I was rewatching Moribito, this scene was the spark that started Balsa. The line "I am a tiger! and if you get any closer I'll swallow you as well!" still gives me chills and I'm hoping to write a line like that in Blackbean. Moribito is a huge influence on both stories.

Most of my other stories don't really come from outside influences. Kafka is just T-dumping and Building Block Doll is just a collection of fantasies I've always had.

>>64156238
>for Moona, that might make sense then, but it might help a reader to possibly showcase subtly how either Reine finds her manner of speech odd, or that she has a really thick accent or something.

Fair.

>I know you like to go fast, but remember to pace yourself. You can afford a day or two to let your own ideas simmer for a bit and build off them before you call a chapter complete. Take some time to consider all the angles, and you might stumble upon something about the chuuba involved that you would like to include.

I know, I know, I just feel so guilty whenever I see the general have low activity. I know it's not like I have an obligation but I'm just weird like that. I will try to slow it down a bit so I can give it a bit more flourish.

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