/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

Can I get some quick criticism?
Dropped my png a couple of days ago that had a helmet on, got told the helmet was a bad idea and that the boobs were too far apart.

I want to go for a haunted armor kind of idea, in this design I want to go for a smoke kind of character living in a spacesuit .

What can I change? (I definitely need to clean up the lines)