/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>79537015
there's no chance of digging up a 20 year old console like a DS..

>>76451835
Nice. I enjoyed a lot of this, especially Shion, strangely enough. She was cute throughout every scene she appeared in. Everything else has been covered by some other Anons so I'll mention a couple things that felt kinda off. The first was Hoshikawa's character. She felt condescending and snarky in this, which isn't really what she's like. You captured her playful and cheeky side pretty well but she's definitely nicer than this. I also didn't get the point of the moral code thing considering how fucking FAST Anon suddenly went from feeling annoyed by Hoshikawa to wanting to fuck her. It was also then revealed that he was doing stuff with Shiori, so it I feel as though it didn't add much to the fic. Especially the line,
>For the fraction of a second you reminisce how you, a former bastion of morality, could be reduced to such a lust-driven beast
felt meaningless since he showed no signs of ever being a bastion of morality.
That said, this is some real nitpicking I'm doing here. If this is all the fault I could find in this fic then you know you've done a great job. Sex was incredibly hot, dialogue was nice (aside from when it jumped from 0 to 100 at times) and all the characters felt very alive. Amazing work.

It's too fucking warm
my house is built for 0C not 30
IM GONNA DIE
I WANNA GO BACK TO FLORIDA

can't believe swarthy fuckers can put up with heat all year
can't even sit on my ass watching streams without creating a lake in my bedroom

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z4OGadyN61k Choco-Subaru-Luna-Botan cover premiere
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YpPUaAryUc8 Sora TotK
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJt6RYFqFfc Shion Pineapple on pizza
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FtxOgNqvXuA Marine The Backrooms: 1998