/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>76734165
you are probably done already with this, but cince you asked for some critiq

the arms are way too paralel to her body they could be reaching to her legs, it can work tho, however they are too long here, the hands could be more claw like they look like they are resting on her leg.
the lines above the pussy makes the whole leg look like a cartoon cut out, this also because the body isnt bending at all it almost look the legs arent hers, the ass is too roundish when the legs are raised in that way they are kinda egg shaped(inverted) bc sit bones.

put some rolls marks on the tumy plust the belly buttom being squished and get rid of those lines above the pussy.