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Born to gamedev
Forced to get a job

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I hate reps
I want to be instantly good at things

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I don't have any agency and my efforts have never been rewarded

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I went to bed and woke in the middle of the night thinking I heard someone cry, thinking I myself was weeping, and I felt my face and it was dry.

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I fit into this world like a square peg in a circular hole

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I hate all of you so much

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death to the world
give me orthodoxy or give me death

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I want to hurt myself

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>>60962454
I should be the only person in the world allowed to have sex.

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"Why can't women write?
Because they can cry whenever they want"

Emil Cioran

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I hate evil so much I hate evil so fucking much I want to destroy all evil and it's disgusting fucking agents

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>>59567555
Now getting to this. Nothing much to say here compared to the last times, minor grammar things you can make better and one word you mixed up.
>“ Wow~ That’s cold Shiorin. I will kill for you.”
Can be changed to
>I would kill for you."
This next one here I think the proper term you meant was "vulnerable", as invulnerable means invincible basically.
>Her raven-like crimson eyes made me feel like an invulnerable prey
So it should read as
>Her raven-like crimson eyes made me feel like vulnerable prey
Overall it's mostly fine, again a few minor stuff that you can easily ignore or fix, I won't go into detail about all of them, just the immediate ones.
For story, I like where it went, the hallucination with the dead doctor warning you was great, even the dead warning you not to trust her. Was a really good idea in my opinion.
Sorry to hear that you're hitting a block in your writing though, I hope you get over it soon or find inspiration to continue. I've been enjoying your writing so far and I wanna see more.

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>reading last page
I don't want any of you to tell me that NA hours are better than yuro hours ever again.

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I hate evil so much it's ruining my life

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I suddenly felt that it was all the same to me whether the world existed or whether there had never been anything at all: I began to feel with all my being that there was nothing existing.

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>>57678266
Ah, actual broken menhera. My mind is trembling. So cute I'm gonna vomit.

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Surround Yourself with People Who Believe in Your Dreams:
Surround yourself with people who believe in your dreams, encourage your ideas, support your ambitions, and bring out the best in you.

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$HIORIBOY$

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>>56469674
Yes. I don't.

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I float among these Depths, spinning strings a plenty.
A feeling of Lament, yet the yarning proceeds and Why?

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>>56083093
I could review half the games in dlsite's RPG section going back to 2012 and I'm a purityfag.

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