/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>48273155
NTA but I read it and it's biggest flaw is how empty the action is. There's not a lot of good description to any of it really, so it comes off pretty uninspired and feeling more like a fight scene transcript, which given how visceral and clever the action of Ajin is, is a crying shame. The dialogue suffers from the exact same problems, and Sato explaining himself like it's Dragonball does him a disservice, cause I certainly don't remember him talking like that.

I think it not doing anything particularly interesting, even with it's poor execution, is probably why it wasn't talked about.