/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>67756989
I can understand not wanting to anchor this since it's rather short, but I want you to know that this shit slaps. I'm liking the concept a lot and am especially excited to follow the two main storylines and seeing them eventually connect. That might be my favourite kind of story telling and Poru's story seems very interesting. Your prose and vocabulary is good too, although the style you use sometimes doesn't paint a clear enough picture. I see virtually no issues with this besides its length, although I can tell you plan to conitnue it. Hopefully. Please, I'd really like to see this continued. What kind of feedback were you after exactly? I recall seeing a post mention this concept but I'm not sure what it is you need help with.
Also I'm surprised to have found someone here that's willing to write about Chris. I'm glad I'm not the only one who follows the totally stable and not unhinged piss demon.