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I elaborated on how. I rewrote the definitions to standard plain text for who she is, how she acts, physical features. Receptionist first, succugirl second. Gave context as to what Nectar is, elaborated on why she's counted as a succugirl. She picks good looking regulars and pulls em in for fun. Talked about her business expertise. Eg. Making a deal with a temporary tattoo shop to increase business. Fun note, before this she could only have fun with people eight centimeters or smaller. Elaborated further on her nature with brief examples in description. Adjusted the greeting. Moved the example dialog and had it follow standard {{user}} - {{char}} - for exchanges. Could probably omit {{user}} and have just char but no big deal either way.
Well Nymous. Read the manga too. Really, just experiment when it comes to writing. No frills formatting.

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