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>>53744924
>>53747179
Thanks! I try to make better use of the 2nd person perspective by focusing more on (you)r emotions and thoughts, and I’m happy that it’s working fine! Truth be told I mulled over the ending for quite a while because I was worried that it was a bit anticlimatic since there’s barely any actions (as her role requires). I also made the epilogue into a separate mini-chapter because that’s basically the last chance I have to reveal behind-the-scene stuff that the readers should know to not get too confused (or so I hope). Now that it’s ended I’m willing to answer any questions if people have questions about the story!
I actually did cut some stuff from the epilogue since I try to stick to the ambiguity when it comes to how (you) see her. The TL did leave some unused lines that would’ve put the mood into a more passionate interaction

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>>51748451
I prefer being a positive influence to people

>>51751480
I guess I’m just a fundamentally boring person since I have troubles formulating even those

>>51777297
It looks awesome!

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