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>>66216199
I believe Kronii is cool and I will never stop believing in coolronii.

>>59904830
I have some chuunironie...

>>56823441
It is kayfabe whether she really is like that or not.

I wish there was a thread for lore and kayfabe.

*The monkey's paw curls*
>lore thread has 0 discussion about vtuber lore and is only talking about some gay fangame lore

>kayfabe thread has /x/ tier schizos

I guess this one is a bit better than the lore one at the very least you're talking about kayfabe.

>>53254514

So, I caught up on https://rentry.org/cvt40k-morig-of-ghosts

I wont write about the first part since i read that months ago, so the following review / feedback will concern only the sections after and including "Awakening" and up to and including "Inception".

>Awakening
So, this entire section is in effect, a 1130 word piece of exposition / lore dump with very little happening or being established. Some would consider this a minor or a major sin in writing, as it it essentially an entire chapter's worth of "telling" instead of "showing". A lot of the stuff told in this chapter you have also described to us in the later chapters, for example, the SIN depth and its effects were briefly mentioned in the chapter "Inception".
I may be nitpicky to mention this, but I feel like in order to be honest i needed to mention it. There is a good chance that you are aware of these ideas already and made this as a conscious choice for any unknown reason like for example, to go against the grain or simply because you really liked the cool systems and technobabble you have created for the setting, which are both very valid reasons in my book. I do like the technobabble, and going "No, you WILL read the bio-engineering autism" on the reader is kinda based, if intentional and done in moderation.

We are however, given some interesting lore bits, like the POV character's name and general persona as a comparison to Ciqui, who is the only other named character introduced in this part, seemingly her only purpose being as an exposition megaphone, although you have also set up Ciqui as a foil against the POV, with the possibilities of their relationship being so far very open Although how the POV focuses on her "perfect face" makes my "impending romantic buildup" radar to go off, with a rivalry seeming to me to be the most likely direction. You have also set up a mystery regarding Ciqui and why exactly she does not train where the other pilot-students do. I hope that Ciqui was not just an exposition piece meant to be thrown away, since you have build her up to be a potentially intriguing character. She is in fact the most interesting part of this entire chapter, and admittedly, if I view the lore dump as a way to set up Ciqui instead of Ciqui being used to throw some lore at the reader, the chapter does start to make more sense to me. I am personally quite looking forward to hearing more about Ciqui.

You also hint at the possible "long term effects" of interfacing with a daemon, which, I hope, will be explored further. Given how you treat the idea of interfacing as being dangerous in the following chapters ("Insertion" and "Infusion"), this seems to me to be part of your plan.

The fact that most of the text in this chapter is dialogue is regrettable to me. The few descriptions you have peppered here and there feel way too short for much of anything to be cleaved out of them and the overfocus on dialogue does make the chapter feel a bit dry, which, to be fair, is quite fitting, since the POV of Tuval is clearly not interested in the theory side of piloting a Daemon; It would make certain sense to make the lecture chapter feel dry in comparison to the chapters where the Daemons actually get piloted, and if this was your intent, I kneel. However, until proven otherwise I will assume that its a case of "author really really wants to share his cool lore with the reader and thus they prematurely exposition into their pants"-itis.

That being said, I really like the line about Ciqui and her faking wondering about whether she missed something or not. Very simple line to introduce a lot about her character. Very efficient.

I also very much liked the mention of a bio-screen. I feel like it is quite the unique take.

1/3

>>32042767
>>32043022
If I may weigh in.

I think that for this to happen, we might need a group of leading figures to rise up in the holonations. Figures who are able to rally politicians and civilians on their side. There could be a singular leading figure around whom these leading figures gather, perhaps some Prince of the HLGG empire or something. Shall call them the Warmaster from now on for obvious reasons.
Ideally the Warmaster would be a neutral party, and as there was an idea about the HLGG being used as a place for which any holo thread could write for, HLGG could work as their place of origin. Nasfaqg is another option due to our decentralized nature, as then we could have a villain rise up here without having to vilify an entire nation, but I dont think nasfaqg would be the optimal place of origin for THE Warmaster, as he should come from a fully holo-leaning nation.
/#/ is problematic because they have no rep. I'd like to avoid having to vilify repless nations.

With nasfaqg specifically, since we are built to be a very decentralized nation where the rich can become what are essentially independent microstates, we could serve as a source of instigating characters and events where no single nation has to be made an evil force.
I dont really like nasfaqg in general being seen as a villain of the setting because I just want to trade and be friends desu, and I dont think I can handle the heat yet at least, but I'm completely fine if some of the companies and microstates within nasfaqg are seen as such. I dont think this is a plothole since the republic itself treats them as mostly independent, and would actually ally themselves with a foreign power against a nasfaqg company if the latter is seen as having done something that would be considered criminal within the republic, or if their actions threaten the sanctity of global trade.

Also, there might not be need for entire nations to join (unless they want to). We could have the war be like the crusades where a sizable portion of the fighting force are volunteers (likely extremist religious orders) from all across Ailivia and holo-leaning nations. Since there are a lot of holo-leaning nations, building up the fighting force like this would also make the battlefield a lot more even, as then we wouldn't see the national forces take (direct) part in the conflict, unless ofc, a specific nation wants that.

As for nasfaqg participation, I was actually planning on writing a civil war or a number of civil wars between the "status quo" of the Serene Republic and a force of anti-republic rebels and schizos led by a powerful figure who claims to be a Tako and is possibly a catalognaut, happening at around the 1130s.
This could be tied in with the plans of a niji-holo war, where nasfaqg would participate indirectly with someone on the Inanist (as I shall call them) side cooperating with the Warmaster, whilst the "status quo" side wants to stay openly neutral but still sell weapons and mercenaries to both sides.

Naturally, the Serene Republic itself, as in, the Dev council and Lady Honk, would remain neutral as they are not in the least interested in earthly wars.

Whatever happens, I think it leads to some level of a civil war in nasfaqg, as there would be companies who would want to cooperate with the crusaders, and those who would look towards the east in hopes of profiting from helping the nijis defend their lands.

I dont know, just some thoughts.

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>>25541761
how can you fucks pick fauna over kronii

>>25489245
No, she's going to realize just how cool she is!

>>25264077
koko

I love my kakkoi oshi!

>>24189163
I like how quasar draws a lot of chuuni art.

>>13080318
>cute
Oh... its YOU again...

After all this time, I found him. That time-traveling mortal has given me enough problems already. Not only does he possess an ability that no mortal should have, but he is also trying to change this timeline. Heretical. It seems that after our last meeting, he has been trapped in a tangle of past and future events, a cage made of his memories that he can't escape. I almost feel pity for him. It doesn't matter what he is trapped in; I have to send him back dead or alive. My duty to protect time is absolute.

>>11629896
Clock doko...

>>11619295
Better rrat:
The schedule was posted late because she knew it would disappoint everyone and she was too anxious too post it