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>>37451833
Thanks, I pray it doesn't disappoint.
>>37451287
>gag
Oh uh... that wasn't the intended effect, but if it helped you enjoy the story then that's great.
>>37455536
Trust me man, I have zero work ethic, don't feel ashamed. This has been in the works since MARCH.
>>37452069
I was considering making Mark Oga, but thought that might have been a bit much. His name wasn't even Mark the entire time I was writing this fic and I only changed it about 20 minutes before publishing.

>>37454172
I appreciate the lengthy review, I love reading through these.
>though I also was screaming internally over Aqua getting cucked.
Yeah, after writing her rejection, I wanted to leave it at that but my heart wouldn't let me be that cruel, so I decided to force myself to spend a few thousand words giving her a happy ending too.
>Your smut, by the by, is fucking mint.
Shit, I really appreciate you saying that. I don't write a lot of smut and generally don't think I'm that good, so thanks. I almost did a fade to black, but considering the whole story is based around their sex, I had to write it out. It's good that you liked Ayame in the end but hated her at the start, that was definitely what I wanted the reader to feel about her.
>Maybe it's all the kissing, since that's totally my biggest weakness
Same... that's why I put so much in there. I'm especially a fan of 'undefined relationships' in stories which is why I had them kiss so much despite not even dating.
I'm really fucking glad you liked it, both the story and the slut. Thank you for reading and telling me all this. I'm going to go hibernate somewhere now.

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Thanks for reading, I'm grateful that you think so highly of my story.
>Sequel
As I was writing this I actually had some ideas floating around for one, where you and Ayame go to university together but conflict arises when you tell other people how you met. They seem confused at why the two of you love each other, resulting in Ayame wondering if you only started dating her because you were lonely and she was all you had because she was aggressively clinging to you, while you become worried that the only reason Ayame loves you is because you were the only guy that didn't want to fuck her and that she doesn't like any of your other qualities.
It's just a few ideas I'm tossing around, I don't have a solid plan for a sequel yet. >>37454172 Please don't kill me.

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