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>>73454349
I feel like some of your paths include chuubas that more fit a theme than what their walk of life would actually suggest for them. Like Laplace and HoloX should be their own faction, with their own goal of eventually elevating La+ to the power of an Aeon.
Shiori I would argue belongs in the ancients path, due to her own dabblings within things she was not meant to know. She herself is less concerned about causing chaos and more about just pursuing knowledge. It is the measure of truth, and falsehood.
If extraplanar is just your demon realm chuubas, choco and arguably Shion might belong there too. You could also put Moona in if youre going for the theme of space along with Iofi. Even with being pretty versed in the factions and content you are deriving this from, I'm having a hard time gauging what each is really supposed to be with just this chart alone.

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>>70832516
Could you go into a little more detail about what you need your fantasy setting to be? Are you trying to make a place with more modern metropolises with the convenience of tech like phones and computers?

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>>70097705
I guess on the topic of Aloe, it might be neat to include a small cameo for her, since ya know, demons and stuff. She would probably work well enough for anyone's fic is they are just a low impact standee, with just a small conversation or two. Like maybe as a fledgling succubus she settled down somewhere and runs a small shop and SUCCS on the weekends. Her succing doesn't really need to come into play, or anything else for that matter. Just a cute little cameo since her design is pretty eye catching.

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>>65905466
More interesting than it is useful or practical, unless I plan to get right in those funbags.
>>65906050
Good. Useful. Enjoyable.
>>65906834
Good to know for that, can she do the same with her tail? Or is that always out no matter what? Do you think her wings are good enough to help her fly?

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why is it always indoneisia first?

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>>62637377
I suppose that's a good way to look at it. I don't think the smut or the romance content will be an issue anyway since she's been reading a lot of other smut books.

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>>58468993
Like cliff notes or something? I don't think that's something I would want to make, but maybe a spell/party compendium would be a middle ground for that? I did make a small draft of one a while back, and it's something I want to expand on one day. At the very least a doc like that would help me keep track of what abilities and spells I've had my characters use to far so I don't forget them.

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>>57085516
>it was only twelve! Families of eight.

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>>55531858
I basically narrowed in on the part with Ayame, and I think you could have done a little more to show WHAT anon's thoughts were that the oni was getting a read on. We go from conjuring an apple to her revealing part of her gift when the thoughts she was teasing anon for were back before that event. It might help if you expressed Anon's wandering thoughts more. It would also go a long way in explaining the sudden need to act on those urges shortly after. Since, with how the story has played out so far, it's kinda out left field that he just decides to get down with Ayame. That said, since there wasn't really an expectant build up, the smut itself being super short isn't a huge shortcoming. Though with how the chapter ends, I'm not exactly sure why it even transpired like that in the first place. Unless you plan to build off that with Ayame later, but as a guard, she's just been regaled to sitting at the castle.

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>>54448163
I wouldn't even know where to begin who is behind the curtain of any of these girls. I don't give a fuck. I'm here to watch funny animal girls play video games and make each other laugh. I ain't trying to write fanfiction about real ass people. Let the avatar show you what they want to be shown, that's where the magic is.

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>>54073941
Is it like, an editing thing? What do you need help with?

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>>53550184
Forgive her for what?

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>>53467157
So Omega was just a glorified PR manager? I've honestly seen the name thrown around so much on the catalog in the past but never looked into it since it was just the ramblings of schizos. If what you said is true, it was probably the wrong move to go full tryhard with council given the personalities of the girls who would take the models. If your gen wants to get real chunni with it, go for it, but that was extremely far from the case with this group of gals, and he should have read the room a little better.

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Did the fad end for some "ironic" weebs now?

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>>51922912
I'm afraid I'm all out of "giving up", so I can't help you there.

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>board constantly bitches about no streams
>yet people don't watch streams
do you want streams or do you just want petty shitty drama?

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/vt/ hates flare yet they don't like JP

what gives

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