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>>41855098
this is actually true which is weird
maybe it's because they accept that nobody likes them

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>>41823430
Fubuki needs more representation

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https://twitter.com/shirakamifubuki/status/1614195211172995072

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>>38846508
It's an interesting chapter but the strange way it shifts perspectives within the same scene kind of fucks with immersion. Like it has a good skeleton of events but the execution kind of ruins it. It's like it can't decide whether a scene should be in Anon's perspective or Fubuki's and gambles that having it in both would work. You really need to pick a perspective for a scene and stick with it, this 'hybrid' third person/second person within the same scene just doesn't work even if the narrative is interesting enough to at least keep the story afloat.

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I'm laughing my ass off at this shit.

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>>38371572
Yes touch

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>>37925995
I definitely know what you mean and I'll try to work on it the next time I attempt comedy. I think the inherent problem in all my comedy fics is that I write them so fast that I end up stumbling around a lot and it ends up being like a sketch show: some jokes land, some don't. Thank you for the criticism, I do appreciate it.

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So what does one do with three gold Magikarp?

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Shiny number three!

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D&D?

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>>37331608
oneeshota bait

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I did not expect this. The boys are saving me from the pokemon stream onslaught.

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>>36769662
>>36758719
You should have attached it to the anchor and added an image if you wanted this to get attention.
It's decent but I do have to echo what I said last thread that you really should hold off until you have something more to show for this.

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>>34334708
I love you anon

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>>34317679
NO LEWD FRIEND!

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>>34300832
Petition to flood the entirety of the SEA

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>>33825849
MYTH 3D DEBUT!
COUNCILRYS 3D SOON!
EN3 SOON!
THE FUTURE IS BRIGHT FRIENDS!

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>>33752979
Mofu mofu!

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That was actually pretty good luck in the end.

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Only five months until Myth gets this. It's going to be amazing bros. The future is bright!

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Wrote 1k today.
feelsgoodman

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