/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>76371960
Half the /hlgg/ers I have met have been White.

>>73468248
>>73507099
De facto, the longer chapters are better for pacing than shorter chapters. If only because by nature of length more gets done in the space of a single 'read'.
Though I do have to agree, structurally the fact that this arc is inherently built around a bunch of OCs the readers struggle to really care about really fucks it over. The first five chapters had a good thing going from the protagonist/shiori duo and it kind of feels like the two of them have been in the backseat for this entire arc.
I know some part of that is intentional since they are (reduced to) kids in a (made up) world that's bigger than them but well... that aspect is kind of what's making this arc feel so, for lack of a better phrase, 'lacking in agency'. It's like they know they're stuck in a game but they're just letting stuff play out in front of them instead of rattling the cage and seeing if there's a way ahead. Especially since they're kind of being 'railroaded' by the adults in their lives instead of trying to proactively prod at everything to fish out name fragments.
I'm honestly not sure how this can get fixed, I can see what's going wrong but with the nature of how this arc is getting presented I don't really see how it can get fixed without redacted and Shiori just deciding to fuck around and not immerse themselves in the town of their memories... which would make this a different kind of arc altogether.
Like I'm still interested in this story but man, every fucking chapter is just me waiting for these OCs to die and for the murders to kick in.

What a weird girl

>>72896965
>>72896992
I got much better at talking to women when I stopped seeing them as people.

What kind of twisted woman thinks about "babywife"?

>>70710812
I mean...

I'm going to post some really thick lewd pubes later today. Watch out for them.

>>70088962
Man, the parallels to the part 3 substory are just going to get stronger until it inevitably gets pointed out in universe huh?
This was a bit of a filler part, other than the fact that we're like three characters into what redacted-san's name
8 characters for the first name that starts with Me , and a four letter last name that has a g in the middle (going by the quote from part v).

>>68757249
While you're still in the mood for QoL changes can you also make the parts link to each other at the end, i.e link part 1 to 2 and 2 to 3, etc.

>>68231364
Or maybe I'm just mentally stable anon.

>>63538755
I'm the vanillafag of cereals, I just stick to Corn Flakes and regular Cheerios. I used to eat the sugary ones but stopped.

>having to choose between the comfy doggos or my mentally ill goth gf talking about periods
I HATE THE DEMIURGE

Surprised I don't see you guys mention how much of a /here/ shitposting schizo Shiorin is.

>>63127664
Good job anon. May the quads bless the rest of your day as well.

shirley is live

Now I'M the sick one, someone take care of me and bake me cinnamon swirls, please...

>>59937891

>>59935171
Yeah

>>59658934
Ah, it is just black tea then? I have failed.....I'll have to rewrite the entire scenario AGAIN, oh nyo

>>59500539
Just this once, as a treat, now, cheer up and prepare for Shiorin's next stream, whatever could a Minecraft field trip entail.

Are Novelites the only fanbase thaat struggles with her oshi being into fictional m*les?