/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

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>Because of the hard line between Hime's left hand and thigh makes it look like her hand is hovering there.
>Hime's other hand looks like it should be playing with her hair, but it's also just kind of there.
>The musculature detail around the characters hand and joints make them look more masculine
>Probably a lot more "less is more" when it comes to line economy
>Some of the two tone shading looks inconsistent

I think it still looks good otherwise. Wrangle some of that detail and slim those shoulders and it'll look magnitudes better though.