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>>51281652
>I've been indoctrinated to write everything in 12 font New Times Roman.
I hadn't even noticed that. It's always your particular style of formatting coupled with the deadpan dialogue delivery that gives it away. I enjoyed it and I think your dialogue is getting much better. I am in a position where I am unable to actuate my enjoyment, but this is definitely going into the spank bank. You do write some good smut; it's densely erotic, with every line containing at least some titillation, and a vast percentage of your pornographic writing is actual smut, meaning that it's easily possible to get off even with a relatively short story such as this (2.2k words).

I have no clue as to how you manage to find the bogan Sheila accent attractive in general. I get someone like Hugh Jackman, fair play, but bogan chicks are like fingernails on the chalkboard to me. I am biased because I live here, but still.

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>>50589459
Here's an idea: when they ask if you're a virgin, how about you just say 'no'? It's just a thought.
Writing about your sexpertise on your CV couldn't hurt.

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