/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

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Good so far. Starting to properly outline certain powers that also serve as themes and I wrote a very touching scene with Lui that I may expand on as I write the rest of the chapter. Just a bit stumped on one plot point I really need to iron out the details for if the climax is going to be any good.

I've been thinking lately that I wish I had a personal editor to look over my work before I publish it. Not like for grammar and shit, that's easy enough, but so that he could say "well this may work or this might not" so I could learn stuff ahead of time. Right now I'm struggling a bit with presentation and how much is too much. But as it goes now, I can only know after the fact and someone tells me.