/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>69776246
Orca supremacy does it again.

>>66776912
Work first. Then work out. Write later.

>>50662914
I'm actually kinda into the idea the more I think about it. I would have to alter it a little since so far I don't plan for any chuubas I want to write to be fully deceased, so the ghosts stuck in shipping purgatory would need to be other characters.
>>50660186
You do have me hooked on wanting to know what is going to happen in this anon, so nice job on that. I think you could stand to make these chapters a little longer so that more can be allowed to happen during them. Your story obviously has a big overarching plot-line going on, so feel free to let yourself put a few more scenes in there to move things along, or flesh things out more. In this chapter for example, I think the anon handled the happenings and revelations a little too smoothly. You might want to play around with telling the reader more about his internal thoughts and how he is processing things.

LIKE A RHINESTONE COWBOY

>>40916765
we're not here to argue about someone who broke the NDA

t.former fandead

Sakamata

Overall: can't bring out her full strength.
Collabs: Responsibility and perseverance are keys. Understand your role.
Luck: Worse than collabs. Concentrates too much on winning, so gets nervous. Relax.
Advice: Believe in yourself, your talent and abilities, and you will become the star.

not bad

she will survive if she sticks to her plan. the witch lets her off easy.

>>38252070
Nice work Chloe

I had a dream that sakamata added soap into her merch pack