/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

Get a random fic from the archive and share your thoughts on it.
>Ko'one Breastmilk
Cute but short snippet. Not much to say here so reroll.
>COVER Corp. Talent Security Division, Prologue
It feels incomplete without chapter 1 to follow on after it. I get that it's supposed to be the prologue, and it does fulfill the purpose of being an interesting enough hook that you click to the next chapter. I think I vaguely remember this getting released sans first chapter when it first got released and me having this same reaction of 'this feels interesting, but it needs more to it'. Thankfully this does have the next chapter to follow up on it so this train of thought feels a bit pointless now.
Hope the anon writing this comes back to it. This made me reread chapter 1 as well. and I like the setup enough that it's making me wonder how the fic will proceed. i.e whether it's going to for Stalker of the week type cases or go for a big old myth arc for everything.

>>54522227
I kind of forget when that discussion happened but sure let's run through some scenarios for fun
>Sora
Probably not the best, mostly because by necessity this would entail that (You) would have to be the crazy/irresponsible one that has to shape up... and while that does have potential, I don't think it's something that really works if you're working with a reader-insert. Like maybe if you stick in some idol drama like that paparazzi finds you holding hands with Sora greentext chain there could be a good story there but I don't think it really hits the same as the concept this is based on.
>Laplus
Sounds fun but this sounds like it would rapidly become a comedy about raising a baby with holoX. Like maybe you can take out holoX for some reason but... it doesn't really feel right for Laplus to not have her minions/friends they're kind of baked into her character really well.

>>34047458
Very good anon. Now expand it into a full fic.

Hey you, Anon.
Read a random fic from the archive and tell the thread what you thought about it.

>>25011431
Oi, Get up.

Nothing to see here, head to the next thread.