/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>73899561
Nice, kinda fast but given it's a short quick one it's understandable. I agree with >>73903346 , feels like a good start to something longer. Maybe tease out the reveal longer, feels like there's barely a breath from him egging her on to when she gets him down on his knees. I think she'd play up the dunce act and slowly reveal how much she's been pulling the strings over time, make him question if he messed up somewhere before revealing all his plans were countered by her own from the start.