/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>65233649
>>65240129 (me)
alright time for my totally unbiased review:
For obvious reasons, this hits really close to the heart for me... and honestly, I couldn't have dreamed it better myself. This was an incredible sweet, slow-burn romance and I loved it start to finish. I had a constant smile on my lips while reading, interrupted by wet eyes during the dramatic climax, followed by an even bigger smile for the conclusion.
I do have to second >>65254881 however, that it's downright criminal of you to starve us of any Twappi kisses for 24k words straight. In my humble opinion those would've fitted in well with the reunion, maybe even as the outstanding Christmas present Towa was owing for you stop smoking - she did become even more bold and energetic after all right?
That scene with Anon's colleague asking for a light was a really nice detail, by the way - perfectly showing what a long-lasting and positive impact Towa has had on Anon, despite him pretending that she was just a hazy memory and better off without him.
If I'd had to find any critique to give, I'd say that your eye for details and detailed descriptions is amazing - enough so that you could maybe even tone it down a little on descriptive adjectives, instead leaving those details up to the imagination of the reader. Now that I write that, I feel like I've given this kind of feedback before... CoverHighAnon, is that you? Fucking hand out the Pekosex chapter already if it's so!
Image attached is the one from the original gosling post / prompt in January btw

>>40417410
Just had a dream. Fuck, I’m goslinging so hard rn.
>You are a stray in a big city. Orphan or something.
>Find an old abandoned multi-story carpark where you can get away from the bullshit
>hang out there regularly, one day a girl shows up. Her name’s Towa.
>shesjustlikeme.jpeg
>you talk, mainly about your plans for the future… how you’ll hit it big one day
>she suggests you’ll meet up there regularly. You tell her to be your guest - you’ll be here every sunday anyways
>she comes by. You hang out - talk, laugh
>There’s a stray cat that you take care of and play with
>Years pass, you finally find a job in *insert humble profession here*
>Towa comes by less regularly. She apologizes profusely, telling you she has something big lined up.
>Tell her you understand. Then…
>cat dies. Towa is devastated.
>She stops coming to the carpark. You don’t.
>Soon after, building’s due for demolition. Apartments supposed to be build there.
>Towa is a star now. An idol. You’ve seen the posters in the subway.
>Decide to go there for onelastride.mov
>She’s there. Top floor, hair blowing in the wind and shit.
>Years later you buy an apartment where the carpark once stood - together.
>You have a cat, too.