/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>6681150
Thank you for the feedback and kind words anon! I'll definitely trim a lot of unnecessary bits out when I'm editing.

>>6681379
Hello again! I didn't put the chama at the end myself, but I think it's cute LOL.
I did indeed write this in Google docs, but I did have trouble keeping track of staying in the proper tense and point of view (sometimes my brain would start churning out (you)s instead of Is). I probably tricked it into thinking those misses were okay somehow. I think I'll try and put it into grammarly. I was definitely thinking that getting to 1k words before even introducing the character was off. I think instead of editing what I have, I might just rewrite it or at least heavily redo parts to try and make it more engaging. I'm also planning on inserting key movie scenes/amv s to break up some parts to help with this. I have a very tough time myself slogging through boring text, so I really want to fix that.
I am very grateful for the encouragement. It's very motivating to hear that I don't need to trash it entirely and that it has potential. I wanna get good and make something cool!! I hope indeed to make at the very least myself proud by finishing it and seeing the project through.
I kinda waited till it hit bump limit because I was anxious about that heheh..It was a bit hard to know if my work will be received well, but it seems it was all constructive. I'm happy about that.

Thank you again for taking the time to write that whole response out!

>>6681520
I had a feeling I had weird emphasis. Thanks for the guidance! I'll listen more to others reading stories and practice more myself before I give it a go again.

I kind of want to bring the dustbunny character to life but a little differently than how most vtubers do it. I know I'd really suck at streaming as I'm very bad at making conversation. I'm planning on streaming a sort of preedited visual novel esque thing with animation and custom art to pair with it. I'll work on other content to disperse throughout too! Thank you anon!