/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>43623881
Thanks for the compliments! Part of my worries are that my dialogue can come of as..hokey? The transitions were my biggest concern, as somebody had said about the previous chapter that it had flowed from scene to scene really well and looking at this chapter I was thinking that it wasn't as good at that this time around, but I really couldn't think of a better way to handle it. That, and the longer glimpses into Anon's backstory potentially being uninteresting to some, as well as it being weird that Anon and Shinove having no clue that Kson was the chick from the end of Ch.2 despite her being a known streamer, which I do have an answer for I just wasn't able to comfortably work it into this chapter.

I'll be sure to try and work on making the passage of time between scenes more clear, too!