/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

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I couldn't watch this until now and I don't know if you're still lurking in this thread too or will see it tomorrow or whatever, but I'll give my two cents anyway. These are extremely minor nitpicks but I'd rather give that then just saying "good video keep it up :)" when someone's actively looking for criticism.
Firstly you need to either have every section get the header treatment or give your script another once-over to create smooth enough transitions that an explicit header won't feel necessary. Only having some get that treatment feels rather awkward, like the video's jumping all over the place. Either way adding timestamps in the description so people can jump to specific parts of the video and having a title card after your introduction and before the meat of the video (even if it's just repeating the video's title) are also useful.
For some other things, personally speaking I'd probably go for white instead of yellow on the subtitles. And to reiterate something another anon mentioned, having some background music will go a long way. And you should probably post a link and let people know about it on twitter since I know I saw someone asking in another thread what you've been up to.
I think you've got a good niche going with the focus on LatAM stuff for an English audience, and I liked the video a lot. Learned some interesting new things from it. Don't be afraid to look at other lost media youtube channels (I don't feel like naming names but I'm assuming you follow or at least know of some of the larger ones) and try to see what works for them. Of course it's important to keep your own style, but every artist subconsciously borrows from what inspires them to some degree and there's no reason that wouldn't be true of video editing as well.