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>>55645267
More chubby Kuro onegai

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>>55673389
NTA, but I'll often go have notes like "And they they have flirty dialogue", them go back to it later
Which means by the end of a chapter, I have sixteen unfinished scenes to finish

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>>49930069 >>49972218
I did do a few passes on prose, but I'll have to change how I'm doing it if it's not working. Thanks for the feedback!

>>50018121
Some jarring changes where intended, yes. Anon is dealing with supernatural beings after all. How well that was executed is another story entirely

Fubuki did cast a spell. Just like Kuro had to get Anon to drink a bit of her blood to heal his leg, Fubuki had to get her scent on Anon first so she could manipulate how Anon smelled like. That's the reason behind the lock of hair in both cases - sustain the effect. I should probably have had Fubuki explain the why a bit better

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