/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

Here's page 5 and the next page's script is written here. I'm accepting any advice you have on the script if it needs changes so the context would feel more believable to the person. Here, I try to make both Mori sound authentic and the deadbeat sound like your average deadbeat. I'm setting up the 'drama' of the story where it should conclude with you having a mutual understanding with Mori and then sex
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