/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

Can any of you writefags give me any tips on how to improve my story? I'm not really good at this, haha.


>Shiori shows up to her professor's class, late.
>"Tsk, tsk, tsk. You know what happens to girls who are late, don't you, Shiori?"
>"Get down on your knees."
>*Unzips pants*
>*10 inch, thick, UNCUT cock flops out and rests on her face*
>*Shiori stares and gulps, shocked and stunned at the sheer size of her professor's uncut cock*
>"Shiori, you're familiar with anatomy, right?"
>"Y-yes, sir."
>"So. what's this part called?"
>"The f-foreskin, s-sir."
>"And do you prefer guys who have foreskin, Shiori?"
>"Y-yes, sir. I only like uncut cocks."
>"What about a circumcised cock?"
>"No, I hate circumcised cocks. I would never date a circumcised loser!"
>"Shiori, there's something I need from you..."
>"W-what's that, sir?"
>"I need about tree fiddy."


Now, it was at this time Shiori realized that her professor was about 8 stories tall and was a crustacean from the protozoic era.