/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

So how are your wips coming along anon?
Bonus Question: Do you have any wips you've dropped because their concept just aged poorly for you? i.e yab/event just passed by, you changed your opinion on that chuuba, you stopped caring for them, etc.

Uh...
Read a random fic and share your thoughts
>Red Jelly
>Deleted but still hard archived
Man.. This really was weirdanonv2 at his worst. Barely any jokes that aren't just meanspirited jabs, and seethe. With the 'jokes' that are there being about as poorly executed as the rest of the fic. It even has the weird digression in the middle of the fic to some other piece of media.
>Holofuta
I remember this. It's nice that this is like the one futa thing I've read that went with giving the girls actual human sized penises rather than hyper proportions. It's about average for an 'encylopedia entry' fic due to having to cover the breath of every holomem around the time of IRyS, thus it's basically just a length, a description of the cock, and fun fact about what they do with it.
>Naughty Mischief
A cute little fic about Aqua holding hands with a sleeping Anon.
It's cute, a bit too short but for the length it tells a nice fluffy slice of life scene.

I have to ask, is auntie aqua fic actually being written?

>>59178298
Word of the Thread
Use them to inspire whatever you want as long as it's chuuba related
>Unusual
>Public
>Passion
For extra context the table these come from is calledCHARACTER TRAITS & FLAWS

>>49209674
I feel like if you're going for drama with this you'd have to pick a good chuuba to be the girlfriend since otherwise the drama would kind of fall flat.
Who would be good for it though? Rushia?

>>45230661
Ironically all of her good fics are sfw fluff fics. Maybe it's just me but none of the nsfw fics with Aqua really clicked with me.

>>43595138
Breaking Aqua mentally so she can't live alone while also becoming emotionally dependant on your ability to take care of her.

>>38823047
Oh that's my fic, I should be done with it by new year's but I'll see if I can finish it up before Christmas.

>>37509530
>>37514618
Butt stuff, huh? I think that may be beyond my capabilities, but I could give it a try someday. Thanks for reading.
>>37547295
Releasing the chapters as I finished them may have made for better presentation and built some more excitement, but I absolutely would have ended up regretting writing something in chapter one as I'm releasing chapter three or something. Without fail, I always end up wanting to retcon shit and change the beginning of my stories (which I did multiple times throughout this production), so I've found unless I'm writing something really long, I'll release it one go. And yeah, this one is pretty long, but it was intended to be shorter. Maybe I should have finished the entire thing then slowly released chapters.
>I don’t know if this is intentional but you have a habit of long run-on sentences while Anon’s alone.
Hrm, maybe when I'm writing inner thoughts and observations I tend to make the sentences longer than I would writing actions or dialogue. Thanks for pointing that out.
>The only real nitpick I have is that you sometimes have weird tense troubles alongside a couple awkward sentences.
I can probably guess where they are. Still a ways to go as a writer. It's comforting to know that some of my other prose is good though, so thank you.
>Other than that, the writing is solid outside of Ayame scenes they feel ‘tell’ rather than ‘show’ with how she narrates it.
Yeeeaahh... I'm beginning to dwell on that a little. It's only AFTER I publish and post the document that I begin thinking of many different ways I could have shown her problems and circumstances rather than told. Shit sucks. I'll do what I can to avoid info dumps in the future.
>Purple
That's the thing... isn't it in-between? Her OG 3D is without a doubt purple, but some of her newer 2Ds look more like a dark pink. That or my idea of pink is fucked.

>>29442260
I will write this when I wake up.

>Astel smashed this
Fucking imagine. He hits a jackpot.