/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>75610600
It was easy to get high marks in school writing courses, and even in college, but I barely knew what the surface was that I was scratching before coming to this thread and working with the feedback others gave me. The situations and forms of writing are not exactly comparable either in this case. Regardless of you think your school grades of the past indicate for your writing, this is now, and it's a new opportunity to learn and grow.

>>73733247
Aren't we unified in writing stories? This is the place us fuckers go to for writing fanfiction.

>>70869782
Well your angle seems right from your own personal preference for how a story should go, but it doesn't make for a good read for someone that isn't you. I think that is the easiest way to try and drive the point home, if you read something similar to this from another person, why would you think? I'll have to echo another anon's suggestion to read some other works and try to learn how they tell their story. I think if I remember correctly you said reading other people's work is taxing for you, but I think it would be worth the effort to do it and see how you can find some techniques to help hone your own writing. I really think it would do wonders for you, since all you have to compare with currently are pages only you yourself have written.

>>70678761
As a watamate I can handle the constant attention and closeness, but I also thrive off of having periods of isolation. I check off a lot of Choco's other boxes involving financial stability. It's not so much about WANTING to be apart, but recognizing that for some people it is healthy and makes the times together even more meaningful and intense.