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>>27299222
Anon, this is why you do not get into indie grooming without mental preparation. I've had to deal with several attempted suicides with mine, had to talk a few out of it on stream with my own barely N4 nihongo. ABE LET ME IN, I WILL SAVE THEM

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>>24842191
A man gets lonely. It fills the void his oshi can't fill.

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>>21035722
what the fuck mate, mine's exactly the same

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Wait, if P-chan is imaginary, then who is KAngel fucking???

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>>17366994
Right here, Ayamefriend! Waiting for my Ina'nis to start.

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>>17339388
>it’s been a year already

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>>15659261
She's just like me!

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>>13549857
Completely forgot to answer to this, whoops. I think the story got directionless because I'm writing it in a way meant for introducing certain characters that I want to introduce, not for the plot itself. I really wanted to introduce Okayu, and that may have worked because I gave her a bigger chunk of a chapter, but the character I wanted to introduce now is only coming up in the next chapter so this was kind of a soulless in between. The MC is kind of a pushover after he met Ayame, I understand that the plot has been pushing him around even though he is technically being threatened into it, I'm the one who wrote it that way so it's still my fault.

There's only going to be one more character introduced in the next 10K words which I hope I can do it justice because it is the one I wanted to write about, besides maybe one or two of the leftover Indonesians which won't get much screen time.

The story is already set for the next 4-5 chapters or so at least, very very vaguely of course. Originally the idea for this series was to have anon being with multiple partners, not to have a main "heroine" of sorts, but that idea clearly has been abandoned, though it still lingers in my stories in the manner of me wanting to introduce characters. I'll try to not go into "telling outside of the story" territory but the MC does have a goal and a reason for taking it slow, but one can definitely see that it may seem like that's not the case.

Writing this series has been pretty overwhelming so far. I like it and I want to keep going, I will keep going, but every chapter it is just me trying to catch up to doubts people have about the setting or its characters. I take 2 chapters to finally clarify something and by then there's 3 new problems to fix. I don't know if it's because I write short chapters so the only thing one can talk about it is criticism but what I mostly get from my readers is confusion and not the good kind. Hopefully one day I can finally manage to stop trying to catch up and actually give the readers a clear picture, but who knows when that will happen? 10 chapters in? 20? Most people will have left by then. It's overwhelming, but it does make me want to, or forces me I suppose, to try harder every single time. I'm glad it's not the same criticism as last times at the very least, surely that means I'm doing something right, even if it's all still going wrong. Hopefully this series doesn't crash and burn from too many plotholes and lack of explanation.

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>>12712010
Im jealous of anons like you that have dreams with Ina and actually remember them. I don't even know if I have dreams anymore

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Why are futafags so bad at showing interest...

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