/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

I wanted to try and get some feedback on this because I don't really have anyone to ask. I haven't really written or read much outside of school, so I don't really know if this should be entirely scrapped or not. I think I wrote it too much like a robot, and i even noticed things I would edit in the midst of reading it aloud. I also stumbled a lot on the reading, with my pacing, tone, and just getting the words out properly. I decided to just leave it as it is, but I will definitely practice reading more in the future.
Thanks again to the anon that wrote that blurb for me a while ago. It helped a lot.
https://pastebin.com/g0gX7Q93
https://voca.ro/1ldZqmNiQzef