/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

I just read the latest Cover High chapter and man, your writing always blows me away. There's always so much to your level of prose and the vast selection of adjectives, maybe even too much to the point where it gets overly purple. There'd be times when there would be a big paragraph of fancy wording and inner thoughts in between two lines of a single person's dialogue which I felt might have bloated the story a little and dragged on conversations. This is all completely subjective though, and regardless it makes for great reading for someone like me who struggles with vocabulary and writing descriptive, flowery paragraphs.
As the other Anons said I think the reveal of our transfer student's troubles felt a bit sudden, even if the implications and hints were there. Don't get me wrong, I lean towards main characters that aren't blank slates, but I just feel that some more build up and focus on that aspect of the story could have been put into the previous chapters. I don't blame you one bit though, it's fucking hard to land those, especially if you hadn't planned it from the beginning.
Other than those two minor gripes and maybe the Miko scene being a little rocky, this was a really well written addition to CH with some fantastic fluff. Pekora has never really done anything for me and was simply entertaining, but this whole series combined with her new(ish) outfit has made that opinion on her do a complete 180. The confession was great and I am eagerly looking forwards to the festival and this story's conclusion. Thank you for the meal.

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Despite having a passable amount of motivation and drive, I've been on a road trip for the past few days and between my car getting towed and my friend clogging the hotel toilet, there's been little time to write and no time to visit the thread. Once I get back I should be able to work on one of my series, though I don't know which one and I'm half expecting all of my inspiration to vanish the moment I step foot back into my house. Each chapter is sitting at about 3k+ words and I have no idea which one will be released first. I also might have to catch up on some reading for the stories posted during my absence.