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Hey Dev.
I signed up for an account but I did not receive an e-mail so here is my username: Kuro_Pantsu.
Please and thank you.

>>57779753
Harvard don't exist in my story bro.

>>57705820
>but it just comes off as a little half baked

It does. The unfortunate thing is I had to decide between having them find resolution this chapter or waiting and having a longer more closer resolution in the next one and I think the latter is going to be a lot more impactful. It just felt way to quick to have Ayame and Anon make up then and there so I had to make a sacrifice somewhere.

>conveying this clumsily

when I say clumsily, I don't mean I think I completely fumbled it more that, with all things, there may have been minor ways I could've elevated it. This one chapter has more or less been in my head since chapter one, hence the reason I banged it out so quick, I've known exactly how this would play out since forever. I figured Botan's brief moment of vulnerability followed by the end of the chapter was exactly the tragedy I was going for.

You're not coming off harsh, but if I'm going to be straight with you, this comes off a bit knit picky. Your critiques are normally good and like I said with the Civia stuff, that was done piss poor so you're totally correct there. But I'm not fully understanding why you felt the Botan part was rushed considering how many pages were devoted to it. I was more worried that the Lui-Botan heart to heart would come across as beating a dead horse more than anything. Like I said, I'm not trying to come off combative because your critiques have made this book better in a million ways, but this critique is very confusing to me in certain areas. I'm not sure if I'm just misreading but I feel like a lot of this is nitpicks (which is fair too, I'm not saying that's wrong). I'm not trying to fight you, just clarify since your critiques are often very good.

>>57317552
>>57309413(me)
I'm not the faunaschizo! that guy is just a retard that only wants to feel hate, and misinterpreted Fauna's words!
How many times do I have to say that I'm not him?! I have good wishes for Fauna but I simply watch other chuubas, is that simple!

>>56853953
I'm not an S or a dom. What chuubas are made for tender love making?

does a niji dating really matter? they shit on parasocial fans a lot

>>55527204
Why are you linking us to all of your old doxxpost?

>>55069888
You were actually solving captchas the whole time?

>>54898519
are you here all day?

i am lost, who i am suppose to hate i am getting mixed signals...

>>54891740
>It's still an important job for them, i'm glad Advent has ignored Mori completely
Why don't Mori antis watch fucking streams???

>>54740847
>2020 /hlgg/: DOGFUCKS GO BACK
>2023 /hlgg/: DUDE I REALLY WANNA FUCK THOSE DOGS
What happened?

>>54406701
Idea, yeah, motivation to write it sooner than later. Not so much. I got the outline to get me off the ground, but I gotta wait till the mood strikes me since I just wanna write my current stuff at the moment.

>>54328644
Am the only one who finds pre-debuts freely tweet and attempting to communicate with senpai kinda strange and unusually?
I guess I'm too used to Irys and Council, where their accounts got locked basically the instant they went public

>>54092020
>The most fluent english speaker in HoloJP technically isn't even a member
How does this happen

>>53925292
>https://files.catbox.moe/zou05q.png
Who eats a bake potato with a glass of win, all while naked?

>>53842779

>>53827049
>>Holo Live's first appearance at an outdoor festival
How the FUCK is this shit gonna work?
Are they gonna wheel out a giant projector and screen?

>>53683229
>*post of picture of two cosplayers*
>"DOXBEAT!"
What did retard-sama-chama mean by this?

>>53626673
Is this normal?

>>53567884

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9fM9T_Acj1w
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9fM9T_Acj1w
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9fM9T_Acj1w
Do the nipponese even know of SpongeBob?

Why the FUCK am I watching a shark girl (child) play a game for children??

>>52694371
But you'd just not give the entries that are purposely trying to get a rise out of people any attention?