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>>73097806
and best of luck to you as well! We'll both kick ass.

>>71126746
This has some cute potential anon. It might be a fun idea to try and out Kanata by purposely getting caught with another dirty book for her to confiscate, one that might star a girl with similar features or even role.

>>62109178
It hurts because you want to put your all into making it the best it can be. Now use that pain. Let it light a fire in you that burns brighter than the pages you're making. You can get through this and the view from the top will be worth it! Keep doing your best.

>>58364151
Looks good on my end.
Chapter 37 of HJ is still missing from the series page however, but you can always leave that for another day if you're bashing your head against scripts and such. I'll hopefully have 38 done and edited soon for sharing and you can just update it then when that makes it to the next archival.

>>57228011
That just sounds like a stupid contest they would make for themselves. Anon will also be no stranger to naked wrestling and will find it pretty enjoyable.

>>55806301
This was an an enjoyable read. I'll echo what another anon said about the first person narration feeling a little clunky here and there. Some of anon's thoughts just kinda trail off awkwardly without the need for a sudden introspection or internal monologue. Once the characters got rolling though, your dialogue really shines. Nene, Lamy, and Polka's contributions were great. I think you should have built a little more off the banter in the end instead of that bit about the sunset though, that would have lead to a stronger punchline or since this is a comedy, do a bit about how maybe anon is in the wrong line of work, or even about how he should switch to hag hunting instead.

>>54795651
I'm glad you liked them, they were fun to write! Makes me feel a little bad for not starting HoloJourneys yet, but it feels like every time I turn around you add another five chapters so I'm probably just gonna have to buckle down and read it in the near future.

Not making any promises for anything, but how observant is the protagonist in HJ? Like, if the Corrupting Anon and Corrupted Nene got isekai'd and bumped into the other Anon and Nene, how quickly would he think something was up with them? Cause I figure the Nene's would be more curious and interested in each other but the bad Anon would pretty quickly start 'subtly' trying to get them to fight.