/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>74810069
I might do that retroactively some day since I just finished write a short 4 line verse of a sea shanty. It might be fun to work with and get some actual sound for it in the future. Or I can be be absolutely demolished by how it sounds like total ass in sound. Both can be a good time.

>>73018181
Thanks for putting it together. It was fun to write something so condensed and was some good practice.

>>71215314
Nah. That was Watame. She just walked on stage, took anon by the collar, and dragged him to the nearest changing room. He wasn't complaining.

>>70073479
Making a base proof of concept is usually my go-to when creating a new project or piece of software, so that's good advice.
My respect goes out to people who do pixel art and art in general. There's so much finesse into cultivating a single piece to be just the way you want it. They deserve some mad props.
>>70073568
A cute idea would be that lyrical tracks would be the same as the ones Watame makes up over the course of her journey to be a true bard and regale the stories of their adventures.

>>65453852
>tfw a chuuba releases something that coincides with what you're writing
peafowl auntie bros, this is your time. Get groomed and turned into that princess' boy toy.

>>64684995
This is amazingly extensive. How much love and thought you put into your world is inspiring. It makes me want to keep improving my own world building and reach the ceiling you set. I'm going to at least make a map after this current arc is over and get the landing page spruced up with it.

>>64343911
It warms my heart that other people feel this way. You all keep kicking ass.

>>62161196
NTA but I gotta second this. This is a really neat tool. Thanks for sharing this!

>>61241873
Hey thanks for reading! It was the first fight scene that would be considered close to sword fighting, so while it might have been a little turn-based for a while, I'm glad it was still a little dynamic. The POV shift during that scene is honestly something I could have made a little better. While I had updated chapters 1-3 to not have my starting out prose stink to them, I didn't really change out how the scenes play. I agree that the shift was probably strange, but I really wanted to get Watame's internal thoughts across. For your second critique, I don't remember if I did anything like describe how the light from the spell became brighter or larger, but just the fact that the output was clearly more powerful than what he initially saw is what gave Mr Shiranui that assumption. Since from what he saw, Noel was able to bat away that spell with, and the next day Anon was capable of some actual destructive power. The sequence of spells also let him make that educated guess. The spell book is kinda a neat little piece of the unknown that characters can only make guesses to, which I really like as a narrative element. I'm glad you liked the chapter and thanks so much again for the review. There will likely come a time where I give my earlier chapters another pass through as my skills improve, so this is all great to have. Also it is easily the shortest main chapter in the entire series, so you're right about that besides the long awaited Watame breeding much later on. I think initially I thought the contents of the outline would have fit into one chapter but that ended up needing to be split into a 2 and 3. My writing process back then consisted of making an entire arc outline and seeing where things ended up. Now I tend to outline each chapter as I come to it while having notes for an overall arc's scenes that will be covered.

I've written several novels worth of fanfiction.

>>57215895
I'm not saying certain people won't try. A man needs his privacy every now and again though especially when they're getting experimental.

>>55397930
I'll take the feedback over kudos any day, but the numbers game is enjoyable in its own way.
>mfw my kudos count is almost at 20

>>54477287
I like the way you think, anon. I'll keep that aside for heavy consideration later. I can easily throw in some tradition in there to add some extra incentive in. Thanks bro.

>>52029762
Not terrible. I got probably 3-4 more scenes for this chapter to go I think. I'm still deciding how much more content this chapter should include, but I'm gonna be out doing other stuff today, so I can mull it over there.
Bonus: I'm still writing the first fic I made for this place. Some people seem to like it, despite how monstrously long it's become. I sure as fuck like it at least.