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Anonymous Fri Mar 10 17:24:12 2023 No.44748233 [View]
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Ok I just read it. Honestly, the exposition at the start was unnecessary and added nothing to the story. By the dialogue exchange alone in that part, I got the gist they were lovers and Fauna teased some fucking for later. So, there is really no necessity to add an in-universe explanation to why Sana has a dick and they need to fuck. Other than that, the story was pretty good for your first smut, it's literally only the start that feels very amateurish for the reasons I gave

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